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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: At the conclusion of their duel, Chaos tries breaking Usagi's will by calling her no different to it, saying she claims to be above fighting but that she is a guardian proves she loves battle. Unfortunately for Chaos, Usagi rebuffs this with a ShutUpHannibal.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: At the conclusion of their duel, Chaos tries breaking Usagi's will by calling her no different to it, saying she claims to be above fighting but that she is a guardian proves she loves battle. Unfortunately for Chaos, Usagi rebuffs this with a ShutUpHannibal."ShutUpHannibal".
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* BittersweetEnding: Leaning heavily towards the "sweet" side. With Galaxia freed from Chaos' influence, everyone who was killed during the previous battles are revived, including the Sailor Guardians of the Solar System and Mamoru. However, the Guardians have to go their separate ways with Galaxia, Chibi Chibi, the Starlights and Kakyuu.
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* BittersweetEnding: Leaning heavily towards the "sweet" side. With Galaxia freed from Chaos' influence, everyone who was killed during the previous battles are revived, including the Sailor Guardians of the Solar System and Mamoru. However, the Guardians Guardians, along with Galaxia and Chibi Chibi, and the Starlights and Kakyuu, all have to go their separate ways with Galaxia, Chibi Chibi, the Starlights and Kakyuu.ways.
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* BittersweetEnding: Leaning heavily towards the "sweet" side. With Galaxia freed from Chaos' influence, everyone who was killed during the previous battles are revived, including the Sailor Guardians of the Solar System and Mamoru. However, Galaxia and Chibi Chibi, along with the Starlights and Kakyuu, have to return to their original parts of the galaxy.
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* BittersweetEnding: Leaning heavily towards the "sweet" side. With Galaxia freed from Chaos' influence, everyone who was killed during the previous battles are revived, including the Sailor Guardians of the Solar System and Mamoru. However, Galaxia and the Guardians have to go their separate ways with Galaxia, Chibi Chibi, along with the Starlights and Kakyuu, have to return to their original parts of the galaxy.Kakyuu.
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** The Starlights and their princess leave later on to return to their homeworld.
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** The Later, the Starlights and their princess leave later on to Kakyuu return to their homeworld. homeworld, but not before bidding farewell to the other Sailor Guardians.
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* DeathOfAChild: At one point during her battle with Usagi, Chaos slashes the sword of sealing, which transforms into Chibi Chibi Moon. While Usagi sadly cradles her, she dies in her arms and disappears.
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* DeathOfAChild: At one point during her battle with Usagi, Chaos slashes the sword Sword of sealing, Sealing, which transforms into Chibi Chibi Moon. While Usagi sadly cradles her, she dies in her arms and disappears.
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* IronicEcho: After Chao consumes Galaxia's body and turns into Sailor Chaos, she gives her own InTheNameOfTheMoon declaration.
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* IronicEcho: After Chao Chaos consumes Galaxia's body and turns into Sailor Chaos, she gives her own InTheNameOfTheMoon declaration.
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* BittersweetEnding: Leaning heavily towards the "sweet" side. With Galaxia freed from Chaos' influence, everyone who was killed during the previous battles are revived, including the Sailor Guardians of the Solar System, Chibi Chibi and Mamoru. However, Galaxia, along with Chibi Chibi, the Starlights and Kakyuu, have to return to their original parts of the galaxy.
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* BittersweetEnding: Leaning heavily towards the "sweet" side. With Galaxia freed from Chaos' influence, everyone who was killed during the previous battles are revived, including the Sailor Guardians of the Solar System, Chibi Chibi System and Mamoru. However, Galaxia, along with Galaxia and Chibi Chibi, along with the Starlights and Kakyuu, have to return to their original parts of the galaxy.
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* BittersweetEnding: Leaning heavily towards the "sweet" side. Though Chaos is freed once more, Usagi knows everything will be all right as long as everyone has hope and light within them. As the purified Galaxia, along with Chibi Chibi, the Starlights and Kakyuu, return to their original parts of the galaxy, Usagi's once again reunited with her friends and her long-lost prince.
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* BittersweetEnding: Leaning heavily towards the "sweet" side. Though Chaos is With Galaxia freed once more, Usagi knows everything will be all right as long as from Chaos' influence, everyone has hope who was killed during the previous battles are revived, including the Sailor Guardians of the Solar System, Chibi Chibi and light within them. As the purified Mamoru. However, Galaxia, along with Chibi Chibi, the Starlights and Kakyuu, have to return to their original parts of the galaxy, Usagi's once again reunited with her friends and her long-lost prince.galaxy.
