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* TookALevelInKindness: Seven is placed in charge of the communications with Earth. She abruptly cuts the Doctor off while he's talking to his publisher and shows no sympathy in Harry's transmission is cut off with less than a minute remaining. Later, she gives Torres a thirty-second warning when she's talking to her dad.
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* TookALevelInKindness: Seven is placed in charge of the communications with Earth. She abruptly cuts the Doctor off while he's talking to his publisher and also shows no sympathy in when Harry's transmission is cut off with less than a minute remaining. Later, she gives Torres a thirty-second warning when she's talking to her dad.
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* ATasteOfTheirOwnMedicine: Paris creates his own holonovel exaggerating the Doctor's worst qualities (and adding a few more) with the excuse "he looks like you, he has more hair" to get the Doctor to understand how the crew feels about his holonovel.
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* ATasteOfTheirOwnMedicine: Paris creates his own holonovel exaggerating the Doctor's worst qualities (and adding a few more) - with the excuse "he that he doesn't looks like you, the Doctor ("For one thing, he has much more hair" hair.") - to get the Doctor to understand how the crew feels about his holonovel.
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* HemisphereBias: The live shot of Earth mainly shows North America.
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* WeWillUseManualLaborInTheFuture: just as in "Life Line", the EMH Mark One's are reconfigured for manual labor in the mines. This, when they have devices capable of disassembling matter to the subatomic level (including industrial ones, as mentioned on Deep Space Nine), not to mention a race of friendly living ore processors (the Horta). But no, they consign outdated humanoid holograms with glorified shovels and picks to mining. It's both cruel and inefficient to an absurd degree.
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* WeWillUseManualLaborInTheFuture: just as in "Life Line", the EMH Mark One's are reconfigured for manual labor in the mines. This, when they have devices capable of disassembling matter to the subatomic level (including industrial ones, as mentioned on Deep Space Nine), not to mention a race of friendly living ore processors (the Horta). But no, they consign outdated humanoid holograms with glorified shovels and picks to mining. It's both cruel and inefficient to an absurd degree.degree, and used just to paint the Federation as a strawman.
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* WeWillUseManualLaborInTheFuture: just as in "Life Line", the EMH Mark One's are reconfigured for manual labor in the mines. This, when they have devices capable of disassembling matter to the subatomic level (including industrial ones, as mentioned on Deep Space Nine), not to mention a race of friendly living ore processors (the Horta). But no, they consign outdated humanoid holograms with glorified shovels and picks to mining. It's both cruel and inefficient to an absurd degree.
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* FriendshipMoment: The Doctor is initially hurt by the crew's reaction to ''Photons Be Free''. He thought they would be happy for him, not upset about how his characters might affect their reputations. But when Broht unilaterally publishes the novel's draft without permission, it becomes clear that the crew is more conerned for The Doctor than for themselves, as they choose to fight for his rights rather than take the easy way out by voiding the contract.
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* FriendshipMoment: The Doctor is initially hurt by the crew's reaction to ''Photons Be Free''. He thought they would be happy for him, not upset about how his characters might affect their reputations. But when Broht unilaterally publishes the novel's draft without permission, it becomes clear that the crew is more conerned concerned for The Doctor than for themselves, as they choose to fight for his rights rather than take the easy way out by voiding the contract.
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* TheTriple / GettingCrapPastTheRadar
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* The47Society: A Mark I EMH tells another to "ask the operator to run program 47-beta," which is what ''Photons Be Free'' is named on the mining colony.
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* PyrrhicVillainy: For the publisher, as the judge ruled that personhood isn't necessary to declare authorship rights.
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* ATasteOfTheirOwnMedicine: Paris creates his own holonovel exaggerating the Doctor's worst qualities (and adding a few more) with the excuse "he looks like you, he has more hair" to get the Doctor to understand how the crew feels about his holonovel.
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Young Annika's favorite food was apparently strawberries. Seven is currently fond of strawberries, and is surprised to learn that has been present her whole life.
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** Janeway's expy shooting a critical patient in triage is a call back to the Doctor witnessing a Hirogen officer doing the same in "The Killing Game".
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** Janeway's expy shooting a critical patient in triage is a call back to the Doctor witnessing a Hirogen officer doing the same in "The Killing Game".Game", or Janeway's execution of Tuvix in the episode of that name.
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* CaptainErsatz: The holodeck characters are this for Voyager crew members.
