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* BaitAndSwitch: At first it seems like Naomi put Steel into a coma with her powers unwillingly....then it turns out her parents did it!
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* BaitAndSwitch: At first it seems like Naomi put Steel into a coma with her powers unwillingly.... then it turns out her parents did it!
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* WhamShot: Greg and Jennifer using two glowing, blue rocks to incapacitate Commander Steel.
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* WhamShot: Greg and Jennifer using two glowing, blue rocks holding up pieces of Dilustel to incapacitate Commander Steel.
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* ShoutOut: Several, among others to works from ''Creator/AgathaChristie'', like ''Film/CrookedHouse'' or ''The Incredible Theft'', because Annabelle is a fan of hers. ''Franchise/JamesBond'' also gets a mention, with Jacob being compared to Q.
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* ShoutOut: Several, among others to works from ''Creator/AgathaChristie'', Creator/AgathaChristie, like ''Film/CrookedHouse'' or ''The Incredible Theft'', because Annabelle is a fan of hers. ''Franchise/JamesBond'' also gets a mention, with Jacob being compared to Q.
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* TakeThat: When talking about ''Creator/AgathaChristie'', Annabelle says that she is like the Creator/JKRowling of crime fiction, minus the offensive tweets.
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* TakeThat: When talking about ''Creator/AgathaChristie'', Creator/AgathaChristie, Annabelle says that she is like the Creator/JKRowling of crime fiction, minus the offensive tweets.
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* TakeThat: When talking about ''Creator/AgathaChristie'', Annabelle says that she is like the 'Creator/JKRowling of crime fiction, minus the offensive tweets.
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* TakeThat: When talking about ''Creator/AgathaChristie'', Annabelle says that she is like the 'Creator/JKRowling Creator/JKRowling of crime fiction, minus the offensive tweets.
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* TakeThat: When talking about ''Creator/AgathaChristie'', Annabelle says that she is like the ''Creator/JKRowling'' of crime fiction, minus the offensive tweets.
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* TakeThat: When talking about ''Creator/AgathaChristie'', Annabelle says that she is like the ''Creator/JKRowling'' 'Creator/JKRowling of crime fiction, minus the offensive tweets.
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"She" is Annabelle
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** Zumbado and Dee learn that Commander Steel found Naomi's Birth Rock.
* LivingLieDetector: Naomi is described as this word for word, as she can hear peoples heartbeats.
* NoSocialSkills: Dee's are at display once more, as he is icnredibly uncomfortable around people and wearing suits.
* LivingLieDetector: Naomi is described as this word for word, as she can hear peoples heartbeats.
* NoSocialSkills: Dee's are at display once more, as he is icnredibly uncomfortable around people and wearing suits.
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** Zumbado and Dee learn that Commander Steel found Naomi's Birth Rock.
birth rock.
* LivingLieDetector: Naomi is described as this word for word, as she can hearpeoples people's heartbeats.
* NoSocialSkills: Dee's areat on display once more, as he is icnredibly incredibly uncomfortable around people and wearing suits.
* LivingLieDetector: Naomi is described as this word for word, as she can hear
* NoSocialSkills: Dee's are
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* RedHerring: Nathan is hinted to be the alien throughout the episode, as he keeps something from Naomi, but then it turns out he was just preparing a surprise for her in her locker.
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* RedHerring: Nathan is hinted to be the alien throughout the episode, as Naomi can tell he keeps is hiding something from Naomi, his heartbeat, but then it turns out he was just preparing a surprise for her in her locker.
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* ShoutOut: Several, among others to works from ''Creator/AgathaChristie'', like ''Film/CrookedHouse'' or ''The Incredible Theft''. ''Franchise/JamesBond'' also gets a mention, with Jacob being compared to Q.
* TakeThat: When talking about ''Creator/AgathaChristie'', she says that she is like ''Creator/JKRowling'', minus the offensive tweets.
* TakeThat: When talking about ''Creator/AgathaChristie'', she says that she is like ''Creator/JKRowling'', minus the offensive tweets.
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* ShoutOut: Several, among others to works from ''Creator/AgathaChristie'', like ''Film/CrookedHouse'' or ''The Incredible Theft''.Theft'', because Annabelle is a fan of hers. ''Franchise/JamesBond'' also gets a mention, with Jacob being compared to Q.
