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* GenreSavvy: Chakotay avoids having anyone split up, though that's partly because he's suspicious of the Malon.
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* GenreSavvy: After Pelk is attacked, Chakotay avoids having anyone any suggestion that they [[NeverSplitTheParty split up, though that's partly because he's suspicious of the Malon.up]]. He also keeps a close eye on Fesek.
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* GenreSavvy: Avoids Chakotay avoids having anyone split up, though that's partly because he's suspicious of the Malon.
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* ExplosiveDecompression: The Vihaar sabotages an airlock door.
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* ExplosiveDecompression: The Vihaar sabotages an airlock door.door in an attempt to kill the Away Team.
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* CutenessProximity: B'Elanna can't help giggling at the through of Tuvok as a child, with his cute pointed ears.
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* CutenessProximity: B'Elanna can't help giggling at the through thought of Tuvok as a child, with his cute pointed ears.
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* ChekhovsSkill: B'Elanna is shown trying to meditate as Tuvok taught her.
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* ChekhovsSkill: While on the freighter, B'Elanna is shown trying to meditate as Tuvok taught her.
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* SuicideMission: Core labourers -- only three out of ten survive a standard waste-dumping mission.
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* SuicideMission: Core labourers -- only three out of ten survive a standard waste-dumping mission. For this reason they get paid ten times as much, with the money going to their families when they die.
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* CallBack: Tuvok instructs B'Elanna he used to instruct Kes; he even uses the same Vulcan meditation lamp. It's also a call back to "Random Thoughts", where Tuvok offered to instruct B'Elanna in emotional control.
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* CallBack: Tuvok instructs B'Elanna as he used to instruct Kes; he even uses the same Vulcan meditation lamp. It's also a call back to "Random Thoughts", where Tuvok offered to instruct B'Elanna in emotional control.
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* ThatsAnOrder: Fesek to the crewman he sends to the core, and Chakotay to B'Elanna.
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* ThatsAnOrder: Fesek to the crewman he sends to the core, and Chakotay to B'Elanna.B'Elanna telling her to put on hold on her attitude towards the Malon.
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* BaitAndSwitch: The monster is actually a core worker GoingPostal over what's happened to him.
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* {{Mundanger}}: The Vihaar is [[NotTheNessie actually a core worker]] GoingPostal over what's happened to him.
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After destroying the Doctor's camera in a fit of (undoubtedly justified) annoyance, B'Elanna is assigned to work on her emotional control with Tuvok. Her lessons are interrupted when she's called upon to help repair a Malon toxic-waste freighter that is in danger of exploding, destroying everything within three light years. Something however is stalking the Away Team.
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After destroying the Doctor's camera in a fit of (undoubtedly justified) annoyance, B'Elanna is assigned to work on her emotional control with Tuvok. Her lessons are interrupted when she's called upon to help repair a Malon toxic-waste freighter that is in danger of exploding, destroying everything within three light years. Something however But a hostile creature on the freighter is stalking the Away Team.
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* DontMakeMeDestroyYouDontMakeMeDestroyYou: B'Elanna tries to reason with the Vihaar, but he's too far gone and she has to beat him to death with a pipe.
* ExplosiveInstrumentation
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* ExplosiveDecompressionExplosiveDecompression: The Vihaar sabotages an airlock door.
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* FlashbackEchoFlashbackEcho: In the privacy of her quarters, B'Elanna has a flashback to killing the Vihaar.
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* GenreSavvy: Chakotay doesn't let Fesek out of his sight and makes sure [[LetsSplitUpGang none of them split up]] after Pelk is killed.
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* GenreSavvy: Chakotay doesn't let Fesek out of his sight and makes sure [[LetsSplitUpGang none of them Avoids having anyone split up]] after Pelk is killed.up, though that's partly because he's suspicious of the Malon.
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* HairTriggerTemperHairTriggerTemper: A character episode based on B'Elanna's temper.
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* HesDeadJimHesDeadJim: Attempts to resuscitate Pelk consist of placing a cortical stimulator on his forehead.