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* CaptainErsatz: The holodeck characters are this for Voyager ''Voyager'' crew members.
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* FantasticRacism: The holodeck expies of the Voyager crew behave like this towards the holographic doctor.
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* FantasticRacism: The holodeck expies of the Voyager ''Voyager'' crew behave like this towards the holographic doctor.
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* IronicEcho: The Doctor says he's using a Voyager-expy because he's writing what he knows, like all good authors. When the Doctor shouts at Tom for replacing his holonovel with a "hackneyed narrative", Tom quips that he's just writing what he knows.
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* IronicEcho: The Doctor says he's using a Voyager-expy ''Voyager''-expy because he's writing what he knows, like all good authors. When the Doctor shouts at Tom for replacing his holonovel with a "hackneyed narrative", Tom quips that he's just writing what he knows.
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* SubspaceAnsible: Voyager finally establishes the first trans-galactic communications link with the Alpha Quadrant.
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* SubspaceAnsible: Voyager ''Voyager'' finally establishes the first trans-galactic communications link with the Alpha Quadrant.
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* OfficeGolf: Tom riffs on the Doctor's obsession with his personal hobbies.
-->'''Jerk-EMH:''' When I tell you your shift begins at oh eight hundred that doesn't mean you can stroll in here at oh eight hundred and twenty four seconds. Do you understand me, Ensign!
'''EMH:''' This is outrageous!
-->'''Jerk-EMH:''' What's outrageous is that I'm going to miss my [[{{Pun}} tee time]].
-->'''Jerk-EMH:''' When I tell you your shift begins at oh eight hundred that doesn't mean you can stroll in here at oh eight hundred and twenty four seconds. Do you understand me, Ensign!
'''EMH:''' This is outrageous!
-->'''Jerk-EMH:''' What's outrageous is that I'm going to miss my [[{{Pun}} tee time]].
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* ParallelPornTitles: Tom Paris introduces the Starship ''Voyeur'', starring a sleazy doctor who makes out with his hot blonde buxom patient. Makes you wonder [[TheInternetIsForPorn exactly how extensive]] was Tom's study of 20th century movies.
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* ParallelPornTitles: Tom Paris introduces the Starship ''Voyeur'', starring a sleazy doctor who makes out with his hot blonde buxom patient. Makes you wonder [[TheInternetIsForPorn exactly how extensive]] was Tom's [[FanOfThePast study of 20th century movies.movies]].
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* DoNotCallMePaul: In most cases, Seven of Nine reacts negatively to anyone calling her Annika. Here, when her aunt calls her by that name, [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Seven is notably silent]].
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* DoNotCallMePaul: In most cases, Seven of Nine reacts negatively to anyone calling her Annika. Here, when her aunt calls her by that name, [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Seven is notably silent]].silent.
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* FriendshipMoment: The Doctor is initially hurt by the crew's reaction to ''Photons Be Free''. He thought they would be happy for him, not upset about how his characters might affect their reputations. But when Broht unilaterally publishes the novel's draft without permission, it becomes clear that the crew is more conerned for The Doctor than for themselves, as they choose to fight for his rights rather than take the easy way out by voiding the contract.
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->'''Doctor:''' You had me drugging a patient and taking advantage of her!\\
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->'''Doctor:''' You had me [[ButLiquorIsQuicker drugging a patient and taking advantage of her!\\her]]!\\
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* IgnoredAesop: Broht loves The Doctor's holonovel about holographic rights. He loves it so much that he publishes it without The Doctor's consent because, as a hologram, he has no right to object.
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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: An InUniverse example with The Doctor's thinly-disguised holonovel cast. The ''Voyager'' crew are understandably worried that they ''will'' be harmed by association with such lurid characters, but it quickly becomes a distant concern after Broht blatantly violates The Doctor's rights by releasing the unfinished draft.
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The Doctor ignores them, convinced as he is that he has written a masterpiece, so Paris arranges an object lesson to drive their point home. When The Doctor returns to his holonovel, he finds it substituted with an inverted satire of his own work, in which he must watch helplessly as an [[CaptainErsatz ersatz]] facsimile of himself commits about a dozen blatant ethical violations within the span of a few minutes. Though he is outraged at first, the message eventually sinks in.
