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** PlayedForLaughs when he tells Grim that [[CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot this wouldn't have happened]] if [[NeverMyFault Grim hadn't loaned him his scythe]].
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** PlayedForLaughs when he tells Grim that [[CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot this wouldn't have happened]] if [[NeverMyFault Grim hadn't loaned him his scythe]]. While Billy is equally, if not more so, responsible for letting Jack get the scythe, Grim ''[[IdiotBall really]]'' should have known better than to let someone like [[TooDumbToLive Billy]] borrow it in the first place.
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* EquivalentExchange: Jack stole Grim's scythe and made a deal with him, saying if Grim granted him immortality so he could play pranks for eternity, he'd give him back his scythe. Grim had no choice but to accept the deal and granted Jack eternal life, but in exchange, after getting his scythe back, Grim cut off Jack's head as revenge for being tricked in the first place, essentially making Jack's immortality moot.
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* PretenderDiss: When Billy dressed as the Grim Reaper first meets Jack, Jack tells for him to get lost and to take his "phoney scythe" with him. Of course Billy is offended by this and yells that his scythe is the real thing. Jack sees the inscription and realizes he's right, deciding to steal it for his EvilPlan.
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-->'''Billy:''' [[NeverMyFault You know Grim, you didn’t loan me the scythe in the first place, this kind of thing would never happen.]]\\
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-->'''Billy:''' [[NeverMyFault You know know, Grim, if you didn’t loan me the scythe in the first place, this kind of thing would never happen.]]\\
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* FailedAttemptAtDrama: When Grim tries to once again warn Billy about the dangers of his scythe, complete with floating in the air with a spiraly background, Billy simply states his entire speech, "Open the vortex to the underworld, unleashing unspeakable chaos and end the world as we know it", leaving Frim shocked that that is exactly it, with the background even returning to normal.
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* FailedAttemptAtDrama: When Grim tries to once again warn Billy about the dangers of his scythe, complete with floating in the air with a spiraly background, Billy simply states his entire speech, "Open the vortex to the underworld, unleashing unspeakable chaos and end the world as we know it", leaving Frim Grim shocked that that is Billy said exactly it, what he would've, with the background even returning to normal.
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* BullyingADragon: Dow in the Underworld, Jack continues his prank, hitting one particularly large and muscular demon with a slingshot. He gets grabbed and, after the fade out, his pumpkin head is implied to get squashed.
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* BullyingADragon: Dow Down in the Underworld, Jack continues his prank, hitting one particularly large and muscular demon with a slingshot. He gets grabbed and, after the fade out, his pumpkin head is implied to get squashed.
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'''Grim:''' …''I hate you, Billy.''
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** PlayedForLaughs when he tells Grim that [[CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot this wouldn’t have happened if]] [[NeverMyFault Grim hadn’t loaned him this scythe]].
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** PlayedForLaughs when he tells Grim that [[CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot this wouldn’t have happened if]] happened]] if [[NeverMyFault Grim hadn’t loaned him this his scythe]].
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* FailedAttemptAtDrama: When Grim tries to once again warn Billy about the dangers of his scythe, complete with floating in the air with a spiraly background, Billy simply states his entire speech, "Open the vortex to the underworld, unleashing unspeakable chaos and end the world as we know it", leaving Frim shocked that that is exactly it, with the background even returning to normal.
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* BeeAfraid: One of the pranks that Irwin suffers leads to a beehive getting lodged in his mouth. Screaming and stinging ensues.
* BullyingADragon: Dow in the Underworld, Jack continues his prank, hitting one particularly large and muscular demon with a slingshot. He gets grabbed and, after the fade out, his pumpkin head is implied to get squashed.
* CaptainObvious: As demonic pumpkins run wild through the streets, Grim says he thinks something supernatural is going on. Mandy sarcastically asks how he figured it out.
* BullyingADragon: Dow in the Underworld, Jack continues his prank, hitting one particularly large and muscular demon with a slingshot. He gets grabbed and, after the fade out, his pumpkin head is implied to get squashed.
* CaptainObvious: As demonic pumpkins run wild through the streets, Grim says he thinks something supernatural is going on. Mandy sarcastically asks how he figured it out.
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* EvilLaugh: Jack when summoning an army of demonic pumpkins and unleashing them on the city.
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* LittleNo: Jack when he thinks the knight who killed him has returned.
* LoopholeAbuse: Grim says he never goes back on a deal. Jack is indeed immortal, but nothing in the deal could prevent Grim from beheading him or later sending him through the portal to the Underworld.
* LoopholeAbuse: Grim says he never goes back on a deal. Jack is indeed immortal, but nothing in the deal could prevent Grim from beheading him or later sending him through the portal to the Underworld.
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Irwin stumbles into all the pranks that Mandy had set up for Jack, causing such a spectacle that the pumpkin minions laugh themselves to death.
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* TraumaButton: Irwin's knight costume was just the latest one he tried tonight, but it positively freaks out Jack, due to how the guy originally died.
* VillainRespect: Mandy is admittedly impressed that Grim cut off Jack's head as payback for stealing his scythe.
* VillainRespect: Mandy is admittedly impressed that Grim cut off Jack's head as payback for stealing his scythe.
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* {{Frame-Up}}: In the past, the villagers of Townsville got Jack killed by pulling a prank on the Queen and framing Jack for it.
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* {{Frame-Up}}: FrameUp: In the past, the villagers of Townsville got Jack killed by pulling a prank on the Queen and framing Jack for it.
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'''Grim:''' …I ''hate'' you, Billy.
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'''Grim:''' …I ''hate'' …''I hate you, Billy.''
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* DisproportionateRetribution: In Jack’s origin story, the townsfolk of Endsville were sick of the petty pranks he would pull on them… so they pranked the Queen (who was known to not have a sense of humor) and [[FrameUp framed him for it]], which got him ''executed''.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: In Jack’s origin story, the townsfolk of Endsville were sick of the petty pranks he would pull on them… so they pranked the Queen (who was known to not have a sense of humor) and [[FrameUp framed him for it]], which got him ''executed''. The Queen counts as well, sending a knight to kill Jack just because she thought Jack pulled a prank on her.
* {{Frame-Up}}: In the past, the villagers of Townsville got Jack killed by pulling a prank on the Queen and framing Jack for it.
* IdeaBulb: Billy gets one when he realizes Grin’s in trouble.
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** Billy indirectly causes all the conflict because he borrowed Grim's scythe, but blatantly shirks responsibility after Jack O'Lantern is defeated and Grim gets his scythe back. He is just too stupid to understand that what he says makes him guilty as well.
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** Billy indirectly causes caused all the conflict because he borrowed by borrowing Grim's scythe, scythe and then letting Jack steal it, but blatantly shirks responsibility after Jack O'Lantern is defeated and Grim gets his scythe back. He is just too stupid to understand that what he says makes him just as guilty as well.Grim.
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* OhCrap:
** Billy panics when he realizes he’s left Grim at Jack’s mercy.
** Jack freaks out when he thinks the knight who executed him has returned.
** Billy panics when he realizes he’s left Grim at Jack’s mercy.
** Jack freaks out when he thinks the knight who executed him has returned.
