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* ItsComplicated: When thinking up sources for happy thoughts, Steven considers thinking about Rose Quartz. He soon scraps the idea because, in his words, "these feelings are complicated."
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* ItsComplicated: When thinking up sources for happy thoughts, Steven considers thinking about Rose Quartz. He soon scraps the idea because, in his words, "these feelings are complicated."
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* SinkOrSwimMentor: Garnet was pretty chill with Steven falling from a fatal height to learn how to control his emotion-powered flight ability. Justified because she was probably acting out a scenario she saw with her future vision, a scenario that ended in success.
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* SinkOrSwimMentor: Garnet was pretty chill with Steven falling from a fatal height to learn how to control his emotion-powered flight ability. Justified because she was probably acting out a scenario she saw with her future vision, a scenario that ended in success.
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-->'''Steven''': I could really use your assistance dealing with the sudden appearance... ''(Amethyst falls)'' Ah, rats... ''(Amethyst returns)'' ...of a power previously unpronounced to me which I can't control. ''(Amethyst falls)'' Umm... ''(Amethyst returns)'' \\
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-->'''Steven''': I could really use your assistance dealing with the sudden appearance... ''(Amethyst falls)'' Ah, rats... ''(Amethyst returns)'' ...of a power previously unpronounced unbeknownst to me which I can't control. ''(Amethyst falls)'' Umm... ''(Amethyst returns)'' \\
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: When he tries to figure out happy thoughts he can use to slow his descent, Steven personally pushes away a picture of Rose Quartz that appeared when he considered thinking about her.
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: When he tries to figure out happy thoughts he can use to slow his descent, [[https://youtu.be/8xHfK_mGXkI?t=9m37s Steven personally pushes away a picture of Rose Quartz that appeared when he considered thinking about her.her]].
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: When he tries to figure out happy thoughts he can use to slow his descent, Steven personally pushes away a picture of Rose Quartz that appeared when he considered thinking about her.
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* SinkOrSwimMentor: Garnet was pretty chill with Steven falling from a fatal height to learn how to control his emotion-powered flight ability. Justified because she was probably acting out a scenario she saw with her future vision, a scenario that ended in success.
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** One of Steven's ideas involves [[Literature/PeterPan happy thoughts]].
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** One of Steven's ideas involves Steven discovers that his budding flight powers involve [[Literature/PeterPan happy thoughts]].
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* ShoutOut: [[Disney/WinnieThePooh "Oh Bother"]]
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** [[Disney/WinnieThePooh "OhBother"]]Bother"]]
** One of Steven's ideas involves [[Literature/PeterPan happy thoughts]].
** [[Disney/WinnieThePooh "Oh
** One of Steven's ideas involves [[Literature/PeterPan happy thoughts]].
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* SesquipedalianLoquaciousness: While Steven is floating, Amethyst can jump and stay airborne for a few seconds to listen to him, so he decides he'll have to ask faster. [[RuleOfFunny Of course]], his normally straightforward phrasing becomes long and complicated.
-->'''Steven''': I could really use your assistance dealing with the sudden appearance... ''(Amethyst falls)'' Ah, rats... ''(Amethyst returns)'' ...of a power previously unpronounced to me which I can't control. ''(Amethyst falls)'' Umm... ''(Amethyst returns)'' \\
'''Amethyst''': ''(annoyed)'' Dude, summarize.
-->'''Steven''': I could really use your assistance dealing with the sudden appearance... ''(Amethyst falls)'' Ah, rats... ''(Amethyst returns)'' ...of a power previously unpronounced to me which I can't control. ''(Amethyst falls)'' Umm... ''(Amethyst returns)'' \\
'''Amethyst''': ''(annoyed)'' Dude, summarize.
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* TakeOurWordForIt: We don't see the rotten cake, but Steven finds it [[ItCameFromTheFridge so disgusting that he can't even tell that it ''is'' a cake!]]
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* TakeOurWordForIt: We don't see the rotten cake, but Steven finds it [[ItCameFromTheFridge so disgusting that he can't even tell that it ''is'' it]] ''[[ItCameFromTheFridge is]]'' [[ItCameFromTheFridge a cake!]]cake]]!
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-->'''Pearl:''' Steven's been up all night!
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** And in the morning:
--->'''Pearl:''' Steven's been up all night!
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Because something called "the incident" deserves to be in bold.
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** Earlier, Sadie mentions that a worker safety lawsuit, presumably related to "The Incident" mentioned in "Joking Victim" that left a human shaped outline on the wall.
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** Earlier, Sadie mentions that a worker safety lawsuit, presumably related to "The Incident" '''The Incident''' mentioned in "Joking Victim" that left a human shaped outline on the wall.
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** Sadie mentions that they're making doughnuts on-site again, which according to "Joking Victim" they hadn't done since "The Incident".
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** Sadie mentions that they're making doughnuts on-site again, which according to "Joking Victim" they hadn't done since "The Incident".'''The Incident'''.
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** Even once he figures out his levitation power, Steven still can't fully control said power; he lands a bit harder than intended, and jumping still poses some problems.