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* ImpairmentShot
* ImpendingDoomPOVImpendingDoomPOV: The Vihaar stalking the Away Team. Also ImpairmentShot, presumably because his mutations have affected his eyes.
* ImpendingDoomPOV
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* RevengeBeforeReason: The Vihaar is so consumed with rage he doesn't care that innocents who have nothing to do with the Malon will die.
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* RevengeBeforeReason: The Vihaar is so consumed with rage he doesn't care that innocents who have nothing to do with the Malon his employers will die.
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* StrawVulcan: After Chakotay is beamed out, Tuvok suggests he take over the Away Team.
-->'''TUVOK:''' B'Elanna is unpredictable, Captain. Under these circumstances, her volatile nature could compromise the mission.\\
'''JANEWAY:''' Your concerns are noted, but if I send you over there I'd be sending the wrong message. That I don't have faith in her. But I do.\\
'''TUVOK:''' Your faith is admirable, but logic suggests--\\
'''JANEWAY:''' This isn't about logic, it's about trust.
-->'''TUVOK:''' B'Elanna is unpredictable, Captain. Under these circumstances, her volatile nature could compromise the mission.\\
'''JANEWAY:''' Your concerns are noted, but if I send you over there I'd be sending the wrong message. That I don't have faith in her. But I do.\\
'''TUVOK:''' Your faith is admirable, but logic suggests--\\
'''JANEWAY:''' This isn't about logic, it's about trust.
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After destroying the Doctor's camera in a fit of undoubtedly justified (undoubtedly justified) annoyance, B'Elanna is assigned to work on her emotional control with Tuvok. Her lessons are interrupted when she's called upon to help repair a Malon toxic-waste freighter that is in danger of exploding, destroying everything within three light years. Something however is stalking the Away Team.
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After destroying the Doctor's camera in a fit of undoubtedly justified annoyance, B'Elanna must is assigned to work on her emotional control with Tuvok. Her lessons are interrupted when she's called upon to help repair a Malon toxic-waste freighter that is in danger of exploding.
exploding, destroying everything within three light years. Something however is stalking the Away Team.
-->'''FESEK:''' I don't know how I'm going to explain what happened.\\
'''TORRES:''' Tell them the truth. Tell them the Vihaar is no myth.
'''TORRES:''' Tell them the truth. Tell them the Vihaar is no myth.
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* BaitAndSwitch: [[spoiler:The monster is actually a core worker GoingPostal over what's happened to him.]]
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* BaitAndSwitch: [[spoiler:The The monster is actually a core worker GoingPostal over what's happened to him.]]
* CutenessProximity: B'Elanna can't help giggling at the through of Tuvok as a child, with his cute pointed ears.
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* IDidWhatIHadToDo
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* IncurableCoughOfDeath: B'Elanna starts coughing just before she realises she's received a fatal dose of radiation.
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* IncurableCoughOfDeath: B'Elanna starts coughing just before she realises she's told she received a fatal dose of radiation.
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* SensorSuspense: Seven in Astrometrics tracks the creature approaching the bridge where the Away Team is.
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* SensorSuspense: Seven in Astrometrics tracks the creature Vihaar approaching the bridge bridge, where the Away Team is.
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* TimeForPlanB
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* TimeForPlanBTimeForPlanB: In case the Away Team can't repair the freighter, Janeway orders Plan B to be prepared, in which ''Voyager'' will push the freighter [[HurlItIntoTheSun into a nearby sun]]. Seven of Nine prepares the necessary calculations, then provides a Plan C in case that doesn't work. Tuvok says it's unlikely given [[InvincibleHero Janeway's past success record]]...then pointedly asks if there's a Plan D. There isn't.
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-->'''FESEK:''' It's an old story shared among freighter crews. Some of them say they've seen creatures in the theta storage tanks.\\
'''TORRES:''' Creatures?\\
'''FESEK:''' Created by radiogenic waste. According to the legend, they are poisonous monsters that wreak havoc aboard Malon ships. It's a common belief among our more superstitious recruits.
