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* FemmeFatale / TricksterTwins: Demonica and Malicia, the Twin Mistresses of Evil, are the Delaney sisters' ''attempt'' at this. Our first sign that Demonica and Malicia aren't holodeck characters is when Megan says, "Sorry, Harry!" after missing her cue. Harry can't help enthusing, "Great, you're doing great!" while the Delaney sisters are caressing his chest and purring how they're going to turn him into their groveling slave.
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* FemmeFatale / TricksterTwins: Demonica and Malicia, the Twin Mistresses of Evil, are the Delaney sisters' ''attempt'' at this. Our first sign that Demonica and Malicia aren't holodeck characters is when Megan says, "Sorry, Harry!" after missing her cue. Harry can't help enthusing, "Great, you're doing great!" while the Delaney sisters are caressing his chest and purring how they're going to turn him into their groveling slave.
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* BreakingCharacter: Our first sign that Demonica and Malicia aren't holodeck characters is when Megan says, "Sorry, Harry!" after missing her cue. Harry can't help enthusing, "Great, you're doing great!" while the Delaney Sisters are caressing his chest and purring how they're going to turn him into their grovelling slave.
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* DownerEnding: Unless the Moneans make radical changes to their technology in the next few months, their planet and entire way of life is doomed within the next five years.
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* DownerEnding: Unless the Moneans make radical changes to their technology in the next few months, their planet and entire way of life is doomed within the next five years. To say nothing of Tom, who gets the harsher end of Janeway's discipline.
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* FemmeFatale / TricksterTwins: Demonica and Malicia, the Twin Mistresses of Evil.
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* FemmeFatale / TricksterTwins: Demonica and Malicia, the Twin Mistresses of Evil.Evil, are the Delaney sisters' ''attempt'' at this. Our first sign that Demonica and Malicia aren't holodeck characters is when Megan says, "Sorry, Harry!" after missing her cue. Harry can't help enthusing, "Great, you're doing great!" while the Delaney sisters are caressing his chest and purring how they're going to turn him into their groveling slave.
* FramingDevice: Tom narrating a letter to Admiral Paris, from his cell.
* FramingDevice: Tom narrating a letter to Admiral Paris, from his cell.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: TomTom. Janeway isn't impressed.
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* ListOfTransgressions:
--> '''Janeway:''' Lieutenant Thomas Eugene Paris, you are guilty of insubordination, unauthorized use of a spacecraft, reckless endangerment, and conduct unbecoming an officer.
--> '''Janeway:''' Lieutenant Thomas Eugene Paris, you are guilty of insubordination, unauthorized use of a spacecraft, reckless endangerment, and conduct unbecoming an officer.
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* SingleBiomePlanet: ''Voyager'' comes across an ocean world with no landmass whatsoever. In its center is a machine created by {{Precursors}}, that stops the water from dissipating out into space.
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* SingleBiomePlanet: ''Voyager'' comes across an ocean world with no landmass whatsoever. [[note]][[Film/{{Waterworld}} No Kevin Costner either.]][[/note]] In its center is a machine created by {{Precursors}}, that stops the water from dissipating out into space.
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* MinorInjuryOverreaction: Tom gets what Naomi Wildman would call a "boo-boo", but begs the Doctor to take him to Sickbay for a full medical examination. This is mostly because of his growing case of CabinFever.
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* SeaMonster: A giant electric eel with teeth attacks the ''Delta Flyer''.
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* SeaMonster: A giant [[ShockAndAwe electric eel eel]] with teeth attacks the ''Delta Flyer''.
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* PolarOppositeTwins: Tom is bemused that Harry cares which Delaney sister takes a fancy to him.
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* PolarOppositeTwins: PolarOppositeTwins[=/=]RedOniBlueOni: Tom is bemused that Harry cares which Delaney sister takes a fancy to him.
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* SubStory: More literal than usual for ''Franchise/StarTrek'', as they convert the ''Delta Flyer'' into a makeshift submarine. This also gives Tom a chance to use sailor lingo.
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* ShowWithinAShow: Yet another exciting chapter of...''Film/TheAdventuresOfCaptainProton''!
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* ShowWithinAShow: Yet another exciting chapter of...''Film/TheAdventuresOfCaptainProton''!''Film/TheAdventuresOfCaptainProton''.
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* ShowWithinAShow: Yet another exciting chapter of...''Film/TheAdventuresOfCaptainProton''.
