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* TakeThat: Lori points out that the fanfic shares its name with a Music/TaylorSwift song, but says that anyone who sings it is going to get smacked. Everyone else all agrees.
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* TakeThat: Lori points out that the fanfic shares its name with a Music/TaylorSwift song, but says that anyone who sings it is going to get smacked. Everyone else all agrees.
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* TakeThat: Lincoln points out that the fanfic shares its name with a Music/TaylorSwift song, but says that anyone who sings it is going to get smacked. His sisters all agree.
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* TakeThat: Lincoln Lori points out that the fanfic shares its name with a Music/TaylorSwift song, but says that anyone who sings it is going to get smacked. His sisters Everyone else all agree.agrees.
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* ADateWithRosiePalms: Referenced when Lori and Lynn snicker at fanfic Lynn's line "Even I wouldn't want to play with myself now."
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* EyeScream: Lincoln in the fanfic throws ash into Lynn's eyes and then later pokes her in both eyes with his fingers.
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* EyeScream: Lincoln in the fanfic [[AHandfulForAnEye throws ash into Lynn's eyes eyes]] and then later pokes her in both eyes with his fingers.
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-->'''Lynn''': "What can I say? I'm a rudo."
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-->'''Lynn''': "What can I say? I'm a rudo.[[{{Heel}} rudo]]."
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** Lincoln uses "{{Aesop}}" as a noun, meaning he made a reference to either Wiki/ThisVeryWiki or ''Literature/AesopsFables''.
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** Lincoln uses "{{Aesop}}" as a noun, meaning he made a reference to either Wiki/ThisVeryWiki Website/ThisVeryWiki or ''Literature/AesopsFables''.
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* NotSoDifferent: In response to the aforementioned EyeScream:
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: In response to the aforementioned EyeScream:
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-->'''Real Lynn''': "Hey, I’ll have you know that [[SmarterThanYouLook my GPA is a solid B-minus.]]"
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** Lincoln uses "{{Aesop}}" as a noun, meaning he made a reference to either ThisVeryWiki or ''Literature/AesopsFables''.
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** Lincoln uses "{{Aesop}}" as a noun, meaning he made a reference to either ThisVeryWiki Wiki/ThisVeryWiki or ''Literature/AesopsFables''.
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The fanfic begins with Fic!Lincoln trying to draw manga and the grammar is pretty bad, but English isn't the author's first language (he's Polish) so Lisa decides to let it slide. Fic!Lynn enters, spots Fic!Lincoln's manga, critiques it, and decides to use it to wrap her subs in.
The fanfic versions of the siblings set off for school... except for Fic!Lori, who's inexplicably graduated, and at recess, Fic!Lincoln sees his manga in the trash. He runs into Fic!Lynn's class (because apparently they go to the same school now) and tells her off and "drowns" her homework in a conveniently-placed bucket of water.
When they arrive home from school, they're both still mad: Fic!Lincoln about the drawings and Fic!Lynn about getting an F as the result of her destroyed homework. They then start wrestling. Fic!Leni wonders if she should intervene, but Fic!Lori thinks they should follow the "Sister Fight Protocol" seen in "Brawl of the Family". This prompts the real Lincoln to start tearing the Sister Fight Protocol's logic apart, to the point where even the author himself gives up due to "doctor's orders".
Fic!Lynn and Fic!Lincoln continue to fight and she goes to leave, but he comes back and they start using impromptu weapons: fireplace ash, a shovel, and a photo. Fic!Luan enters and makes a nonsensical joke. The fight continues, and then the real Lincoln and Lynn start arguing, only for Lori and Lana to interrupt them and (in Lori's case) sternly tell them not to act like their fanfiction counterparts.
In the fanfic, the fight continues and Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn pay no attention to Fic!Luan. Fic!Luna also tries to intervene, but the two fighting siblings rudely berate her for "butting in" and send her falling downstairs. Meanwhile, Fic!Luan is still in pain and Fic!Lynn and Fic!Lincoln, still fighting, have inadvertently set some chocolate on fire, much to the dismay of Fic!Lana. Fic!Leni eventually sends the fighting siblings outside so they're less destructive.
Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn continue to fight outside, much to the ire of Fic!Mr. Grouse and Fic!Lucy, who ends up being used as a human shield. An energy drink van drives past and a box of drinks falls out, so Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn drink them to get stronger. Meanwhile, the sisters are watching them and decide it's finally time to intervene, so Fic!Lisa squirts them with sleeping potion.
The fanfic versions of the siblings set off for school... except for Fic!Lori, who's inexplicably graduated, and at recess, Fic!Lincoln sees his manga in the trash. He runs into Fic!Lynn's class (because apparently they go to the same school now) and tells her off and "drowns" her homework in a conveniently-placed bucket of water.
