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--> '''B'Elanna:''' Get the hell away from [the console]!\\
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--> '''B'Elanna:''' Get the hell away from [the console]!\\there, ''now!''\\
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* CurbStompBattle: The Vihaar is highly radioactive, making his touch lethal, but his mutation did not give him superpowers, he is still just a man and unarmed, meaning he relies on technical tricks, surprise and stealth against the away team. He doesn't last long in a straight fight against a pissed off Klingon with a big metal pipe.
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* CurbStompBattle: The Vihaar is highly radioactive, making his touch lethal, but his mutation did not give him superpowers, he is still just a man and unarmed, meaning he relies on technical tricks, surprise and stealth against the away team. He doesn't last long in a straight fight against a pissed off Klingon half-Klingon with a big metal pipe.
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* GadgeteerGenius: Even as a child B'Elanna had the wherewithal to sabotage a gyro-swing.
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* GadgeteerGenius: Even as a child B'Elanna had the wherewithal technical skills to sabotage a gyro-swing.
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* GotVolunteered: Fesek sends one of his bridge crew to manually seal a radioactive area, even though he's not a core labourer.
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* GotVolunteered: Fesek sends one of his bridge crew to manually seal a radioactive area, even though he's not a core labourer.laborer.
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* HesDeadJim: Attempts to resuscitate Pelk consist of placing a cortical stimulator on his forehead.
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* HesDeadJim: Attempts to resuscitate Pelk consist of placing a cortical stimulator on his forehead. Justified in that Neelix can't use his tricorder to scan for any other problems without detonating a ''lot'' of flammable gas.
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* LandfillBeyondTheStars: This is the Malons' [[SpeciesOfHats Hat]]. Dumping of theta radiation is regarded as NecessarilyEvil to preserve the ecology of their own planet.
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* LandfillBeyondTheStars: This is the Malons' [[SpeciesOfHats Hat]]. Dumping of theta radiation is regarded as a NecessarilyEvil to preserve the ecology of their own planet.
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* NothingIsScarier: There may be a creature, there may not be. Unfortunately, the away team can't even scan for it because it's too dangerous for the tricorder, and even the scanners on ''Voyager'' have trouble isolating anything organic.
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* NothingIsScarier: There may be a creature, there may not be. Unfortunately, the away team can't even scan for it because it's too dangerous for the tricorder, and even the scanners on ''Voyager'' have trouble isolating anything organic.
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* UrbanLegend: The Vihaar. {{Subverted}} when it turns out that the Vihaar is real. And ''pissed''.
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* UrbanLegend: The Vihaar. {{Subverted}} Subverted when it turns out that the Vihaar is real. And ''pissed''.
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* WasOnceAMan: The Vihaar was a Malon crew member who worked near the storage tanks. Average life expectancy there is usually two months. He wasn't so lucky, and the theta mutated his very genetic makeup.
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* WasOnceAMan: The Vihaar was a Malon crew member who worked near the storage tanks. Average life expectancy there is usually two months. He wasn't so lucky, and the theta mutated his very genetic makeup.
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* SpeciesOfHats: The Malon are an entire culture revolving around the rather limited concept of dumping toxic waste in outer space. At least their motives in doing so are explored here.
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* SpeciesOfHats: The Played with. Every single Malon are an entire culture revolving around we've encountered has had the rather limited concept singular goal of dumping toxic waste in outer space. At least This episode establishes that ''obviously'' that's not true of their motives in entire society, and these crews see themselves as doing the dirty work so are explored here.that the rest of their species can live a normal life.
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-->'''FESEK:''' It's an old story shared among freighter crews. Some of them say they've seen creatures in the theta storage tanks.\\
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* LandfillBeyondTheStars: This is the Malons' [[PlanetOfHats Hat]]. Dumping of theta radiation is regarded as a NecessaryEvil to preserve the ecology of their own planet.
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* LandfillBeyondTheStars: This is the Malons' [[PlanetOfHats [[SpeciesOfHats Hat]]. Dumping of theta radiation is regarded as a NecessaryEvil NecessarilyEvil to preserve the ecology of their own planet.
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* AntiRadiationDrug: The Doctor provides a handy injection to avoid having the actors walk around in anti-radiation suits. The Malon wear their usual radiation suits, [[InSpaceEveryoneCanSeeYourFace but without any helmets]].
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* FantasticRadiationShielding: The Doctor provides a handy injection to avoid having the actors walk around in anti-radiation suits. The Malon wear their usual radiation suits, [[InSpaceEveryoneCanSeeYourFace but without any helmets]].
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* NotWhatISignedOnFor: The Malon RedShirt from TheTeaser gives this protest when he's ordered to the core, even though he's not a core worker.
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* NotWhatISignedOnFor: The Malon RedShirt from TheTeaser gives this protest when he's ordered to the core, even though he's not a core worker. A more literal example than usual, since it's established that the high mortality rate of core work means it ''is'' something one is supposed to volunteer for.