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The Doctor ignores them, convinced as he is that he has written a masterpiece, so Paris arranges an object lesson to drive their point home. When The Doctor returns to his holonovel, he finds it substituted with an inverted satire {{Satire}} of his own work, in which he must watch helplessly as an [[CaptainErsatz ersatz]] facsimile of himself commits about a dozen [[MorallyAmbiguousDoctorate blatant ethical violations violations]] within the span of a few minutes. Though he is outraged at first, the message eventually sinks in.
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* LudicrousPrecision: DrJerk getting up Paris!Doctor for being 24 seconds late.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Expy!Seven gives Expy!Janeway one for her decision to decompile the Doctor's program. It doesn't change anything.
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* StylisticSuck: ''Photons Be Free'' plays with this trope. The story, which is meant to make a serious point, is devoid of subtlety almost to the point of self-parody, with lots of superfluous narration that [[ShowDontTell tells instead of showing]]. Despite this, the only people who don't like it are the crew, and that's mostly because of their portrayal. Neelix loves it, the publisher loves it, and the published draft is popular enough that Barclay gets wind of it almost immediately.
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* StylisticSuck: ''Photons Be Free'' plays with this trope. The story, which is meant to make a serious point, is devoid of subtlety almost to the point of self-parody, SelfParody, with lots of superfluous narration that [[ShowDontTell tells instead of showing]]. Despite this, the only people who don't like it are the crew, and that's mostly because of their portrayal. Neelix loves it, the publisher loves it, and the published draft is popular enough that Barclay gets wind of it almost immediately.
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* TriageTyrant: The Janeway and Chakotay expies want the Doctor to treat Marseilles' concussion even though there's a dying RedShirt. Expy!Janeway settles the debate by shooting the poor guy.
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* TriageTyrant: The Janeway and Chakotay expies want the Doctor to treat Marseilles' concussion even though there's a dying RedShirt. Expy!Janeway Expy Janeway settles the debate by shooting the poor guy.
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* WallOfWeapons: Captain Jenkins has one, and brandishes one of her guns while chewing out Doctor!Neelix.
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* WallOfWeapons: Captain Jenkins has one, and brandishes one of her guns while chewing out Doctor!Neelix.Neelix.
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* DramaticIrony: The Doctor isn't allowed to make changes to his holonovel - you know, the one he wrote about hologram rights - because as a hologram, he doesn't have any rights. The Doctor's publisher demonstrates very little sense of perspective here.
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* StylisticSuck: ''Photons Be Free.''
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* StylisticSuck: ''Photons Be Free.''Free'' plays with this trope. The story, which is meant to make a serious point, is devoid of subtlety almost to the point of self-parody, with lots of superfluous narration that [[ShowDontTell tells instead of showing]]. Despite this, the only people who don't like it are the crew, and that's mostly because of their portrayal. Neelix loves it, the publisher loves it, and the published draft is popular enough that Barclay gets wind of it almost immediately.
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->''"It's just frustrating to hear that I have no more legal standings than a replicator."''
The Doctor is busy writing a holonovel to submit to a publisher on Earth at the same time that ''Voyager'' is testing out a new communications relay system so that they could have constant access to Starfleet. Unfortunately, the crew finds out that the holonovel the Doctor is writing is about a ship that's so similar to ''Voyager'' that it has (less than flattering) {{Exp|y}}ies of ''Voyager'''s crew in it. The Doctor tries to have the holonovel recalled so that he could make changes to make it less obvious that it's about ''Voyager'', but the publisher has already published the work in progress, catching the attention of the Federation and resulting in a trial over whether the Doctor is enough of a person to be granted rights of control as an artist.
The Doctor is busy writing a holonovel to submit to a publisher on Earth at the same time that ''Voyager'' is testing out a new communications relay system so that they could have constant access to Starfleet. Unfortunately, the crew finds out that the holonovel the Doctor is writing is about a ship that's so similar to ''Voyager'' that it has (less than flattering) {{Exp|y}}ies of ''Voyager'''s crew in it. The Doctor tries to have the holonovel recalled so that he could make changes to make it less obvious that it's about ''Voyager'', but the publisher has already published the work in progress, catching the attention of the Federation and resulting in a trial over whether the Doctor is enough of a person to be granted rights of control as an artist.
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->''In the
With a satisfied smile, The Doctor continues on to Chapter One...
