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* AccidentalMurder: Pyrrha is manipulated by Emerald to see more swords around Penny then there really were. This, in addition to her already frazzled mental state, causes her to use more of her polarity powers than necessary, which results in Penny being bifurcated by the wires attached to her swords.
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* AccidentalMurder: Pyrrha is manipulated by Emerald to see more swords around Penny then there really were.are. This, in addition to her already frazzled mental state, causes her to use more of her polarity powers than necessary, which results in Penny being bifurcated by the wires attached to her swords.
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* HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: Penny is torn in half with her own wires during the match, after Pyrrha is tricked by Emerald's illusion into using more of her polarity's power than necessary.
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* HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: Penny is torn in half with her own wires during the match, after Pyrrha is tricked by Emerald's illusion into using more of her polarity's polarity power than necessary.
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* HeroicBSOD: Pyrrha is in an even worse mental state than before after accidentally ripping Penny apart.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: The wires Penny uses to control her blades are what ends up tearing her apart.
* KillTheCutie: Penny, the sweetest, nicest person in Vale, becomes the first person on screen to die, and in a particularly brutal way.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: The wires Penny uses to control her blades are what ends up tearing her apart.
* KillTheCutie: Penny, the sweetest, nicest person in Vale, becomes the first person on screen to die, and in a particularly brutal way.
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* HeroicBSOD: Pyrrha is in an even worse mental state than before after accidentally ripping left paralysed with shock and horror when her power tears Penny apart.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: The wires Penny usesto control her blades are what ends up tearing her apart.
shreds.
* KillTheCutie:Penny, the sweetest, nicest person in Vale, becomes the first person on screen to die, Penny has a cheerful, bubbly personality and is always trying to be friendly and kind. Cinder manipulates her death and then gives a speech where she emphasises this point to portray a sweet, innocent looking girl that was actually a killer robot designed in a particularly brutal way.secret by General Ironwood for supposedly nefarious purposes.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: The look on Pyrrha's face immediately following Penny's dismemberment is a heartrendingly non-vocal example of this.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: The When Emerald's illusion disappears and Pyrrha realises she just ripped her opponent to shreds, a look on Pyrrha's face immediately following Penny's dismemberment is a heartrendingly non-vocal example of this.absolute horror and despair crosses her face, plunging her into a HeroicBSOD.
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* WhamEpisode: Cinder's plan finally goes off; Penny is killed, Roman Torchwick is freed, and chaos ensues in the Kingdom of Vale.
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%% * HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: What happens to Penny during the match, after Pyrrha is tricked by Emerald's illusion into using more of her polarity's power than necessary.
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%% * HoistByHisOwnPetard: The wires Penny uses to control her blades are what ends up tearing her apart.
%% * KillTheCutie: Penny, the sweetest, nicest person in Vale, becomes the first person on screen to die, and in a particularly brutal way.
%% * HeroicBSOD: Pyrrha is in an even worse mental state than before after accidentally ripping Penny apart.
%% * HoistByHisOwnPetard: The wires Penny uses to control her blades are what ends up tearing her apart.
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Roman and Neo sabotage the Atlesian military ships, while the Grimm and the White Fang begin their attack on Vale.
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Mercury fights Ruby to prevent her interfering with Penny and Pyrrha's fight. The tournament match ends in disaster and Cinder hijacks the airwaves with a grim message for the world's audience.
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Mercury fights Ruby to prevent her interfering with Penny and Pyrrha's fight. The tournament match ends in disaster disaster, and Cinder hijacks the airwaves with a grim message for the world's audience.
Roman and Neo sabotage the Atlesian militaryships ships, while the Grimm and the White Fang begin their attack on Vale.
Roman and Neo sabotage the Atlesian military
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[[Recap/{{RWBY}} Index]] | [[Recap/RWBYV3E1RoundOne 1]] | [[Recap/RWBYV3E2NewChallengers 2]] | [[Recap/RWBYV3E3ItsBrawlInTheFamily 3]] | [[Recap/RWBYV3E4LessonsLearned 4]] | [[Recap/RWBYV3E5NeverMissABeat 5]] | [[Recap/RWBYV3E6Fall 6]] | [[Recap/RWBYV3E7BeginningOfTheEnd 7]] | [[Recap/RWBYV3E8Destiny 8]] | '''9''' | [[Recap/RWBYV3E10BattleOfBeacon 10]] | [[Recap/RWBYV3E11HeroesAndMonsters 11]] | [[Recap/RWBYV3E12EndOfTheBeginning 12]]]]-]]]
[[Recap/{{RWBY}} Index]] | [[Recap/RWBYV3E1RoundOne 1]] | [[Recap/RWBYV3E2NewChallengers 2]] | [[Recap/RWBYV3E3ItsBrawlInTheFamily 3]] | [[Recap/RWBYV3E4LessonsLearned 4]] | [[Recap/RWBYV3E5NeverMissABeat 5]] | [[Recap/RWBYV3E6Fall 6]] | [[Recap/RWBYV3E7BeginningOfTheEnd 7]] | [[Recap/RWBYV3E8Destiny 8]] | '''9''' | [[Recap/RWBYV3E10BattleOfBeacon 10]] | [[Recap/RWBYV3E11HeroesAndMonsters 11]] | [[Recap/RWBYV3E12EndOfTheBeginning 12]]]]-]]]
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->Written by Miles Luna, Creator/MontyOum & Kerry Shawcross\\
Directed by Kerry Shawcross, Gray G. Haddock & Miles Luna
->''"This is what happens when you hand over your trust, your safety, your children, to men who claim to be our guardians, but are, in reality, nothing more than men."''
-->-- '''Cinder Fall'''
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->Written by Miles Luna, Creator/MontyOum & Kerry Shawcross\\
Directed by Kerry Shawcross, Gray G. Haddock & Miles Luna
->''"This is what happens when you hand over your trust, your safety, your children, to men who claim to be our guardians, but are, in reality, nothing more than men."''
-->-- '''Cinder Fall'''
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* TheyLookJustLikeEveryoneElse: Used as a point of rhetoric in Cinder's BreakingSpeech. She points out that Atlas has disguised a super-competent AttackDrone as a human girl and the public has no way of knowing who among them are robots as well.
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* TheyLookJustLikeEveryoneElse: Used as a point of rhetoric in Cinder's BreakingSpeech. She points out that Atlas has disguised a super-competent AttackDrone as a human girl and the public has no way of knowing who among them are robots as well.well.
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->''"Bring them to their knees!"''
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* KillTheCutie: Penny, the sweetest, nicest person in Vale, becomes the first person on screen to die, and in a particularly brutal way.
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The match between Pyrrha Nikos and Penny Polendina begins rapid fire with each of them having the other to a standstill. That is until Emerald uses her Semblence to mess with Pyrrha's head, making her think there is more danger than there is. Under the illusion, she accidentally mortally wounds Penny by bisecting her, revealing to everyone the latter's secret. Ruby, having been held off by Mercury, weeps for her fallen friend in anguish. At this moment, Cinder takes control of the live broadcast and decries the leaderships of the four kingdoms, enticing the Grimm even further than before leading to an all out attack. Atlas military has been sabotaged by Roman Torchwick, freshly freed by Neo, who lays waste to them. The White Fang release more Grimm into the city and attack themselves. "Bring them to their knees!", shouts Adam Taurus. It's all out war.
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