When they arrive home from school, they're both still mad: Fic!Lincoln about the drawings and Fic!Lynn about getting an F as the result of her destroyed homework. They then start wrestling. Fic!Leni wonders if she should intervene, but Fic!Lori thinks they should follow the "Sister Fight Protocol" seen in "Brawl of the Family". This prompts the real Lincoln to start tearing the Sister Fight Protocol's logic apart, to the point where even the author himself gives up due to "doctor's orders".
Fic!Lynn and Fic!Lincoln continue to fight and she goes to leave, but he comes back and they start using impromptu weapons: fireplace ash, a shovel, and a photo. Fic!Luan enters and makes a nonsensical joke. The fight continues, and then the real Lincoln and Lynn start arguing, only for Lori and Lana to interrupt them and (in Lori's case) sternly tell them not to act like their fanfiction counterparts.
In the fanfic, the fight continues and Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn pay no attention to Fic!Luan. Fic!Luna also tries to intervene, but the two fighting siblings rudely berate her for "butting in" and send her falling downstairs. Meanwhile, Fic!Luan is still in pain and Fic!Lynn and Fic!Lincoln, still fighting, have inadvertently set some chocolate on fire, much to the dismay of Fic!Lana. Fic!Leni eventually sends the fighting siblings outside so they're less destructive.
Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn continue to fight outside, much to the ire of Fic!Mr. Grouse and Fic!Lucy, who ends up being used as a human shield. An energy drink van drives past and a box of drinks falls out, so Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn drink them to get stronger. Meanwhile, the sisters are watching them and decide it's finally time to intervene, so Fic!Lisa squirts them with sleeping potion.
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The fanfic begins with Fic!Lincoln Lincoln trying to draw manga and the grammar is pretty bad, but English isn't the author's first language (he's Polish) so Lisa decides to let it slide. Fic!Lynn Lynn enters, spots Fic!Lincoln's Lincoln's manga, critiques it, and decides to use it to wrap her subs in.
The fanfic versions of the siblings set off for school... except forFic!Lori, Lori, who's inexplicably graduated, and at recess, Fic!Lincoln Lincoln sees his manga in the trash. He runs into Fic!Lynn's Lynn's class (because apparently they go to the same school now) and tells her off and "drowns" her homework in a conveniently-placed bucket of water.
When they arrive home from school, they're both still mad:Fic!Lincoln Lincoln about the drawings and Fic!Lynn Lynn about getting an F as the result of her destroyed homework. They then start wrestling. Fic!Leni Leni wonders if she should intervene, but Fic!Lori Lori thinks they should follow the "Sister Fight Protocol" seen in "Brawl of the Family". This prompts the real Lincoln to start tearing the Sister Fight Protocol's logic apart, to the point where even the author himself gives up due to "doctor's orders".
Fic!Lynn Fanfic Lynn and Fic!Lincoln Lincoln continue to fight and she goes to leave, but he comes back and they start using impromptu weapons: fireplace ash, a shovel, and a photo. Fic!Luan Luan enters and makes a nonsensical joke. The fight continues, and then the real Lincoln and Lynn start arguing, only for Lori and Lana to interrupt them and (in Lori's case) sternly tell them not to act like their fanfiction counterparts.
In the fanfic, the fight continues andFic!Lincoln Lincoln and Fic!Lynn Lynn pay no attention to Fic!Luan. Fic!Luna Luan. Luna also tries to intervene, but the two fighting siblings rudely berate her for "butting in" and send her falling downstairs. Meanwhile, Fic!Luan Luan is still in pain and Fic!Lynn Lynn and Fic!Lincoln, Lincoln, still fighting, have inadvertently set some chocolate on fire, much to the dismay of Fic!Lana. Fic!Leni Lana. Leni eventually sends the fighting siblings outside so they're less destructive.
Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln and Fic!Lynn Lynn continue to fight outside, much to the ire of Fic!Mr. Mr. Grouse and Fic!Lucy, Lucy, who ends up being used as a human shield. An energy drink van drives past and a box of drinks falls out, so Fic!Lincoln Lincoln and Fic!Lynn Lynn drink them to get stronger. Meanwhile, the sisters are watching them and decide it's finally time to intervene, so Fic!Lisa Lisa squirts them with sleeping potion.
The fanfic versions of the siblings set off for school... except for
When they arrive home from school, they're both still mad:
In the fanfic, the fight continues and
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Fic!Lynn and ''especially'' Fic!Lincoln are way more petty and violent than in canon.
* BigNo: Fic!Lynn shouts, "NOOOOOOO!" with seven "O"s after Fic!Lincoln destroys her homework.
* BorrowedCatchphrase: Fic!Lucy says, "literally" even though that's usually Lori's word.