As for the rest of the ship, the senior staff is waiting with anticipation for the results of "Operation Watson", a joint effort between ''Voyager''
The [[NegativeSpaceWedgie quantum singularity]] facilitating the link only works for 11 minutes each day, so
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No one is pleased by this narrative, which eventually finds its way to the Captain. They confront The Doctor, but he
The Doctor ignores them, convinced as he is that he has
->'''Doctor:''' You had me drugging a patient and taking advantage of her!\\
'''Paris:''' Don't be ridiculous, [[IronicEcho that character is not you]]. For one thing, he has much more hair. But what if some people ran that program and thought that it was ''based'' on you? That would bother you, wouldn't it?
The Doctor, despite his bruised ego, agrees to rewrite his novel's cast to make them more distinct from the crew. Everyone is grateful for his change of heart. Crisis averted, right?
[[HopeSpot Wrong.]] Janeway receives an urgent message at the next comm window from Admiral Paris, who tells them ''Photons Be Free'' is being distributed and is quickly gaining popularity. His reaction to its content justifies all of the crew's fears over how the public will perceive it. The Doctor makes an angry call to Mr. Broht, who unabashedly admits no fault on his part. The Doctor is a hologram and therefore has no right to contest the publication of his [[{{Irony}} novel about holographic rights]] without his consent.
The crew's daily calls are put on hold so that a hearing can be conducted over subspace. Tuvok, acting as The Doctor's counsel, says that Broht is unfortunately correct that The Doctor is not legally a person. They could easily use this as grounds to invalidate the original contract, but that would also reinforce the existing precedent. Therefore, the crew makes the case that The Doctor [[WhatMeasureIsANonHuman should be considered a person]]. They take turns illustrating his growth over the past 7 years, humanizing him with personal stories of his friendship, independence, and even (or especially) his faults.
->'''Janeway:''' I'd made myself clear, but The Doctor disobeyed my direct orders. In the process, he endangered the ship and crew.\\
'''Judge:''' That's hardly commendable behavior.\\
'''Janeway:''' No, it wasn't... but it was human.
When all is said and done, the judge makes his decision. Unlike [[Recap/StarTrekTheNextGenerationS2E9TheMeasureOfAMan Data's trial]] a few years past, he is not willing to go so far as to grant The Doctor full personhood, but he does amend the legal definition of an artist to include him, ordering Broht to recall the unfinished draft.
The judge also adds that the question of holographic rights "isn't going to go away". Prophetic words, as several months later, we see that ''Photons Be Free'' has reached its most important audience: the Mk. I holograms toiling in a Federation
* MilkingTheGiantCow: The Doctor's introduction to ''Photons Be Free''.
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* MilkingTheGiantCow: The Doctor's introduction to ''Photons Be Free''.
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* {{Corpsing}}: In-universe. When B'elanna sees her husband's {{Expy}} with a bushy mustache, she has to struggle hard to not burst out laughing.
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* DramaticIrony: The Doctor isn't allowed to make changes to his holonovel on hologram rights, because as a hologram he doesn't have any rights.
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* DramaticIrony: The Doctor isn't allowed to make changes to his holonovel on - you know, the one he wrote about hologram rights, rights - because as a hologram hologram, he doesn't have any rights.rights. The Doctor's publisher demonstrates very little sense of perspective here.
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* OhCrapThereAreFanficsOfUs: The crew's reaction. Neelix is the only one who likes it, most likely because it doesn't feature an expy of him.
** That we see. We aren't shown chapters 2, 3 or 4. (Though this could be because the Doctor hadn't written them yet). It's possible Neelix had an insulting expy, but wasn't offended because as morale officer, he's a thick-skinned individual (his early-season [[GrowingTheBeard pre-beard]] behavior notwithstanding).
** That we see. We aren't shown chapters 2, 3 or 4. (Though this could be because the Doctor hadn't written them yet). It's possible Neelix had an insulting expy, but wasn't offended because as morale officer, he's a thick-skinned individual (his early-season [[GrowingTheBeard pre-beard]] behavior notwithstanding).
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* OhCrapThereAreFanficsOfUs: The crew's reaction. Neelix is the only one who likes it, most likely because it doesn't feature an expy of him.
** Thathim..... that we see. We see, anyway; we aren't shown chapters 2, 3 or 4. (Though this could be because the Doctor hadn't written them yet). It's possible Neelix had an insulting expy, but wasn't offended because as morale officer, he's a thick-skinned individual (his early-season [[GrowingTheBeard pre-beard]] behavior notwithstanding).
