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* BravingTheBlizzard: Mr. Sulu and several others get trapped on the planet the ''Enterprise'' is orbiting. As night comes on, the wind kicks up and the temperature falls dramatically. Due to the malfunction, any heaters transported down are rendered useless, and the landing party is forced to use their phasers to superheat rocks in order to stay warm enough to survive.
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* BravingTheBlizzard: Mr. Sulu and several three others get trapped on the planet the ''Enterprise'' is orbiting. As night comes on, the wind kicks up and the temperature falls dramatically. Due to the malfunction, any heaters transported down are rendered useless, and the landing party is forced to use their phasers to superheat rocks in order to stay warm enough to survive.
* FromBadToWorse: While Scott is still trying to find out why the transporter split Kirk in two, Evil!Kirk blasts some of the circuitry with a phaser. After discovering this, Scott predicts he will need and entire week to fix it.
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* GoodEyesEvilEyes: Evil Kirk wears eyeliner and his eyes are always narrow and shifty.
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* GoodEyesEvilEyes: Evil Kirk wears eyeliner and his eyes are always either narrow and shifty.shifty, or wide and crazy.
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* IdenticalTwinIDTag: Apart from wearing a different shirt, Evil!Kirk is distinguished from Good!Kirk after Rand scratched his face. This breaks down when Evil!Kirk changes shirts, puts makeup on his face, and scratches Good!Kirk in turn.
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* SickCaptiveScam: Evil!Kirk feigns weakness so that Good!Kirk undoes his restraints in Sickbay and assists him to get up and walk to the Transporter Room, then overpowers him and assumes command.
* {{Slurpasaur}}: The alien creature Sulu finds is simply a cocker spaniel or terrier wearing a horn, antennae, and a thick coat and long rat-like tail.
* {{Slurpasaur}}: The alien creature Sulu finds is simply a cocker spaniel or terrier wearing a horn, antennae, and a thick coat and long rat-like tail.
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* {{Understatement}}: Before beaming up, Kirk tells Sulu that the temperature on the planet gets down to some [[ArtisticLicensePhysics ridiculously low arbitrary temperature]] at night. Sulu replies, "That's nippy."
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* {{Understatement}}: Before beaming up, Kirk tells Sulu that the temperature on the planet gets down to some [[ArtisticLicensePhysics ridiculously low arbitrary temperature]] at night.night, [[RealityIsUnrealistic similar to the dark side of the Moon]]. Sulu replies, "That's nippy."
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* EverybodyLives: The only fatality is the cute but non-sentient dog-unicorn thing from the planet.