* ButYouWereThereAndYouAndYou: Fic!Lincoln bases the girls in his manga upon his sisters.
* BigNo: Fic!Lynn shouts, "NOOOOOOO!" with seven "O"s after Fic!Lincoln destroys her homework.
* BorrowedCatchphrase: Fic!Lucy says, "literally" even though that's usually Lori's word.
* ButYouWereThereAndYouAndYou: Fic!Lincoln bases the girls in his manga upon his sisters.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Fic!Lynn Fanfic Lynn and ''especially'' Fic!Lincoln Lincoln are way more petty and violent than in canon.
* BigNo:Fic!Lynn Fanfic Lynn shouts, "NOOOOOOO!" with seven "O"s after Fic!Lincoln Lincoln destroys her homework.
* BorrowedCatchphrase:Fic!Lucy Fanfic Lucy says, "literally" even though that's usually Lori's word.
* ButYouWereThereAndYouAndYou:Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln bases the girls in his manga upon his sisters.
* BigNo:
* BorrowedCatchphrase:
* ButYouWereThereAndYouAndYou:
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* ADateWithRosiePalms: Referenced when Lori and Lynn snicker at Fic!Lynn's line "Even I wouldn't want to play with myself now."
* DoesNotLikeSpam: Fic!Lincoln thinks Fic!Lynn's subs are disgusting.
* DownerEnding: The fanfic ends with Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn in the hospital, still holding their grudges, and being severely punished for it, while their sisters sit sadly in Lori and Leni's room. The actual episode, however, ends much more sweetly, with Lincoln and Lynn promising not to fight as intensely as they did in the fanfic.
* DoesNotLikeSpam: Fic!Lincoln thinks Fic!Lynn's subs are disgusting.
* DownerEnding: The fanfic ends with Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn in the hospital, still holding their grudges, and being severely punished for it, while their sisters sit sadly in Lori and Leni's room. The actual episode, however, ends much more sweetly, with Lincoln and Lynn promising not to fight as intensely as they did in the fanfic.
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* ADateWithRosiePalms: Referenced when Lori and Lynn snicker at Fic!Lynn's fanfic Lynn's line "Even I wouldn't want to play with myself now."
* DoesNotLikeSpam:Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln thinks Fic!Lynn's Lynn's subs are disgusting.
* DownerEnding: The fanfic ends withFic!Lincoln Lincoln and Fic!Lynn Lynn in the hospital, still holding their grudges, and being severely punished for it, while their sisters sit sadly in Lori and Leni's room. The actual episode, however, ends much more sweetly, with Lincoln and Lynn promising not to fight as intensely as they did in the fanfic.
* DoesNotLikeSpam:
* DownerEnding: The fanfic ends with
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* EyeScream: Fic!Lincoln throws ash into Fic!Lynn's eyes and then later pokes her in both eyes with his fingers.
* {{Facepalm}}: Lori facepalms when Fic!Lynn and Fic!Lincoln continue to argue in the hospital.
* GoodNameForARockBand: When Fic!Mr. Grouse says, "Moralocalypse!" about his neighbours' fight, Lana thinks that sounds like a good name for a band.
* GroinAttack: Fic!Lynn kicks Fic!Lincoln between his legs.
* {{Facepalm}}: Lori facepalms when Fic!Lynn and Fic!Lincoln continue to argue in the hospital.
* GoodNameForARockBand: When Fic!Mr. Grouse says, "Moralocalypse!" about his neighbours' fight, Lana thinks that sounds like a good name for a band.
* GroinAttack: Fic!Lynn kicks Fic!Lincoln between his legs.
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* EyeScream: Fic!Lincoln Lincoln in the fanfic throws ash into Fic!Lynn's Lynn's eyes and then later pokes her in both eyes with his fingers.
* {{Facepalm}}: Lori facepalms whenFic!Lynn fanfic Lynn and Fic!Lincoln Lincoln continue to argue in the hospital.
* GoodNameForARockBand: WhenFic!Mr.the fanfic version of Mr. Grouse says, "Moralocalypse!" about his neighbours' fight, Lana thinks that sounds like a good name for a band.
* GroinAttack:Fic!Lynn Fanfic Lynn kicks Fic!Lincoln Lincoln between his legs.
* {{Facepalm}}: Lori facepalms when
* GoodNameForARockBand: When
* GroinAttack:
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* {{Hammerspace}}: Fic!Lincoln produces a bucket of water seemingly out of nowhere to destroy Fic!Lynn's homework. Later, he produces Fic!Lynn's tennis ball launcher out of nowhere.
* HehHehYouSaidX: When Fic!Lynn says, "Even I wouldn't want to play with myself now," Lori and Lynn snicker.
* HumanShield: Fic!Lynn ends up using Fic!Lucy as a shield, much to the shock of the real Lynn.
