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* {{Foil}}: Leafstar is everything Cinders never was. Cinders was a fatalist who pessimistically complained about her adverse life and treated Sol and his siblings with impatience. Leafstar on the other paw is a good mother and proactive leader who thinks of her cats' well-being, puts aside her own issues for the sake of others, and lovingly nurtures her kits.
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* {{Foil}}: Leafstar is everything Cinders never was. Cinders was a fatalist who pessimistically complained about her adverse life and treated Sol her mate and his siblings kittens with impatience. Leafstar on the other paw is a good mother mother, a caring mate and a proactive leader who thinks of her cats' well-being, puts aside her own issues for the sake of others, and lovingly nurtures her kits.
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* AbusiveParents: Though Sol's father is bad enough as he is, his mother Cinders has shades of this. While she was decent enough to [[PetTheDog bring her kits along and tell them stories]] in order to help them behave, it does little to balance out her overbearing personality. She was a defeatist who bemoaned any adversity that befell them, scolded her kittens for accepting food from twolegs, and often dumped her worries onto her children.
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* AbusiveParents: Though Sol's father is bad enough as he is, his mother Cinders has shades of this. While she was decent enough to [[PetTheDog bring her kits along and tell them stories]] in order to help them behave, it does little to balance out her overbearing personality. She was a defeatist who bemoaned any adversity that befell them, scolded her kittens for accepting food from twolegs, and often dumped vented her worries onto her children.
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* InconsistentColoring: Fallowfern. She appears in this volume as a she-cat the same warm brown color as Clovertail, but with a tuft of fur on her head and without the white chest. (She had this appearance once in the first volume while sitting with her mate Waspwhisker, and in this volume she has this appearance when she mentions her kits Nettlesplash and Plumwillow.) In other scenes in volume 1 and 3, she's a pale sandy yellowish color with tabby markings on her face and no fur tuft.
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* InconsistentColoring: Fallowfern. She appears in this volume as a she-cat the same warm brown color as Clovertail, but with a tuft of fur on her head head, blue eyes, and without the no white chest. (She had this appearance once in the first volume while sitting with her mate Waspwhisker, and in this volume she has this appearance when she mentions her kits Nettlesplash and Plumwillow.) In other scenes in volume 1 and 3, she's a pale sandy yellowish color with tabby markings on her face and no fur tuft.
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* InconsistentColoring: Fallowfern. She appears in this volume as a she-cat the same warm brown color as Clovertail, but with a tuft of fur on her head and without the white chest. (She had this appearance once in the first volume while sitting with her mate Waspwhisker, and in this volume she has this appearance when she mentions her kits Nettlesplash and Plumwillow.) In other scenes in volume 1 and 3, she's a pale sandy yellowish color with tabby markings on her face and no fur tuft.
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* AbusiveParents: Though Sol's father is bad enough as he is, his mother Cinders has shades of this. While she was decent enough to [[PetTheDog bring her kits along and tell them stories]] in order to help them behave, it does little to balance out her overbearing personality. It doesn't help that she's a pessimist who complains and does little to comfort her kits.
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* AbusiveParents: Though Sol's father is bad enough as he is, his mother Cinders has shades of this. While she was decent enough to [[PetTheDog bring her kits along and tell them stories]] in order to help them behave, it does little to balance out her overbearing personality. It doesn't help She was a defeatist who bemoaned any adversity that she's a pessimist who complains befell them, scolded her kittens for accepting food from twolegs, and does little to comfort often dumped her kits.worries onto her children.
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* {{Foil}}: Leafstar is everything Cinders never was. Cinders was a pessimist who complained about her adverse life and treated Sol and his siblings with impatience. Leafstar on the other paw is a proactive leader who thinks of her cats' well-being, as well as a good mother who lovingly nurtures her kits.
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* {{Foil}}: Leafstar is everything Cinders never was. Cinders was a pessimist fatalist who pessimistically complained about her adverse life and treated Sol and his siblings with impatience. Leafstar on the other paw is a good mother and proactive leader who thinks of her cats' well-being, as well as a good mother who puts aside her own issues for the sake of others, and lovingly nurtures her kits.
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* HonorBeforeReason: At one point during the flashback, Sol and his siblings helped themselves to canned cat food left out by kindly Twolegs, but Cinders scolded them and said they were too good for "kittypet food". This establishes that she was so full of pride she would've rather her kits starved to death than have food in their bellies, even if it meant swallowing their pride.
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* HonorBeforeReason: At one point during the flashback, Sol and his siblings helped themselves to canned cat food left out by kindly Twolegs, but Cinders scolded them and said they were too good for "kittypet food". This establishes that she was so full of pride she would've rather her kits starved to death than have food in their bellies, even if it meant swallowing their pride.bellies and live another day.
