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** Bischa and Simon's way of saying goodbye is an arm clasp similar to the arm-wrestling scene from ''Film/{{Predator}}''.
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** Bischa Boscha and Simon's way of saying goodbye is an arm clasp similar to the arm-wrestling scene from ''Film/{{Predator}}''.
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* AssholeVictim: Because of Kikimora's loyalty, Belos spares her life but demotes her to coven scout status and already has a replacement aide lined up.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Because of Kikimora's loyalty, Belos spares her life but demotes her to coven scout status and already has a replacement aide lined up.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Art by Crosshot: ''[[WesternAnimation/TotalDrama How much more pain can we put these kids through before the season is over? Find out right now on Luz! Clawthorne! Two Worlds, One Family!]]'']]
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[[caption-width-right:350:Art by Crosshot: Crash X Fusion: ''[[WesternAnimation/TotalDrama How much more pain can we put these kids through before the season is over? Find out right now on Luz! Clawthorne! Two Worlds, One Family!]]'']]
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* HurtingHero: Luz's HeroicBSOD is fresh on her mind thanks to the previous night's events, and she spends the first half of the A-plot sulking.
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** Eda killed her first human friend while in the Owl Beast form.
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** Eda killed her first human friend friend, who had saved her from being mugged, while in the Owl Beast form.
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* AbusiveParents: Felicity had Felicia transferred from St. Epiderm to Hexside just so she could have an inside source at Hexside to get her stories on Luz and her friends after her promotion, forcing her daughter to find any news she can while ignoring her needs completely.
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** A drunkard in the tavern brings up Luz's BadassBoast and declaration of kicking the Emperor's ass.
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** A drunkard in the tavern brings up Luz's BadassBoast and declaration of kicking to kick the Emperor's ass.
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* LampshadeHanging:
** Are we gonna question the fact that Eda keeps a ''shotgun'' under the couch!?
** After being so casually greeted by Ms. Traveler, Camila questions if anybody told her about her revival. King and Lilith simply shrug.
** Are we gonna question the fact that Eda keeps a ''shotgun'' under the couch!?
** After being so casually greeted by Ms. Traveler, Camila questions if anybody told her about her revival. King and Lilith simply shrug.
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* LampshadeHanging:
** Are we gonna question the fact that Eda keeps a ''shotgun'' under the couch!?
**LampshadeHanging: After being so casually greeted by Ms. Traveler, Camila questions if anybody told her about her revival. King and Lilith simply shrug.
** Are we gonna question the fact that Eda keeps a ''shotgun'' under the couch!?
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* OutOfCharacterAlert: When Edric and Emira show up at the library to see Amity, they've come without their concealment stones, showing their true appearances in public. In addition, Emira calls Amity "Mittens" in a very quiet voice lacking the usual teasing tone and Edric's depression about Hunter shows in that he's been crying a lot.
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** After hearing about Boscha returning home seriously injured, Cat visits the Heiron residence to treat her injuries after Simon informs her what happened. And he only knew what happened because Cain told him, and this was after he had to let the top students wail on her. Plus, Athena allows them into their home before Nicole slams the door on them.
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** After hearing about Boscha returning home seriously injured, Cat visits the Heiron Hieron residence to treat her injuries after Simon informs her what happened. And he only knew what happened because Cain told him, and this was after he had to let the top students wail on her. Plus, Athena allows them into their home before Nicole slams the door on them.
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* SeriousBusiness: When Edric and Emira show up at the library to see Amity, they've come without their concealment stones, showing their true appearances in public. In addition, Emira calls Amity "Mittens" in a very quiet voice lacking the usual teasing tone and Edric's depression about Hunter shows in that he's been crying a lot.
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** Are we gonna question the fact that Eda keeps a ''shotgun'' under the couch!?
** How did Ms. Traveler learn about Camila?
** Are we gonna question the fact that Eda keeps a ''shotgun'' under the couch!?
** How did Ms. Traveler learn about Camila?
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* AbusiveParents: And some signs of ParentalNeglect are shown, too.
** Felicity is revealed to have pulled her daughter out of St. Epiderm, taking Felicia away from her friends just so she could have an inside source at Hexside to get her scoops on Luz and her friends after her promotion. She also tells her daughter that she'll have to walk home if she's unable to get any new information on Luz.
** Nicole also shows signs of this, refusing to take Boscha's injuries seriously and prefering she just learn to adapt to Glandus High's environment.
** Felicity is revealed to have pulled her daughter out of St. Epiderm, taking Felicia away from her friends just so she could have an inside source at Hexside to get her scoops on Luz and her friends after her promotion. She also tells her daughter that she'll have to walk home if she's unable to get any new information on Luz.
** Nicole also shows signs of this, refusing to take Boscha's injuries seriously and prefering she just learn to adapt to Glandus High's environment.
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** Ghost being one of the Bat Queen's refugee palisman and Lilith's knowledge of Belos relying on palisman essence feel like they've already [[Fanfic/ABlightOnBonesborough happened before]]...
* ParentalNeglect:
** Felicity is revealed to have pulled her daughter out of St. Epiderm, taking Felicia away from her friends just so she could have an inside source at Hexside to get her scoops on Luz and her friends after her promotion. She also tells her daughter that she'll have to walk home if she's unable to get any new information on Luz.
** Nicole also shows signs of this, refusing to take Boscha's injuries seriously and prefering she just learn to adapt to Glandus High's environment.
** Felicity is revealed to have pulled her daughter out of St. Epiderm, taking Felicia away from her friends just so she could have an inside source at Hexside to get her scoops on Luz and her friends after her promotion. She also tells her daughter that she'll have to walk home if she's unable to get any new information on Luz.
** Nicole also shows signs of this, refusing to take Boscha's injuries seriously and prefering she just learn to adapt to Glandus High's environment.
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* PaperThinDisguise: Prof. Blanc's only method of disguise for the above moment was to use abomination goop as a big mustache. Bump tears it off, not fooled for a second.
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* PaperThinDisguise: Prof. Blanc's only method of disguise for the above moment reapplying for his job was to use abomination goop as a big mustache. Bump tears it off, not fooled for a second.
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** Ghost being one of the Bat Queen's refugee palisman and Lilith's knowledge of Belos relying on palisman essence feel like they've already [[Fanfic/ABlightOnBonesborough happened before]]...
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: In canon, Ghost debuted in "Eclipse Lake". Here they debut between the events of "Hunting Palismen" and "Eda's Requiem".