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* PyrrhicVictory: For the Doctor, as the judge declared him legally an artist, but was not quite prepared to rule that he is a person. However, it was still a step forward, and the coda does show the novel has indeed made an impression among the Mark Ones stuck in the dilithium mines.
* RayOfHopeEnding: For the Doctor, as the judge declared him legally an artist, but was not quite prepared to definitively rule that he is a person. However, besides achieving the goal of getting ''Photons Be Free'' recalled, it was a noteworthy step forward for holograms, and the coda does show that the novel has made an impression among the Mark Ones that are stuck in the dilithium mines on Earth.
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** However the coda does show the novel has indeed made an impression among the Mark Ones stuck in the dilithium mines.
** However the coda does show the novel has indeed made an impression among the Mark Ones stuck in the dilithium mines.
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* PyrrhicVictory: For the Doctor, as the judge declared him legally an artist artist, but was not quite prepared to rule that he is a person.
** Howeverperson. However, it was still a step forward, and the coda does show the novel has indeed made an impression among the Mark Ones stuck in the dilithium mines.
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* WriteWhoYouKnow: The characters of ''Photons Be Free'' bear no resemblance to any member of Starfleet living or dead. [[InUniverse Or so the Doctor would have us believe.]] He gets it back from Tom Paris when he finds out Paris has modified the holonovel so that the Doctor's Expy takes advantage of Seven of Nine's Expy.
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* WriteWhoYouKnow: WriteWhoYouKnow (InUniverse): The characters of ''Photons Be Free'' bear no resemblance to any member of Starfleet living or dead. [[InUniverse [[BlatantLies Or so the Doctor would have us believe.]] He gets it back from Tom Paris when he finds out Paris has modified the holonovel so that the Doctor's Expy takes advantage of Seven of Nine's Expy.
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* WriteWhoYouKnow: The characters of ''Photons Be Free'' bear no resemblance to any member of Starfleet living or dead. ]]InUniverse Or so the Doctor would have us believe.]] He gets it back from Tom Paris when he finds out Paris has modified the holonovel so that the Doctor's Expy takes advantage of Seven of Nine's Expy.
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* WriteWhoYouKnow: The characters of ''Photons Be Free'' bear no resemblance to any member of Starfleet living or dead. ]]InUniverse [[InUniverse Or so the Doctor would have us believe.]] He gets it back from Tom Paris when he finds out Paris has modified the holonovel so that the Doctor's Expy takes advantage of Seven of Nine's Expy.
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* WriteWhoYouKnow: The characters of ''Photons Be Free'' bear no resemblance to any member of Starfleet living or dead. Or so the Doctor would have us believe. He gets it back from Tom Paris when he finds out Paris has modified the holonovel so that the Doctor's Expy takes advantage of Seven of Nine's Expy.
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* WriteWhoYouKnow: The characters of ''Photons Be Free'' bear no resemblance to any member of Starfleet living or dead. ]]InUniverse Or so the Doctor would have us believe. believe.]] He gets it back from Tom Paris when he finds out Paris has modified the holonovel so that the Doctor's Expy takes advantage of Seven of Nine's Expy.
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* WriteWhatYouKnow: In-universe, it's the Doctor's defense behind writing his holonovel. He gets it back from Tom Paris when he finds out Paris has modified the holonovel so that the Doctor's Expy takes advantage of Seven of Nine's Expy.
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* WriteWhatYouKnow: In-universe, it's the Doctor's defense behind writing his holonovel.
* WriteWhoYouKnow: The characters of ''Photons Be Free'' bear no resemblance to any member of Starfleet living or dead. Or so the Doctor would have us believe. He gets it back from Tom Paris when he finds out Paris has modified the holonovel so that the Doctor's Expy takes advantage of Seven of Nine's Expy.
* WriteWhoYouKnow: The characters of ''Photons Be Free'' bear no resemblance to any member of Starfleet living or dead. Or so the Doctor would have us believe. He gets it back from Tom Paris when he finds out Paris has modified the holonovel so that the Doctor's Expy takes advantage of Seven of Nine's Expy.
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* ItsAllAboutMe: ''Chapter One: It's the Doctor's world, you're just living in it...'' The Doctor however argues that it's not about his ego, but helping the other EMH's in the Alpha Quadrant.
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* ItsAllAboutMe: ''Chapter As Tom puts it; ''"Chapter One: It's the Doctor's world, you're just living in it...'' "'' The Doctor however argues that it's not about his ego, but helping the other EMH's in the Alpha Quadrant.