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On the asteroid penal colony Tars Lemora, Dal R'El plots his escape, aided by some unlikely new friends.
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On the asteroid penal colony Tars Lemora, Lamora, Dal R'El plots his escape, aided by some unlikely new friends.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: The Diviner is hiding the existence of the USS ''Protostar'' from Gwyn because he does not want the ideals of the Federation affecting her judgement before she is ready. When Drednok says the ship's name in her presence, revealing that he's always known it was on Tars Lemora, the robot sardonically tells her that this is what her father been trying to find.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: The Diviner is hiding the existence of the USS ''Protostar'' from Gwyn because he does not want the ideals of the Federation affecting her judgement before she is ready. When Drednok says the ship's name in her presence, revealing that he's always known it was on Tars Lemora, Lamora, the robot sardonically tells her that this is what her father been trying to find.
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* TranslatorMicrobes: Tars Lemora has outlawed their use, as it keeps the prisoners from coordinating in anything other than the most basic of ways. Gwyn serves as a living universal translator, knowing every language the prisoners speak. Zero, meanwhile, can bypass the problem by communicating telepathically. Once Dal and Rok-Tahk find a Starfleet commbadge, communication is no longer an issue.
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* TranslatorMicrobes: Tars Lemora Lamora has outlawed their use, as it keeps the prisoners from coordinating in anything other than the most basic of ways. Gwyn serves as a living universal translator, knowing every language the prisoners speak. Zero, meanwhile, can bypass the problem by communicating telepathically. Once Dal and Rok-Tahk find a Starfleet commbadge, communication is no longer an issue.
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On the penal colony Tars Lemora, Dal R'El plots his escape, aided by some unlikely allies.
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On the asteroid penal colony Tars Lemora, Dal R'El plots his escape, aided by some unlikely allies.new friends.
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* BeamSpam: The ''Protostar'' unleashes a serious phaser volley during the escape.
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* CriticalStaffingShortage: Zero notes that a ship the size of the ''Protostar'' would require a crew of at least twenty (or thirty-seven appendages, depending on species). This is lowered to five when Dal asks the bare minimum to get the ship into space.
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* CriticalStaffingShortage: Zero notes that a ship the size of the ''Protostar'' would require a crew of at least twenty (or thirty-seven appendages, depending on species). This is lowered to five when When Dal asks the bare minimum to get the ship into space.space, Zero lowers that requirement to an engineer, given its state of disrepair.
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* LiarRevealed: Downplayed. When Zero reveals Dal's deal with Gwyn, Rok accuses him of lying to them. Dal immediately points out that they've only been able to communicate for a short time, so he hasn't had time to lie to them.
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-->'''Gwyn:''' ''(speaks Vau N'Akat)''\\
'''Diviner:''' Progeny of Solum, you may speak in Standard. I know you favor this primitive tongue.
-->'''Gwyn:''' ''(speaks Vau N'Akat)''\\
'''Diviner:''' Progeny of Solum, you may speak in Standard. I know you favor this primitive tongue.
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* ScottyTime: Jankom Pog wants a week to get the ''Protostar'' flying. He has one day.
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* ScottyTime: Jankom Pog wants a week to get the ''Protostar'' flying. He has Dal gives him one day.day on account of the deal he cut with Gwyn.
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* WhosOnFirst: Dal briefly confuses "Rok-Tahk" for the name of her language, instead of her proper name.
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* CuteKitten: The juvenile Caitian. Even cuter when Gwyn ''purr''-fectly converses with it.
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* ScottyTime: Jankom Pog wants a week to get the ''Protostar'' flying. He has one day.
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* DuckSeasonRabbitSeason: Dal realises this is the best strategy to negotiate with a Tellarite.
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* RabbitSeasonDuckSeason: Dal realises this is the best strategy to negotiate with a Tellarite.
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* BuffySpeak: Dal tells Rok-Tahk to find the "pew-pew-pew" button to fire the torpedoes.
