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** Bella is shown having to take heavy luggage up to a guest's room and when she succeeds, the guest decides to check out and Bella throws the suitcase out the window. The whole scene pmays out like ''WesternAnimation/TheAmazingWorldOfGumball'' episode, [[Recap/TheAmazingWorldOfGumballS1E16TheKiss "The Kiss"]].
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** Bella is shown having to take heavy luggage up to a guest's room and when she succeeds, the guest decides to check out and Bella throws the suitcase out the window. The whole scene pmays plays out like ''WesternAnimation/TheAmazingWorldOfGumball'' episode, [[Recap/TheAmazingWorldOfGumballS1E16TheKiss "The Kiss"]].
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* TheBusCameBack: Husk returns since his cameo in "Friends in Lower Places", being one of DJ's friends.
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* TheBusCameBack: Husk returns and [=McScream=] return since his cameo their cameos in "Friends in Lower Places", with Husk being one of DJ's friends.friends and [=McScream=] being thrown out of the Binger.
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** [=McScream=] is shown getting thrown out of a club.
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** [=McScream=] is shown getting thrown out of a club.the club Verosika takes the girls (and Blitz) to.
* ContinuityNod:
** Loona is once again prevented from entering a place [[FantasticRacism just because she's a hellhound]].
** Bella being a GamerChick is shown again.
** Loona is once again prevented from entering a place [[FantasticRacism just because she's a hellhound]].
** Bella being a GamerChick is shown again.
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* OneSteveLimit: Jonathan, a Goetian cat demon with human hands, shares his name with Jonathan Long, human-turned-werewolf.
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* OneSteveLimit: OneSteveLimit:
** Jonathan, a Goetian cat demon with human hands, shares his name with Jonathan Long,human-turned-werewolf.human-turned-werewolf.
** Janna, a cheetah hellcat who works at the Silvermoon Palace, shares her name with the human Janna Ordonia.
** Jonathan, a Goetian cat demon with human hands, shares his name with Jonathan Long,
** Janna, a cheetah hellcat who works at the Silvermoon Palace, shares her name with the human Janna Ordonia.
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** Bella is shown having to take heavy luggage up to a guest's room and when she succeeds, the guest decides to check out and Bella throws the suitcase out the window. The whole scene pmays out like ''WesternAnimation/TheAmazingWorldOfGumball'' episode, [[Recap/TheAmazingWorldOfGumballS1E16TheKiss "The Kiss"]].
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** Via's plot leads to her further bonding with Cray while meeting his cousing Jonathan.
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** Via's plot leads to her further bonding with Cray while meeting his cousing cousin Jonathan.
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* PleaseDontLeaveMe: This is why Blitz forced himself into Loona's girl's night out; he feared that she'd leave him like everyone else he was close to and move in with Verosika. Loona tells him she won't do that as he raised her and will always be a part of her life.
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** Edgar of ''WesternAnimation/TheAristocats'' is shown to be a sinner, working as the butler of Cray's family.
** DJ and his friends sing "[[WesternAnimation/TheAristocats Everybody Wants to be a Cat]]".
** DJ and his friends sing "[[WesternAnimation/TheAristocats Everybody Wants to be a Cat]]".
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** To ''WesternAnimation/TheAristocats''; Edgar of ''WesternAnimation/TheAristocats'' is shown to be a sinner, working as the butler of Cray's family.
**family. And at one point, DJ and his friends sing "[[WesternAnimation/TheAristocats Everybody "Everybody Wants to be a Cat]]".Cat".
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** Casey's starting to remember his life before his death.
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* ADayInTheLimelight: All three plots allow different characters focus.
** Loona's plot gives her aunt Barbie a chance to see and spend time with both her and Verosika.
** Moxxie's plot has him hanging out with Mick after work, which results in him meeting Ace's wife and Ryan's mom, Honey-Ryder.
** Via's plot leads to her further bonding with Cray while meeting his cousing Jonathan.
* ForcedTransformation: After being insulted by Cordelia about his hands, Jonathan turns her into a platypus as she's walking away from him. She falis to notice even with the other students in the hallway staring at her.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Any long-time ''Luz Clawthorne'' readers would instantly recognize Casey as Whiskers just from seeing he's a cat with black fur. Sure enough, the ending confirms it's him.
* TheGhost: Nina Fangs is brought up by Casey/Whiskers after his CatapultNightmare.
** Loona's plot gives her aunt Barbie a chance to see and spend time with both her and Verosika.
** Moxxie's plot has him hanging out with Mick after work, which results in him meeting Ace's wife and Ryan's mom, Honey-Ryder.
** Via's plot leads to her further bonding with Cray while meeting his cousing Jonathan.
* ForcedTransformation: After being insulted by Cordelia about his hands, Jonathan turns her into a platypus as she's walking away from him. She falis to notice even with the other students in the hallway staring at her.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Any long-time ''Luz Clawthorne'' readers would instantly recognize Casey as Whiskers just from seeing he's a cat with black fur. Sure enough, the ending confirms it's him.
* TheGhost: Nina Fangs is brought up by Casey/Whiskers after his CatapultNightmare.
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* OnceMoreWithClarity: We're given a glimpse of Sonya dissecting Casey from a memory taken from his P.O.V..