* TakeThat: When talking about ''Creator/AgathaChristie'',she Annabelle says that she is like ''Creator/JKRowling'', the ''Creator/JKRowling'' of crime fiction, minus the offensive tweets.
* TakeThat: When talking about ''Creator/AgathaChristie'',
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* BaitAndSwitch: At first it seems like Naomi put Steel into a coma with her powers unwillingly....then it turns out her parents did it!
* FantasticRacism: Steel makes it abundantly clear that he doesn't just want to defend Earth against potential hostile alien threats, he wants to eliminate any and all aliens.
* FauxAffablyEvil: Steel at first acts nice and amicable towards Greg, but he quickly makes it clear that he knows about Naomi and that he plans on going after her.
* FantasticRacism: Steel makes it abundantly clear that he doesn't just want to defend Earth against potential hostile alien threats, he wants to eliminate any and all aliens.
* FauxAffablyEvil: Steel at first acts nice and amicable towards Greg, but he quickly makes it clear that he knows about Naomi and that he plans on going after her.
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* HumanLieDetector: Naomi is described as this word for word, as she can hear peoples heartbeats.
* LivingLieDetector: Naomi is described as this word for word, as she can hear peoples heartbeats.
* RedHerring: Nathan is hinted to be the alien throughout the episode, as he keeps something from Naomi, but then it turns out he was just preparing a surprise for her in her locker.
* TheReveal: Greg and Jennifer are aliens themselves.
* TheReveal: Greg and Jennifer are aliens themselves.
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* TakeThat: When talking about ''Creator/AgathaChristie'', she says that she is like ''Creator/JKRowling'', minus the offensive tweets.
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* TakeThat: When talking about ''Creator/AgathaChristie'', she says that she is like ''Creator/JKRowling'', minus the offensive tweets.tweets.
* WhamShot: Greg and Jennifer using two glowing, blue rocks to incapacitate Commander Steel.
* WhamShot: Greg and Jennifer using two glowing, blue rocks to incapacitate Commander Steel.
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While Naomi and her friends are trying to find the alien at the anniversary party, things take a turn for the worse when Commander Steel shows up.
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* HowWeGotHere: The episode keeps flashing to Naomi and her friends and family being interrogated about an event involving Commander Steel. It then slowly shows what transpired during and after the anniversary party.
* HumanLieDetector: Naomi is described as this word for word, as she can hear peoples heartbeats.
* InternalReveal:
** Annabelle learns that Naomi and Nathan are back together.
** Zumbado and Dee learn that Commander Steel found Naomi's Birth Rock.
* NoSocialSkills: Dee's are at display once more, as he is icnredibly uncomfortable around people and wearing suits.
* NotSoDifferentRemark: When Naomi tells Nathan that they shouldn't keep secrets from each other, Nathan points out that she is obviously also keeping something from him.
* ShoutOut: Several, among others to works from ''Creator/AgathaChristie'', like ''Film/CrookedHouse'' or ''The Incredible Theft''. ''Franchise/JamesBond'' also gets a mention, with Jacob being compared to Q.
* TakeThat: When talking about ''Creator/AgathaChristie'', she says that she is like ''Creator/JKRowling'', minus the offensive tweets.
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* HowWeGotHere: The episode keeps flashing to Naomi and her friends and family being interrogated about an event involving Commander Steel. It then slowly shows what transpired during and after the anniversary party.
* HumanLieDetector: Naomi is described as this word for word, as she can hear peoples heartbeats.
* InternalReveal:
** Annabelle learns that Naomi and Nathan are back together.
** Zumbado and Dee learn that Commander Steel found Naomi's Birth Rock.
* NoSocialSkills: Dee's are at display once more, as he is icnredibly uncomfortable around people and wearing suits.
* NotSoDifferentRemark: When Naomi tells Nathan that they shouldn't keep secrets from each other, Nathan points out that she is obviously also keeping something from him.
* ShoutOut: Several, among others to works from ''Creator/AgathaChristie'', like ''Film/CrookedHouse'' or ''The Incredible Theft''. ''Franchise/JamesBond'' also gets a mention, with Jacob being compared to Q.
* TakeThat: When talking about ''Creator/AgathaChristie'', she says that she is like ''Creator/JKRowling'', minus the offensive tweets.