'''TORRES:''' Creatures?\\
'''FESEK:''' Created by radiogenic waste. According to the legend, they are poisonous monsters that wreak havoc aboard Malon ships. It's a common belief among our more superstitious recruits.
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-->"I saw it...I saw it...the creature..."
* GenreSavvy: Chakotay doesn't let Fesek out of his sight and makes sure [[LetsSplitUpGang none of them split up]] after Pelk is killed.
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* IncurableCoughOfDeathIncurableCoughOfDeath: B'Elanna starts coughing just before she realises she's received a fatal dose of radiation.
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* NoOSHACompliance: The Malon freighter is the original Fire And Steam Factory InSpace
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* NoOSHACompliance: The Malon freighter is the original a Fire And Steam Factory InSpace
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* GettingHotInHereGettingHotInHere: B'Elanna strips down to a sweaty tank top.
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* ImprovisedWeapon
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* ImprovisedWeaponImprovisedWeapon: Unable to use her phaser due to the risk of causing an explosion, B'Elanna uses a pipe to lethal effect.
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* NoOSHAComplianceNoOSHACompliance: The Malon freighter is the original Fire And Steam Factory InSpace
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* RevengeBeforeReasonRevengeBeforeReason: The Vihaar is so consumed with rage he doesn't care that innocents who have nothing to do with the Malon will die.
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* SexyBackSexyBack: B'Elanna strips off for a long-desired sonic shower.
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* SuicideMission: Core duty.
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* SuicideMission: Core duty.labourers -- only three out of ten survive a standard waste-dumping mission.
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* BaitAndSwitch: [[spoiler:The monster is actually an insane core worker seeking payback for what's happened to him.]]
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* BaitAndSwitch: [[spoiler:The monster is actually an insane a core worker seeking payback for GoingPostal over what's happened to him.]]
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* FaceDeathWithDignity: At the end of the episode the Doctor informs Fesek that he took a lethal dosage. He accepts it stoically.
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* FaceDeathWithDignity: At the end of the episode the Doctor informs Fesek that he took a lethal dosage. He accepts it stoically.stoically, as it's an occupational hazard.
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* CallBack: Tuvok instructs B'Elanna in control of emotions as he used to instruct Kes. It's also a call back to "Random Thoughts", where Tuvok offered to instruct B'Elanna.
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* CallBack: Tuvok instructs B'Elanna in control of emotions as he used to instruct Kes. Kes; he even uses the same Vulcan meditation lamp. It's also a call back to "Random Thoughts", where Tuvok offered to instruct B'Elanna.B'Elanna in emotional control.
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* LethalChef: Neelix prepares a Talaxian anti-radiation remedy that's so hideous even he can barely stand it.
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* LethalChef: Neelix prepares a Talaxian anti-radiation folk remedy that's so hideous even he can barely stand it.
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* BaitAndSwitch: [[spoiler:The monster is actually a an insane core worker seeking payback for what's happened to him.]]
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* FaceDeathWithDignity
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* FaceDeathWithDignityFaceDeathWithDignity: At the end of the episode the Doctor informs Fesek that he took a lethal dosage. He accepts it stoically.
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* AlmostDeadGuy
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* AlmostDeadGuyAlmostDeadGuy: Pelk
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* BaitAndSwitchBaitAndSwitch: [[spoiler:The monster is actually a core worker seeking payback what's happened to him.]]
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-->'''B'Elanna:''' Listen, listen to me. I know. I know that you're so angry you want to destroy everything in sight, but there's another way to make them understand. I'm on your side.
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* ThatAnOrder: Fesek to the crewman he sends to the core, and Chakotay to B'Elanna.
* UrbanLegend: The Vihaar.
* UrbanLegend: The Vihaar.
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* UrbanLegend: The Vihaar.
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* {{Revenge}}RevengeBeforeReason
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* BerserkButton: Do not call B'Elanna "[[FantasticRacism Miss Turtlehead]]" unless you want to go spinning off the gyro-swing and beaten to a pulp.
* BeautyIsNotTarnished: Averted; B'Elanna gets radiation welts on her face and ''very'' dirty.
* BeautyIsNotTarnished: Averted; B'Elanna gets radiation welts on her face and ''very'' dirty.