* AdaptationalExplanation: It's unclear where Amity got Ghost in canon. Here, she first meets Ghost while the Palisman is living in the woods of the Bat Queen. Ghost is also confirmed to be female in the LCU as opposed to their gender being unknown in the show.
* AdaptationalExplanation: It's unclear where Amity got Ghost in canon. Here, she first meets Ghost while the Palisman is living in the woods of the Bat Queen. Ghost is also confirmed to be female in the LCU as opposed to their gender being unknown in the show.
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: In canon, Ghost debuted in "Eclipse Lake". Here they debut she debuts between the events of "Hunting Palismen" and "Eda's Requiem".
* AdaptationalExplanation: It's unclear where Amity got Ghost in canon. Here, she first meets Ghost while the Palisman is living in the woods of the Bat Queen.Ghost is also confirmed to be female in the LCU as opposed to their gender being unknown in the show.
* AdaptationalExplanation: It's unclear where Amity got Ghost in canon. Here, she first meets Ghost while the Palisman is living in the woods of the Bat Queen.
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** Ghost being one of the Bat Queen's refugee palisman and Lilith's knowledge of Belos relying on palisman essence feel like they've already [[Fanfic/ABlightOnBonesborough happened before]]...
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** Ghost being one of the Bat Queen's refugee palisman and Lilith's knowledge of Belos relying on palisman essence feel like they've already [[Fanfic/ABlightOnBonesborough happened before]]...
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* TheAce: Every top student at Glandus High excels in their respective track: along with Nina who's been established as the best Beast Keeper, there's Goredon (abomination), Bangles (formerly healing), Wesselton (plant), Ruth (potions), Kadabe (oracle), Cain Saltstar (construction) and Tito (bard). Emily's the strongest of all the students.
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* TheAce: Every top student at Glandus High excels in their respective track: along with Nina who's been established as the best Beast Keeper, there's Goredon Goregon (abomination), Bangles (formerly healing), Wesselton (plant), Ruth (potions), Kadabe (oracle), Cain Saltstar (construction) and Tito (bard). Emily's the strongest of all the students.
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* AdaptationalExplanation: It's unclear where Amity got Ghost in canon. Here, she first meets Ghost while the Palisman is living in the woods of the Bat Queen.
* AlphaBitch: Emily Tricks couldn't embody this better if she tried: she's ''the'' top student of Glandus High, she has gold sleeves and leggings as part of her uniform and follows the school's "strong rules the weak" rule to the letter. She's even known as the "Queen of Glandus".
* AlphaBitch: Emily Tricks couldn't embody this better if she tried: she's ''the'' top student of Glandus High, she has gold sleeves and leggings as part of her uniform and follows the school's "strong rules the weak" rule to the letter. She's even known as the "Queen of Glandus".
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* AdaptationalExplanation: It's unclear where Amity got Ghost in canon. Here, she first meets Ghost while the Palisman is living in the woods of the Bat Queen.
Queen. Ghost is also confirmed to be female in the LCU as opposed to their gender being unknown in the show.
* AlphaBitch: Emily Tricks couldn't embody this better if she tried: she's ''the'' top student of Glandus High, she hasgold [[GoldColoredSuperiority gold]] sleeves and leggings as part of her uniform and follows the school's "strong rules the weak" rule to the letter. She's even known as the "Queen of Glandus".
* AlphaBitch: Emily Tricks couldn't embody this better if she tried: she's ''the'' top student of Glandus High, she has
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* DownerBeginning: Amity is shown comforting Luz after what happened in Latissa while Luz remembers how she met Otabin and the Bat Queen, Eda's trying to contact Raine, and Hunter goes to see Edric only to get dumped.
* DudeWheresMyRespect: Iago sees his job as a receptionist as a thankless one, claiming it's due to redirecting several calls from the Yokai a day and nobody appreciating him for it.
* DudeWheresMyRespect: Iago sees his job as a receptionist as a thankless one, claiming it's due to redirecting several calls from the Yokai a day and nobody appreciating him for it.
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* DownerBeginning: Amity is shown comforting Luz after what happened in Latissa while Luz remembers how she met Otabin and the Bat Queen, Eda's trying to contact Raine, Raine and is unable to, and Hunter goes to see Edric only to get dumped.
* DudeWheresMyRespect: Iago sees his job as a receptionist as a thankless one, claiming it's due to redirecting several calls from the Yokaia every day and nobody appreciating him for it.
* DudeWheresMyRespect: Iago sees his job as a receptionist as a thankless one, claiming it's due to redirecting several calls from the Yokai
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* EvilTeacher / SadistTeacher: Glandus is apparently full of these. One example of this is the school's coach, who physically abuses his students.
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* EvilTeacher / SadistTeacher: Glandus is apparently full of these. One example of this is the school's coach, coach Terry Grease, who physically abuses his students.
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* FromBadToWorse: After losing his first friend, Hunter loses the rest of them and his relationship with Edric because of all his secrets. Meanwhile, Kikimora loses her job and gets demoted while being immediately replaced.
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* FromBadToWorse: After losing his first friend, FirstFriend, Hunter loses the rest of them and his relationship with Edric because of all his secrets. Meanwhile, Kikimora loses her job and gets demoted while being immediately replaced.
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** Bill, Goonla, Tiny Nose and Flora D'Splora are brought up when the Owl family discusses leads on dimensional travel.
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** Bill, Goonla, Tiny Nose and Flora D'Splora are brought up when the Owl family discusses discuss potential leads on dimensional travel.
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* OutOfFocus: Willow and Skara are the only main characters who appear without providing anything significant to the plot. Gus, Jerbo and Barcus don't show up at all.
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* OutOfFocus: Willow and Skara are the only main characters who appear without providing anything significant to the plot. Viney is only mentioned and Gus, Jerbo and Barcus don't show up at all.
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** After hearing about Boscha returning home seriously injured, Cat visits the Heiron residence to treat her injuries after Simon informs her what happened. And he only knew what happened because Cain told him, and this was after he had to let the top students wail on her. Plus Athena allows them into their home before Nicole slams the door on them.
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** After hearing about Boscha returning home seriously injured, Cat visits the Heiron residence to treat her injuries after Simon informs her what happened. And he only knew what happened because Cain told him, and this was after he had to let the top students wail on her. Plus Plus, Athena allows them into their home before Nicole slams the door on them.
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** Witch Rick is revealed to be one of Eda's ex-boyfriends and Summer, Katya's friend, is his granddaughter. He knows about Luz being a cambion and he has a portal gun that runs on Titan blood: problem is he hasn't been able to leave the Isles for some time since it's limited supply.