* HehHehYouSaidX: When Fic!Lynn says, "Even I wouldn't want to play with myself now," Lori and Lynn snicker.
* HumanShield: Fic!Lynn ends up using Fic!Lucy as a shield, much to the shock of the real Lynn.
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* {{Hammerspace}}: Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln produces a bucket of water seemingly out of nowhere to destroy Fic!Lynn's Lynn's homework. Later, he produces Fic!Lynn's Lynn's tennis ball launcher out of nowhere.
* HehHehYouSaidX: WhenFic!Lynn fanfic Lynn says, "Even I wouldn't want to play with myself now," Lori and Lynn snicker.
* HumanShield:Fic!Lynn Fanfic Lynn ends up using Fic!Lucy Lucy as a shield, much to the shock of the real Lynn.
* HehHehYouSaidX: When
* HumanShield:
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* IHaveNoSon: Fic!Lynn declares she has no brother in the hospital.
* InstantHumiliationJustAddYouTube: Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn's fight ends up online, embarrassing them.
* LostFoodGrievance: Fic!Lana loudly laments running out of chocolate when her sparring siblings set it on fire.
* InstantHumiliationJustAddYouTube: Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn's fight ends up online, embarrassing them.
* LostFoodGrievance: Fic!Lana loudly laments running out of chocolate when her sparring siblings set it on fire.
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* IHaveNoSon: Fic!Lynn Fanfic Lynn declares she has no brother in the hospital.
* InstantHumiliationJustAddYouTube:Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln and Fic!Lynn's Lynn's fight ends up online, embarrassing them.
* LostFoodGrievance:Fic!Lana Fanfic Lana loudly laments running out of chocolate when her sparring siblings set it on fire.
* InstantHumiliationJustAddYouTube:
* LostFoodGrievance:
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: After Fic!Lincoln hits Fic!Lynn with a vase, she says, "You... just... made... me... mad!!".
* RubberMan: Fic!Lincoln somehow punches Fic!Lynn in the stomach while she's sitting on his back.
* RubberMan: Fic!Lincoln somehow punches Fic!Lynn in the stomach while she's sitting on his back.
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: After Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln hits Fic!Lynn Lynn with a vase, she says, "You... just... made... me... mad!!".
* RubberMan:Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln somehow punches Fic!Lynn Lynn in the stomach while she's sitting on his back.
* RubberMan:
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* ShakingTheRump: When Fic!Lincoln insults Fic!Lynn for having a big butt, the real Lynn states that she's proud of her big butt and begins shaking it, much to the disgust of all her siblings except Lana.
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* ShakingTheRump: When Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln insults Fic!Lynn Lynn for having a big butt, the real Lynn states that she's proud of her big butt and begins shaking it, much to the disgust of all her siblings except Lana.
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** Lisa (ironically) calls Fic!Lincoln "[[Literature/SherlockHolmes Holmes]]".
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** Lisa (ironically) calls Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln "[[Literature/SherlockHolmes Holmes]]".
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* StaircaseTumble: Fic!Luna is sent falling downstairs from Fic!Lynn's kick and ends up getting "damaged".
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* StaircaseTumble: Fic!Luna Fanfic Luna is sent falling downstairs from Fic!Lynn's Lynn's kick and ends up getting "damaged".
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* ToiletHumour: Fic!Lincoln insults Fic!Lynn for her big butt. The real Lynn says she's proud of her butt and shakes it, which grosses out all her siblings except for Lana who wishes to one day have a butt like Lynn's.
* YouFightLikeACow: At one point, during the fight, Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn exchange insults.
-->'''Fic!Lynn''': "Talentless sucker!"
-->'''Fic!Lincoln''': "Dumb cow!"
-->'''Fic!Lynn''': "Lily makes better drawings than you."
-->'''Fic!Lincoln''': "I learn from my mistakes and you don't learn [well] enough to get [a] C."
* YouFightLikeACow: At one point, during the fight, Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn exchange insults.
-->'''Fic!Lynn''': "Talentless sucker!"
-->'''Fic!Lincoln''': "Dumb cow!"
-->'''Fic!Lynn''': "Lily makes better drawings than you."
-->'''Fic!Lincoln''': "I learn from my mistakes and you don't learn [well] enough to get [a] C."
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* ToiletHumour: Fic!Lincoln Lincoln in the story insults Fic!Lynn Lynn for her big butt. The real Lynn says she's proud of her butt and shakes it, which grosses out all her siblings except for Lana who wishes to one day have a butt like Lynn's.
* YouFightLikeACow: At one point, during the fight,Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln and Fic!Lynn Lynn exchange insults.
-->'''Fic!Lynn''': -->'''Lynn''': "Talentless sucker!"