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* ShowWithinAShow: Yet another exciting chapter of...''Film/TheAdventuresOfCaptainProton''.''Film/TheAdventuresOfCaptainProton''!
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* ShowWithinAShow: Yet another exciting chapter of...''Film/TheAdventuresOfCaptainProton''.
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* DeliveryNotDesired: Averted; Tom appears to be dictating the letter purely to come to terms with his actions, but at the end of the episode he saves the letter and orders the computer to transmit it to his father should they ever get home.
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* BlatantLies: Tom starts doing push-ups in his cell. He's only got to three when Neelix enters, whereupon he immediately jumps to 98...99...100.
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* OneTwoSkipAFew: Tom starts doing push-ups in his cell. He's only got to three when Neelix enters, whereupon he immediately jumps to 98...99...100.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Janeway sentences Tom to thirty days of solitary confinement with only basic nutrition and almost nothing to do, something that many cultures would consider a form of torture. What's make this more confusing is that [[Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS1E9PrimeFactors Torres and Tuvok have also gone against Janeway's orders and the Prime Directive]], and almost destroyed the ship in the process, but were only given a verbal warning. Or worse, there was the time [[Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS2E16Meld Crewman Suder murdered a man for just for looking at him]] and Janeway had him put under house arrest in his quarters and allowed him a variety of activities to spend his time on.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Janeway sentences Tom to thirty days of solitary confinement with only basic nutrition and almost nothing to do, something that many cultures would consider a form of torture. What's make this more confusing is that [[Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS1E9PrimeFactors Torres and Tuvok have also gone against Janeway's orders and the Prime Directive]], and almost destroyed the ship in the process, but were only given a verbal warning. Or worse, there was the time [[Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS2E16Meld Crewman Suder murdered a man for just for looking at him]] and Janeway had him put under house arrest in his quarters and allowed him a variety of activities to spend his time on.on, though Suder might well have been confined to quarters for life if the Kazon hadn't intervened.
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* BreakingCharacter: Our first sign that Demonica and Malicia aren't holodeck characters is when Megan says, "Sorry, Harry!" after missing her cue. Harry can't help enthusing, "Great, you're doing great!" while the Delaney Sisters are caressing his chest and purring how they're going to [[FetishFuel turn him into their grovelling slave]].
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* BreakingCharacter: Our first sign that Demonica and Malicia aren't holodeck characters is when Megan says, "Sorry, Harry!" after missing her cue. Harry can't help enthusing, "Great, you're doing great!" while the Delaney Sisters are caressing his chest and purring how they're going to [[FetishFuel turn him into their grovelling slave]].slave.
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* MindProbe: The Brain Probe, though it's more of a MindControlDevice given the FetishFuel description.
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* MindProbe: The Brain Probe, though it's more of a MindControlDevice given the FetishFuel description.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Janeway sentences Tom to thirty days of solitary confinement with only basic nutrition and almost nothing to do, something that many cultures would consider a form of torture. What's make this more confusing is that [[Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS1E9PrimeFactors Torres and Tuvok have also gone against Janeway's orders and the Prime Directive]], almost destroying the ship in the process, and were only given a verbal warning. Or worse, there was the time [[Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS2E16Meld Crewman Suder murdered a man for just for looking at him]] and Janeway had him put under house arrest in his quarters and allowed him a variety of activities to spend his time on.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Janeway sentences Tom to thirty days of solitary confinement with only basic nutrition and almost nothing to do, something that many cultures would consider a form of torture. What's make this more confusing is that [[Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS1E9PrimeFactors Torres and Tuvok have also gone against Janeway's orders and the Prime Directive]], and almost destroying destroyed the ship in the process, and but were only given a verbal warning. Or worse, there was the time [[Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS2E16Meld Crewman Suder murdered a man for just for looking at him]] and Janeway had him put under house arrest in his quarters and allowed him a variety of activities to spend his time on.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Janeway sentences Tom to thirty days of solitary confinement with only basic nutrition and almost nothing to do, something that many cultures would consider a form of torture. What's make this more confusing is that [[Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS1E10StateOfFlux Torres and Tuvok have also gone against Janeway's orders and the Prime Directive]], almost destroying the ship in the process, and were only given a verbal warning. Or worse, there was the time [[Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS2E16Meld Crewman Suder murdered a man for just for looking at him]] and Janeway had him put under house arrest in his quarters and allowed him a variety of activities to spend his time on.