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* ForWantOfANail: The episode's plot basically happens because Wander got distracted by the ooze dripping from the roof.
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* ItBeganWithATwistOfFate: The episode's plot basically happens because Wander got distracted by the ooze dripping from the roof.
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* BigNo: By Sylvia when she sees what she thinks is Wander's remains but is actually a teddy bear cut up by the alien and put in a cocoon. Immediately followed by a BigWhy.
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* BigNo: By Sylvia screams, "NOOOO!" [[SkywardScream to the sky]] when she sees what she thinks is Wander's remains but is actually a teddy bear cut up by the alien and put in a cocoon. Immediately followed by a BigWhy.
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* ShapedLikeItself: Escape pod escape pod.
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-->'''Sylvia:''' Computer, deactivate self-destruct sequence!\\
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-->'''Sylvia:''' Computer, deactivate self-destruct sequence!\\sequence!
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* AnswerCut: When Wander says he wants to find Captain Tim a forever home, Sylvia questions who would want “a violent flesh-eating alien for a pet.” Cut to Lord Hater happily watching Captain Tim terrorize the Peepers.
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* BriefAccentImitation: Sylvia speaks in Wander's southern accent when she tries to think of what Wander would say to her when she thinks he's dead. Immediately after this, she discovers he's still alive.
* ButThouMust: Once the self-destruct activates, it cannot be deactivated, or in other words, "no takesies backsies".
* ButThouMust: Once the self-destruct activates, it cannot be deactivated, or in other words, "no takesies backsies".
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* BriefAccentImitation: Sylvia speaks in Wander's southern accent when she tries to think of what Wander would say to her when she thinks believes he's dead. Immediately after this, she discovers he's still alive.
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*ButThouMust: Once CaptainsLog: Sylvia finds a video log from the self-destruct activates, ship’s captain that shows him talking about the monster loose aboard the ship before promptly being attacked by it.
* CloseCallHaircut: The monster shoots its acid spit at Wander right as he’s ducking his head, so itcannot be deactivated, or hits his hat instead, singeing it in other words, "no takesies backsies".half.
* ComicallyMissingThePoint: When Wander pulls Captain Tim’s dog tag out of the monster’s mouth, he mistakenly thinks that it's the monster’s and that his name is Captain Tim.
* TheComplianceGame: Wander tries to get Captain Tim to eat a spoonful of beans by pretending it’s a spaceship:
-->'''Sylvia:''' Here comes the galactic star cruiser filled with a payload of destructive laser ''beans''!
* ConspicuouslyLightPatch: The can of beans Wander feeds Captain Tim clearly stands out on the shelf of canned food behind him.
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* CloseCallHaircut: The monster shoots its acid spit at Wander right as he’s ducking his head, so it
* ComicallyMissingThePoint: When Wander pulls Captain Tim’s dog tag out of the monster’s mouth, he mistakenly thinks that it's the monster’s and that his name is Captain Tim.
* TheComplianceGame: Wander tries to get Captain Tim to eat a spoonful of beans by pretending it’s a spaceship:
-->'''Sylvia:''' Here comes the galactic star cruiser filled with a payload of destructive laser ''beans''!
* ConspicuouslyLightPatch: The can of beans Wander feeds Captain Tim clearly stands out on the shelf of canned food behind him.
* FauxDeath: When Sylvia finds the teddy bear Wander gave Captain Tim that’s been torn up and wrapped in a cocoon, she thinks it's actually Wander and is devastated.
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* {{Irony}}: Sylvia believes Wander was eaten by the alien and activates the ship's self destruct to avenge him, but he's alive and well, and she is about to unknowingly kill him herself.
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'''Computer:''' Oh, my digits! Did you not hear me say "no takesies backsies"?!
%%* JumpScare: At the very end of the closing credits.
%%* LockAndLoadMontage: Sylvia goes through several.
%%* JumpScare: At the very end of the closing credits.
%%* LockAndLoadMontage: Sylvia goes through several.