-->'''Fic!Lincoln''': -->'''Lincoln''': "Dumb cow!"
-->'''Fic!Lynn''': -->'''Lynn''': "Lily makes better drawings than you."
-->'''Fic!Lincoln''': -->'''Lincoln''': "I learn from my mistakes and you don't learn [well] enough to get [a] C."
* YouFightLikeACow: At one point, during the fight,
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The fanfic begins with Lincoln trying to draw manga and the grammar is pretty bad, but English isn't the author's first language (he's Polish) so Lisa decides to let it slide. Fic!Lynn enters, spots Fic!Lincoln's manga, critiques it, and decides to use it to wrap her subs in.
The fanfic versions of the siblings set off for school... except for Lori, who's inexplicably graduated, and at recess, Fic!Lincoln sees his manga in the trash. He runs into Fic!Lynn's class (because apparently they go to the same school now) and tells her off and "drowns" her homework in a conveniently-placed bucket of water.
The fanfic versions of the siblings set off for school... except for Lori, who's inexplicably graduated, and at recess, Fic!Lincoln sees his manga in the trash. He runs into Fic!Lynn's class (because apparently they go to the same school now) and tells her off and "drowns" her homework in a conveniently-placed bucket of water.
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The fanfic begins with Lincoln Fic!Lincoln trying to draw manga and the grammar is pretty bad, but English isn't the author's first language (he's Polish) so Lisa decides to let it slide. Fic!Lynn enters, spots Fic!Lincoln's manga, critiques it, and decides to use it to wrap her subs in.
The fanfic versions of the siblings set off for school... except forLori, Fic!Lori, who's inexplicably graduated, and at recess, Fic!Lincoln sees his manga in the trash. He runs into Fic!Lynn's class (because apparently they go to the same school now) and tells her off and "drowns" her homework in a conveniently-placed bucket of water.
The fanfic versions of the siblings set off for school... except for
* NotSoDifferent: In response to the aforementioned EyeScream:
-->'''Lynn''': "Eye gouging? Sheesh, Lincoln, you're just as much of a rudo as I am."
-->'''Lynn''': "Eye gouging? Sheesh, Lincoln, you're just as much of a rudo as I am."
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: During the long fight, Fic!Lynn says, "You... just... made... me... mad!!".
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: During the long fight, After Fic!Lincoln hits Fic!Lynn with a vase, she says, "You... just... made... me... mad!!".
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It's time for another episode of Peeking Through the Fourth Wall. This time, Lincoln and Lisa have brought along Lori, Lynn, and Lana. They're going to be reading "Bad Blood"... but ''no one'' is permitted to make any references.
The fanfic begins with Lincoln trying to draw manga and the grammar is pretty bad, but English isn't the author's first language (he's Polish) so Lisa decides to let it slide. Fic!Lynn enters, spots Fic!Lincoln's manga, critiques it, and decides to use it to wrap her subs in.
The fanfic versions of the siblings set off for school... except for Lori, who's inexplicably graduated, and at recess, Fic!Lincoln sees his manga in the trash. He runs into Fic!Lynn's class (because apparently they go to the same school now) and tells her off and "drowns" her homework in a conveniently-placed bucket of water.
When they arrive home from school, they're both still mad: Fic!Lincoln about the drawings and Fic!Lynn about getting an F as the result of her destroyed homework. They then start wrestling. Fic!Leni wonders if she should intervene, but Fic!Lori thinks they should follow the "Sister Fight Protocol" seen in "Brawl of the Family". This prompts the real Lincoln to start tearing the Sister Fight Protocol's logic apart, to the point where even the author himself gives up due to "doctor's orders".
Fic!Lynn and Fic!Lincoln continue to fight and she goes to leave, but he comes back and they start using impromptu weapons: fireplace ash, a shovel, and a photo. Fic!Luan enters and makes a nonsensical joke. The fight continues, and then the real Lincoln and Lynn start arguing, only for Lori and Lana to interrupt them and (in Lori's case) sternly tell them not to act like their fanfiction counterparts.
In the fanfic, the fight continues and Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn pay no attention to Fic!Luan. Fic!Luna also tries to intervene, but the two fighting siblings rudely berate her for "butting in" and send her falling downstairs. Meanwhile, Fic!Luan is still in pain and Fic!Lynn and Fic!Lincoln, still fighting, have inadvertently set some chocolate on fire, much to the dismay of Fic!Lana. Fic!Leni eventually sends the fighting siblings outside so they're less destructive.
Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn continue to fight outside, much to the ire of Fic!Mr. Grouse and Fic!Lucy, who ends up being used as a human shield. An energy drink van drives past and a box of drinks falls out, so Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn drink them to get stronger. Meanwhile, the sisters are watching them and decide it's finally time to intervene, so Fic!Lisa squirts them with sleeping potion.