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** Witch Rick is revealed to be one of Eda's ex-boyfriends and Summer, Katya's friend, is his granddaughter. He knows about Luz being a cambion and he has a portal gun that runs on Titan blood: problem is he hasn't been able to leave the Isles for some time since it's it has a limited supply.
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** The phrase "[[WesternAnimation/{{Zootopia}} It's called a hustle, sweetheart]]" is used again when a main character extorts someone. In addition, Wesselton is based off the [[WesternAnimation/Frozen2013 Duke of Weselton]] and him specializing in plants references Duke Weaselton smuggling night howlers in ''Zootopia''.
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** The phrase "[[WesternAnimation/{{Zootopia}} It's called a hustle, sweetheart]]" is used again when a main character extorts someone. In addition, Wesselton Weaselton is based off of Duke Weaselton and his correcting his name by saying it isn't "Wesselton" is based around the [[WesternAnimation/Frozen2013 Duke of Weselton]] and him Weselton]]. Him specializing in plants plant magic references Duke Weaselton smuggling night howlers in ''Zootopia''.
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** Luz asks a [[Literature/TheWonderfulWizardOfOz winged]] [[Film/TheWizardOfOz monkey]] how he got to the Boiling Isles. He mentions that a twister brought him here, but he doesn't recommend it since in his experience witches and twisters don't mix well.
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** Luz asks a [[Literature/TheWonderfulWizardOfOz winged]] [[Film/TheWizardOfOz monkey]] how he got to the Boiling Isles. He mentions that a twister brought him here, there, but he doesn't recommend it since in his experience witches and twisters don't mix well.
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** The events of the last chapter wasn't the first time that Luz heard the [[EvilSoundsDeep deep]] [[TheVoice voice]] that told her to devour Maya and her childhood imaginary friend Otabin was a NotSoImaginaryFriend implied to be connected to the voice.
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** The events of the last chapter wasn't weren't the first time that Luz heard the [[EvilSoundsDeep deep]] [[TheVoice voice]] that told her to devour Maya and her childhood imaginary friend Otabin was a NotSoImaginaryFriend implied to be connected to the voice.
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*** Tito is also Captain of the the school's cheer squad, the Poltergeists, its dance troupe, and former member of a band called the Jackwitch 6.
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*** Tito is also Captain of the the school's cheer squad, the Poltergeists, its dance troupe, and a former member of a band called the Jackwitch 6.
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** Bill, Goonla, Tiny Nose and Flora D'Esplora are brought up when the Owl family discusses leads on dimensional travel.
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** Bill, Goonla, Tiny Nose and Flora D'Esplora D'Splora are brought up when the Owl family discusses leads on dimensional travel.
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** Felicia's mom Felicity is revealed to have pulled her daughter out of St. Epiderm, taking her away from her friends, just so she could have an inside source at Hexside to get her scoops on Luz and her friends after Felicity was promoted. She also tells her daughter that she'll have to walk home if she's unable to get any new information on Luz.
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** Felicia's mom Felicity is revealed to have pulled her daughter out of St. Epiderm, taking her Felicia away from her friends, friends just so she could have an inside source at Hexside to get her scoops on Luz and her friends after Felicity was promoted.her promotion. She also tells her daughter that she'll have to walk home if she's unable to get any new information on Luz.
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* BarBrawl: Luz ends up accidentally kickstarting one when she knocks out a drunk guy. It seems to be very one-sided in her favor, but she still ends up looking like she went through a war when she visits the Smiths.
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* BarBrawl: Luz ends up accidentally kickstarting one when she knocks out a drunk guy. [[CurbStompBattle It seems to be very one-sided in her favor, favor]], but she still ends up looking like she went through a war when she visits the Smiths.
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-->'''Kikimora''':The Golden Guard is lying to cover up for himself! H-he's trying to make me look bad!
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** Lilith regales Luz with how she went to the Human Realm to find Eda. As she goes on, Luz recalls what Baron Samedi said about her mother's unfortunate death in "Stranger Danger", right before she realized what he meant.
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** Lilith regales Luz with how she went to the Human Realm to find Eda. As she goes on, Luz recalls what Baron Samedi said about her mother's unfortunate death in "Stranger Danger", right before she realized realizes what he meant.
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** Amity brings up how Goonla came to the Demon Realm, as seen in Chapter 52.
** Amity's shown working at the library after Luz got her her job back in "No Fooling Around".
** Amity's shown working at the library after Luz got her her job back in "No Fooling Around".
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** Amity brings up how Goonla came to the Demon Realm, as seen in Chapter 52.
** Amity's52. She's also shown working at the library after Luz got her her job back in "No Fooling Around".back.
** Amity's
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* DudeWheresMyRespect: Iago sees his job as a receptionist as a thankless one, claiming it's due to redirecting calls from the Yokai and nobody appreciating him for it.
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* DudeWheresMyRespect: Iago sees his job as a receptionist as a thankless one, claiming it's due to redirecting several calls from the Yokai a day and nobody appreciating him for it.
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* InterdimensionalTravelDevice: Witch Rick supplies Luz with a portal gun that runs on Titan's Blood instead of fluid; only thing is the blood is unstable and of low supply due to drying up so she basically has one use. Luz uses it at the end of the chapter, but opens a portal to Amphibia instead of Earth.
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* InterdimensionalTravelDevice: Witch Rick supplies Luz with a portal gun that runs on Titan's Blood instead of portal fluid; only thing is the blood is unstable and of low supply due to drying up so she basically has one use. Luz uses it at the end of the chapter, but opens a portal to Amphibia instead of Earth.
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* LeftTheBackgroundMusicOn: As Boscha and Simon say goodbye (by grasping hand and flexing their muscles), a bard student plays a guitar riff in the background.
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* LeftTheBackgroundMusicOn: As Boscha and Simon say goodbye (by grasping hand clasping hands and flexing their muscles), a bard student plays a guitar riff in the background.
* OnTheNext: The teaser for the next set of chapters has shades of this.
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* SecretKerper: Luz and Lilith agree to keep what they're talking about Camila's death and Lilith being indebted to the Baron from their family until they're ready to tell them about them: everyone is willing to wait.
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* SecretKerper: SecretKeeper: Luz and Lilith agree to keep what they're talking their talk about Camila's death and Lilith being indebted to the Baron from their family until they're ready to tell them about them: everyone is more than willing to wait.