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* LockAndLoadMontage: Sylvia
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-->''"Captain’s log, day 445. This is Captain Tim. Despite my exceedingly heroic efforts to control the search, things are rapidly deteriorating. I’m not sure how much longer my impressive strength can keep the monster at bay. If you’re watching this now, ignore my dashing good looks, and heed this warning." (ScreamsLikeALittleGirl as the monster pounces on him)''
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* SelfDestructMechanism: After thinking Wander was eaten by the alien, Sylvia activates the ship's self-destruct to keep the alien from escaping. When she discovers that Wander is still alive, she has to return and get him out before the ship explodes.
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* SelfDestructMechanism: After thinking Wander was eaten by the alien, Sylvia activates the ship's self-destruct protocol to keep the alien from escaping. When she discovers that Wander is still actually alive, she has tries to return and get him out before stop the ship explodes.self-destruct but the computer says no “takesies-backsies.”
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* SuperSpit: Captain Tim has acid spit that can seemingly burn through any material with alarming strength.
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* TrainingThePet: Wander’s storyline quickly turns into this as he decides to keep the vicious monster as a pet.
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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Sylvia’s reaction verbatim when she finds out Wander has befriended the monstrous alien she’s been trying to destroy.
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* {{Narcissist}}: What the real Captain Tim was, considering he couldn't go five seconds in his message without mentioning how great he was.
-->''"Captain’s log, day 445. This is Captain Tim. Despite my exceedingly heroic efforts to control the search, things are rapidly deteriorating. I’m not sure how much longer my impressive strength can keep the monster at bay. If you’re watching this now, ignore my dashing good looks, and heed this warning." (ScreamsLikeALittleGirl as the monster pounces on him)''
-->''"Captain’s log, day 445. This is Captain Tim. Despite my exceedingly heroic efforts to control the search, things are rapidly deteriorating. I’m not sure how much longer my impressive strength can keep the monster at bay. If you’re watching this now, ignore my dashing good looks, and heed this warning." (ScreamsLikeALittleGirl as the monster pounces on him)''
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* FreezeFrameBonus: When the alien is about to meet Wander for the first time, from its heat-sensing vision Wander's hat appears red despite the fact it's just an object, hinting it's a living sentient.
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* FreezeFrameBonus: When the alien is about to meet Wander for the first time, from its heat-sensing vision Wander's hat appears red despite the fact it's just an object, hinting at what "The Hat" would confirm-- it's a living sentient.
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* DeadHatShot: The alien coughs out (the real) Captain Tim's ID tag, all that remains of the captain before being devoured, which Wander finds and assumes that's the alien's name.
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-->'''Sylvia:''' Computer, deactivate self-destruct sequence!\\
'''Computer:''' Oh, my digits! Did you not hear me say "no takesies backsies"?!
'''Computer:''' Oh, my digits! Did you not hear me say "no takesies backsies"?!
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* FiveSecondForeshadowing: The teddy bear Wander gives the alien has the same exact coloring as Wander's fur, which gives a hint toward [[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated what Sylvia thinks]] once she opens the cocoon and discovers its remains.
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* MissedHimByThatMuch: After failing to give the alien a teddy bear, Wander leaves the scene right before Sylvia enters, which leads to her [[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated mistaking the teddy bear for Wander, thinking the alien killed him.]]
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* BigNo[=/=]SkywardScream: By Sylvia when she sees what she thinks is Wander's remains but is actually a teddy bear cut up by the alien and put in a cocoon. Immediately followed by a BigWhy.
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* BigNo[=/=]SkywardScream: BigNo: By Sylvia when she sees what she thinks is Wander's remains but is actually a teddy bear cut up by the alien and put in a cocoon. Immediately followed by a BigWhy.
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* JumpScare: At the very end of the closing credits.
* LockAndLoadMontage: Sylvia goes through several.
* LockAndLoadMontage: Sylvia goes through several.
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* MistakenForDying: When Sylvia discovers fluffy orange remains in the alien's cocoon, she is led to believe Wander had been eaten by the alien when that was really the teddy bear he gave it.
