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* CrushBlush: A couple times Scorpia blushes because of Catra, who she's in love with.
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* AHandfulForAnEye: Catra breaks free from Tung Lashor this way.
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* AHandfulForAnEye: Being the CombatPragmatist she is, Catra breaks free from Tung Lashor this way.via throwing sand in his peepers.
* LaughingMad: Upon thinking her efforts to find answers about herself were for naught, Adora laughs out of stress.
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* ShoutOut: The title is only a few letters away from ''Film/OnceUponATimeInTheWest''.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** The title is only a few letters away from ''Film/OnceUponATimeInTheWest''.
** The title is only a few letters away from ''Film/OnceUponATimeInTheWest''.
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** This is hilarious considering [[HypocriticalHumor her name is Catra, her childhood friend's name is Adora, she hangs around with Scorpia, and she spends all her time fighting people with names like Bow, Mermista and Perfuma]].
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This is a time travel trope.
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* ForWantOfANail: Shadow Weaver escaping and letting herself get captured by the Rebellion caused more trouble than help. By escaping, Hordak sent Catra to the Crimson Waste as punishment and learns of Adora's presence there. Catra became the new leader of the gangs, which allowed her to capture Adora and take her sword. Then, Catra learns from Adora that Shadow Weaver is with them, which causes the start of her SanitySlippage.
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* CowboyEpisode: The previous episode, "Huntara", had shades of this but mostly stuck to DesertPunk. This one goes a lot further into it, from the stereotypically Spaghetti Western-like music and ambiances, to the focus on bandits and gang warfare, and a definitely western-inspired saloon scene. Tong Lashor also carries his whip on a thigh holster, and several shots of his encounter with Catra borrow from how duels are usually filmed.
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* CowboyEpisode: The previous episode, "Huntara", had shades of this but mostly stuck to DesertPunk. This one goes a lot further into it, from the stereotypically Spaghetti Western-like music and ambiances, to the focus on bandits and gang warfare, and a definitely western-inspired saloon scene. Tong Tung Lashor also carries his whip on a thigh holster, and several shots of his encounter with Catra borrow from how duels are usually filmed.
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Catra and Scorpia arrive in the Waste and have no trouble fitting in. Huntara and the squad enter Mara's ship to try to view her message.
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Catra and Scorpia arrive in the Waste and have no trouble fitting in. Meanwhile, Huntara and the squad enter Mara's ship to try to and view her message.
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* BatScare: Bat-like creatures fly out of Mara's ship.
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* BatScare: Bat-like creatures fly out of Mara's ship. Everyone but Adora freaks out at them.
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* BreakTheHaughty: After Catra captures Adora and takes her sword, she starts acting cocky and mocking towards Adora. But her cocky attitude turns into anger and frustration when Adora tells her that Shadow Weaver is with them now and she's mad that Shadow Weaver would choose to aid Adora then help her.
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* BreakTheHaughty: After Catra captures Adora and takes her sword, she starts acting cocky and mocking towards Adora. But However, her cocky attitude turns into anger and frustration when Adora tells her that Shadow Weaver is with them now now, and she's mad that Shadow Weaver would choose to aid Adora then rather than help her.
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** The nameless lizard lady doesn’t have a great time either— after being knocked over in a rockslide last episode, she’s kicked off her chair by Catra, paralyzed by Scorpia’s tail, and then once she’s able to walk again Scorpia [[DoesNotKnowHerOwnStrength back-pats her]] right into a paralyzing plant.
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** The nameless lizard lady doesn’t have a great time either— after being knocked over in a rockslide last episode, she’s kicked off her chair by Catra, paralyzed by Scorpia’s tail, and then once she’s able to walk again again, Scorpia [[DoesNotKnowHerOwnStrength back-pats her]] right into a paralyzing plant.
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* CowboyEpisode: The previous episode, "Huntara", had shades of this, but mostly stuck to DesertPunk. This one goes a lot further into it, from the stereotypically Spaghetti Western-like music and ambiances, to the focus on bandits gang warfare, or a definitely western-inspired saloon scene. Tong Lashor also carries his whip on a thigh holster, and several shots of his encounter with Catra borrow from how duels are usually filmed.
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* CowboyEpisode: The previous episode, "Huntara", had shades of this, this but mostly stuck to DesertPunk. This one goes a lot further into it, from the stereotypically Spaghetti Western-like music and ambiances, to the focus on bandits and gang warfare, or and a definitely western-inspired saloon scene. Tong Lashor also carries his whip on a thigh holster, and several shots of his encounter with Catra borrow from how duels are usually filmed.
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* ForWantOfANail: Shadow Weaver escaping and letting herself get captured by the Rebellion caused more trouble than help. By escaping, Hordak sent Catra to the Crimson Waste as punishment and learns of Adora's presence there. Catra became the new leader of the gangs where she was able to capture Adora and take her sword. And then Catra learns from Adora that Shadow Weaver is with them which causes the start of her SanitySlippage.
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* ForWantOfANail: Shadow Weaver escaping and letting herself get captured by the Rebellion caused more trouble than help. By escaping, Hordak sent Catra to the Crimson Waste as punishment and learns of Adora's presence there. Catra became the new leader of the gangs where she was able gangs, which allowed her to capture Adora and take her sword. And then Then, Catra learns from Adora that Shadow Weaver is with them them, which causes the start of her SanitySlippage.
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* HopeSpot: Scorpia suggests she and Catra never return to the Horde, and remain on the Crimson Waste. But then Catra finds out that Shadow Weaver escaped to see Adora...
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* HopeSpot: Scorpia suggests she and Catra never return to the Horde, Horde and remain on in the Crimson Waste. But then Waste, but Catra finds out that Shadow Weaver escaped to see Adora...
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-->'''Catra:''' Shadow Weaver left me... for you. All of this happened because of you.
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-->'''Catra:''' Shadow Weaver left me... for you. ''you''. All of this happened because of you.''you''.
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* RunningGag: Scorpia mentions the force captain orientation again.
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* RunningGag: Scorpia mentions the force captain orientation Force Captain Orientation again.
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** Which is hilarious considering [[HypocriticalHumor her name is Catra, her childhood friend's name is Adora, she hangs around with Scorpia, and she spends all their time fighting people with names like Bow, Mermista and Perfuma]].
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** Which This is hilarious considering [[HypocriticalHumor her name is Catra, her childhood friend's name is Adora, she hangs around with Scorpia, and she spends all their her time fighting people with names like Bow, Mermista and Perfuma]].