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Janeway sentences Tom to thirty days of solitary confinement with only basic nutrition and almost nothing to do, something that many cultures would consider a form of torture. What's make this more confusing is that [[Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS1E10StateOfFlux [[Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS1E9PrimeFactors Torres and Tuvok have also gone against Janeway's orders and the Prime Directive]], almost destroying the ship in the process, and were only given a verbal warning. Or worse, there was the time [[Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS2E16Meld Crewman Suder murdered a man for just for looking at him]] and Janeway had him put under house arrest in his quarters and allowed him a variety of activities to spend his time on.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Janeway sentences Tom to thirty days of solitary confinement with only basic nutrition and almost nothing to do, something that many cultures would consider a form of torture. What's make this more confusing is that [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS1E9PrimeFactors Torres and Tuvok have also gone against Janeway's orders and the Prime Directive]], almost destroying the ship in the process, and were only given a verbal warning. Or worse, there was the time [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS2E16Meld Crewman Suder murdered a man for just for looking at him]] and Janeway had him put under house arrest in his quarters and allowed him a variety of activities to spend his time on.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Janeway sentences Tom to thirty days of solitary confinement with only basic nutrition and almost nothing to do, something that many cultures would consider a form of torture. What's make this more confusing is that [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS1E9PrimeFactors [[Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS1E10StateOfFlux Torres and Tuvok have also gone against Janeway's orders and the Prime Directive]], almost destroying the ship in the process, and were only given a verbal warning. Or worse, there was the time [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS2E16Meld [[Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS2E16Meld Crewman Suder murdered a man for just for looking at him]] and Janeway had him put under house arrest in his quarters and allowed him a variety of activities to spend his time on.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Janeway sentences Tom to thirty days of solitary confinement with only basic nutrition and almost nothing to do, something that many cultures would consider a form of torture. What's make this more confusing is that [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS1E9PrimeFactors Torres and Tuvok have also gone against Janeway's orders and the Prime Directive]], almost destroying the ship in the process, and were only given a verbal warning. Or worse, there was the time [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS2E16Meld Crewman Suder murdered a man for just for looking at him]] and Janeway had him put under house arrest in his quarters and allowed him a variety of activities to spend his time on.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Captain Janeway drops the TeamMom act the moment Tom disobeys orders. She makes it clear that she would have destroyed his shuttle if required.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Captain Janeway drops the TeamMom act the moment Tom disobeys orders. She makes it clear that [[GoodIsNotNice she would have destroyed his shuttle if required.required]].
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Debatable -- Captain Janeway might violate the [[AlienNonInterferenceClause Prime Directive]], but that's her prerogative as TheCaptain, not Tom's.
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* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: Justified; Captain Janeway might violate the [[AlienNonInterferenceClause Prime Directive]] on occasion, but that's her prerogative as TheCaptain, not Tom's.
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* BreakingCharacter: Our first sign that Demonica and Malicia aren't holodeck characters is when Megan says, "Sorry, Harry" after missing her cue. Harry can't help enthusing, "Great, you're doing great!" while the Delaney Sisters are caressing his chest and purring how they're going to [[FetishFuel turn him into their grovelling slave]].
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* BreakingCharacter: Our first sign that Demonica and Malicia aren't holodeck characters is when Megan says, "Sorry, Harry" Harry!" after missing her cue. Harry can't help enthusing, "Great, you're doing great!" while the Delaney Sisters are caressing his chest and purring how they're going to [[FetishFuel turn him into their grovelling slave]].
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* AttackHello: The first thing the Moneans do is fire upon ''Voyager'', which [[CurbStompBattle casually knocks out their weapon systems]], causing them to try communication instead.
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* AttackHello: The first thing the Moneans do is fire upon ''Voyager'', which [[CurbStompBattle casually knocks doesn't work and makes Voyager [[CurbStompBattle knock out their weapon systems]], systems easily]], causing them to try communication instead.
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* TheTapeKnewYouWouldSayThat: Tom anticipates his father's reaction to him starting the letter by saying he's fired. "Wait! Just listen; don't turn this off..."
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* TheTapeKnewYouWouldSayThat: Tom anticipates his father's reaction to him starting the letter by saying he's fired.been demoted and put in the brig. "Wait! Just listen; don't turn this off..."
