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-->''“If you ask me the Tenla Government should’ve had that whole route razed to the ground. Their ‘foolproof’ measure nearly endangered Ash and his friends! And they aren’t the first! Goodness, they’ve been messing up the past few years.” ''
-->--'''Renee'''
The ordeal at the Abandoned Route has passed, but the knowledge more people traversed it distresses Xavier and his assistants back in Zumi Town. The adventure continues as Ash reaches Fimbulvetr Town at last and has finally caught up with Gary. After some catching up and some introductions, Gary confides his loss to Heather to get Ash prepared for his upcoming battle.
-->--'''Renee'''
The ordeal at the Abandoned Route has passed, but the knowledge more people traversed it distresses Xavier and his assistants back in Zumi Town. The adventure continues as Ash reaches Fimbulvetr Town at last and has finally caught up with Gary. After some catching up and some introductions, Gary confides his loss to Heather to get Ash prepared for his upcoming battle.
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-->--'''Heather''', comforting Winter in the
In his chapter, Ash and
-->--'''Renee'''
The ordeal at the Abandoned Route has passed, but the knowledge more people traversed it distresses Xavier and his assistants back in Zumi Town. The adventure continues as Ash reaches Fimbulvetr Town at last and has finally caught up with Gary. After some catching up and some introductions, Gary confides his loss to Heather to get Ash prepared for his upcoming battle.
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* AffectionateNickname: Winter's is "Winny".
* BunnyEarsLawyer: A respected Gym Leader who defeated Gary with a little CherryTapping and the person Winter is raring to beat as part of her career. That said, she's got an extremely laid-back and quirky personality.
* DeadpanSnarker: Heather, full stop. Whereas Marina was a humorous and playful variant, Heather is full-on sarcastic.
-->'''Heather''': (''to Brock after his RunningGag'') Goodness, man, my students spit better lines than that.
* DullEyesOfUnhappiness: Winter is described as having eyes "bereft of their natural sheen" as a result of the trauma she went through in the previous chapter. Dawn talks her out of it.
* FriendshipMoment: Dawn and Winter share something of one with the former comforting the latter out of her slump.
* LargeHam: Heather again. This woman absolutely loves to chew the scenery. Her brand of style and humor also offsets the tension brought forth by the previous chapter.
* ToBeAMaster: Winter's desire is to be Tenla Region Champion.
* TheWorfEffect: A flashback is used to show how Heather beat Gary to validate her credentials as a Gym Leader. Let it be known Heather won using only two of her Pokemon in a 3-v-3 battle and only using three of her signature's moves.
* BunnyEarsLawyer: A respected Gym Leader who defeated Gary with a little CherryTapping and the person Winter is raring to beat as part of her career. That said, she's got an extremely laid-back and quirky personality.
* DeadpanSnarker: Heather, full stop. Whereas Marina was a humorous and playful variant, Heather is full-on sarcastic.
-->'''Heather''': (''to Brock after his RunningGag'') Goodness, man, my students spit better lines than that.
* DullEyesOfUnhappiness: Winter is described as having eyes "bereft of their natural sheen" as a result of the trauma she went through in the previous chapter. Dawn talks her out of it.
* FriendshipMoment: Dawn and Winter share something of one with the former comforting the latter out of her slump.
* LargeHam: Heather again. This woman absolutely loves to chew the scenery. Her brand of style and humor also offsets the tension brought forth by the previous chapter.
* ToBeAMaster: Winter's desire is to be Tenla Region Champion.
* TheWorfEffect: A flashback is used to show how Heather beat Gary to validate her credentials as a Gym Leader. Let it be known Heather won using only two of her Pokemon in a 3-v-3 battle and only using three of her signature's moves.
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* AffectionateNickname: BrickJoke: Winter was curious about the "Ashy-boy" nickname all the way back in Chapter 13. At the end of this one, she finally brings it up to Gary, leaving her Heather in stitches.