They end up being taken to the hospital where their parents chew them out, but they're ''still'' mad at each other. Then, the rest of their sisters wax philosophical about it. The end.
On the couch, Lincoln and Lynn promise that, although fighting is what brothers and sisters do, they will never have a fight that extreme.
!! This episode provides examples of
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Fic!Lynn and ''especially'' Fic!Lincoln are way more petty and violent than in canon.
* BigNo: Fic!Lynn shouts, "NOOOOOOO!" with seven "O"s after Fic!Lincoln destroys her homework.
* BorrowedCatchphrase: Fic!Lucy says, "literally" even though that's usually Lori's word.
* ButYouWereThereAndYouAndYou: Fic!Lincoln bases the girls in his manga upon his sisters.
* ContinuityNod:
** Lincoln wonders what the heck his sisters were thinking during "Brawl in the Family", making up a new protocol and Lori cooling off in his room.
** Lincoln references Lynn fighting with Lucy, which happened in "Space Invader".
* ADateWithRosiePalms: Referenced when Lori and Lynn snicker at Fic!Lynn's line "Even I wouldn't want to play with myself now."
* DoesNotLikeSpam: Fic!Lincoln thinks Fic!Lynn's subs are disgusting.
* DownerEnding: The fanfic ends with Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn in the hospital, still holding their grudges, and being severely punished for it, while their sisters sit sadly in Lori and Leni's room. The actual episode, however, ends much more sweetly, with Lincoln and Lynn promising not to fight as intensely as they did in the fanfic.
* EveryoneHasStandards: Lynn admits that she may fight dirty, but she'd never use one of her younger sisters as a human shield.
* EyeScream: Fic!Lincoln throws ash into Fic!Lynn's eyes and then later pokes her in both eyes with his fingers.
* {{Facepalm}}: Lori facepalms when Fic!Lynn and Fic!Lincoln continue to argue in the hospital.
* GoodNameForARockBand: When Fic!Mr. Grouse says, "Moralocalypse!" about his neighbours' fight, Lana thinks that sounds like a good name for a band.
* GroinAttack: Fic!Lynn kicks Fic!Lincoln between his legs.
-->'''Lincoln''': "Really, Lynn? A nut shot right at the beginning of the fight?"
-->'''Lynn''': "What can I say? I'm a rudo."
* {{Hammerspace}}: Fic!Lincoln produces a bucket of water seemingly out of nowhere to destroy Fic!Lynn's homework. Later, he produces Fic!Lynn's tennis ball launcher out of nowhere.
* HehHehYouSaidX: When Fic!Lynn says, "Even I wouldn't want to play with myself now," Lori and Lynn snicker.
* HumanShield: Fic!Lynn ends up using Fic!Lucy as a shield, much to the shock of the real Lynn.
* IdiotBall: Referenced when Lisa and even Lincoln himself point out how dumb he was in "Brawl in the Family" thinking that telling Lori Leni compared her looks to Aunt Ruth would make her stop being mad at her, then when Lincoln points out the ludicrousness of Lori cooling off in his room when she can drive.
* IHaveNoSon: Fic!Lynn declares she has no brother in the hospital.
* InstantHumiliationJustAddYouTube: Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn's fight ends up online, embarrassing them.
* LostFoodGrievance: Fic!Lana loudly laments running out of chocolate when her sparring siblings set it on fire.
* NoYou:
** When Lisa claims that it's "laughable" that Lynn would own a book, Lynn says, "Your ''face'' is laughable".
** When Lisa asserts that the energy that energy drinks give Lynn is just the Placebo effect, Lynn says, "You're a Placebo effect!".
* OutOfCharacter:
** While Lincoln and Lynn getting into a physical fight isn't strictly out of character (the Loud siblings have cartoony BigBallOfViolence type fights a lot), they wouldn't fight as roughly or as long as they did in the fanfic.
** Lori and Leni (''especially'' Lori) would probably intervene if Lincoln and Lynn were being as violent as they were in the fanfic, "Brawl in the Family" notwithstanding), rather than just stand there like they did in the fanfic.
* PassThePopcorn: Discussed when Lynn mentions that if Mr. Grouse saw her and Lincoln fighting, he'd probably watch them with a bucket of popcorn.
* PunctuatedForEmphasis: During the long fight, Fic!Lynn says, "You... just... made... me... mad!!".
* RubberMan: Fic!Lincoln somehow punches Fic!Lynn in the stomach while she's sitting on his back.
* SayingSoundEffectsOutLoud: The driver of the energy drink van literally says, "Sigh, kids these days".
* ShakingTheRump: When Fic!Lincoln insults Fic!Lynn for having a big butt, the real Lynn states that she's proud of her big butt and begins shaking it, much to the disgust of all her siblings except Lana.