* BuriedAlive: Averted, it was thanks to Rok-Tahk Brikar physiology that both she and Dal weren't trapped in this trope, or more alternatively, squish like bugs.
* BuriedAlive: Averted, it was thanks to Rok-Tahk Brikar physiology that both she and Dal weren't trapped in this trope, or more alternatively, squish like bugs.
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* BarehandedBladeBlock: Justified by Rok-Tahk's tough skin allowing her to grab Gwyn's blade with her bare hand. Gwyn has to melt and then reform the blade in her other hand to keep fighting.
* BuffySpeak: Dal tells Rok-Tahk to find the "pew-pew-pew" button to fire thetorpedoes.
phasers, since he can't think of the proper name off the top of his head.
* BuriedAlive: Averted,it was thanks to Rok-Tahk Rok-Tahk's Brikar physiology allowing her to survive the cave collapse that would have buried and/or crushed both she her and Dal weren't trapped in this trope, or more alternatively, squish like bugs.Dal.
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* FallingIntoTheCockpit: None of the characters have any experience with Federation technology, so their maiden flight of the ''Protostar'' is largely based on the most obvious controls they can decipher at a glance. Zero even admits to having almost no idea what they're doing, though they pick up basic maneuvering well enough. When it comes to firing weapons, they luck out when Murf lands on the panel responsible for that subsystem.
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* WeaponizedExhaust: When he's grabbed by Drednok and about to be killed, Dal communicates to Zero to turn the ship sideways. The act of doing so fires a maneuvering thruster that sends Drednok flying, causing him to drop Dal in the process.
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* PuncuatedForEmphasis: The Diviner's final line in the episode.
-->'''The Diviner:''' ''Get. Me. MY SHIP!''
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* RabbitSeasonDuckSeason: Dal realises this is the best strategy to negotiate with a Tellarite.
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* BuffySpeak: Dal tells Rok-Tahk to find the "pew-pew-pew" button to fire the torpedoes.
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* TemptingFate: Dal muses to himself that the tunnel labeled "ore smasher" probably isn't as bad as it sounds. It's actually much worse, being a lengthy tunnel with dozens of rock smashers.
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* TemptingFate: Dal muses to himself that the tunnel labeled "ore smasher" probably isn't as bad as it sounds. It's actually much worse, being [[SmashingHallwayTrapsOfDoom a lengthy tunnel with dozens of rock smashers.smashers]].
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Drednok asks the Diviner why he is hiding their true intentions from Gwyn. The Diviner responds that he's been hiding what they're searching for as he does not want to run the risk of the Federation influencing her in a way that would impede his plans. When she is surprised that Drednok knew all along about the Protostar, the robot sardonically tells her that this is what her father been trying to find.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Drednok asks the Diviner why he is hiding their true intentions from Gwyn. The Diviner responds that he's been is hiding what they're searching for as the existence of the USS ''Protostar'' from Gwyn because he does not want to run the risk ideals of the Federation influencing affecting her in a way that would impede his plans. When judgement before she is surprised that ready. When Drednok knew all along about says the Protostar, ship's name in her presence, revealing that he's always known it was on Tars Lemora, the robot sardonically tells her that this is what her father been trying to find.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Drednok asks the Diviner why he is hiding their true intentions from Gwyn. The Diviner responds that he's been hiding what they're searching for as he does not want to run the risk of the Federation influencing her in a way that would impede his plans. When she is surprised that Drednok knew all along about the Protostar, the robot sardonically tells her that this is what her father been trying to find.
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* TheMostWanted: Zero is this to the whole prison as him remaining at large gives hopes to the prisoner, something Diviner doesn't want.
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* TheMostWanted: Zero is this to the whole prison as him them remaining at large gives hopes hope to the prisoner, other prisoners, something the Diviner doesn't want.