* CastFromHitPoints: This chapter introduces the move Glacial Break. It's an Ice-type variant of Flare Blitz.
* CoolBigSis: Heather may be a BunnyEarsLawyer, but she's also one heck of a sister. She saw through Winter proving on a brave front and followed to the bathroom to comfort her. She gives the lecture that's the top quote as well as offering her a Mega Earring and a Mega Stone for her Shiric.
* DoubleKnockout: In Ash's and Winter'sis "Winny".
* BunnyEarsLawyer: A respectedfirst Gym Leader who defeated Gary Battles with a little CherryTapping and the person Winter is raring to beat as part of her career. That said, she's got an extremely laid-back and quirky personality.
* DeadpanSnarker:Heather, full stop. Whereas Marina was a humorous and playful variant, all but their final two Pokemon stalemate with Heather's. [[LampshadeHanging Pointed out]] by their friends in the stand, of course.
* FinalExamBoss: Heather isfull-on sarcastic.
-->'''Heather''': (''to Brock after his RunningGag'') Goodness, man, my students spit better lines than that.
* DullEyesOfUnhappiness: Winter is described as having eyes "bereft of their natural sheen" as a result of the trauma she went through in the previous chapter. Dawn talks her out of it.
* FriendshipMoment: Dawn and Winter sharesomething of one with the former comforting the latter out of her slump.
* LargeHam:one.
-->'''Winter''': Heatheragain. This woman absolutely loves forces you to chew think on your toes and keep track of moves used in the scenery. Her brand heat of style battle, all while passive moves like Perish Song, Hail, and humor also offsets Power-Up Punch put your back against the tension brought forth by the previous chapter.
* ToBeAMaster: Winter's desire iswall. And that’s before she decides to be outright overpower you.
* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Winter ''really'' wanted to beat Heather to convince herself doing so was a stepping stone in her career towards becoming Tenla RegionChampion.
* TheWorfEffect: A flashback is usedChampion. When she ultimately loses, she spirals into a HeroicBSOD so hard that she [[StepfordSmiler covers up]] her disappointment in front of her friends. Excusing herself to show how the bathroom, she takes the moment to let it all out, convinced her lost proved she always was that weak.
* ICanStillFight: Ash's Gouzatile wanted to win to prove itself so much he's basically dragging himself towards the end of his fight with Shiric. He eventually collapses in spite of his determination.
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Said word-for-word by Heatherbeat Gary to validate Winter, the former trying to comfort the latter and make her credentials as a Gym Leader. Let it be known Heather won using only two realize how much she's progressed in spite of her Pokemon in a 3-v-3 battle and only using three of her signature's moves.flaws.
* CastFromHitPoints: This chapter introduces the move Glacial Break. It's an Ice-type variant of Flare Blitz.
* CoolBigSis: Heather may be a BunnyEarsLawyer, but she's also one heck of a sister. She saw through Winter proving on a brave front and followed to the bathroom to comfort her. She gives the lecture that's the top quote as well as offering her a Mega Earring and a Mega Stone for her Shiric.
* DoubleKnockout: In Ash's and Winter's
* BunnyEarsLawyer: A respected
* DeadpanSnarker:
* FinalExamBoss: Heather is
-->'''Heather''': (''to Brock after his RunningGag'') Goodness, man, my students spit better lines than that.
* DullEyesOfUnhappiness: Winter is described as having eyes "bereft of their natural sheen" as a result of the trauma she went through in the previous chapter. Dawn talks her out of it.
* FriendshipMoment: Dawn and Winter share
* LargeHam:
-->'''Winter''': Heather
* ToBeAMaster: Winter's desire is
* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Winter ''really'' wanted to beat Heather to convince herself doing so was a stepping stone in her career towards becoming Tenla Region
* TheWorfEffect: A flashback is used
* ICanStillFight: Ash's Gouzatile wanted to win to prove itself so much he's basically dragging himself towards the end of his fight with Shiric. He eventually collapses in spite of his determination.
