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** Due to the [[MakeAnExampleOfThem severe example]] Shendu gave Valmont in the previous chapter, Hak Foo is introduced in a different office where Shendu is not present.
** The outcome of the showdown in Bavaria is slightly different in that Tohru manages to escape with the Dog Talisman and bring it to Shendu. In the canon episode, Uncle just jumped out of Tohru's reach when the latter tried to take the Talisman from him, resulting in Tohru falling from the clock tower. In this chapter, Valerie taking a hold of Uncle prevents him from making the jump, allowing Tohru to grab hold of the Talisman and take it with him as he falls.
** Due to the [[MakeAnExampleOfThem severe example]] Shendu gave Valmont in the previous chapter, Hak Foo is introduced in a different office where Shendu is not present.
** The outcome of the showdown in Bavaria is slightly different in that Tohru manages to escape with the Dog Talisman and bring it to Shendu. In the canon episode, Uncle just jumped out of Tohru's reach when the latter tried to take the Talisman from him, resulting in Tohru falling from the clock tower. In this chapter, Valerie taking a hold of Uncle prevents him from making the jump, allowing Tohru to grab hold of the Talisman and take it with him as he falls.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Valerie's argument with her mother leads her to saying that she didn't need her mother before her father's death and still doesn't. Valerie is mortified with herself, but is too prideful to apologize.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Valerie unwittingly allows Tohru to take the Dog Talisman from Uncle when she prevents the latter from dodging the large man's attempt to grab it. Tohru is then able to escape and bring it to Shendu, who now has three Talismans in his possession. Jade attempts to downplay it by stating that between the [[ImmortalityInducer Dog]] and the [[EyeBeams Pig]], the Dark Hand getting the former instead of the latter is preferable.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Valerie unwittingly allows Tohru to take the Dog Talisman from Uncle when she prevents the latter from dodging the large man's attempt to grab it. Tohru is then able to escape and bring it to Shendu, who now has three Talismans in his possession. Jade attempts to downplay it by stating that between the [[ImmortalityInducer Dog]] and the [[EyeBeams Pig]], the Dark Hand getting the former instead of the latter is preferable.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Valerie's argument with her mother leads her to saying that she didn't need her mother before her father's death and still doesn't. Valerie is Though mortified with herself, but Valerie is too prideful to apologize.
apologize.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Valerie unwittinglyallows enables Tohru to take the Dog Talisman from Uncle when she prevents well-meaningly takes hold of the latter old man, preventing him from dodging the large man's attempt to grab it.it like in canon. Tohru is then able to escape and bring it to Shendu, who now has three Talismans in his possession. Jade attempts to downplay it by stating that between the [[ImmortalityInducer Dog]] and the [[EyeBeams Pig]], the Dark Hand getting the former instead of the latter is preferable.preferable.
* VillainExitStageLeft: Tohru falls on top of Hak Foo from the clock tower like in canon, but when the heroes have made it safely out of the crumbling tower and find the badly injured Hak Foo, Tohru has already escaped with the Talisman.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Valerie unwittingly
* VillainExitStageLeft: Tohru falls on top of Hak Foo from the clock tower like in canon, but when the heroes have made it safely out of the crumbling tower and find the badly injured Hak Foo, Tohru has already escaped with the Talisman.
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* YouHaveFailedMe: Valmont contemplates on letting Tohru share [[Recap/TheUltimateEvilTheLostDaughter his receptionist's fate]] if he needs to save his own skin in the face of Shendu's increasingly short fuse. When Tohru returns alone from Bavaria, Shendu is indeed ready to incinerate him before Tohru reveals that he has the Dog Talisman.
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* YouHaveFailedMe: Valmont contemplates on letting Tohru share [[Recap/TheUltimateEvilTheLostDaughter his receptionist's fate]] if he needs to save his own skin in the face of Shendu's increasingly short fuse.fuse should Tohru fail to get a Talisman yet again. When Tohru returns alone from Bavaria, Shendu is indeed ready to incinerate him before Tohru reveals that he has the Dog Talisman.
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* AntagonistTitle: Hak Foo's nickname (MeaningfulName which is his name translated from Chinese to English) serves as this chapter's title.
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* AntagonistTitle: Hak Foo's nickname (MeaningfulName ([[MeaningfulName which is his name translated from Chinese to English) English]]) serves as this chapter's title.
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** Due to the [[MakeAnExampleOfThem severe example]] Shendu gave Valmont in the previous chapter, Hak Foo is hired in a different office where Shendu is not present.
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** Due to the [[MakeAnExampleOfThem severe example]] Shendu gave Valmont in the previous chapter, Hak Foo is hired introduced in a different office where Shendu is not present.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Valerie's argument with her mother leads her to saying that she didn't need her mother before her father's death and still doesn't. Valerie is mortified with herself, but is too prideful to apologize.