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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Averted; B'Elanna gets radiation welts on her face and ''very'' dirty.
* BerserkButton: Do not call B'Elanna "[[FantasticRacism Miss Turtlehead]]" unless you want to gospinning flying off the gyro-swing and beaten to a pulp.
* BeautyIsNotTarnished: Averted; B'Elanna gets radiation welts on her face and ''very'' dirty.pulp.
* BerserkButton: Do not call B'Elanna "[[FantasticRacism Miss Turtlehead]]" unless you want to go
* BeautyIsNotTarnished: Averted; B'Elanna gets radiation welts on her face and ''very'' dirty.
* HairTriggerTemper
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* HotTempered
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* SuddenlyShoutingSuddenlyShouting: "THEY POISONED ME!"
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* GadgeteerGenius: Even as a child B'Elanna had the wherewithal to sabotage a gyro-swing.
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B'Elanna must repair a Malon freighter that is in danger of exploding.
!!This episode has the following tropes:
* ADayInTheLimelight: A B'Elanna episode.
* AlmostDeadGuy
* AppliedPhlebotinum: The Doctor provides a handy injection to avoid having the actors walk around in anti-radiation suits.
* BaitAndSwitch
* BerserkButton: Do not call B'Elanna "[[FantasticRacism Miss Turtlehead]]" unless you want to go spinning off the gyro-swing and beaten to a pulp.
* BeautyIsNotTarnished: Averted; B'Elanna gets radiation welts on her face and ''very'' dirty.
* BigElectricSwitch: The 'manual actuators'.
* BigNo
* BirdsOfAFeather
* CallBack: Tuvok instructs B'Elanna in control of emotions as he used to instruct Kes. It's also a call back to "Random Thoughts", where Tuvok offered to instruct B'Elanna.
* ChekhovsSkill: B'Elanna is shown trying to meditate as Tuvok taught her.
* DeadlyEuphemism: "Waste export mission" AKA toxic waste dumping.
* DontMakeMeDestroyYou
* DueToTheDead: Fesek touches Pelk's eyes, then his own after Pelk dies.
* EscapePod: ''Voyager'' finds 37 of them floating in space, all contaminated by theta radiation. There are only two survivors.
* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Fesek is introduced showing off the model freighter he intends giving his son.
* ExplosiveDecompression
* FaceDeathWithDignity
* {{Fanservice}}: B'Elanna bare-armed, sweaty and covered in grease.
* FlashBack
* GettingHotInHere
* GoodIsNotNice: Janeway gives Controller Fesek a choice between helping them, or being put back in his EscapePod where he would die of radiation poisoning or get obliterated in the explosion of his ship.
* GotVolunteered: Fesek sends one of his bridge crew to manually seal a radioactive area, even though he hasn't volunteered for core duty.
* HeroicSacrifice: What the Malon crew see their job as, so their homeworld will remain uncontaminated.
* HesDeadJim
* HotTempered
* HurlItIntoTheSun
* IDidWhatIHadToDo
* ImpairmentShot
* ImpendingDoomPOV
* ImprovisedWeapon
* IncurableCoughOfDeath
* LandfillBeyondTheStars
* LethalChef: Neelix prepares a Talaxian anti-radiation remedy that's so hideous even he can barely stand it.
* MonsterOfTheAesop
* NeverTellMeTheOdds: Lampshaded when Seven of Nine and Tuvok are discussing the captain's latest plan, Tuvok points out it isn't the first time the captain has beaten the odds. To which Seven replies "She does seem to succeed more than random chance would allow. I'll add that to my calculations."
* NothingIsScarier
* NoOSHACompliance
* PlanarShockwave
* PlotDrivenBreakdown: The theta radiation prevents ''Voyager'' from forming a warp field to escape. Later they can't beam out the Away Team because of the heavy anti-radiation shielding surrounding the freighter's bridge.
* {{Revenge}}
* ThatAnOrder: Fesek to the crewman he sends to the core, and Chakotay to B'Elanna.
* UrbanLegend: The Vihaar.
