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** ''Voyager'' itself is this: gathering deuterium from a J-class nebula attracts an electromagnetic lifeform which invades the ship, and they later find put their passage caused the nebula to completely disperse, depriving the creature of its home.
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** ''Voyager'' itself is this: gathering deuterium from a J-class nebula attracts an electromagnetic lifeform which invades the ship, and they later find put out their passage caused the nebula to completely disperse, depriving the creature of its home.
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* UnreliableNarrator: Being fairly educated about technology, the children immediately notice when Neelix screws up some technical detail of the story and start correcting him. After he points out that they can either keep talking shop about technology or let him tell the story, he proceeds to make several other blunders (such as having Janeway refer to a "dilithium intake" at one point) uncorrected. This is kind of a clue to the audience that if anything anyone does or says in this story seems technically impossible or out-of-character for them, we can chalk it up to Neelix's fumbling the story again. Turns out to be a bit of Fridge Brilliance on Neelix's part, as his "mistakes" cause the children to believe he made the entire story up...which is fine with him, because he didn't want to frighten them with the truth, but also didn't want to lie to them.
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* UnreliableNarrator: Being fairly educated about technology, the children immediately notice when Neelix screws up some technical detail of the story and start correcting him. After he points out that they can either keep talking shop about technology or let him tell the story, he proceeds to make several other blunders (such as having Janeway refer to a "dilithium intake" at one point) uncorrected. This is kind of a clue to the audience that if anything anyone does or says in this story seems technically impossible or out-of-character for them, we can chalk it up to Neelix's fumbling the story again. Turns out to be a bit of Fridge Brilliance on Neelix's part, as his "mistakes" cause the children to believe he made the entire story up...which is fine with him, because he didn't want to frighten them with the truth, but also didn't want to lie to them.them.
* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom:
** ''Voyager'' itself is this: gathering deuterium from a J-class nebula attracts an electromagnetic lifeform which invades the ship, and they later find put their passage caused the nebula to completely disperse, depriving the creature of its home.
** Naomi tells the Borg children that a sealed-off section of the ship is being haunted by a ghost, which causes them to be unsettled (well, as unsettled as they ''can'' be, at least).
* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom:
** ''Voyager'' itself is this: gathering deuterium from a J-class nebula attracts an electromagnetic lifeform which invades the ship, and they later find put their passage caused the nebula to completely disperse, depriving the creature of its home.
** Naomi tells the Borg children that a sealed-off section of the ship is being haunted by a ghost, which causes them to be unsettled (well, as unsettled as they ''can'' be, at least).
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* UnreliableNarrator: Being fairly educated about technology, the children immediately notice when Neelix screws up some technical detail of the story and start correcting him. After he points out that they can either keep talking shop about technology or let him tell the story, he proceeds to make several other blunders (such as having Janeway refer to a "dilithium intake" at one point) uncorrected. This is kind of a clue to the audience that if anything anyone does or says in this story seems technically impossible or out-of-character for them, we can chalk it up to Neelix's fumbling the story again. Turns out to be a bit of FridgeBrilliance on Neelix's part, as his "mistakes" cause the children to believe he made the entire story up...which is fine with him, because he didn't want to frighten them with the truth, but also didn't want to lie to them.
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* UnreliableNarrator: Being fairly educated about technology, the children immediately notice when Neelix screws up some technical detail of the story and start correcting him. After he points out that they can either keep talking shop about technology or let him tell the story, he proceeds to make several other blunders (such as having Janeway refer to a "dilithium intake" at one point) uncorrected. This is kind of a clue to the audience that if anything anyone does or says in this story seems technically impossible or out-of-character for them, we can chalk it up to Neelix's fumbling the story again. Turns out to be a bit of FridgeBrilliance Fridge Brilliance on Neelix's part, as his "mistakes" cause the children to believe he made the entire story up...which is fine with him, because he didn't want to frighten them with the truth, but also didn't want to lie to them.
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* ChekhovsGunman: Tal Celes is the only character from "Good Shephard" to make a reappearance, likely because you need someone to be scared in a ghost story, and it's becoming increasingly implausible for Harry to be still stuck in that role.
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* BrickJoke: In the flashback, Tuvok tells a rattled Neelix that if the view of the nebula bothers him so much, Janeway might allow him to hang curtains. Minutes later, Neelix is shown approaching the windows with a bolt of cloth over his arm.
* ChekhovsGunman: Tal Celes is the only character from "Good Shephard" to make a reappearance, likely because you need someone to be scared in a ghost story, and with six years on the bridge crew under his belt, it'sbecoming increasingly implausible for Harry to be still stuck in that role.
* ChekhovsGunman: Tal Celes is the only character from "Good Shephard" to make a reappearance, likely because you need someone to be scared in a ghost story, and with six years on the bridge crew under his belt, it's
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* ExplosiveInstrumentation: Not actually ''explosive'', but the helm shoots an energy bolt that catches Tom Paris in the face.
* FramingStory: Most of the episode is a story Neelix is telling the children.
* FramingStory: Most of the episode is a story Neelix is telling the children.
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* ExplosiveInstrumentation: Not actually ''explosive'', but the helm shoots an energy bolt that catches Tom Paris in the face.
face, and the same later happens to Tuvok. The creature also blows out the helm console during its argument with Janeway.
* FramingStory: Most of the episode is a story Neelix is telling the children. When they doubt it's what actually happened, Neelix "admits" he made it all up, so they won't worry.