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* WellDoneDaughterGal: When Valerie's packing for the trip to Bavaria, Shendu finds her having on the phone a heated argument with her mother who seems to think her daughter isn't taking her studies seriously enough, and she utterly refuses to return to Toronto. Since her mother chose to pursue her own career and left Valerie in her father's care, their attempts to reconnect following his death haven't been going well.
-->'''Valerie''': You're a success, you've made your point! But I don't want a lawyer, I want a mother!
-->'''Valerie''': You're a success, you've made your point! But I don't want a lawyer, I want a mother!
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* BadBoss: Valmont contemplates on letting Tohru share [[Recap/TheUltimateEvilTheLostDaughter his receptionist's fate]] if he needs to save his own skin in the face of Shendu's increasingly short fuse.
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* BadBoss: Valmont contemplates on letting TheBadGuyWins: The chapter ends with Tohru share [[Recap/TheUltimateEvilTheLostDaughter his receptionist's fate]] if he needs managing to save his own skin in bring Shendu the face of Dog Talisman, which leaves the demon with three Talismans, and the Dark Hand gets a short breather from Shendu's increasingly short fuse.wrath.
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* GroinAttack: Valerie manages to give Hak Foo one and [[CallingYourAttacks names the move]] as "horse kicks for the crown jewels".
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Valerie unwittingly allows Tohru to take the Dog Talisman from Uncle when she prevents the latter from dodging the large man's attempt to grab it. Tohru is then able to escape and bring it to Shendu, who now has three Talismans in his possession. Downplayed in that, as Jade points out, it's better to let the bad guys possess the [[ImmortalityInducer Dog]] than the [[EyeBeams Pig]].
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Valerie unwittingly allows Tohru to take the Dog Talisman from Uncle when she prevents the latter from dodging the large man's attempt to grab it. Tohru is then able to escape and bring it to Shendu, who now has three Talismans in his possession. Downplayed in that, as Jade points out, it's better to let the bad guys possess the [[ImmortalityInducer Dog]] than the [[EyeBeams Pig]].
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* GroinAttack: Valerie manages to give Hak Foo one and [[CallingYourAttacks names the move]] as [[LampshadeHanging "horse kicks for the crown jewels".
jewels"]].
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Valerie unwittingly allows Tohru to take the Dog Talisman from Uncle when she prevents the latter from dodging the large man's attempt to grab it. Tohru is then able to escape and bring it to Shendu, who now has three Talismans in his possession.Downplayed in that, as Jade points out, it's better attempts to let the bad guys possess downplay it by stating that between the [[ImmortalityInducer Dog]] than and the [[EyeBeams Pig]].Pig]], the Dark Hand getting the former instead of the latter is preferable.
* YouHaveFailedMe: Valmont contemplates on letting Tohru share [[Recap/TheUltimateEvilTheLostDaughter his receptionist's fate]] if he needs to save his own skin in the face of Shendu's increasingly short fuse. When Tohru returns alone from Bavaria, Shendu is indeed ready to incinerate him before Tohru reveals that he has the Dog Talisman.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Valerie unwittingly allows Tohru to take the Dog Talisman from Uncle when she prevents the latter from dodging the large man's attempt to grab it. Tohru is then able to escape and bring it to Shendu, who now has three Talismans in his possession.
* YouHaveFailedMe: Valmont contemplates on letting Tohru share [[Recap/TheUltimateEvilTheLostDaughter his receptionist's fate]] if he needs to save his own skin in the face of Shendu's increasingly short fuse. When Tohru returns alone from Bavaria, Shendu is indeed ready to incinerate him before Tohru reveals that he has the Dog Talisman.
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* BadBoss: Valmont contemplates on letting Tohru share [[Recap/TheUltimateEvilTheLostDaughter his receptionist's fate]] if he needs to save his own skin in the face of Shendu's increasingly short fuse.
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** Due to the severe example Shendu gave Valmont in the previous chapter, Hak Foo is hired
The outcome of the showdown in Bavaria is slightly different in that Tohru manages to escape with the Dog Talisman and bring it to Shendu. In the canon episode, Uncle just jumps out of Tohru's reach when the latter tries to take the Talisman from him, resulting in Tohru falling from the clock tower. In the fic, Valerie taking a hold of Uncle prevents him from making the jump, allowing Tohru to grab hold of the Talisman and take it with him as he falls.
* GroinAttack: Valerie manages to give Hak Foo one and [[CallingYourAttacks names the move]] as "horse kicks for the crown jewels".
The outcome of the showdown in Bavaria is slightly different in that Tohru manages to escape with the Dog Talisman and bring it to Shendu. In the canon episode, Uncle just jumps out of Tohru's reach when the latter tries to take the Talisman from him, resulting in Tohru falling from the clock tower. In the fic, Valerie taking a hold of Uncle prevents him from making the jump, allowing Tohru to grab hold of the Talisman and take it with him as he falls.
* GroinAttack: Valerie manages to give Hak Foo one and [[CallingYourAttacks names the move]] as "horse kicks for the crown jewels".