* SensorSuspense: Seven in Astrometrics tracks the creature approaching the bridge where the Away Team is.
* SexyBack
* [[ShowerOfAngst Sonic Shower of Angst]]
* SuddenlyShouting
* SuicideMission: Core duty.
* SympathyForTheDevil: We're shown a more nuanced side to the Malon, who previously were just VillainOfTheWeek types.
* TapOnTheHead: Chakotay takes a flying pipe to the head and has to be beamed out.
* TimeForPlanB
* TwoFaced
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!!This episode has the following tropes:
* ADayInTheLimelight: A B'Elanna episode.
* AlmostDeadGuy
* AppliedPhlebotinum: The Doctor provides a handy injection to avoid having the actors walk around in anti-radiation suits.
* BaitAndSwitch
* BerserkButton: Do not call B'Elanna "[[FantasticRacism Miss Turtlehead]]" unless you want to go spinning off the gyro-swing and beaten to a pulp.
* BeautyIsNotTarnished: Averted; B'Elanna gets radiation welts on her face and ''very'' dirty.
* BigElectricSwitch: The 'manual actuators'.
* BigNo
* BirdsOfAFeather
* CallBack: Tuvok instructs B'Elanna in control of emotions as he used to instruct Kes. It's also a call back to "Random Thoughts", where Tuvok offered to instruct B'Elanna.
* ChekhovsSkill: B'Elanna is shown trying to meditate as Tuvok taught her.
* DeadlyEuphemism: "Waste export mission" AKA toxic waste dumping.
* DontMakeMeDestroyYou
* DueToTheDead: Fesek touches Pelk's eyes, then his own after Pelk dies.
* EscapePod: ''Voyager'' finds 37 of them floating in space, all contaminated by theta radiation. There are only two survivors.
* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Fesek is introduced showing off the model freighter he intends giving his son.
* ExplosiveDecompression
* FaceDeathWithDignity
* {{Fanservice}}: B'Elanna bare-armed, sweaty and covered in grease.
* FlashBack
* GettingHotInHere
* GoodIsNotNice: Janeway gives Controller Fesek a choice between helping them, or being put back in his EscapePod where he would die of radiation poisoning or get obliterated in the explosion of his ship.
* GotVolunteered: Fesek sends one of his bridge crew to manually seal a radioactive area, even though he hasn't volunteered for core duty.
* HeroicSacrifice: What the Malon crew see their job as, so their homeworld will remain uncontaminated.
* HesDeadJim
* HotTempered
* HurlItIntoTheSun
* IDidWhatIHadToDo
* ImpairmentShot
* ImpendingDoomPOV
* ImprovisedWeapon
* IncurableCoughOfDeath
* LandfillBeyondTheStars
* LethalChef: Neelix prepares a Talaxian anti-radiation remedy that's so hideous even he can barely stand it.
* MonsterOfTheAesop
* NeverTellMeTheOdds: Lampshaded when Seven of Nine and Tuvok are discussing the captain's latest plan, Tuvok points out it isn't the first time the captain has beaten the odds. To which Seven replies "She does seem to succeed more than random chance would allow. I'll add that to my calculations."
* NothingIsScarier
* NoOSHACompliance
* PlanarShockwave
* PlotDrivenBreakdown: The theta radiation prevents ''Voyager'' from forming a warp field to escape. Later they can't beam out the Away Team because of the heavy anti-radiation shielding surrounding the freighter's bridge.
* {{Revenge}}
* ThatAnOrder: Fesek to the crewman he sends to the core, and Chakotay to B'Elanna.
* UrbanLegend: The Vihaar.
* SensorSuspense: Seven in Astrometrics tracks the creature approaching the bridge where the Away Team is.
* SexyBack
* [[ShowerOfAngst Sonic Shower of Angst]]
* SuddenlyShouting
* SuicideMission: Core duty.
* SympathyForTheDevil: We're shown a more nuanced side to the Malon, who previously were just VillainOfTheWeek types.
* TapOnTheHead: Chakotay takes a flying pipe to the head and has to be beamed out.
* TimeForPlanB
* TwoFaced
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