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* TrailersAlwaysSpoil: The final scene was the last scene in the Book 2 trailer from Book 1 (and by sheer coincidence, it's followed by a new trailer after the author's notes and the previous chapter's reviews).
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* TrailersAlwaysSpoil: The final scene was the last scene in the Book 2 trailer teaser from Book 1 (and by sheer coincidence, it's followed by a new trailer after the author's notes and the previous chapter's reviews).
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* WhatTheHellHero: Edric breaks up with Hunter because his actions agaimst Lilith led to his little sister risking her life for her girlfriend and he invaded the privacy of both his family and Luz's for his uncle.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Edric breaks up with Hunter because his actions agaimst against Lilith led to his little sister risking her life for her girlfriend and he invaded the privacy of both his family and Luz's for his uncle.
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** Professor Blanc now has a job at Glandus High, since his previous attemts to get rehired at Hexside failed.
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** Professor Blanc now has a job at Glandus High, since his previous attemts attempts to get rehired at Hexside failed.
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* CharacterDevelopment: After having a lot of time to reflect and being transfered to Glandus High, Boscha decides to apologize to Willow and Skara for everything she's done to them and asking they pass it along to Luz and Amity, saying goodbye to Simon and accepting Ms. Traveler's card so she can contact her if she needs advice. She also refuses to attack Angmar as if he was Willow while he's hurt, saying it won't prove anything and that Glandus' way of thinking is no different from the Emperor's Coven.
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* CharacterDevelopment: After having a lot of time to reflect and being transfered transferred to Glandus High, Boscha decides to apologize to Willow and Skara for everything she's done to them and asking they pass it along to Luz and Amity, saying goodbye to Simon and accepting Ms. Traveler's card so she can contact her if she needs advice. She also refuses to attack Angmar as if he was Willow while he's hurt, saying it won't prove anything and that Glandus' way of thinking is no different from the Emperor's Coven.
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** Eda keeps a shoutgun, a human realm weapon, hidden under her couch.
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** Eda keeps a shoutgun, shotgun, a human realm weapon, hidden under her couch.
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** Belos mentions Darius and that he's been talking to him about Hunter's nental state.
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** Belos mentions Darius and that he's been talking to him about Hunter's nental mental state.
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** Willow, Skara, Cat and Simon learn about Boscha getting transfered with Ms. Traveler already being aware of it.
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** Willow, Skara, Cat and Simon learn about Boscha getting transfered transferred with Ms. Traveler already being aware of it.
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** Due to attacking Kikimora before demotimg her and sending her off, Belos shakes her up enough to make her forget about telling him of Luz absorbing Maya's essence last night. For once, ''he's'' the one in the dark regarding one of her secrets.
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** Due to attacking Kikimora before demotimg demoting her and sending her off, Belos shakes her up enough to make her forget about telling him of Luz absorbing Maya's essence last night. For once, ''he's'' the one in the dark regarding one of her secrets.
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*** Bangles was one of the top sophmores and the top student of the Healing track.
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*** Bangles was one of the top sophmores sophomores and the top student of the Healing track.
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* ReverseMole: After learning why Felicia was transfered to Hexside, Luz makes her her personal information broker, saying whenever she comes to Felicia asking for something, she expects answers.
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* ReverseMole: After learning why Felicia was transfered transferred to Hexside, Luz makes her her personal information broker, saying whenever she comes to Felicia asking for something, she expects answers.
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** Witch Rick is revealed to be one of Eda's ex-boyfriends and Summer, Katya's friend, is his granddaughter. He knows about Luz being a cambion and he has a portal gun that runs on Titan blood: problem is he hasn't been able to leave the Isles for some time since it's limited supply..
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** Witch Rick is revealed to be one of Eda's ex-boyfriends and Summer, Katya's friend, is his granddaughter. He knows about Luz being a cambion and he has a portal gun that runs on Titan blood: problem is he hasn't been able to leave the Isles for some time since it's limited supply..supply.
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* AlternateSelf: Witch Rick mentions all of his, and he uses the "Witch" part of his name to differentiate from them. He also mentions he's [[NiceGuy nicer]] than any of them.
** Felicia outing Amity as nameless is mentioned.
** A drunkard in the tavern brings up Luz's BadassBoast and declaration of kicking the Emperor's ass.
** A drunkard in the tavern brings up Luz's BadassBoast and declaration of kicking the Emperor's ass.
** Also subverted with Felicia, as Luz pities her for what her mother using her but won't forgive her for outing Amity before.
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** Amity discovers she can understand Ghost, yet can't figure out why.
** Boscha can sense how off-putting it is when Emily's affectionate with Stella.
** Amity discovers she can understand Ghost, yet can't figure out why.
** Odalia remembers a conversation from her past that ''will'' be brought up again.
** Amity discovers she can understand Ghost, yet can't figure out why.
** Odalia remembers a conversation from her past that ''will'' be brought up again.
** Hunter remembers Ludo and what he learned from him.
* InterdimensionalTravelDevice: Witch Rick supplies Luz with a portal gun that runs on Titan's Blood instead of fluid; only thing is the blood is unstable and of low supply due to drying up so she basically has one use. Luz uses it at the end of the chapter, but opens a portal to Amphibia instead of Earth.
* KidHasAPoint: Seeing the Bat Queen won't budge on her decision of Luz never getting a palisman, Amity implores she let Palisman Adoption Day continue, as her spite and keeping the palismen from being adopted won't change Maya's fate, either.
* OpportunisticBastard: Amity calls Hunter one for taking advantage of his friends' trust.
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** Witch Rick is revealed to be one of Eda's ex-boyfriends and Summer, Katya's friend, is his granddaughter.
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** Witch Rick is revealed to be one of Eda's ex-boyfriends and Summer, Katya's friend, is his granddaughter. He knows about Luz being a cambion and he has a portal gun that runs on Titan blood: problem is he hasn't been able to leave the Isles for some time since it's limited supply..
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** Tito was part of a band called the [[Music/TheJacksonFive Jackwitch 6]]. As if he wasn't enough of a Music/MichaelJackson knockoff.
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* AnAesop: "To forgive is an act of compassion." To do so takes time, whether it's someone else or yourself.
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* AnAesop: AnAesop:
** "To forgive is an act of compassion." To do so takes time, whether it's someone else oryourself.yourself.
** Feeling grief, remorse, or especially guilt is not a bad thing. Feeling any of those is proof you regret any action, including involuntary ones.
** "To forgive is an act of compassion." To do so takes time, whether it's someone else or
** Feeling grief, remorse, or especially guilt is not a bad thing. Feeling any of those is proof you regret any action, including involuntary ones.