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** Due to the [[MakeAnExampleOfThem severe example example]] Shendu gave Valmont in the previous chapter, Hak Foo is hired
hired in a different office where Shendu is not present.
** The outcome of the showdown in Bavaria is slightly different in that Tohru manages to escape with the Dog Talisman and bring it to Shendu. In the canon episode, Uncle justjumps jumped out of Tohru's reach when the latter tries tried to take the Talisman from him, resulting in Tohru falling from the clock tower. In the fic, this chapter, Valerie taking a hold of Uncle prevents him from making the jump, allowing Tohru to grab hold of the Talisman and take it with him as he falls.
* GroinAttack: Valerie manages to give Hak Foo one and [[CallingYourAttacks names the move]] as "horse kicks for the crownjewels".jewels".
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Valerie unwittingly allows Tohru to take the Dog Talisman from Uncle when she prevents the latter from dodging the large man's attempt to grab it. Tohru is then able to escape and bring it to Shendu, who now has three Talismans in his possession. Downplayed in that, as Jade points out, it's better to let the bad guys possess the [[ImmortalityInducer Dog]] than the [[EyeBeams Pig]].
** The outcome of the showdown in Bavaria is slightly different in that Tohru manages to escape with the Dog Talisman and bring it to Shendu. In the canon episode, Uncle just
* GroinAttack: Valerie manages to give Hak Foo one and [[CallingYourAttacks names the move]] as "horse kicks for the crown
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Valerie unwittingly allows Tohru to take the Dog Talisman from Uncle when she prevents the latter from dodging the large man's attempt to grab it. Tohru is then able to escape and bring it to Shendu, who now has three Talismans in his possession. Downplayed in that, as Jade points out, it's better to let the bad guys possess the [[ImmortalityInducer Dog]] than the [[EyeBeams Pig]].
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* AnimeHair: Valerie lampshades that Hak Foo's mane of a hair looks like something out of ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog''.
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* BallsOfSteel: Downplayed; Valerie's GroinAttack makes Hak Foo double over with his face going blue, and she believes he's down for the count. However, he recovers almost instantly and resumes his attacks on her and Jackie.
* BerserkerTears: Valerie's tears briefly turn into these when she tries to attack Hak Foo for seemingly killing Uncle.
* BigWhat: Jackie has this reaction when Valerie reveals she figured out the Pig Talisman's location before Jade and Uncle did.
* BerserkerTears: Valerie's tears briefly turn into these when she tries to attack Hak Foo for seemingly killing Uncle.
* BigWhat: Jackie has this reaction when Valerie reveals she figured out the Pig Talisman's location before Jade and Uncle did.
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* ForWantOfANail:
** Due to the severe example Shendu gave Valmont in the previous chapter, Hak Foo is hired
The outcome of the showdown in Bavaria is slightly different in that Tohru manages to escape with the Dog Talisman and bring it to Shendu. In the canon episode, Uncle just jumps out of Tohru's reach when the latter tries to take the Talisman from him, resulting in Tohru falling from the clock tower. In the fic, Valerie taking a hold of Uncle prevents him from making the jump, allowing Tohru to grab hold of the Talisman and take it with him as he falls.
* GroinAttack: Valerie manages to give Hak Foo one and [[CallingYourAttacks names the move]] as "horse kicks for the crown jewels".
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After Jackie brings Uncle the Dog Talisman on the latter's birthday, Valerie accompanies the Chans to Bavaria in search of the Pig Talisman while Valmont hires Hak Foo to search for it with Tohru. A retelling of [[Recap/JackieChanAdventuresS1E11TheDogAndPiggyShow "The Dog and Piggy Show"]].
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* AntagonistTitle: Hak Foo's nickname (MeaningfulName which is his name translated from Chinese to English) serves as this chapter's title.
* CallingYourAttacks: Valerie quickly becomes annoyed by Hak Foo's canon tendency to name his moves. She herself attacks him with two named moves of her own to mock him.
-->'''Valerie''': MOTHER OF ALL BUTT-WHOPS FINDS BULLY'S FACE! ''[punches his face]'' HORSE KICKS FOR THE CROWN JEWELS! ''[[[GroinAttack kicks his crotch]]]''
* ContinuityNod: Valerie broke Uncle's teapot to spray the Enforcers with hot water in the previous chapter, so she gives him a new one as a birthday gift.
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* AntagonistTitle: Hak Foo's nickname (MeaningfulName which is his name translated from Chinese to English) serves as this chapter's title.
* CallingYourAttacks: Valerie quickly becomes annoyed by Hak Foo's canon tendency to name his moves. She herself attacks him with two named moves of her own to mock him.
-->'''Valerie''': MOTHER OF ALL BUTT-WHOPS FINDS BULLY'S FACE! ''[punches his face]'' HORSE KICKS FOR THE CROWN JEWELS! ''[[[GroinAttack kicks his crotch]]]''
* ContinuityNod: Valerie broke Uncle's teapot to spray the Enforcers with hot water in the previous chapter, so she gives him a new one as a birthday gift.
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