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* AndIMustScream: Starlight casts a spell on Big Macintosh to make him more talkative, much to his horror. He even yells, "Make it stop!" when he realizes he can't do anything about it.
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* AndIMustScream: Inverted in practice, but played straight in spirit. Starlight casts a spell on Big Macintosh to make him more talkative, much to his horror. He even yells, "Make it stop!" when he realizes he can't do anything about it.
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Twilight's suspicious behavior towards Trixie and makes her look like a helicopter-parent that doesn't want her daughter to fall in with a bad crowd.
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Twilight's suspicious behavior towards Trixie and makes her look like a helicopter-parent that doesn't want her daughter to fall in with a bad crowd.
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* {{Troll}}: Trixie turns several of Twilight's cutlery and napkins into a sculpture of herself, clearly just to tick Twilight off.
** Trixie’s friendship with Starlight as a whole prioritizes this over being a good friend, befriending Starlight in order to rub it in Twilight’s face as the main goal. Unfortunately Starlight is deeply burnt by Trixie’s selfishness when the truth comes out and Trixie realizes Starlight was taking their friendship seriously when she was not, which brings about genuine change at the end of the episode.
** Trixie’s friendship with Starlight as a whole prioritizes this over being a good friend, befriending Starlight in order to rub it in Twilight’s face as the main goal. Unfortunately Starlight is deeply burnt by Trixie’s selfishness when the truth comes out and Trixie realizes Starlight was taking their friendship seriously when she was not, which brings about genuine change at the end of the episode.
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* {{Troll}}: Trixie turns several of Twilight's cutlery and napkins into a sculpture of herself, clearly just to tick Twilight off.
** Trixie’soff. Trixie's friendship with Starlight as a whole prioritizes this over being a good friend, befriending Starlight in order to rub it in Twilight’s Twilight's face as the main goal. Unfortunately Unfortunately, Starlight is deeply burnt by Trixie’s Trixie's selfishness when the truth comes out and Trixie realizes Starlight was taking their friendship seriously when she was not, which brings about genuine change at the end of the episode.
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** Trixie’s friendship with Starlight as a whole prioritizes this over being a good friend, befriending Starlight in order to rub it in Twilight’s face as the main goal. Unfortunately Starlight is deeply burnt by Trixie’s selfishness when the truth comes out and Trixie realizes Starlight was taking their friendship seriously when she was not, which brings about genuine change at the end of the episode.
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** The trick that Trixie wants to perform is the Moonshot Manticore Mouth Dive.
** During his magically-induced MotorMouth moment, Big Mac recounts "Annie Apple awoke and accidentally ate an auburn azalea."
** The trick that Trixie wants to perform is the Moonshot Manticore Mouth Dive.
** During his magically-induced MotorMouth moment, Big Mac recounts "Annie Apple awoke and accidentally ate an auburn azalea."
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal:
** The trick that Trixie wants to perform is the Moonshot Manticore Mouth Dive.
**AddedAlliterativeAppeal: During his magically-induced MotorMouth moment, Big Mac recounts "Annie Apple awoke and accidentally ate an auburn azalea."
** The trick that Trixie wants to perform is the Moonshot Manticore Mouth Dive.
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** It's implied Fluttershy was scared of the Manticore [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E2ElementsOfHarmony though in the pilot]] she was the only member of the Mane 6 not to be afraid of "Manny Roar". [[https://twitter.com/TheBiggestJim/status/726458082709004288 According to the show staff she was actually horrified at seeing it chained up.]]
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** It's implied Fluttershy was scared of the Manticore [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E2ElementsOfHarmony though in the pilot]] she was the only member of the Mane 6 not to be afraid of "Manny Roar". [[https://twitter.com/TheBiggestJim/status/726458082709004288 According to the show staff staff]] [[DeliberateFlawRetcon she was actually horrified at seeing it chained up.]]
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* EatenAlive: The climax of Trixie's new show, the Moonshot Manticore Mouth Dive, has the magician appear to be this, only to show up unhurt. Trixie mentions it's only been done once before by Hoofdini.
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* EatenAlive: The climax of Trixie's new show, the Moonshot Manticore Mouth Dive, has the magician appear to be this, only to show up unhurt. Trixie mentions it's only been done once before by Hoofdini.Hoofdini, and notes that even she lacks the magical prowess to pull it off without assistance.
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[[caption-width-right:350: Silly Starlight, Trix are for... oh, wait a minute.]]
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[[caption-width-right:350: [[Advertising/TrixRabbit Silly Starlight, Trix are for... oh, wait a minute.]]
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** Twilight displaying her latest flavor of SuperOCD with pride by carefully arranging symbolism and lesson heavy silverware.
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** Twilight displaying her latest flavor of SuperOCD with pride by carefully arranging symbolism and lesson heavy lesson-heavy silverware.