* FramingStory: Most of the episode is a story Neelix is telling the children.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The crew accidentally destroyed the creature's home nebula when they passed through it. It's not happy when it finds out.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The crew accidentally destroyed the creature's home nebula when they passed through it. It's not happy when it finds this out.
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* UnreliableNarrator: Being fairly educated about technology, the children immediately notice when Neelix screws up some technical detail of the story and start correcting him. After he points out that they can either keep talking shop about technology or let him tell the story, he proceeds to make several other blunders (such as having Janeway refer to a "dilithium intake" at one point) uncorrected. This is kind of a clue to the audience that if anything anyone does or says in this story seems technically impossible or out-of-character for them, we can chalk it up to Neelix's fumbling the story again.
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* UnreliableNarrator: Being fairly educated about technology, the children immediately notice when Neelix screws up some technical detail of the story and start correcting him. After he points out that they can either keep talking shop about technology or let him tell the story, he proceeds to make several other blunders (such as having Janeway refer to a "dilithium intake" at one point) uncorrected. This is kind of a clue to the audience that if anything anyone does or says in this story seems technically impossible or out-of-character for them, we can chalk it up to Neelix's fumbling the story again. Turns out to be a bit of FridgeBrilliance on Neelix's part, as his "mistakes" cause the children to believe he made the entire story up...which is fine with him, because he didn't want to frighten them with the truth, but also didn't want to lie to them.
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* NoOneGetsLeftBehind: [[TheHeart Neelix]] to [[TheSpock Tuvok]].
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* NoOneGetsLeftBehind: [[TheHeart Neelix]] makes this very clear to [[TheSpock Tuvok]].
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-->'''Tuvok''': I am injured. Logic dictates that you take the mask and proceed to main engineering.
-->'''Neelix''': I don't care what logic dictates! This isn't the ''Salvoxia''. We're not drawing lots.
-->'''Tuvok''': [[ThatsAnOrder I am giving you an order.]]
-->'''Neelix''': [[ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight And I'm disobeying it.]] You're coming with me if I have to drag you by your pointy little ears!
-->'''Neelix''': I don't care what logic dictates! This isn't the ''Salvoxia''. We're not drawing lots.
-->'''Tuvok''': [[ThatsAnOrder I am giving you an order.]]
-->'''Neelix''': [[ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight And I'm disobeying it.]] You're coming with me if I have to drag you by your pointy little ears!
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-->'''Neelix''':
'''Neelix:''' I don't care what logic dictates! This isn't the ''Salvoxia''. We're not drawing lots.
'''Tuvok:''' [[ThatsAnOrder I am giving you an order.
-->'''Neelix''':
'''Neelix:''' [[ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight And I'm disobeying it.]] You're coming with me if I have to drag you by your pointy little ears!
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--> '''Paris:''' Now, ''there's'' a creepy image. Reminds me of something out of Edgar Allan Poe.\\
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-->'''Neelix''': Oh, no. Some of those stories can be very scary. Ogres and goblins.
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-->'''Neelix''': Oh, no. Certainly not. Some of those stories fairy tales can be very scary. frightening. Ogres and goblins.child-eating monsters.
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** Mezoti mentions the events of [[Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS6E16Collective "Collective", when the Borg kids were rescued from their cube.
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** Mezoti mentions the events of [[Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS6E16Collective "Collective", "Collective"]], when the Borg kids were rescued from their cube.
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** Mezoti mentions the events of [[Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS6E16Collective "Collective", when the Borg kids were rescued from their cube.
* DefiantToTheEnd: Janeway refuses to let the creature keep her prisoner aboard ''Voyager'', even when it shuts down life support.
-->'''Janeway:''' If you want this ship, you'll have to kill me!
-->'''Computer:''' Acknowledged.
* EnergyBeing: The creature seems to be an electrical-type entity.
-->'''Janeway:''' If you want this ship, you'll have to kill me!
-->'''Computer:''' Acknowledged.
* EnergyBeing: The creature seems to be an electrical-type entity.
* GhostInTheMachine: The alien is able to move from system to system within ''Voyager'' as energy, eventually taking control of the ship's computer.
* JumpScare: After the power fails on ''Voyager'', Neelix goes wandering the corridors with a flashlight. He rounds a corner and sees...Tuvok with a gas mask!
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The crew accidentally destroyed the creature's home nebula when they passed through it. It's not happy when it finds out.
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* TechnoBabble: Icheb calls Neelix on the improper use of tech talk, and because of this doesn't believe that the story really happened.
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* TechnoBabble: Icheb calls Neelix on the improper use of tech talk, and because of this he doesn't believe that the story really happened.
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* CheckhovsGunman: Tal Celes is the only character from "Good Shephard" to make a reappearance, likely because you need someone to be scared in a ghost story, and it's becoming increasingly implausible for Harry to be still stuck in that role.
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* CheckhovsGunman: ChekhovsGunman: Tal Celes is the only character from "Good Shephard" to make a reappearance, likely because you need someone to be scared in a ghost story, and it's becoming increasingly implausible for Harry to be still stuck in that role.
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* CheckhovsGunman: Tal Celes is the only character from "Good Shephard" to make a reappearance, likely because you need someone to be scared in a ghost story, and it's becoming increasingly implausible for Harry to be still stuck in that role.
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* ActivationSequence: Inverted -- there's a deactivation sequence as Voyager's crew shut it down.
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* ActivationSequence: Inverted {{Inverted}} -- there's a deactivation sequence as Voyager's ''Voyager'''s crew shut it down.down power throughout the ship.
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* CompanionCube: {{Discussed}} when Chakotay overhears Janeway talking to ''Voyager''. He mentions having had long conversations with his Maquis ship.