-->'''Kikimora''':The Golden Guard is lying to cover up for himself! H-he's trying to make me look bad!
-->'''[[DeadpanSnarker Belos]]''': I doubt you would need his help for that.
-->'''[[DeadpanSnarker Belos]]''': I doubt you would need his help for that.
** While talking with Ms. Traveler, Eda brings up her talk with Amity in "No Dancing Around".
** After apologizing to Willow, Boscha admits to Skara that what she said to her in "Everything's Gone Wrong" was true. She also asks them to pass along her apology for Luz and Amity over breaking them up in the same chapter.
** Lilith regales Luz with how she went to the Human Realm to find Eda. As she goes on, Luz recalls what Baron Samedi said about her mother's unfortunate death in "Stranger Danger", right before she realized what he meant.
*** Lilith also brings up her owing her soul to the Baron, being in his debt for his saving her life in "The Reveal".
** Professor Blanc now has a job at Glandus High, since his previous attemts to get rehired at Hexside failed.
** After apologizing to Willow, Boscha admits to Skara that what she said to her in "Everything's Gone Wrong" was true. She also asks them to pass along her apology for Luz and Amity over breaking them up in the same chapter.
** Lilith regales Luz with how she went to the Human Realm to find Eda. As she goes on, Luz recalls what Baron Samedi said about her mother's unfortunate death in "Stranger Danger", right before she realized what he meant.
*** Lilith also brings up her owing her soul to the Baron, being in his debt for his saving her life in "The Reveal".
** Professor Blanc now has a job at Glandus High, since his previous attemts to get rehired at Hexside failed.
** Luz meeting the Bat Queen is shown in a {{Flashback}} at the beginning.
** Another flashback shows the last Golden Guard/William speaking to Belos about Lilith keeping Edgar, mentioning their being part of the Clawthorne family.
** Ms. Traveler brings up Eda's ObviouslyNotFine signs from the previous day.
** Skara's still receiving tutoring from Viney since "Whatever Happened to Anu Bist?"
** Amity brings up how Goonla came to the Demon Realm, as seen in Chapter 52.
** Another flashback shows the last Golden Guard/William speaking to Belos about Lilith keeping Edgar, mentioning their being part of the Clawthorne family.
** Ms. Traveler brings up Eda's ObviouslyNotFine signs from the previous day.
** Skara's still receiving tutoring from Viney since "Whatever Happened to Anu Bist?"
** Amity brings up how Goonla came to the Demon Realm, as seen in Chapter 52.
** Ukla seems to have challenged Emily Tricks to a fight: from her state when Emily is introduced to Boscha, she lost ''badly''.
* DownerBeginning: Amity is shown comforting Luz after what happened in Latissa while Luz remembers how she met Otabin and the Bat Queen, Eda's trying to contact Raine, and Hunter goes to see Edric only to get dumped.
* DudeWheresMyRespect: Iago sees his job as a receptionist as a thankless one, claiming it's due to redirecting calls from the Yokai and nobody appreciating him for it.
* DudeWheresMyRespect: Iago sees his job as a receptionist as a thankless one, claiming it's due to redirecting calls from the Yokai and nobody appreciating him for it.
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** After Lilith confesses to being Camila's murderer, Luz decides to forgive her because Lilith, unlike Hunter, knows she made a mistake that hurt her and is already suffering herself. She also attributes being unable to get angry with her after blowing up at Hunter a factor, but says she might have the energy to be mad at Lilith eventually.
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** After Lilith confesses to being Camila's murderer, Luz decides to forgive her because Lilith, unlike Hunter, knows she made a mistake that hurt her her, acknowledges and takes responsibility for it, and is already suffering herself. She also attributes being unable to get angry with her after blowing up at Hunter a factor, but says she might have the energy to be mad at Lilith eventually.
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: All the Glandus students and staff show themselves to be aggressive, arrogant, and power-hungry, the Top Students looking out for themselves and striving to be the best of them all.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Amity discovers she can understand Ghost, yet can't figure out why.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: {{Foreshadowing}}:
** Amity discovers she can understand Ghost, yet can't figure outwhy.why.
** Eda keeps a shoutgun, a human realm weapon, hidden under her couch.
** Amity discovers she can understand Ghost, yet can't figure out
** Eda keeps a shoutgun, a human realm weapon, hidden under her couch.
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** Belos mentions that he's been talking to Darius about Hunter.
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** Belos mentions Darius and that he's been talking to Darius him about Hunter.Hunter's nental state.
** Bill, Goonla, Tiny Nose and Flora D'Esplora are brought up when the Owl family discusses leads on dimensional travel.
** Ukla's friend Yuki is brought up, Emily having done something to her.
** Bill, Goonla, Tiny Nose and Flora D'Esplora are brought up when the Owl family discusses leads on dimensional travel.
** Ukla's friend Yuki is brought up, Emily having done something to her.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Flapjack leaves the Bat Queen's care and bonds with Hunter, effectively becoming his palisman.
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* InSpiteOfANail: InSpiteOfANail:
** Flapjack leaves the Bat Queen's care and bonds with Hunter, effectively becoming hispalisman.palisman.
** Luz has become aware of Belos needing to consume palismen to curb his condition.
** Flapjack leaves the Bat Queen's care and bonds with Hunter, effectively becoming his
** Luz has become aware of Belos needing to consume palismen to curb his condition.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Due to attacking Kikimora before demotimg her and sending her off, Belos shakes her up enough to make her forget about telling him of Luz absorbing Maya's essence last night. For once, ''he's'' the one in the dark regarding one of her secrets.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: LeftTheBackgroundMusicOn: As Boscha and Simon say goodbye (by grasping hand and flexing their muscles), a bard student plays a guitar riff in the background.
* LockedOutOfTheLoop:
** Due to attacking Kikimora before demotimg her and sending her off, Belos shakes her up enough to make her forget about telling him of Luz absorbing Maya's essence last night. For once, ''he's'' the one in the dark regarding one of hersecrets.secrets.
** Eda has never told anyone about her killing a human girl as a teenager while transformed into the Owl Beast, mostly because she doesn't want Lilith to feel any more guilt over cursing her.
* TheLostLenore: Belos tells Hunter that he "had his own Edric" once, but lost them.
* LockedOutOfTheLoop:
** Due to attacking Kikimora before demotimg her and sending her off, Belos shakes her up enough to make her forget about telling him of Luz absorbing Maya's essence last night. For once, ''he's'' the one in the dark regarding one of her
** Eda has never told anyone about her killing a human girl as a teenager while transformed into the Owl Beast, mostly because she doesn't want Lilith to feel any more guilt over cursing her.