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Said word-for-word by Heather
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* DullEyesOfHappiness: Winter is described as having eyes "bereft of their natural sheen" as a result of the trauma she went through in the previous chapter. Dawn talks her out of it.
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* DullEyesOfHappiness: DullEyesOfUnhappiness: Winter is described as having eyes "bereft of their natural sheen" as a result of the trauma she went through in the previous chapter. Dawn talks her out of it.
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-->''“If you ask me the Tenla Government should’ve had that whole route razed to the ground. Their ‘foolproof’ measure nearly endangered Ash and his friends! And they aren’t the first! Goodness, they’ve been messing up the past few years.” ''
-->--'''Renee'''
The ordeal at the Abandoned Route has passed, but the knowledge more people traversed it distresses Xavier and his assistants back in Zumi Town. The adventure continues as Ash reaches Fimbulvetr Town at last and has finally caught up with Gary. After some catching up and some introductions, Gary confides his loss to Heather to get Ash prepared for his upcoming battle.
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!!The chapter contains the following examples:
* AffectionateNickname: Winter's is "Winny".
* BunnyEarsLawyer: A respected Gym Leader who defeated Gary with a little CherryTapping and the person Winter is raring to beat as part of her career. That said, she's got an extremely laid-back and quirky personality.
* DeadpanSnarker: Heather, full stop. Whereas Marina was a humorous and playful variant, Heather is full-on sarcastic.
-->'''Heather''': (''to Brock after his RunningGag'') Goodness, man, my students spit better lines than that.
* DullEyesOfHappiness: Winter is described as having eyes "bereft of their natural sheen" as a result of the trauma she went through in the previous chapter. Dawn talks her out of it.
* FriendshipMoment: Dawn and Winter share something of one with the former comforting the latter out of her slump.
* LargeHam: Heather again. This woman absolutely loves to chew the scenery. Her brand of style and humor also offsets the tension brought forth by the previous chapter.
* ToBeAMaster: Winter's desire is to be Tenla Region Champion.
* TheWorfEffect: A flashback is used to show how Heather beat Gary to validate her credentials as a Gym Leader. Let it be known Heather won using only two of her Pokemon in a 3-v-3 battle and only using three of her signature's moves.
-->--'''Renee'''
The ordeal at the Abandoned Route has passed, but the knowledge more people traversed it distresses Xavier and his assistants back in Zumi Town. The adventure continues as Ash reaches Fimbulvetr Town at last and has finally caught up with Gary. After some catching up and some introductions, Gary confides his loss to Heather to get Ash prepared for his upcoming battle.
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!!The chapter contains the following examples:
* AffectionateNickname: Winter's is "Winny".
* BunnyEarsLawyer: A respected Gym Leader who defeated Gary with a little CherryTapping and the person Winter is raring to beat as part of her career. That said, she's got an extremely laid-back and quirky personality.
* DeadpanSnarker: Heather, full stop. Whereas Marina was a humorous and playful variant, Heather is full-on sarcastic.
-->'''Heather''': (''to Brock after his RunningGag'') Goodness, man, my students spit better lines than that.
* DullEyesOfHappiness: Winter is described as having eyes "bereft of their natural sheen" as a result of the trauma she went through in the previous chapter. Dawn talks her out of it.
* FriendshipMoment: Dawn and Winter share something of one with the former comforting the latter out of her slump.
* LargeHam: Heather again. This woman absolutely loves to chew the scenery. Her brand of style and humor also offsets the tension brought forth by the previous chapter.
* ToBeAMaster: Winter's desire is to be Tenla Region Champion.
* TheWorfEffect: A flashback is used to show how Heather beat Gary to validate her credentials as a Gym Leader. Let it be known Heather won using only two of her Pokemon in a 3-v-3 battle and only using three of her signature's moves.
