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* SharedFamilyQuirks: Shendu quickly notices that Valerie's personality has similarities with those of her possible ancestor Lo Pei.
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* SharedFamilyQuirks: Shendu quickly notices that Valerie's personality has similarities with those that of her possible ancestor Lo Pei.
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* AccidentalHandHold: While Shendu's working in the kitchen with Jade's body, Valerie accidentally touches his hand and causes him to feel a surge of power before she pulls her hand away, mistaking it for a electric shock.
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* AccidentalHandHold: While Shendu's working in the kitchen with Jade's body, Valerie accidentally touches his hand and causes him to feel a surge of power before she pulls her hand away, mistaking it for a an electric shock.
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* BigShutUp: When Shendu returns to Valmont's office empty-handed, he wipes off Valmont's smugness by roaring "ENOUGH!".
* MrExposition: At the end of the chapter, Valmont provides Shendu and the readers with a summary of Valerie's background and her parents, including the revelation that her father's been dead for a year.
* SinsOfOurFathers: Shendu, almost convinced Valerie is descended from his imprisoner Lo Pei, anticipates using her to exact his revenge.
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* WeWillMeetAgain: After Shendu's banished from Jade's body, he promises to Valerie that they will soon meet again even though she can't hear him in his astral form.
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* WeWillMeetAgain: After Shendu's banished from Jade's body, he promises gets close to Valerie Valerie's head to brush her mind with his and whispers to her that they will soon meet again even though again. She actually flinches as if she can't hear had heard him in his astral form.before shrugging it off.
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* WonderTwinPowers: Shendu discovers that for an unknown reason at this point, he feels a surge of power whenever Valerie touches him.
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* WonderTwinPowers: Shendu discovers that for an unknown reason at this point, he feels a surge of power whenever he and Valerie touches him.are in physical contact with each other.
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* BigWhat: Valerie exclaims this while trying to follow Jackie and Uncle's realization that Jade's body is being possessed.
* ByTheHair: Shendu grabs Valerie's hair as he attempts to restrain her in the rollercoaster carriage.
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* WhatBeautifulEyes: Shendu recalls that just like with Valerie, Lo Mei had blue eyes that sparkled like clear water.
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* WhatBeautifulEyes: Shendu recalls that just like with Valerie, Lo Mei had blue eyes that sparkled like clear water.water.
* WonderTwinPowers: Shendu discovers that for an unknown reason at this point, he feels a surge of power whenever Valerie touches him.
* WonderTwinPowers: Shendu discovers that for an unknown reason at this point, he feels a surge of power whenever Valerie touches him.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The future revelation of the exact nature of Shendu and Valerie's connection is first hinted on when they're working in the kitchen and he notices to his own surprise how well they're working in synchrony.
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** The future revelation of the exact nature of Shendu and Valerie's connection is first hinted on when they're working in the kitchen and he notices to his own surprise how well they're working insynchrony.synchrony.
** Valerie notes for the first of many times that Uncle's books lacking a clear categorization makes doing research time-consuming.
** The future revelation of the exact nature of Shendu and Valerie's connection is first hinted on when they're working in the kitchen and he notices to his own surprise how well they're working in
** Valerie notes for the first of many times that Uncle's books lacking a clear categorization makes doing research time-consuming.
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* WeWillMeetAgain: After Shendu's banished from Jade's body, he promises to Valerie that they will soon meet again even though she can't hear him in his astral form.
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* WeWillMeetAgain: After Shendu's banished from Jade's body, he promises to Valerie that they will soon meet again even though she can't hear him in his astral form.form.
* WhatBeautifulEyes: Shendu recalls that just like with Valerie, Lo Mei had blue eyes that sparkled like clear water.
* WhatBeautifulEyes: Shendu recalls that just like with Valerie, Lo Mei had blue eyes that sparkled like clear water.
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* AccidentalHandHold: While Shendu's working in the kitchen with Jade's body, Valerie accidentally touches his hand and causes him to feel a surge of power before she pulls her hand away, mistaking it for a electric shock.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The future revelation of the exact nature of Shendu and Valerie's connection is first hinted on when they're working in the kitchen and he notices to his own surprise how well they're working in synchrony.
