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* PetTheDog:
* While Félix's main goal is getting Gabriel's Miraculouses, he still tries to talk to him on Adrien's behalf even though this doesn't help his plans in any way.
* While Félix's main goal is getting Gabriel's Miraculouses, he still tries to talk to him on Adrien's behalf even though this doesn't help his plans in any way.
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* PetTheDog:
*PetTheDog: While Félix's main goal is getting Gabriel's Miraculouses, he still tries to talk to him on Adrien's behalf even though this doesn't help his plans in any way.
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Considering Lila's nature and that she was doing it to screw over Marinette, Lila wasn't doing this out of any sort of kindness.
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** Lila realizes how much leaving his friends behind upsets Adrien and tries to cheer him up by telling him that he can stay in contact with his friends during the world tour.
** Lila making sure that Adrien can properly say goodbye to his friends is a nice gesture. [[DownplayedTrope However it also conveniently ruins a moment between Adrien and Marinette.]]
** While Félix's main goal is getting Gabriel's Miraculouses, he still tries to talk to him on Adrien's behalf even though this doesn't help his plans in any way.
** Lila making sure that Adrien can properly say goodbye to his friends is a nice gesture. [[DownplayedTrope However it also conveniently ruins a moment between Adrien and Marinette.]]
** While Félix's main goal is getting Gabriel's Miraculouses, he still tries to talk to him on Adrien's behalf even though this doesn't help his plans in any way.
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** Lila making sure that Adrien can properly say goodbye to his friends is a nice gesture. [[DownplayedTrope However it also conveniently ruins a moment between Adrien and Marinette.]]
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* TheyLookJustLikeEveryoneElse: The average akuma of the day, while harrowing, are ''very'' easily noticeable and can be quickly defeated by Ladybug and Cat Noir on a daily basis. Risk, on the other hand, is a frog-loving boy who casually rides his bicycle while encouraging everyone to take risks...which is what makes him so dangerous as no one, not even our two heroes, notice that he's been akumatized due to bearing a less than recognizable appearance when Shadow Moth akumatized him and he's already influenced everyone in Paris into becoming more bolder in their daily lives. And that ''includes'' the Miraculous duo themselves.
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* TheyLookJustLikeEveryoneElse: The average akuma of the day, while harrowing, are ''very'' easily noticeable and can be quickly defeated by Ladybug and Cat Noir on a daily basis. Risk, on the other hand, is a frog-loving boy who casually rides his bicycle while encouraging everyone to take risks...which is what makes him so dangerous as no one, not even our two heroes, notice that he's been akumatized due to bearing a less than recognizable appearance when Shadow Moth akumatized him and he's already influenced everyone in Paris into becoming more bolder in their daily lives. And that ''includes'' the Miraculous duo themselves.
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** Gabriel still uses robots from "Gabriel Agreste".
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** Rena Furtive watches over Ladybug regaining the Miraculous from her temporary heroes while keeping an eye for any suspicious activity.
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** Ladybug tries to convince "Adrien" to stay by citing that him leaving would make all of Paris miserable and vulnerable to a mass akumatization.
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** Ladybug tries to convince "Adrien" to stay by citing that him leaving would make all of Paris miserable and vulnerable to a mass akumatization. Gabriel still uses robots from "Gabriel Agreste".
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->''"Ladybug, Cat Noir. Whoever you are, wherever you're hiding, you are now bearing the mark of Risk. Of course I have no idea what mistake you're going to make or how you'll make it, but I do know that the beating of my wings have sown the seeds of recklessness. And now I just have to wait then harvest your downfall."''
-->-- '''Shadow Moth'''
-->-- '''Shadow Moth'''
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** Kagami delivers a [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech brutal speech to Adrien about letting others control his life]] that she ends with apologizing if she hurt him. Adrien agrees that she's right and that he needed to hear it.
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** Kagami delivers a [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech brutal speech to Adrien about letting others control his life]] life and never thinking about cutting his strings]] that she ends with apologizing if she hurt him. Adrien agrees that she's right and that he needed to hear it.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Félix is right when he points out that Adrien's [[FatalFlaw biggest flaw is his fear of disobeying his father]], which prevents him from seeing a different side of him and that he has to stop doing everything his father says. He also points out that while Adrien can't disobey his father, he ''can'' since he can say no to Gabriel.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Despite manipulating Adrien, Félix is right when he points out that Adrien's [[FatalFlaw biggest flaw is his fear of disobeying his father]], which prevents him from seeing a different side of him and tells Adrien that he has ''has'' to stop doing everything his father says. He also points out that while Adrien can't disobey his father, he ''can'' since he can say no says (which is Adrien's [[FatalFlaw biggest flaw]]) and stand up to Gabriel.him more.
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* BlatantLies: Adrien tells Félix that he will be fine going on the trip to Paris. Obviously, Félix doesn't buy and see right through this lie.
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* BlatantLies: Adrien tells Félix that he will be fine going on the trip to Paris. Obviously, Félix doesn't buy and see sees right through this lie.