* ShoutOut:
** Lisa (ironically) calls Fic!Lincoln "[[Literature/SherlockHolmes Holmes]]".
** When the author pretends to break down as part of his diss at "Brawl in the Family", he sings "Daisy, Daisy".
** Lincoln uses "{{Aesop}}" as a noun, meaning he made a reference to either ThisVeryWiki or ''Literature/AesopsFables''.
* StaircaseTumble: Fic!Luna is sent falling downstairs from Fic!Lynn's kick and ends up getting "damaged".
* TakeThat: Lincoln points out that the fanfic shares its name with a Music/TaylorSwift song, but says that anyone who sings it is going to get smacked. His sisters all agree.
* ToiletHumour: Fic!Lincoln insults Fic!Lynn for her big butt. The real Lynn says she's proud of her butt and shakes it, which grosses out all her siblings except for Lana who wishes to one day have a butt like Lynn's.
* YouFightLikeACow: At one point, during the fight, Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn exchange insults.
-->'''Fic!Lynn''': "Talentless sucker!"
-->'''Fic!Lincoln''': "Dumb cow!"
-->'''Fic!Lynn''': "Lily makes better drawings than you."
-->'''Fic!Lincoln''': "I learn from my mistakes and you don't learn [well] enough to get [a] C."
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The fanfic begins with Lincoln trying to draw manga and the grammar is pretty bad, but English isn't the author's first language (he's Polish) so Lisa decides to let it slide. Fic!Lynn enters, spots Fic!Lincoln's manga, critiques it, and decides to use it to wrap her subs in.
The fanfic versions of the siblings set off for school... except for Lori, who's inexplicably graduated, and at recess, Fic!Lincoln sees his manga in the trash. He runs into Fic!Lynn's class (because apparently they go to the same school now) and tells her off and "drowns" her homework in a conveniently-placed bucket of water.
When they arrive home from school, they're both still mad: Fic!Lincoln about the drawings and Fic!Lynn about getting an F as the result of her destroyed homework. They then start wrestling. Fic!Leni wonders if she should intervene, but Fic!Lori thinks they should follow the "Sister Fight Protocol" seen in "Brawl of the Family". This prompts the real Lincoln to start tearing the Sister Fight Protocol's logic apart, to the point where even the author himself gives up due to "doctor's orders".
Fic!Lynn and Fic!Lincoln continue to fight and she goes to leave, but he comes back and they start using impromptu weapons: fireplace ash, a shovel, and a photo. Fic!Luan enters and makes a nonsensical joke. The fight continues, and then the real Lincoln and Lynn start arguing, only for Lori and Lana to interrupt them and (in Lori's case) sternly tell them not to act like their fanfiction counterparts.
In the fanfic, the fight continues and Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn pay no attention to Fic!Luan. Fic!Luna also tries to intervene, but the two fighting siblings rudely berate her for "butting in" and send her falling downstairs. Meanwhile, Fic!Luan is still in pain and Fic!Lynn and Fic!Lincoln, still fighting, have inadvertently set some chocolate on fire, much to the dismay of Fic!Lana. Fic!Leni eventually sends the fighting siblings outside so they're less destructive.
Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn continue to fight outside, much to the ire of Fic!Mr. Grouse and Fic!Lucy, who ends up being used as a human shield. An energy drink van drives past and a box of drinks falls out, so Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn drink them to get stronger. Meanwhile, the sisters are watching them and decide it's finally time to intervene, so Fic!Lisa squirts them with sleeping potion.
They end up being taken to the hospital where their parents chew them out, but they're ''still'' mad at each other. Then, the rest of their sisters wax philosophical about it. The end.
On the couch, Lincoln and Lynn promise that, although fighting is what brothers and sisters do, they will never have a fight that extreme.
!! This episode provides examples of
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Fic!Lynn and ''especially'' Fic!Lincoln are way more petty and violent than in canon.
* BigNo: Fic!Lynn shouts, "NOOOOOOO!" with seven "O"s after Fic!Lincoln destroys her homework.
* BorrowedCatchphrase: Fic!Lucy says, "literally" even though that's usually Lori's word.
* ButYouWereThereAndYouAndYou: Fic!Lincoln bases the girls in his manga upon his sisters.
* ContinuityNod:
** Lincoln wonders what the heck his sisters were thinking during "Brawl in the Family", making up a new protocol and Lori cooling off in his room.
** Lincoln references Lynn fighting with Lucy, which happened in "Space Invader".
* ADateWithRosiePalms: Referenced when Lori and Lynn snicker at Fic!Lynn's line "Even I wouldn't want to play with myself now."
* DoesNotLikeSpam: Fic!Lincoln thinks Fic!Lynn's subs are disgusting.