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* BuriedAlive: Averted, it was thanks to Rok-Tahk Brikar physiology that both she and Dal weren't trapped in this trope, or more alternatively, squish like bugs.
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* ApologeticAttacker: Rok-Tahk apologizes profusely to Gwyn after restraining her, and this is after about a minute of Gwyn trying to kill all of them.
* HostageSituation: Dal suggests taking Gwyn hostage to escape from Drednok, which Zero initially rejects but Jankom decides is a great idea, forcing everyone else to go along with it. Taking her hostage ultimately proves to be redundant, however, as the ship itself is of far greater value to the Diviner and his unwillingness to damage it is what allows them to escape.
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* TranslatorMicrobes: Tars Lemora has outlawed their use, as it keeps the prisoners from coordinating in anything other than the most basic of ways. Gywn serves as a living universal translator, knowing every language the prisoners speak. Zero, meanwhile, can bypass the problem by communicating telepathically. Once Dal and Rok-Tahk find a Starfleet commbadge, communication is no longer an issue.
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* TranslatorMicrobes: Tars Lemora has outlawed their use, as it keeps the prisoners from coordinating in anything other than the most basic of ways. Gywn Gwyn serves as a living universal translator, knowing every language the prisoners speak. Zero, meanwhile, can bypass the problem by communicating telepathically. Once Dal and Rok-Tahk find a Starfleet commbadge, communication is no longer an issue.
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* FreezeFrameBonus: When Murf activates the phasers, the panel also displays a photon torpedo inventory with various technical specifications on the weapons.
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* ShoutOut: Dal does his best [[Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean Jack Sparrow]] impression as he ascends on the ore cart.
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* MythologyGag: Dal echos the Romulan commander from "[[Recap/StarTrekS1E14BalanceOfTerror Balance of Terror]]".
-->'''Dal:''' You know, different circumstances, we could have been friends.
-->'''Dal:''' You know, different circumstances, we could have been friends.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Dal and Rok-Tahk just so happen to end up in the place where the ''Protostar'' has crashed.
* CutTheJuice: When Dal is about to escape through an anti-gravity ore line that leads into orbit, the Diviner cuts power to the facility, literally killing his momentum once the gravity returns to normal.
* HeroStoleMyBike: Dal steals Jankom's cargo transport during his first escape attempt.
* PsychicBlocDefense: Zero notes that the Diviner's mind is unreadable, though his intent comes through.
* TemptingFate: Dal muses to himself that the tunnel labeled "ore smasher" probably isn't as bad as it sounds. It's actually much worse, being a lengthy tunnel with dozens of rock smashers.
* TranslatorMicrobes: Tars Lemora has outlawed their use, as it keeps the prisoners from coordinating in anything other than the most basic of ways. Gywn serves as a living universal translator, knowing every language the prisoners speak. Zero, meanwhile, can bypass the problem by communicating telepathically. Once Dal and Rok-Tahk find a Starfleet commbadge, communication is no longer an issue.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Dal and Rok-Tahk just so happen to end up in the place where the ''Protostar'' has crashed.
* CutTheJuice: When Dal is about to escape through an anti-gravity ore line that leads into orbit, the Diviner cuts power to the facility, literally killing his momentum once the gravity returns to normal.
* HeroStoleMyBike: Dal steals Jankom's cargo transport during his first escape attempt.
* PsychicBlocDefense: Zero notes that the Diviner's mind is unreadable, though his intent comes through.
* TemptingFate: Dal muses to himself that the tunnel labeled "ore smasher" probably isn't as bad as it sounds. It's actually much worse, being a lengthy tunnel with dozens of rock smashers.
* TranslatorMicrobes: Tars Lemora has outlawed their use, as it keeps the prisoners from coordinating in anything other than the most basic of ways. Gywn serves as a living universal translator, knowing every language the prisoners speak. Zero, meanwhile, can bypass the problem by communicating telepathically. Once Dal and Rok-Tahk find a Starfleet commbadge, communication is no longer an issue.
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