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-->''"Lieutenant Thomas Eugene Paris, I hereby reduce you to the rank of ensign. And I sentence you to thirty days solitary confinement."''
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[[caption-width-right:350:You know, if he watched eight episodes a day, Tom could finish all of ''Series/{{Friends}}'' while he's in there.]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:You know, if he watched eight episodes a day, Tom could finish all of ''Series/{{Friends}}'' while he's in there.]]
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* ArtisticLicensePhysics: At 580 kilometers depth, pressures would be so overwhelming that if the cabin were to be breached by a water leak, it would have already been crushed like a tin can.
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* InMediasRes: A non-action variety: the episode starts us off with TheHook, as demotions are rare in the franchise. About five minutes in is where the story chronologically begins.
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* TitleDrop: In the very first sentence of the episode, Janeway reduces Tom Paris' rank and sentences him to ''thirty days'' of solitary.
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* ToastedBuns: Captain Proton flies through space with a huge sparkler scorching his trousers.
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* TheTapeKnewYouWouldSayThat: Tom anticipates his father's reaction to him starting the letter by saying he's fired. "Wait! Just listen; don't turn this off..."
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* AccidentalInnuendo: While playing on the holodeck with [[TwinThreesomeFantasy two gorgeous twins]] Harry says, "Don't worry about me, [[ADateWithRosiePalms I can handle myself!]]" Not with your arms chained you won't.
* AppliedPhlebotinum: 'Immersion shielding' is used to turn the ''Delta Flyer'' into a deep-sea submersible.
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* AppliedPhlebotinum: 'Immersion shielding' is used to turn the ''Delta Flyer'' into a deep-sea submersible.
* CommLinks: Proton has a wrist radio.
* ContinuityNod: Megans mentions working on some star charts for Seven of Nine, a reference to the twins working in Stellar Cartography.
* ContinuityNod: Megans mentions working on some star charts for Seven of Nine, a reference to the twins working in Stellar Cartography.
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* CommLinks: Proton has a wrist radio.
* ContinuityNod: Megans mentions working on some star charts for Seven of Nine, a reference to the twins working in Stellar Cartography.
* ContinuityNod: Megans mentions working on some star charts for Seven of Nine, a reference to the twins working in Stellar Cartography.
* DescriptionCut: Tom says that it all began with something his FantasyForbiddingFather would consider a ''complete'' waste of time. Cut to Tom as ''[[ShowWithinAShow Captain Proton!]]''
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* MindProbe: The Brain Probe, though it's more of a MindControlDevice given the FetishFuel description.
* MindProbe: The Brain Probe, though it's more of a MindControlDevice given the FetishFuel description.
* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: Tom Paris screws the Prime Directive to try to save an ocean planet that was slowly being destroyed by an oxygen-mining operation. He gets a demotion and thirty days in the brig for his effort. And he didn't even save the planet.
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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: Tom Paris screws the Prime Directive to try to save an ocean planet that was slowly being destroyed by an oxygen-mining operation. He gets a demotion and thirty days in the brig for his effort. And he didn't even save the planet.
* VoiceoverLetter: Tom is dictating the letter to his PADD, producing the same effect.
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* VoiceoverLetter: Tom is dictating the letter to his PADD, producing the same effect.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Debatable -- Captain Janeway might violate the [[AlienNonInterferenceClause Prime Directive]], but that's her perogative as TheCaptain, not Tom's.
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HowWeGotHere: The episode starts on Tom being stripped of his rank, then shows via flashbacks why.
* {{Hypocrite}}: Debatable -- Captain Janeway might violate the [[AlienNonInterferenceClause Prime Directive]], but that's herperogative prerogative as TheCaptain, not Tom's.
* {{Hypocrite}}: Debatable -- Captain Janeway might violate the [[AlienNonInterferenceClause Prime Directive]], but that's her
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* YouKeepUsingThatWord: Tom gets a lot of visitors for a guy sentenced to solitary confinement. He even has a guard stationed just outside his cell. Especially weird since the real-world purpose of causing a person to go mad from the isolation is openly and smugly referenced by the Doctor.
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* YouKeepUsingThatWord: Tom gets a lot of visitors for a guy sentenced to solitary confinement. He even has a guard stationed just outside his cell. Especially weird since the real-world purpose of causing a person to [[GoneMadFromTheIsolation go mad from the isolation isolation]] is openly and smugly referenced by the Doctor.