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* MythologyGag: At one point, Gekkou refers to Rodriguez as 'Drill Sergeant Eyepatch', just like his brother did in the previous story. Rodriguez immediately remembers this and tells Gekkou that he won't go easy on him just because he is [[TheRedBaron The Ghost of Eden's]] brother.
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* MythologyGag: At one point, Gekkou refers to Rodriguez as 'Drill Sergeant Eyepatch', just like his brother did in the previous story. Rodriguez immediately remembers this and tells Gekkou that he won't go easy on him just because he is [[TheRedBaron [[RedBaron The Ghost of Eden's]] brother.
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** Chapter 1 can be found [[http://forum.fanfiction.net/topic/88086/54746505/42/#56467922 here]]
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** Chapter 1 can be found [[http://forum.[[https://www.fanfiction.net/topic/88086/54746505/42/#56467922 net/topic/88086/59073588/96/Archived-Emiya-clan-4 here]]
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Read some of the stories while bored, found new tropes to add.
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* MythologyGag: At one point, Gekkou refers to Rodriguez as 'Drill Sergeant Eyepatch', just like his brother did in the previous story. Rodriguez immediately remembers this and tells Gekkou that he won't go easy on him just because he is [[TheRedBaron The Ghost of Eden's]] brother.
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* '''Synopsis:''' Sequel to Paradox Sun. Gekkou, who has yet to find his Ashikabi and refuses to follow any path in life until he does, is sent by his parents to Military School. Under Touma's suggestion, he is sent to Lanseal Military Academy, in the VideoGame/ValkyriaChronicles world. Unfortunately, this came at a bad time without anyone knowing until it's too late.
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* '''Synopsis:''' Sequel to Paradox Sun. Gekkou, who has yet to find his Ashikabi and refuses to follow any path in life until he does, is sent by his parents to Military School. Under Touma's suggestion, he is sent to Lanseal Military Academy, in the VideoGame/ValkyriaChronicles Valkyria Chronicles world. Unfortunately, this came at a bad time without anyone knowing until it's too late.
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* '''Crossover:''' ValkyriaChroniclesII
* '''Synopsis:''' Sequel to Paradox Sun. Gekkou, who has yet to find his Ashikabi and refuses to follow any path in life until he does, is sent by his parents to Military School. Under Touma's suggestion, he is sent to Lanseal Military Academy, in the ValkyriaChronicles world. Unfortunately, this came at a bad time without anyone knowing until it's too late.
* '''Synopsis:''' Sequel to Paradox Sun. Gekkou, who has yet to find his Ashikabi and refuses to follow any path in life until he does, is sent by his parents to Military School. Under Touma's suggestion, he is sent to Lanseal Military Academy, in the ValkyriaChronicles world. Unfortunately, this came at a bad time without anyone knowing until it's too late.
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* '''Crossover:''' ValkyriaChroniclesII
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* '''Synopsis:''' Sequel to Paradox Sun. Gekkou, who has yet to find his Ashikabi and refuses to follow any path in life until he does, is sent by his parents to Military School. Under Touma's suggestion, he is sent to Lanseal Military Academy, in theValkyriaChronicles VideoGame/ValkyriaChronicles world. Unfortunately, this came at a bad time without anyone knowing until it's too late.
* '''Synopsis:''' Sequel to Paradox Sun. Gekkou, who has yet to find his Ashikabi and refuses to follow any path in life until he does, is sent by his parents to Military School. Under Touma's suggestion, he is sent to Lanseal Military Academy, in the
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* ShareTheMalePain: The GroinAttack mentioned above leads to this during the Lanseal entrance exam. Probably the only reason Team A didn't fail five minutes in.
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* ShareTheMalePain: The GroinAttack mentioned above leads to this during the Lanseal entrance exam. Probably the only reason Team A didn't fail five minutes in.
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* ATruceWhileWeGawk: Broken by [[CombatPragmatist Avan]]. See GroinAttack and ShareTheMalePain below.
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* DrillSergeantNasty: Rodriguez retains his role as this, just like the original game.
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* DrillSergeantNasty: Rodriguez retains his role as this, just like the original game.game.
* GroinAttack: With an AT Lance, no less. Sure, might have just been one for mock combat but that still hurts.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Gekkou's... unique way of dealing with infantry using an AT weapon broke it so it could no longer fire. Which leads to
* ImprobableUseOfAWeapon: Rocket Launcher jammed? Throw it like a javelin instead.
* ShareTheMalePain: The GroinAttack mentioned above leads to this during the Lanseal entrance exam. Probably the only reason Team A didn't fail five minutes in.
* GroinAttack: With an AT Lance, no less. Sure, might have just been one for mock combat but that still hurts.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Gekkou's... unique way of dealing with infantry using an AT weapon broke it so it could no longer fire. Which leads to
* ImprobableUseOfAWeapon: Rocket Launcher jammed? Throw it like a javelin instead.
* ShareTheMalePain: The GroinAttack mentioned above leads to this during the Lanseal entrance exam. Probably the only reason Team A didn't fail five minutes in.
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-->''"Military school!? Tou-san, Kaa-san, you can't be serious about this, can you?"''
* '''Main Character:''' Gekkou
* '''Crossover:''' ValkyriaChroniclesII
* '''Synopsis:''' Sequel to Paradox Sun. Gekkou, who has yet to find his Ashikabi and refuses to follow any path in life until he does, is sent by his parents to Military School. Under Touma's suggestion, he is sent to Lanseal Military Academy, in the ValkyriaChronicles world. Unfortunately, this came at a bad time without anyone knowing until it's too late.
** Chapter 1 can be found [[http://forum.fanfiction.net/topic/88086/54746505/42/#56467922 here]]
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!!Tropes
* BlondeBrunetteRedhead: Gender flipped version. Gekkou(Blonde), Zeri (Bluenette) and Avan(Redhead).
* DrillSergeantNasty: Rodriguez retains his role as this, just like the original game.
* '''Main Character:''' Gekkou
* '''Crossover:''' ValkyriaChroniclesII
* '''Synopsis:''' Sequel to Paradox Sun. Gekkou, who has yet to find his Ashikabi and refuses to follow any path in life until he does, is sent by his parents to Military School. Under Touma's suggestion, he is sent to Lanseal Military Academy, in the ValkyriaChronicles world. Unfortunately, this came at a bad time without anyone knowing until it's too late.
** Chapter 1 can be found [[http://forum.fanfiction.net/topic/88086/54746505/42/#56467922 here]]
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!!Tropes
* BlondeBrunetteRedhead: Gender flipped version. Gekkou(Blonde), Zeri (Bluenette) and Avan(Redhead).
* DrillSergeantNasty: Rodriguez retains his role as this, just like the original game.
