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“Journey through the wonderfully lewd lives of our favorites beauties within this lovely farm. Some couples, you know! Some might come off as surprises. Whatever the case, this is just the farm for you if you wanna...well, the title lays it out."
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* GirlOnGirlIsHot: Racheal x Taffy, Geecku x Sarah
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* GirlOnGirlIsHot: Racheal x Taffy, Taffy and Geecku x SarahSarah.
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--->'''Shockwave's hologram:''' “'''WHAT DID YOU SAY ABOUT US?!'''”
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--->'''Shockwave's hologram:''' “'''WHAT "'''WHAT DID YOU SAY ABOUT US?!'''”US?!'''"
* NoodleIncident: As Tootsie thinks back to the previous versions of the Moo-Maker, she recalls how the MK. II nearly went on a murderous rampage.
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--->'''Shockwave's hologram:''' “...shockwave.”
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--->'''Shockwave's hologram:''' “..."...shockwave.”"
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--->'''Shockwave:''' “I’ll have you know that I’ve been reviewing your files for the last couple of days, as well as what has transpired as of now. And I can already calculate that both me and Sarah did not work our way through our lives and professions to be made fools of by the likes of YOU.”
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--->'''Shockwave:''' “I’ll "I’ll have you know that I’ve been reviewing your files for the last couple of days, as well as what has transpired as of now. And I can already calculate that both me and Sarah did not work our way through our lives and professions to be made fools of by the likes of YOU.”"
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* SayMyName: Torque manages to have Jeri scream his name during their sex scene.
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This marks the first "Sexy Side-Story".
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This marks the first "Sexy Side-Story".
"Side-Story" of the Silverscale Arena.
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* BerserkButton: Don't insult Sarah while Shockwave may be listening. Seriously.
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* INeedToGoToGoIronMyDog: As Shockwave's hologram lays into Jin and Din's cruel attitudes, Din says she has to pee, only to be confronted by the same hologram. Then again, [[BringMeMyBrownPants maybe she wasn't lying.]]
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* INeedToGoToGoIronMyDog: INeedToGoIronMyDog: As Shockwave's hologram lays into Jin and Din's cruel attitudes, Din says she has to pee, only to be confronted by the same hologram. Then again, [[BringMeMyBrownPants maybe she wasn't lying.]]
* KarmaHoudiniWarranty: It was often said that Jin and Din got off way too easy for manipulating Sarah and nearly KILLING Digit (and Racheal, indirectly). This fanfic gives them a moment where they press their luck, going as far as to call Sarah a 'retard'. Cue Shockwave's hologram appearing...
* LongDistanceRelationship: Shockwave and Sarah establish one, sharing email addresses at the end.
* MythologyGag: Randal's new gay sexuality is possibly based on the early history of his character, in which fans of the series kept thinking him as just that until drama caused his character to be hastily put into a relationship with Taffy. It's even [[TakeThat called out in the text.]]
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: 'Villain' is a stretch, but Jin and Din enjoy tormenting Sarah by calling her a 'retard'. This is the final straw for everybody involved.
* {{Polyamory}}: Racheal and Taffy's plan for their relationship. They're deeply in love, but they also would like to have a guy each. Doubles as a CallForward to their relationships with Ira and Bagan, respectively.
* LongDistanceRelationship: Shockwave and Sarah establish one, sharing email addresses at the end.
* MythologyGag: Randal's new gay sexuality is possibly based on the early history of his character, in which fans of the series kept thinking him as just that until drama caused his character to be hastily put into a relationship with Taffy. It's even [[TakeThat called out in the text.]]
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: 'Villain' is a stretch, but Jin and Din enjoy tormenting Sarah by calling her a 'retard'. This is the final straw for everybody involved.
* {{Polyamory}}: Racheal and Taffy's plan for their relationship. They're deeply in love, but they also would like to have a guy each. Doubles as a CallForward to their relationships with Ira and Bagan, respectively.
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* ShoutOut: Shockwave's [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech speech to Rin and Din]] is lifted from one of his appearances in JohnnyFlash's videos. Specifically, his speech to the Insecticons.
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* ShoutOut: Shockwave's [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech speech to Rin and Din]] is lifted from one of his appearances in JohnnyFlash's videos. Specifically, his speech to the Insecticons.Insecticons.
* ShowerOfLove: Racheal and Taffy share one in a rather wholesome scene.
* TakeThat: The lack of yaoi relationships in Las Lindas is called out, specifically related to the drama surrounding Randal Hawthorne.
** Jin and Din's entire moment in the story is to basically give them a KarmaHoudiniWarranty moment.
* ShowerOfLove: Racheal and Taffy share one in a rather wholesome scene.
* TakeThat: The lack of yaoi relationships in Las Lindas is called out, specifically related to the drama surrounding Randal Hawthorne.
** Jin and Din's entire moment in the story is to basically give them a KarmaHoudiniWarranty moment.
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--->'''Jin:''': "[[ThisIsGonnaSuck Shockwave? Shockwave who?"
--->'''Shockwave:''': "'''YOU! TALK TO THE HAND!" ''(Unleashes a shockwave from his working hand that sends [[ATwinkleInTheSky the duo into the night sky, screaming]])''
--->'''Shockwave:''': "'''YOU! TALK TO THE HAND!" ''(Unleashes a shockwave from his working hand that sends [[ATwinkleInTheSky the duo into the night sky, screaming]])''
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--->'''Jin:''': "[[ThisIsGonnaSuck Shockwave? Shockwave who?"
who?]]"