* TheLostLenore: Belos tells Hunter that he "had his own Edric" once, but lost them.
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* NoodleIncident: Prof. Blanc made one more attempt to get his job back, but Principal Bump had him escorted off school grounds.
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* NoodleIncident: NoodleIncident:
** Prof. Blanc made one more attempt to get his job back, but Principal Bump had him escorted off schoolgrounds.grounds.
** Whatever Emily did to Yuki and led Ukla to fight her.
** Prof. Blanc made one more attempt to get his job back, but Principal Bump had him escorted off school
** Whatever Emily did to Yuki and led Ukla to fight her.
* OutOfFocus: Willow and Skara are the only main characters who appear without providing anything significant to the plot. Gus, Jerbo and Barcus don't show up at all.
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** The events of the last chapter wasn't the first time that Luz heard the [[EvilSoundsDeep voice]] that told her to devour Maya and her childhood imaginary friend Otabin was a NotSoImaginaryFriend implied to be connected to the voice.
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** The events of the last chapter wasn't the first time that Luz heard the [[EvilSoundsDeep deep]] [[TheVoice voice]] that told her to devour Maya and her childhood imaginary friend Otabin was a NotSoImaginaryFriend implied to be connected to the voice.
** Lilith told Luz about Belos feeding on palisman essence before.
** Bill suggested Luz build a dimensional portal to travel to Earth, but she decides against it due to its complicated design and their limited resources.
** Bill suggested Luz build a dimensional portal to travel to Earth, but she decides against it due to its complicated design and their limited resources.
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** Glandus' student hierarchy is based around the strongest students in each year: 5 sophomores, 3 juniors and the sole senior.
*** Bangles was one of the top sophmores and the top student of the healing track.
*** Bangles was one of the top sophmores and the top student of the healing track.
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** Glandus' student hierarchy is based around the strongest students in each year: 5 sophomores, sophomores (4 currently, the knights), 3 juniors (the generals) and the sole senior.
*** Bangles was one of the top sophmores and the top student of thehealing Healing track.
*** Bangles was one of the top sophmores and the top student of the
**** Tito is also Captain of the the school's cheer squad, the Poltergeists, its dance troupe, and former member of a band called the Jackwitch 6.
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** Belos had a nephew named Caleb and was close to his father.
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** Belos had a nephew named Caleb and was close to his father. He also had a love interest whom he had lost.
* SecretKerper: Luz and Lilith agree to keep what they're talking about Camila's death and Lilith being indebted to the Baron from their family until they're ready to tell them about them: everyone is willing to wait.
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** Ghost being one of the Bat Queen's refugee palisman and Lilith's knowledge of Belos relying on palisman essence feels like it's already [[Fanfic/ABlightOnBonesborough happened before]]...
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** Ghost being one of the Bat Queen's refugee palisman and Lilith's knowledge of Belos relying on palisman essence feels feel like it's they've already [[Fanfic/ABlightOnBonesborough happened before]]...
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* WhatTheHellHero:
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* WhatTheHellHero:WhatTheHellHero: Edric breaks up with Hunter because his actions agaimst Lilith led to his little sister risking her life for her girlfriend and he invaded the privacy of both his family and Luz's for his uncle.
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Ms. Traveler and Lilith both assure Luz that she's nothing like Belos, with the latter telling her she's more like her.
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Ms. Traveler and Lilith both assure Luz that she's nothing like Belos, with the latter telling her she's more like her.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Art by Crosshot]]Crosshot: ''[[WesternAnimation/TotalDrama How much more pain can we put these kids through before the season is over? Find out right now on Luz! Clawthorne! Two Worlds, One Family!]]'']]
* AudienceSurrogate: Boscha acts as one to introduce the audience to how Glandus High's system works.
* BlatantLies: Kiki tries to tell the Emperor that Hunter's lying about the failed mission to make her look bad. He doesn't buy it.
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* CallBack: Luz mentioned in "Heart to Heart" that she made Otabin her imaginary friend after the Slayground incident before meeting Gus and Willow. This chapter starts by revealing that Otabin was a NotSoImaginaryFriend. The library incident is also mentioned again by the Blight siblings.
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* CallBack: CallBack:
** Luz mentioned in "Heart to Heart" that she made Otabin her imaginary friend after the Slayground incident before meeting Gus and Willow. This chapter starts by revealing that Otabin was a NotSoImaginaryFriend. The library incident is also mentioned again bythe Amity and her siblings
** Edric lists off everything Hunter did on his uncle's orders while [[WhatTheHellHero chewing him out]]; bugging Blightsiblings.Manor and the Owl House, putting Amity in danger, and nearly killing Lilith.
** Luz mentioned in "Heart to Heart" that she made Otabin her imaginary friend after the Slayground incident before meeting Gus and Willow. This chapter starts by revealing that Otabin was a NotSoImaginaryFriend. The library incident is also mentioned again by
** Edric lists off everything Hunter did on his uncle's orders while [[WhatTheHellHero chewing him out]]; bugging Blight
* CatapultNightmare: 5-year-old Luz dreams of reliving the slayground incident where Eda doesn't save her but something else does and when it touches her shoulder, she wakes up this way.
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** Luz is implied to have beaten every patron in the bar by herself.
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** Luz is implied to have beaten up every patron in the bar by herself.
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* DeathGlare: Ruth shoots one at Boscha, seeing her as a new potential rival for her position as top potions student.
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* DisappointedInYou: Namedropped by Belos towards Kikimora for trying to murder his nephew.
* DeathGlare: Ruth shoots one at Boscha, seeing her as a new potential rival for her position as toppotions Potions student.
* DeathGlare: Ruth shoots one at Boscha, seeing her as a new potential rival for her position as top
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* [[FirstDayOfSchoolEpisode First Day of School Chapter]]: Boscha's plot revolves around her officially transferring out of Hexside and starting at Glandus High. She spends the day learning how the system behind the latter works and has to attack Angmar as her initiation into the school.
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* [[FirstDayOfSchoolEpisode First Day of School Chapter]]: Boscha's plot revolves around her officially transferring out of Hexside and starting out at Glandus High. She spends the day learning how the system behind the latter works and has to attack Angmar as her initiation into the school.
* FromBadToWorse: After losing his first friend, Hunter loses the rest of them and his relationship with Edric because of all his secrets. Meanwhile, Kikimora loses her job and gets demoted while being immediately replaced.