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* CallBack: When Starlight tells Trixie that she is better at magic. Trixie's response?
-->'''Trixie:''' [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E5MagicDuel Only when I'm wearing a soul-sucking evil amulet.]]
-->'''Trixie:''' [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E5MagicDuel Only when I'm wearing a soul-sucking evil amulet.]]
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* CallBack: CallBack:
** When Trixie mentions her wagon is messy after spending a long time on the road, Starlight responds with:
--->'''Starlight:''' Maybe I can help? I'm ''pretty'' good at organizing things. Magic props, [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS5E1TheCutieMapPart1 brainwashed crowds]]...
** When Starlight tells Trixie that she is better at magic. Trixie's response?
-->'''Trixie:''' --->'''Trixie:''' [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E5MagicDuel Only when I'm wearing a soul-sucking evil amulet.]]
** When Trixie mentions her wagon is messy after spending a long time on the road, Starlight responds with:
--->'''Starlight:''' Maybe I can help? I'm ''pretty'' good at organizing things. Magic props, [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS5E1TheCutieMapPart1 brainwashed crowds]]...
** When Starlight tells Trixie that she is better at magic. Trixie's response?
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** Even though she's reformed, none of the other ponies trust Trixie and they whisper some bad stuff about her. Justified because she did enslave them while under the influence of an amulet. Even Twilight doesn't trust her fully and is worried she might be a bad influence on Starlight.
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** Even though she's reformed, none of the other ponies trust Trixie and they whisper some bad stuff about her. Justified because she did [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E5MagicDuel enslave them while under the influence of an amulet. the Alicorn Amulet]]. Even Twilight doesn't trust her fully and is worried she might be [[ToxicFriendInfluence a bad influence influence]] on Starlight.
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** Twilight displaying her latest flavor of SuperOCD with pride.
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** Twilight displaying her latest flavor of SuperOCD with pride.pride by carefully arranging symbolism and lesson heavy silverware.
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* TheAtoner: Trixie realizes what her manipulation has brought her, and silently apologizes to Starlight.
* BeAllMySinsRemembered: Trixie and Starlight engage in some HeroicSelfDeprecation about their pasts.
* BeAllMySinsRemembered: Trixie and Starlight engage in some HeroicSelfDeprecation about their pasts.
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* TheAtoner: Trixie realizes what her manipulation has brought her, and silently apologizes to Starlight.
* BeAllMySinsRemembered: Trixie and Starlight engage in some HeroicSelfDeprecation about theirpasts.pasts as villains.
* BeAllMySinsRemembered: Trixie and Starlight engage in some HeroicSelfDeprecation about their
*DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Twilight's suspicious behavior towards Trixie and makes her look like a helicopter-parent that doesn't want her daughter to fall in with a bad crowd.
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* OohMeAccentsSlipping: For a brief moment under the Talking Spell, Big Macintosh sounds like Time Turner.
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* OohMeAccentsSlipping: For a brief moment under the Talking Spell, Big Macintosh sounds like Time Turner. Maybe it's a side-effect of Starlight's spell.
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** After Starlight uses her ace magic to make a cake much better than Mrs. Cake's, rather than compliment Starlight's accomplishment like the archetypal cartoon parental figure, she immediately and angrily accuses Starlight of trying to put Sugarcube Corner out of business.
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** After Starlight uses her ace magic to make a delicious cake much better faster than Mrs. Cake's, Cake, rather than compliment Starlight's accomplishment like the archetypal cartoon parental figure, she immediately and angrily accuses Starlight of trying to put Sugarcube Corner out of business.
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* SuperSpeed: Rainbow Dash again demonstrates her ludicrous flying speed, breaking the sound barrier to go find Spitfire. This is the first time we see her do this without generating a Rainboom, however.
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* SuperSpeed: Rainbow Dash again demonstrates her ludicrous flying speed, breaking the sound barrier to go find Spitfire. This is the first time we see her do this without generating a Rainboom, however.Rainboom so she must be getting better.
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* TeleportationSickness: Starlight's teleportation spell to save Trixie from the manticore's gullet does work, but it leaves Trixie frizzled, dizzy and feeling faint.
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* TeleportationSickness: Starlight's teleportation spell to save Trixie from the manticore's gullet does work, works, but it leaves Trixie frizzled, dizzy and feeling faint.
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* ToxicFriendInfluence: Trixie manipulates Starlight into being her assistant instead of going to Twilight's dinner.
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* ToxicFriendInfluence: Twilight fears that Trixie will harm Starlight's on-going reformation, and she's right. Trixie manipulates Starlight into being her assistant instead of going to Twilight's dinner.dinner just so she can one-up Twilight in something.