* DownerEnding: The fanfic ends with Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn in the hospital, still holding their grudges, and being severely punished for it, while their sisters sit sadly in Lori and Leni's room. The actual episode, however, ends much more sweetly, with Lincoln and Lynn promising not to fight as intensely as they did in the fanfic.
* EveryoneHasStandards: Lynn admits that she may fight dirty, but she'd never use one of her younger sisters as a human shield.
* EyeScream: Fic!Lincoln throws ash into Fic!Lynn's eyes and then later pokes her in both eyes with his fingers.
* {{Facepalm}}: Lori facepalms when Fic!Lynn and Fic!Lincoln continue to argue in the hospital.
* GoodNameForARockBand: When Fic!Mr. Grouse says, "Moralocalypse!" about his neighbours' fight, Lana thinks that sounds like a good name for a band.
* GroinAttack: Fic!Lynn kicks Fic!Lincoln between his legs.
-->'''Lincoln''': "Really, Lynn? A nut shot right at the beginning of the fight?"
-->'''Lynn''': "What can I say? I'm a rudo."
* {{Hammerspace}}: Fic!Lincoln produces a bucket of water seemingly out of nowhere to destroy Fic!Lynn's homework. Later, he produces Fic!Lynn's tennis ball launcher out of nowhere.
* HehHehYouSaidX: When Fic!Lynn says, "Even I wouldn't want to play with myself now," Lori and Lynn snicker.
* HumanShield: Fic!Lynn ends up using Fic!Lucy as a shield, much to the shock of the real Lynn.
* IdiotBall: Referenced when Lisa and even Lincoln himself point out how dumb he was in "Brawl in the Family" thinking that telling Lori Leni compared her looks to Aunt Ruth would make her stop being mad at her, then when Lincoln points out the ludicrousness of Lori cooling off in his room when she can drive.
* IHaveNoSon: Fic!Lynn declares she has no brother in the hospital.
* InstantHumiliationJustAddYouTube: Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn's fight ends up online, embarrassing them.
* LostFoodGrievance: Fic!Lana loudly laments running out of chocolate when her sparring siblings set it on fire.
* NoYou:
** When Lisa claims that it's "laughable" that Lynn would own a book, Lynn says, "Your ''face'' is laughable".
** When Lisa asserts that the energy that energy drinks give Lynn is just the Placebo effect, Lynn says, "You're a Placebo effect!".
* OutOfCharacter:
** While Lincoln and Lynn getting into a physical fight isn't strictly out of character (the Loud siblings have cartoony BigBallOfViolence type fights a lot), they wouldn't fight as roughly or as long as they did in the fanfic.
** Lori and Leni (''especially'' Lori) would probably intervene if Lincoln and Lynn were being as violent as they were in the fanfic, "Brawl in the Family" notwithstanding), rather than just stand there like they did in the fanfic.
* PassThePopcorn: Discussed when Lynn mentions that if Mr. Grouse saw her and Lincoln fighting, he'd probably watch them with a bucket of popcorn.
* PunctuatedForEmphasis: During the long fight, Fic!Lynn says, "You... just... made... me... mad!!".
* RubberMan: Fic!Lincoln somehow punches Fic!Lynn in the stomach while she's sitting on his back.
* SayingSoundEffectsOutLoud: The driver of the energy drink van literally says, "Sigh, kids these days".
* ShakingTheRump: When Fic!Lincoln insults Fic!Lynn for having a big butt, the real Lynn states that she's proud of her big butt and begins shaking it, much to the disgust of all her siblings except Lana.
* ShoutOut:
** Lisa (ironically) calls Fic!Lincoln "[[Literature/SherlockHolmes Holmes]]".
** When the author pretends to break down as part of his diss at "Brawl in the Family", he sings "Daisy, Daisy".
** Lincoln uses "{{Aesop}}" as a noun, meaning he made a reference to either ThisVeryWiki or ''Literature/AesopsFables''.
* StaircaseTumble: Fic!Luna is sent falling downstairs from Fic!Lynn's kick and ends up getting "damaged".
* TakeThat: Lincoln points out that the fanfic shares its name with a Music/TaylorSwift song, but says that anyone who sings it is going to get smacked. His sisters all agree.
* ToiletHumour: Fic!Lincoln insults Fic!Lynn for her big butt. The real Lynn says she's proud of her butt and shakes it, which grosses out all her siblings except for Lana who wishes to one day have a butt like Lynn's.
* YouFightLikeACow: At one point, during the fight, Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn exchange insults.
-->'''Fic!Lynn''': "Talentless sucker!"
-->'''Fic!Lincoln''': "Dumb cow!"
-->'''Fic!Lynn''': "Lily makes better drawings than you."
-->'''Fic!Lincoln''': "I learn from my mistakes and you don't learn [well] enough to get [a] C."
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