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** Willow, Skara and the twins are now aware of Hunter's deception and what happened to Luz the night before with the rest of their friends knowing the truth as well. Emperor Belos is also aware of Kikimora's hand in that debacle.
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** Willow, Skara and the twins are now aware of Hunter's deception and what happened to Luz the night before with the rest of their friends knowing the truth as well.well and Eda later tells Odalia. Emperor Belos is also aware of Kikimora's hand in that debacle.
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** Lilith finally confesses to killing Camila to Luz and informs her about her indebtedness to the Baron.
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** Lilith finally confesses to in killing Camila to Luz and informs her about her indebtedness to the Baron.
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* InWithTheInCrowdInWithTheInCrowd: To be accepted at Glandus High, Boscha is ordered to attack a helpless Angmar as an initiation ceremony. She refuses to go through with it, so she's attacked by most of the top students.
* ItsAllMyFault: Eda takes full responsibility for Hunter bugging the Owl House and putting Camila & Raine in danger of the Emperor while Luz keeps ignoring Kikimora and Hunter's parts in Maya's death.
* ItsAllMyFault: Eda takes full responsibility for Hunter bugging the Owl House and putting Camila & Raine in danger of the Emperor while Luz keeps ignoring Kikimora and Hunter's parts in Maya's death.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Because of Kikimora's loyalty, Belos spares her life but demotes her to coven scout status and already had a replacement aide lined up.
* LampshadeHanging: After being so casually greeted by Ms. Traveler, Camila question who told her about her revival. King and Lilith simply shrug.
* LampshadeHanging: After being so casually greeted by Ms. Traveler, Camila question who told her about her revival. King and Lilith simply shrug.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Because of Kikimora's loyalty, Belos spares her life but demotes her to coven scout status and already had has a replacement aide lined up.
*LampshadeHanging: LampshadeHanging:
** Are we gonna question the fact that Eda keeps a ''shotgun'' under the couch!?
** After being so casually greeted by Ms. Traveler, Camilaquestion who questions if anybody told her about her revival. King and Lilith simply shrug.
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** Are we gonna question the fact that Eda keeps a ''shotgun'' under the couch!?
** After being so casually greeted by Ms. Traveler, Camila
* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Due to attacking Kikimora before demotimg her and sending her off, Belos shakes her up enough to make her forget about telling him of Luz absorbing Maya's essence last night. For once, ''he's'' the one in the dark regarding one of her secrets.
* OnceMoreWithClarity: Luz having Otabin as a NotSoImaginaryFriend and meeting the Bat Queen in her childhood are shown in flashbacks.
* PoorCommunicationKills: Just like with Luz and Amity, Hunter doesn't explains his visions to Edric only saying what he does for Belos is for everyone's own good. This just earns him Em threatening him after Ed shuts him out for good.
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* SecondActBreakup
* SequelHook: The Owl House residents begin researching Titan's Blood so they can make a portal to the human realm, Amity realizes only she is able to understand Ghost and the chapter ends with Sprig and his two companions getting stuck in the Boiling Isles.
* SequelHook: The Owl House residents begin researching Titan's Blood so they can make a portal to the human realm, Amity realizes only she is able to understand Ghost and the chapter ends with Sprig and his two companions getting stuck in the Boiling Isles.
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* SecondActBreakup
SecondActBreakup: Having heard about everything Hunter's done and kept secret, Edric dumps him and tells him to never talk to him again, breaking Hunter's heart.
* SequelHook: The Owl House residents begin researching Titan's Blood so they can make a portal to the human realm, Belos is left in the dark about Luz absorbing Maya for now, Amity realizes only she is able to understand Ghost and the chapter ends with Sprig and his two companions getting stuck in the Boiling Isles.
* SequelHook: The Owl House residents begin researching Titan's Blood so they can make a portal to the human realm, Belos is left in the dark about Luz absorbing Maya for now, Amity realizes only she is able to understand Ghost and the chapter ends with Sprig and his two companions getting stuck in the Boiling Isles.
* TrailersAlwaysSpoil: The final scene was the last scene in the Book 2 trailer from Book 1 (and by sheer coincidence, it's followed by a new trailer after the author's notes and the previous chapter's reviews).
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* WhamShot: Three figures come crashing out of a portal, two of them being human and the third... being a pink frog.
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* WhamShot: WhamShot:
** 5-year-old Luz sees a LivingShadow take the form of Otabin.
** Three figures come crashing out of a portal, two of them being human and the third... being a pink frog.
** 5-year-old Luz sees a LivingShadow take the form of Otabin.
** Three figures come crashing out of a portal, two of them being human and the third... being a pink frog.
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* YouAreNotAlone: Lilith assures Luz she's not the only person who accidentally took an innocent life, right before she confesses which life she took.
* YouAreNotAlone: Lilith assures Luz she's not the only person who accidentally took an innocent life, right before she confesses which life she took.
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* AbusiveParents: And some signs of ParentalNeglect are shown, too.
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* AnAesop: "To forgive is an act of compassion." To do so takes time, whether it's to someone else or yourself.
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* AnAesop: "To forgive is an act of compassion." To do so takes time, whether it's to someone else or yourself.
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* CharacterDevelopment: After having a lot of time to reflect and being transfered to Glandus High, Boscha decides to apologize to Willow for everything she's done asking to pass it along to Luz and Amity, saying goodbye to Simon and accepting Ms. Traveler's card so she can contact her if she needs advice. She also refuses to attack Angmar as if he was Willow while he's hurt, saying it won't prove anything and that Glandus' way of thinking is no different from the Emperor's Coven.
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* CharacterDevelopment: After having a lot of time to reflect and being transfered to Glandus High, Boscha decides to apologize to Willow and Skara for everything she's done to them and asking to they pass it along to Luz and Amity, saying goodbye to Simon and accepting Ms. Traveler's card so she can contact her if she needs advice. She also refuses to attack Angmar as if he was Willow while he's hurt, saying it won't prove anything and that Glandus' way of thinking is no different from the Emperor's Coven.
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** Shmebulock is still in the Boiling Isles, first shown in "Having a Little Hex with my Friends".
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** Shmebulock is still in the Boiling Isles, which was first shown in "Having a Little Hex with my Friends".
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** After Lilith confesses to being Camila's murderer, Luz decides to forgive her because Lilith, unlike Hunter, made a mistake in hurting her and is already suffering herself. She also attributes being unable to get angry with her after blowing up at Hunter a factor, but says she might have the energy to be mad at Lilith eventually.