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* ImagineSpot: Steven has one where pretty much ''everyone'' gets a doughnut but him, his doughnut gets fed to a dog, and he dies and falls to the Earth as a skeleton, with Sadie lifting up his skull.
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* ImagineSpot: Steven has one where pretty much ''everyone'' gets a doughnut but him, his doughnut gets fed to a dog, and he dies and falls to the Earth [[StrippedToTheBone as a skeleton, skeleton]], with Sadie lifting up his skull.
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This isn't unusual for the show.
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* BizarroEpisode: Has minimal plot with tons of cartoony gags and humour. It would be a straight up BreatherEpisode if the previous episode wasn't one.
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** Steven first floated in "Rose's Scabbard" though it was ambiguous as to whether he was exhibiting a supernatural power or if SlowMotionFall was in effect. This episode clarifies that incident.
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* MadeOfIron: Steven is largely unfazed by having a ''fishing boat'' put on his chest.
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whoops
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-->'''Steven''': Okay, what makes me happy? Donuts? No, I'm not going to get any. The beach? No, that's how I'm going to die! Mom? Oh geez, those feelings are ''COMPLICATED!""
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-->'''Steven''': Okay, what makes me happy? Donuts? No, I'm not going to get any. The beach? No, that's how I'm going to die! Mom? Oh geez, those feelings are ''COMPLICATED!""''COMPLICATED!''
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It fits better
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-->'''Steven''': Okay, what makes me happy? Donuts? No, I'm not going to get any. The beach? No, that's how I'm going to die! Mom? Oh geez, those feelings are ''COMPLICATED''!
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-->'''Steven''': Okay, what makes me happy? Donuts? No, I'm not going to get any. The beach? No, that's how I'm going to die! Mom? Oh geez, those feelings are ''COMPLICATED''!''COMPLICATED!""
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* TakeOurWordForIt: We don't see the rotten cake, but Steven finds it so disgusting that he can't even tell that it ''is'' a cake!
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* TakeOurWordForIt: We don't see the rotten cake, but Steven finds it [[ItCameFromTheFridge so disgusting that he can't even tell that it ''is'' a cake!cake!]]
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* {{Mouthscreen}}: When Sadie tells Steven that he can have the very first fresh donut of the day, it cuts a detailed close-up of her mouth as she says "fresh".
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* {{Mouthscreen}}: When Sadie tells Steven that he can have the very first fresh donut of the day, it cuts there's a detailed close-up of on her mouth as she says "fresh".
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* {{Mouthscreen}}: When Sadie tells Steven he "can have the very first fresh donut of the day" it cuts a detailed close-up of her mouth as she says "fresh".
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* {{Mouthscreen}}: When Sadie tells Steven that he "can can have the very first fresh donut of the day" day, it cuts a detailed close-up of her mouth as she says "fresh".
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* {{Mouthscreen}}: When Sadie says Steven "can have the very first fresh donut of the day" it cuts a detailed close-up of her mouth as she says "fresh".
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* {{Mouthscreen}}: When Sadie says tells Steven he "can have the very first fresh donut of the day" it cuts a detailed close-up of her mouth as she says "fresh".
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* {{Mouthscreen}}: When Sadie says Steven "can have the very first fresh donut of the day" it cuts a detailed close-up of her mouth as she says "fresh".
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* InASingleBound: Steven finally realizes this power as well, jumping from the beach to the top of the lighthouse, then from their to airplane-cruising altitudes.
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* InASingleBound: Steven finally realizes this power as well, jumping from the beach to the top of the lighthouse, then from their there to airplane-cruising altitudes.
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* ImagineSpot: Steven has one where pretty much everyone gets a doughnut but him, his doughnut gets fed to a dog, and he dies and falls to the Earth as a skeleton.
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* ImagineSpot: Steven has one where pretty much everyone ''everyone'' gets a doughnut but him, his doughnut gets fed to a dog, and he dies and falls to the Earth as a skeleton.skeleton, with Sadie lifting up his skull.
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* StealthMentor: Garnet, who saw Steven figuring out how to control his falling, so she let him.
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* StealthMentor: Garnet, who saw Steven figuring out how to control his falling, falling by himself, so she let him.
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* NotQuiteFlight: Steven's newest power, being able to leap great distances InASingleBound and then control his descent to a manageable speed.
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* ClosestThingWeGot: Garnet saw Steven realizing the emotional nature of his powers, slowing down to land safely on the ground, and running to them for a hug. His landing is a little harder, but he's still OK, prompting her to go "close enough".
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* CloseEnoughTimeline: Garnet saw Steven realizing the emotional nature of his powers, slowing down to land safely on the ground, and running to them for a hug. His landing is a little harder, but he's still OK, prompting her to go "close enough".
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* CloseEnoughTimeline: ClosestThingWeGot: Garnet saw Steven realizing the emotional nature of his powers, slowing down to land safely on the ground, and running to them for a hug. His landing is a little harder, but he's still OK, prompting her to go "close enough".
