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* CriticalResearchFailure: It should "Mano a Mano". Writing "Mono y Mono" means "Monkey and Monkey".
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* TropesAreNotBad
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* InelegantBlubbering: Discussed in comparison to the SingleTear, which is more generally used in films.
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# [[{{Overcrank}} Slow motion]]
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# The EvilLaugh
# [[BigNo The simple shouting of "NO!"]]
# [[UnflinchingWalk The explosion just a few feet away]]
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# The past
# [[OminousLatinchanting The dramatic choir]]
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[[TheStinger "Noooooooo!"]]