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** After Lilith confesses to being Camila's murderer, Luz decides to forgive her because Lilith, unlike Hunter, knows she made a mistake in hurting that hurt her and is already suffering herself. She also attributes being unable to get angry with her after blowing up at Hunter a factor, but says she might have the energy to be mad at Lilith eventually.
* EvilFormerFriend: Everyone in Luz's friend group now sees Hunter as this upon learning of his dual identity.
* EyeScream: Hunter gets a black eye after Edric punches him.
* HurtingHero: Luz's HeroicBSOD is fresh on her mind thanks to the previous night's events, and she spends the first half of the A-plot sulking.
* SecondActBreakup
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* TalkToTheFist: More like "Talk to the '''Sword'''". Emira threatens Hunter at swordpoint to never come near Edric again.
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* TalkToTheFist: More like "Talk to the Fist, then the '''Sword'''". Edric slugs Hunter in the face for lying to him, and Emira threatens Hunter him at swordpoint to never come near Edric again.
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** Boscha, who was ganged up on by the top students of Glandus, gets a visit from a sympathetic Simon and Cat.
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** Boscha, who was ganged up on by the top students of Glandus, gets a visit from a sympathetic Simon and Cat.Cat, the latter proceeding to heal her.
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* WhamEpisode: Edric dumps Hunter for lying to him and hurting both his and Luz's families, Kikimora is demoted to coven scout and replaced by an old friend of Belos, Abel Reisender, Boscha officially starts attending Glandus, Lilith confesses to Luz about killing Camila, the Owl House crew starts looking into portal-making techniques and using a portal gun acquired from Witch Rick, they open a portal to Amphibia, which ends up closing and getting Sprig Plantar and his two human associates stuck in the demon realm.
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: Everyone cuts Hunter out of their lives after learning he's the Golden Guard and what happened in Latissa, with Luz and Edric blocking him on Penstagram.
* WhamEpisode: Edric dumps Hunter for lying to him and hurting both his and Luz's families, Kikimora is demoted to coven scout and replaced byan Belos' old friend of Belos, Abel Reisender, Reisender as his assistant, Boscha officially starts attending Glandus, Lilith confesses to Luz about killing Camila, the Owl House crew starts looking into portal-making techniques and using a portal gun acquired from Witch Rick, they open a portal to Amphibia, which ends up closing and getting Sprig Plantar and his two human associates stuck in the demon realm.
* WhamEpisode: Edric dumps Hunter for lying to him and hurting both his and Luz's families, Kikimora is demoted to coven scout and replaced by
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* TheAce: Every top student at Glandus High excels in their respective track: along with Nina who's been established as the best beastkeeper, there's Goredon (abomination), Bangles (formerly healing), Wesselton (plant), Ruth (potions), Kadabe (oracle), Cain Saltstar (construction) and Tito (bard). Emily's the strongest of all the students.
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* TheAce: Every top student at Glandus High excels in their respective track: along with Nina who's been established as the best beastkeeper, Beast Keeper, there's Goredon (abomination), Bangles (formerly healing), Wesselton (plant), Ruth (potions), Kadabe (oracle), Cain Saltstar (construction) and Tito (bard). Emily's the strongest of all the students.
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** Ghost being one of the Bat Queen's refugee palisman and Lilith's knowledge of Belos relying on palisman essence seems like it's already [[Fanfic/ABlightOnBonesborough happened before]]...
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** Ghost being one of the Bat Queen's refugee palisman and Lilith's knowledge of Belos relying on palisman essence seems feels like it's already [[Fanfic/ABlightOnBonesborough happened before]]...
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* NewMeat: Being a new student puts Boscha in this category.
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* IDidntTellYouBecauseYoudBeUnhappy: To alleviate Luz from her guilt, Lilith tells her she accidentally murdered Camila and she didn't speak up both because she was afraid Luz would hate her even more and that she'd be more upset by the news.
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* IDidntTellYouBecauseYoudBeUnhappy: To alleviate Luz from her guilt, Lilith tells her she accidentally murdered Camila and she didn't speak up both because she was afraid Luz would hate her even more and that she'd be become more upset by the news.
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* AnAesop: "To forgive is an act of compassion." To do so takes time, whether it's to someone else or yourself.
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* BilingualBonus: Camila can only say one thing after making pixie pies with Eda: "Esas pobres cosas estaban mendigando..."[[note]]Those poor things were begging...[[/note]]
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* BilingualBonus: Camila can only say one thing after making pixie pies with Eda: Eda, and that's: "Esas pobres cosas estaban mendigando..."[[note]]Those poor things were begging...[[/note]]
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* MythologyGag: Prof. Blanc uses his canon name, Hermonculus, as his alias to try and get hired at Hexside again.
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** In the flashback, Vina refers to William as "Sir William", the same name as the possible basis for Hunter in the ''Owl House'' pilot.
** Prof. Blanc uses his canon name, Hermonculus, as his alias to try and get hired at Hexside again.
** In the flashback, Vina refers to William as "Sir William", the same name as the possible basis for Hunter in the ''Owl House'' pilot.
** Prof. Blanc uses his canon name, Hermonculus, as his alias to try and get hired at Hexside again.
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* CharacterDevelopment: After having a lot of time to reflect and being transfered to Glandus High, Boscha decides to apologize to Willow for everything she's done asking to pass it along to Luz and Amity, saying goodbye to Simon and accepting Ms. Traveler's card so she can contact her if she needs advice. She also refuses to attack Angmar as if he was Willow while he's hurt, saying it won't prove anything and that Glandus' way of thinking is no different from the Emperor's Coven.
* DeathGlare: Ruth shoots one at Boscha, seeing her as a new potential rival for her position as top potions student.
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** Tom doesn't physically appear, but he's shown passing a note to Boscha at the end of the day.
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** Tom doesn't physically appear, but he's shown mentioned to be passing a note to Boscha at the end of the day.
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** Flapjack and Ghost were acquainted with the Clawthorne family, but Ghost ran away when she saw Philip consume a palisman.
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** Flapjack and Ghost were acquainted with the Clawthorne family, but Ghost ran away when she they saw Philip consume a palisman.
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* SignificantWardrobeShift: When Boscha starts her first day at Hexside, she dons the school's uniform. Per Nicole's request of having her in the potions track, her sleeves and leggings are changed from gray to yellow.
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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: After hearing Cain's not going to help her, Boscha realizes how much hurt she's in for at the hands of the rest of the top students.