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* OldFashionedRowboatDate: Subverted; it's actually Reese and Shaw on surveillance.
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Dewicking per TRS.
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* NotThatTheresAnythingWrongWithThat: Shaw pegs Ian as a sociopath, then [[NotSoDifferent quickly gives this trope]].
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* NotThatTheresAnythingWrongWithThat: Shaw pegs Ian as a sociopath, then [[NotSoDifferent quickly gives this trope]].trope.
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* {{Adorkable}}:
** Finch stumbles a bit when telling Carter she's going to have to dress in something hot for her next Team Machine assignment.
** Let's not forget Shaw when she's virtually bursting with enthusiasm and adorkable pride to show Carter her own firearm, a Beretta Nano. (Carter does a nice bit of reciprocal geeking out.)
** Finch stumbles a bit when telling Carter she's going to have to dress in something hot for her next Team Machine assignment.
** Let's not forget Shaw when she's virtually bursting with enthusiasm and adorkable pride to show Carter her own firearm, a Beretta Nano. (Carter does a nice bit of reciprocal geeking out.)
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* SherlockScan: Ian is able to deduce that Carter has a severe nut allergy and that she was a detective and not just an officer when they meet in the club.
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* GirlsNightOutEpisode: Featuring TwoGirlsToATeam Carter and Shaw joined by frequent GuestStarPartyMember Zoe. Likewise, the main non-POI subplot focuses on [[DarkActionGirl Root]].
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* LadyKiller: It's the title of the episode! Subverted, though in so many ways.
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* LadyKiller: [[TheCasanova [=LadyKiller=]]]: It's the title of the episode! Subverted, though in so many ways.
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* DeathGlare: Reese's predicts that Shaw's permanent pissed-off expression might be an issue when snaring a LadyKiller.
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* DeathGlare: Reese's predicts that Shaw's permanent pissed-off expression might be an issue when snaring a LadyKiller.[[TheCasanova [=LadyKiller=]]].
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Root takes on Hersh, putting him on the defensive when he comes to kill her and with the aid of The Machine shoots him and is in a position to finish him off before The Machine intervenes.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler:Shaw, on overwatch with Reese while Carter is in Ian's apartment, foreshadows "The Crossing" when she notes Reese's attraction to Carter.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler:Shaw, Shaw, on overwatch with Reese while Carter is in Ian's apartment, foreshadows [[spoiler:foreshadows "The Crossing" when she notes Reese's attraction to Carter.]]
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** Let's not forget Shaw when she's virtually bursting with enthusiasm and adorkable pride to show Carter her own "nano" firearm. (Carter does a nice bit of reciprocal geeking out.)
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** Let's not forget Shaw when she's virtually bursting with enthusiasm and adorkable pride to show Carter her own "nano" firearm.firearm, a Beretta Nano. (Carter does a nice bit of reciprocal geeking out.)
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* FriendshipMoment: Between Shaw, Carter, and Zoe, as the girls share a drink and relax at the club, and another at the end of the episode with them sharing a drink in a bar.
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* AmazonBrigade: One consisting of Carter, Shaw and Zoe is assembled for the job - dressed to kill both figuratively and literally.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Finch stumbles a bit when telling Carter she's going to have to dress in something hot for her next Team Machine assignment.
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* {{Adorkable}}: {{Adorkable}}:
** Finch stumbles a bit when telling Carter she's going to have to dress in something hot for her next Team Machineassignment.assignment.
** Let's not forget Shaw when she's virtually bursting with enthusiasm and adorkable pride to show Carter her own "nano" firearm. (Carter does a nice bit of reciprocal geeking out.)
** Finch stumbles a bit when telling Carter she's going to have to dress in something hot for her next Team Machine
** Let's not forget Shaw when she's virtually bursting with enthusiasm and adorkable pride to show Carter her own "nano" firearm. (Carter does a nice bit of reciprocal geeking out.)
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* AnywhereButTheirLips: Despite kissing her on the mouth earlier during their date, Ian kisses her on the cheek at the end of the episode, [[SmoochOfVictory out of gratitude for helping him reunite with his son]].
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* AnywhereButTheirLips: Despite kissing her Carter on the mouth earlier during their date, Ian kisses her on the cheek at the end of the episode, [[SmoochOfVictory out of gratitude for helping him reunite with his son]].
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* StalkingIsLove: That's what Ian seems to thinks. Unfortunately, [[DebateAndSwitch that storyline got more or less dropped half-way through the episode]] so it never gets resolved in a satisfactory manner.
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* StalkingIsLove: That's what Ian seems to thinks.think. Unfortunately, [[DebateAndSwitch that storyline got more or less dropped half-way through the episode]] so it never gets resolved in a satisfactory manner.
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* StalkingIsLove: That's what Ian seems to thinks. Unfortunately, that storyline got more or less dropped half-way through the episode so it never gets resolved in a satisfactory manner.
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* StalkingIsLove: That's what Ian seems to thinks. Unfortunately, [[DebateAndSwitch that storyline got more or less dropped half-way through the episode episode]] so it never gets resolved in a satisfactory manner.
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Taser, not taster.
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* ActionGirl: Carter and Shaw bond over firearms. Zoe then produces a [[PinkMeansFeminine pink taster]] which Reese gave her as a present. What a guy!
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* ActionGirl: Carter and Shaw bond over firearms. Zoe then produces a [[PinkMeansFeminine pink taster]] taser]] which Reese gave her as a present. What a guy!
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Shaw, on overwatch with Reese while Carter is in Ian's apartment, foreshadows "The Crossing" when she comments:
-->You two have thing or something? 'Cause, I mean, I clocked you and Zoe right off the bat, but I never thought you and Carter.
-->You two have thing or something? 'Cause, I mean, I clocked you and Zoe right off the bat, but I never thought you and Carter.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Shaw, [[spoiler:Shaw, on overwatch with Reese while Carter is in Ian's apartment, foreshadows "The Crossing" when she comments:
-->You two have thing or something? 'Cause, I mean, I clocked you and Zoe right off the bat, but I never thought you andnotes Reese's attraction to Carter.]]
-->You two have thing or something? 'Cause, I mean, I clocked you and Zoe right off the bat, but I never thought you and
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* ThouShaltNotKill: The Machine stops Root from killing Hersh, much to her bemusement. "Really? [[AssholeVictim Even him?]] Well you're the boss."
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* ThouShaltNotKill: The Machine stops Root from killing Hersh, much to her bemusement. "Really? [[AssholeVictim Even him?]] Well this guy?]] [The Machine beeps an affirmative] I guess you're the boss."
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* ActionGirl: Carter and Shaw bond over firearms. Zoe then produces a [[PinkMeansFeminine taster]] which Reese gave her as a present.
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* ActionGirl: Carter and Shaw bond over firearms. Zoe then produces a [[PinkMeansFeminine pink taster]] which Reese gave her as a present.present. What a guy!
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* DeathGlare: Reese's predicts that Shaw's permanent pissed-off expression might be an issue with snaring a LadyKiller.
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* DeathGlare: Reese's predicts that Shaw's permanent pissed-off expression might be an issue with when snaring a LadyKiller.
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* DeathGlare: Reese's predicts that Shaw's permanent pissed-off expression might be an issue with snarking a LadyKiller.
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* DeathGlare: Reese's predicts that Shaw's permanent pissed-off expression might be an issue with snarking snaring a LadyKiller.
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