--->'''Shockwave:''': "'''YOU! TALK TO THEHAND!" HAND!'''" ''(Unleashes a shockwave from his working hand that sends [[ATwinkleInTheSky the duo into the night sky, screaming]])''
--->'''Shockwave:''': "'''YOU! TALK TO THE
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* INeedToGoToGoIronMyDog: As Shockwave's hologram lays into Jin and Din's cruel attitudes, Din says she has to pee, only to be confronted by the same hologram. Then again, [[BringMeMyBrownPants maybe she wasn't lying.]]
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* PreAssKickingOneLiner: At the height of Shockwave's passionate speech to Jin and Din, he responds to their JustJokingJustification with a knock-knock joke. After [[SuddenlyShouting pressuring them]] into asking him "Who's There?", he responds.
--->'''Shockwave's hologram:''' “...shockwave.”
--->'''Jin:''': "[[ThisIsGonnaSuck Shockwave? Shockwave who?"
--->'''Shockwave:''': "'''YOU! TALK TO THE HAND!" ''(Unleashes a shockwave from his working hand that sends [[ATwinkleInTheSky the duo into the night sky, screaming]])''
--->'''Shockwave's hologram:''' “...shockwave.”
--->'''Jin:''': "[[ThisIsGonnaSuck Shockwave? Shockwave who?"
--->'''Shockwave:''': "'''YOU! TALK TO THE HAND!" ''(Unleashes a shockwave from his working hand that sends [[ATwinkleInTheSky the duo into the night sky, screaming]])''
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* GirlOnGirlIsHot: Racheal x Taffy, Geecku x Sarah
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* JumpScare: At the height of Jin and Din's cruelty to Sarah, they notice Geecku's gone quiet and they too feel a sinister presence. At first, nobody is there...until-
--->'''Shockwave's hologram:''' “'''WHAT DID YOU SAY ABOUT US?!'''”
--->'''Jin:''': "GAH!"
--->'''Din:''': "Holy crap! Back, demon! Back!"
--->'''Shockwave's hologram:''' “'''WHAT DID YOU SAY ABOUT US?!'''”
--->'''Jin:''': "GAH!"
--->'''Din:''': "Holy crap! Back, demon! Back!"
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“Journey through the wonderfully lewd lives of our favorites beauties within this lovely farm. Some couples, you know! Some might come off as surprises. Whatever the case, this is just the farm for you if you wanna...well, the title lays it out."
This marks the first "Sexy Side-Story".
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* ADayInTheLimeLight: Most of the main cast of [[Webcomic/LasLindas Las Lindas]] are showcased here.
* AdaptationalSexuality: This story establishes Randal is gay. Not that this is the first time this has been shown. See below for MythologyGag.
** To the rest of the cast, most of them have become more than willing to swing with both genders. Given the nature of the original webcomic, maybe this doesn't really apply.
* ExtremeLibido: Geecku, per the usual.
* GenderBender: A fruit that Geecku lent causes Randal and Miles to become girls...very HORNY girls for Minos.
* {{Hologram}}: Shockwave appears this way, though given he's able to interact with Jin and Din, it's more HardLight.
* PornWithoutPlot: More or less, as this does provide details about this fanfic's version of [[Webcomic/LasLindas Las Lindas.]]
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Upon hearing Jin and Rin's cruel speech to Sarah, Shockwave('s hologram) delivers a vicious one to the two. It's rather [[OocIsSeriousBusiness jarring,]] given this is [[TheSpock Shockwave we're talking about.]]
--->'''Shockwave:''' “I’ll have you know that I’ve been reviewing your files for the last couple of days, as well as what has transpired as of now. And I can already calculate that both me and Sarah did not work our way through our lives and professions to be made fools of by the likes of YOU.”
* RuleSixtyThree: The female versions of Randal and Miles.
* SayMyName: Torque manages to have Jeri scream his name during their sex scene.
* ShoutOut: Shockwave's [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech speech to Rin and Din]] is lifted from one of his appearances in JohnnyFlash's videos. Specifically, his speech to the Insecticons.
This marks the first "Sexy Side-Story".
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* ADayInTheLimeLight: Most of the main cast of [[Webcomic/LasLindas Las Lindas]] are showcased here.
* AdaptationalSexuality: This story establishes Randal is gay. Not that this is the first time this has been shown. See below for MythologyGag.
** To the rest of the cast, most of them have become more than willing to swing with both genders. Given the nature of the original webcomic, maybe this doesn't really apply.
* ExtremeLibido: Geecku, per the usual.
* GenderBender: A fruit that Geecku lent causes Randal and Miles to become girls...very HORNY girls for Minos.
* {{Hologram}}: Shockwave appears this way, though given he's able to interact with Jin and Din, it's more HardLight.
* PornWithoutPlot: More or less, as this does provide details about this fanfic's version of [[Webcomic/LasLindas Las Lindas.]]
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Upon hearing Jin and Rin's cruel speech to Sarah, Shockwave('s hologram) delivers a vicious one to the two. It's rather [[OocIsSeriousBusiness jarring,]] given this is [[TheSpock Shockwave we're talking about.]]
--->'''Shockwave:''' “I’ll have you know that I’ve been reviewing your files for the last couple of days, as well as what has transpired as of now. And I can already calculate that both me and Sarah did not work our way through our lives and professions to be made fools of by the likes of YOU.”
* RuleSixtyThree: The female versions of Randal and Miles.
* SayMyName: Torque manages to have Jeri scream his name during their sex scene.
* ShoutOut: Shockwave's [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech speech to Rin and Din]] is lifted from one of his appearances in JohnnyFlash's videos. Specifically, his speech to the Insecticons.