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* ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated: When Sylvia discovers fluffy orange remains in the alien's cocoon, she is led to believe Wander had been eaten by the alien when that was really the teddy bear he gave it.
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* BriefAccentImitation: Sylvia speaks in Wander's southern accent when she tries to think of what Wander would say to her when she thinks he's dead.
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* BriefAccentImitation: Sylvia speaks in Wander's southern accent when she tries to think of what Wander would say to her when she thinks he's dead. Immediately after this, she discovers he's still alive.
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* NotQuiteDead: When fleeing in the escape pod thinking Wander had been eaten, Sylvia suddenly sees him in the ship's window, realizing he's still alive, and has to head right back.
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* MistakenForDying: When Sylvia discovers fluffy orange remains in the alien's cocoon, she is led to believe Wander had been eaten by the alien when that was really the teddy bear he gave it.
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* ItWontTurnOf: Once the self-destruct activates, it cannot be deactivated. As it says, "No takesies backsies."
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* ItWontTurnOf: ItWontTurnOff: Once the self-destruct activates, it cannot be deactivated. As it says, "No takesies backsies."
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* DramaticIrony: Sylvia thinks Wander was killed by the alien, but the audience knows that was just the teddy bear Wander gave it. It is even the same color as Wander's fur.
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* DramaticIrony: Sylvia thinks Wander was killed by the alien, but the audience knows that was just the teddy bear Wander gave it.it, and he's still perfectly alive and well. It is even the same color as Wander's fur.
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* {{Irony}}: Sylvia believes Wander was eaten by the alien and activates the ship's self destruct to avenge him, but he's alive and well, and she is about to unknowingly kill him.
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* {{Irony}}: Sylvia believes Wander was eaten by the alien and activates the ship's self destruct to avenge him, but he's alive and well, and she is about to unknowingly kill him.him herself.
* ItWontTurnOf: Once the self-destruct activates, it cannot be deactivated. As it says, "No takesies backsies."
* ItWontTurnOf: Once the self-destruct activates, it cannot be deactivated. As it says, "No takesies backsies."
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* MistakenForDog: Wander comes face to face with a voracious, acid-spewing spider-like monster who has eaten the entire crew of a spaceship... and starts gushing about how cute he is and tries to train it and be his pet.
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* MistakenForDog: Wander comes face to face with a voracious, acid-spewing spider-like monster who has eaten the entire crew of a spaceship... and starts gushing about how cute he is and tries to train it and be his pet. He immediately realizes it's not adorable when it literally tries to ''steal his heart.''
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* TearsOfRemorse: Wander sheds these as he sees Captain Tim settle in his new home with Hater.
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* TearsOfRemorse: TearsOfJoy: Wander sheds these as he sees Captain Tim settle in his new home with Hater.
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* ShapedLikeItself: Escape pod escape pod.
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* CurseCutShort: "Let him go, you-"
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* CurseCutShort: "Let him go, you-"you-" "SYLVIA!"
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: Trying to feed Captain Tim Beans makes him run away from wander!
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: Trying to feed Captain Tim Beans makes him run away from wander! beans apparently.
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: Wander manages to do this accidentally!
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: Wander manages Trying to do this accidentally! feed Captain Tim Beans makes him run away from wander!
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: Wander manages to do this accidentally! Captain Tim tries to run away from him by the end of the episode!
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: Wander manages to do this accidentally! Captain Tim tries to run away from him by the end of the episode!
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* Horrifying the Horror: Wander manages to do this accidentally! Captain Tim tries to run away from him by the end of the episode!
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* Horrifying the Horror: HorrifyingTheHorror: Wander manages to do this accidentally! accidentally! Captain Tim tries to run away from him by the end of the episode! episode!
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* Horrifying the Horror: Wander manages to do this accidentally! Captain Tim tries to run away from him by the end of the episode!
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TerrorizingtheTerror: Wander manages to do this accidentally!