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** Even though she's reformed, none of the other ponies trust Trixie and they whisper some bad stuff about her. Even Twilight doesn't trust her fully and is worried she might be a bad influence on Starlight.
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** Even though she's reformed, none of the other ponies trust Trixie and they whisper some bad stuff about her. Justified because she did enslave them while under the influence of an amulet. Even Twilight doesn't trust her fully and is worried she might be a bad influence on Starlight.
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* {{Irony}}: What do Starlight and Trixie have in common? A lot. They feel like misunderstood outcasts among the residents of Ponyville and each of them swore to take their own personal revenge on Twilight Sparkle because they we're still stuck in the past with their anger and hate towards her... even though Starlight and Trixie were the ones who had transgressed against Twilight Sparkle first.
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* {{Irony}}: What do Starlight and Trixie have in common? A lot. They feel like misunderstood outcasts among the residents of Ponyville and each of them swore to take their own personal revenge on Twilight Sparkle because they we're were still stuck in the past with their anger and hate towards her... even though Starlight and Trixie were the ones who had transgressed against Twilight Sparkle first.
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* {{Irony}}: What do Starlight and Trixie have in common? A lot. They feel like misunderstood outcasts among the residents of Ponyville and each of them swore to take Revenge on Twilight Sparkle because they we're still stuck in the past with their anger and hate towards her.
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* {{Irony}}: What do Starlight and Trixie have in common? A lot. They feel like misunderstood outcasts among the residents of Ponyville and each of them swore to take Revenge their own personal revenge on Twilight Sparkle because they we're still stuck in the past with their anger and hate towards her.her... even though Starlight and Trixie were the ones who had transgressed against Twilight Sparkle first.
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** Even though she's reformed, none of the other ponies trust Trixie and whisper some bad stuff about her. Even Twilight doesn't trust her fully and is worried she might be a bad influence on Starlight.
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** Even though she's reformed, none of the other ponies trust Trixie and they whisper some bad stuff about her. Even Twilight doesn't trust her fully and is worried she might be a bad influence on Starlight.
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* RealityEnsues: After Starlight uses her ace magic to make a cake much better than Mrs. Cake's, rather than compliment Starlight's accomplishment like the archetypal cartoon parental figure, she immediately and angrily accuses Starlight of trying to put Sugarcube Corner out of business.
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* RealityEnsues: After RealityEnsues:
**After Starlight uses her ace magic to make a cake much better than Mrs. Cake's, rather than compliment Starlight's accomplishment like the archetypal cartoon parental figure, she immediately and angrily accuses Starlight of trying to put Sugarcube Corner out of business.
**After Starlight uses her ace magic to make a cake much better than Mrs. Cake's, rather than compliment Starlight's accomplishment like the archetypal cartoon parental figure, she immediately and angrily accuses Starlight of trying to put Sugarcube Corner out of business.
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** Even though she's reformed, none of the other ponies trust Trixie and whisper some bad stuff about her. Even Twilight doesn't trust her fully and is worried she might be a bad influence on Starlight.
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->''"Please, Twilight! I know you're trying to help, but I need to make friends on my own if I'm going to become a better pony."''
-->--Starlight Glimmer
-->--Starlight Glimmer
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** The way that Twilight gave a forced smile to Trixie is similar to the way James Bond smiled at Jaws in ''Film/{{Moonraker}}''.
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** The way that Twilight gave a forced smile to Trixie is similar to the way James Bond smiled at Jaws in ''Film/{{Moonraker}}''.
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* UnexpectedCharacter: Most everyone figured out that Trixie would make her return here, but no one could have foreseen DJ Pon-3, Derpy, and ''especially'' Cranky Doodle Donkey to show up as well.
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* AndIMustScream: Starlight casts a spell on Big Macintosh to make him more talkative, much to his horror. He even yells, "Make it stop!" when he realizes he can't do anything about it.
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** The way that Twilight gave a forced smile to Trixie is similar to the way James Bond smiled at Jaws in ''Film/{{Moonraker}}''.
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* CrossingTheBurntBridge: "The Humble and Penitent Trixie's Equestrian Apology Tour".
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** The way that Twilight gave a forced smile to Trixie is similar to the way James Bond smiled at Jaws in ''Film/{{Moonraker}}''
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** The way that Twilight gave a forced smile to Trixie is similar to the way James Bond smiled at Jaws in ''Film/{{Moonraker}}''''Film/{{Moonraker}}''.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Trixie is overcome with regret and self-loathing when she realizes her petty scheming cost her the first real friend she ever had.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Trixie is overcome with regret and self-loathing when she realizes her petty scheming cost her the first real friend she ever had.had, which leads to Twilight Sparkle herself realizing her mistrust of Starlight and Trixie is actually hurting them, and preventing Starlight's growth as her student.