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* FamilyEyeResemblance: Shendu is astonished to see that Valerie's crystal blue eyes look exactly like those of Lo Mei despite them having next to nothing common in appearance otherwise. This makes him wonder if Val is descended from Mei, or at the very least, the latter's father Lo Pei.
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* PickyEater: Uncle refuses to have his tea made in other way than the old Chinese way. The one time Valerie tried to give him a tea prepared with a tea bag, he noticed and practically threw a fit.
* SharedFamilyQuirks: Shendu quickly notices that Valerie's personality has similarities with those of her possible ancestor Lo Pei.
-->''…he was starting to see more of Pei in her, not so much Mei. At a glance, she resembled Mei, but that woman had been a flower who only knew womanly attributes of her time. But her father had been inquisitive, righteous and educated, and Valerie was more leaning towards him in personality.''
* SharedFamilyQuirks: Shendu quickly notices that Valerie's personality has similarities with those of her possible ancestor Lo Pei.
-->''…he was starting to see more of Pei in her, not so much Mei. At a glance, she resembled Mei, but that woman had been a flower who only knew womanly attributes of her time. But her father had been inquisitive, righteous and educated, and Valerie was more leaning towards him in personality.''
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* UnkemptBeauty: Shendu thinks that while Valerie is hardly feminine, her tussled hair makes her charming in an untamed way.
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* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: When Shendu takes over Jade's body, he's tempted to snap the sleeping Jackie's neck immediately, but leaves it undone for the sake of finding Section 13.
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* IntelligenceEqualsIsolation: Valerie tells Jade that in contrast to her peers, she prefers reading and studying to hanging outside. Though she tries to hide it, she feels bitter about it.
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** As Jade recounts Valerie on the adventures she's already had with Jackie, Valerie considers it to feel like a mix of a ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' website forum and a ''Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles'' cosplay.
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** As Jade recounts Valerie on the adventures With everything she's already had with Jackie, been told of Jackie's adventures, Valerie considers it to feel like a mix of a ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' website forum and a ''Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles'' cosplay.
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After the Dark Hand manages to steal the Sheep Talisman, Shendu uses it to steal Jade's dormant body and gets to meet Valerie for the first time. A retelling of [[Recap/JackieChanAdventuresS1E5ProjectAForAstral "Project A, for Astral"]].
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After the Dark Hand manages to steal the Sheep Talisman, Shendu uses it to steal take over Jade's dormant body and gets to meet Valerie for the first time. A retelling of [[Recap/JackieChanAdventuresS1E5ProjectAForAstral "Project A, for Astral"]].
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* AdaptationalWimp: When Shendu was exorcised by Uncle from Jade's body in canon, his spirit ended up being trapped in his petrified body until the Season 1 finale. Though he's forced out of Jade here as well, he remains able to wander in his astral form, allowing him to spy on Valerie for the rest of Season 1's storyline (though as the next chapter reveals, Uncle's spells prevent him from going anywhere near the Chans or their shop).
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* ForWantOfANail:
** When Uncle forces the sleep-deprived Jackie to sweep the shop as per canon, Valerie decides to do it herself and let Jackie get some sleep. Though he still gets warned by Jade about Shendu in his dream, he doesn't end up sleepwalking and nearly getting himself killed.
** When Shendu was exorcised by Uncle from Jade's body in canon, his spirit ended up being trapped in his petrified body until the Season 1 finale. Though he's forced out of Jade here as well, he remains able to wander in his astral form, allowing him to spy on Valerie for the rest of Season 1's storyline (though as the next chapter reveals, Uncle's spells prevent him from going anywhere near the Chans or their shop).
** When Uncle forces the sleep-deprived Jackie to sweep the shop as per canon, Valerie decides to do it herself and let Jackie get some sleep. Though he still gets warned by Jade about Shendu in his dream, he doesn't end up sleepwalking and nearly getting himself killed.
** When Shendu was exorcised by Uncle from Jade's body in canon, his spirit ended up being trapped in his petrified body until the Season 1 finale. Though he's forced out of Jade here as well, he remains able to wander in his astral form, allowing him to spy on Valerie for the rest of Season 1's storyline (though as the next chapter reveals, Uncle's spells prevent him from going anywhere near the Chans or their shop).
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After the Dark Hand manages to steal the Sheep Talisman, Shendu uses it to steal Jade's dormant body and gets to meet Valerie for the first time. A retelling of [[Recap/JackieChanAdventuresS1E5ProjectAForAstral "Project A, for Astral"]].
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** While chatting with Shendu who's pretending to be Jade, Valerie cites ''Literature/AlicesAdventuresInWonderland'', ''Literature/{{Persuasion}}'' and a supposed Creator/WilliamShakespeare quote.
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: When Shendu hears Jade making her canon incorrect deduction that Shendu must be working for the Dark Hand, he holds back laughter and thinks that he'd find such an idea to be insulting if it weren't ludicrous.
* {{Facepalm}}: Valerie does this as Jackie makes frantic efforts to prove to Captain Black that Jade is not herself.
* {{Facepalm}}: Valerie does this as Jackie makes frantic efforts to prove to Captain Black that Jade is not herself.
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: When Shendu hears Jade making her canon incorrect deduction that Shendu he must be working for the Dark Hand, he holds back laughter and thinks that he'd find such an idea to be insulting if it weren't ludicrous.
* BroomstickQuarterstaff: Valerie's act of fighting with a broom in the previous chapter is lampshaded with dark humor; when the Enforcers are sent to find out if the Sheep Talisman is at Uncle's Rare Finds, Shendu tells them to watch out for brooms this time, for Valerie might have killed them had she been armed with a mop.
* {{Facepalm}}: Valerie does this asJackie makes frantic Jackie's poor efforts to prove to Captain Black that Jade is not herself.herself end up with him screaming that "she" is evil.
* BroomstickQuarterstaff: Valerie's act of fighting with a broom in the previous chapter is lampshaded with dark humor; when the Enforcers are sent to find out if the Sheep Talisman is at Uncle's Rare Finds, Shendu tells them to watch out for brooms this time, for Valerie might have killed them had she been armed with a mop.
* {{Facepalm}}: Valerie does this as
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** When Uncle forces to sleep-deprived Jackie to sweep the shop as per canon, Valerie decides to do it herself and let Jackie get some sleep. Though he still gets warned by Jade about Shendu in his dream, he doesn't end up sleepwalking and nearly getting himself killed.
** When Shendu was exorcised by Uncle from Jade's body in canon, his spirit ended up being trapped in his petrified body until the Season 1 finale. Though he's forced out of Jade here as well, he remains able to wander in his astral form, allowing him to keep an eye on Valerie (though as the next chapter reveals, Uncle's spells prevent him from going anywhere the Chans or their shop).
** When Shendu was exorcised by Uncle from Jade's body in canon, his spirit ended up being trapped in his petrified body until the Season 1 finale. Though he's forced out of Jade here as well, he remains able to wander in his astral form, allowing him to keep an eye on Valerie (though as the next chapter reveals, Uncle's spells prevent him from going anywhere the Chans or their shop).
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** When Uncle forces to the sleep-deprived Jackie to sweep the shop as per canon, Valerie decides to do it herself and let Jackie get some sleep. Though he still gets warned by Jade about Shendu in his dream, he doesn't end up sleepwalking and nearly getting himself killed.
** When Shendu was exorcised by Uncle from Jade's body in canon, his spirit ended up being trapped in his petrified body until the Season 1 finale. Though he's forced out of Jade here as well, he remains able to wander in his astral form, allowing him tokeep an eye spy on Valerie for the rest of Season 1's storyline (though as the next chapter reveals, Uncle's spells prevent him from going anywhere near the Chans or their shop).shop).
* ShoutOut:
** As Jade recounts Valerie on the adventures she's already had with Jackie, Valerie considers it to feel like a mix of a ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' website forum and a ''Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles'' cosplay.
** When Shendu was exorcised by Uncle from Jade's body in canon, his spirit ended up being trapped in his petrified body until the Season 1 finale. Though he's forced out of Jade here as well, he remains able to wander in his astral form, allowing him to
* ShoutOut:
** As Jade recounts Valerie on the adventures she's already had with Jackie, Valerie considers it to feel like a mix of a ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' website forum and a ''Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles'' cosplay.
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** When Shendu was exorcised by Uncle from Jade's body in canon, his spirit ended up being trapped in his petrified body for the remainder of Season 1. This doesn't happen in this fic,
While Shendu is exorcised by Uncle from Jade's body like in canon, he's not trapped back in his statue prison, allowing him to wander around in his astral form. Though Uncle's spells ensure that he can't get anywhere near the Chans or Uncle's antique store, he can still spy on Valerie and enter her dreams.
While Shendu is exorcised by Uncle from Jade's body like in canon, he's not trapped back in his statue prison, allowing him to wander around in his astral form. Though Uncle's spells ensure that he can't get anywhere near the Chans or Uncle's antique store, he can still spy on Valerie and enter her dreams.
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** When Shendu was exorcised by Uncle from Jade's body in canon, his spirit ended up being trapped in his petrified body for until the remainder of Season 1. This doesn't happen in this fic,
While Shendu is exorcised by Uncle from Jade's body like in canon,1 finale. Though he's not trapped back forced out of Jade here as well, he remains able to wander in his statue prison, astral form, allowing him to wander around in his astral form. Though keep an eye on Valerie (though as the next chapter reveals, Uncle's spells ensure that he can't get prevent him from going anywhere near the Chans or Uncle's antique store, their shop).
* WeWillMeetAgain: After Shendu's banished from Jade's body, hecan still spy on promises to Valerie and enter her dreams.that they will soon meet again even though she can't hear him in his astral form.
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* WeWillMeetAgain: After Shendu's banished from Jade's body, he
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: When Shendu hears Jade making her canon incorrect deduction that Shendu must be working for the Dark Hand, he holds back laughter and thinks that he'd find such an idea to be insulting if it weren't ludicrous.
* {{Facepalm}}: Valerie does this as Jackie makes frantic efforts to prove to Captain Black that Jade is not herself.
* ForWantOfANail:
** When Uncle forces to sleep-deprived Jackie to sweep the shop as per canon, Valerie decides to do it herself and let Jackie get some sleep. Though he still gets warned by Jade about Shendu in his dream, he doesn't end up sleepwalking and nearly getting himself killed.
** When Shendu was exorcised by Uncle from Jade's body in canon, his spirit ended up being trapped in his petrified body for the remainder of Season 1. This doesn't happen in this fic,
While Shendu is exorcised by Uncle from Jade's body like in canon, he's not trapped back in his statue prison, allowing him to wander around in his astral form. Though Uncle's spells ensure that he can't get anywhere near the Chans or Uncle's antique store, he can still spy on Valerie and enter her dreams.
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: When Shendu hears Jade making her canon incorrect deduction that Shendu must be working for the Dark Hand, he holds back laughter and thinks that he'd find such an idea to be insulting if it weren't ludicrous.
* {{Facepalm}}: Valerie does this as Jackie makes frantic efforts to prove to Captain Black that Jade is not herself.
* ForWantOfANail:
** When Uncle forces to sleep-deprived Jackie to sweep the shop as per canon, Valerie decides to do it herself and let Jackie get some sleep. Though he still gets warned by Jade about Shendu in his dream, he doesn't end up sleepwalking and nearly getting himself killed.
** When Shendu was exorcised by Uncle from Jade's body in canon, his spirit ended up being trapped in his petrified body for the remainder of Season 1. This doesn't happen in this fic,
While Shendu is exorcised by Uncle from Jade's body like in canon, he's not trapped back in his statue prison, allowing him to wander around in his astral form. Though Uncle's spells ensure that he can't get anywhere near the Chans or Uncle's antique store, he can still spy on Valerie and enter her dreams.