* OneSteveLimit: Jonathan, a Goetian cat demon with human hands, shares his name with Jonathan Long, human-turned-werewolf.
* OneSteveLimit: Jonathan, a Goetian cat demon with human hands, shares his name with Jonathan Long, human-turned-werewolf.
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** Loona snuck into Verosika's rehab center to visit her, where she ended up meeting Barbie and learned she was her aunt. Afterward, Blitz would allow Loona to visit Barbie so she could spend time with her.
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** Casey's starting to remember his life before his death.
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* AbhorentAdmirer: Cray's cousin Jonathan to Loona, as he shares some interests with her but tries too hard to impress her and stares at her for long periods of time.
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* AbhorentAdmirer: AbhorrentAdmirer: Cray's cousin Jonathan to Loona, as he shares some interests with her but tries too hard to impress her and stares at her for long periods of time.
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* KnightTemplarParent: Blitz intrudes on Loona's night out with Verosika, Bella, and Clara by convincing Gaap to let him serve as Verosika's bodyguard. He does his job but can't resist complaining at various points, and it doesn't get better when he finds out Barbie was joining the girls and being pursued by robots trying to bring her back to the rehab center. After they get home, [[ArmorPiercingResponse Blitz tells Loona that he did what he did because he was aftraid of Loona moving out and going to live with Verosika,]] a fear she puts in the grave.
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* KnightTemplarParent: Blitz intrudes on Loona's night out with Verosika, Bella, and Clara by convincing Gaap to let him serve as Verosika's bodyguard. He does his job but can't resist complaining at various points, and it doesn't get better when he finds out Barbie was joining the girls and being pursued by robots trying to bring her back to the rehab center. After they get home, [[ArmorPiercingResponse Blitz tells Loona that he did what he did because he was aftraid afraid of Loona moving out and going to live with Verosika,]] a fear she puts in the grave.
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** While praising Blitz for letting go and allowing Loona to live her life without doing something creepy like following her and her friends during her girls' night out, Moxcie Moxxie indirectly inspires his boss to do just that.
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** Casey's soul has ended up in Hell, and now he goes by the name of Whiskers, initially being unable to remember his past before his death.
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** Casey's soul has ended up in Hell, and now he goes by the name of Whiskers, initially being unable to remember his past before his death.Whiskers.
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: After hearing about how Edgar died, Linda points out that cats don't actually have nine lives and can't spend money, so he would've been allowed to manage Madame Adelaide's fortune while only spending a small amount to take care of Duchess and her kittens; heck, he could've even hired another butler to care for them. This causes Edgar to see that in trying to get rid of his boss's cats, [[AllForNothing he indignatly died a broke man.]]
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: After hearing about how Edgar died, Linda points out that cats don't actually have nine lives and can't spend money, so he would've been allowed to manage Madame Adelaide's fortune while only spending a small amount to take care of Duchess and her kittens; heck, he could've even hired another butler to care for them. This causes Edgar to see that in trying to get rid of his boss's cats, [[AllForNothing he indignatly indignantly died a broke man.]]
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* AbhorentAdmirer: Cray's cousin Jonathan to Loona, as he shares some interests with her but tries too hard to impress her and stares at her for long periods of time.
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* BigWhat: Octavia, Cray, and Stolas all shout one when Stella announces that she talked with Flauros and Ixchel and arranged a date between their children.
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* IronButtMonkey: Throughout the golf match, Edgar is shown repeatedly being injured by the courses' hazards. Jonathan simply says he's survived worse.
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* LuminescentBlush: Linda has one after realizing she confessed to thinking Chel is hot.
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** Because of Stella, Octavia and Cray are now expected to go on a date.
** Barbie's back in rehab, so who knows how things will go for her given the amped up security and other changes from the new management.
** Because of Stella, Octavia and Cray are now expected to go on a date.
** Barbie's back in rehab, so who knows how things will go for her given the amped up security and other changes from the new management.
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: After hearing about how Edgar died, Linda points out that cats don't actually have nine lives and can't spend money, so he would've been allowed to manage Madame Adelaide's fortune while only spending a small amount to take care of Duchess and her kittens; heck, he could've even hired another butler to care for them. This causes Edgar to see that in trying to get rid of his boss's cats, [[AllForNothing he indignatly died a broke man.]]
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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: When Stolas tells Stella she needs to wear appropriate golf clothing, she's appalled with having to wear shorts for the afternoon.
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* BerserkButton: Due to being forcibly injected in the past, Loona goes nuts at the sight of a needle.
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* KnightTemplarParent: Blitz intrudes on Loona's night out with Verosika, Bella, and Clara by convincing Gaap to let him serve as Verosika's bodyguard. He does his job but can't resist complaining at various points, and it doesn't get better when he finds out Barbie was joining the girls and being pursued by robots trying to bring her back to the rehab center. After they get home, [[ArmorPiercingResponse Blitz tells Loona that he did what he did because he was aftraid of Loona moving out and going to live with Verosika,]] a fear she puts in the grave.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero:
** While praising Blitz for letting go and allowing Loona to live her life without doing something creepy like following her and her friends during her girls' night out, Moxcie indirectly inspires his boss to do just that.
** Barbie broke out of rehab so she could spend time with Loona and Verosika. As a result, the robot guards that come after her come close to nearly killing her brother and niece forcing her to go back willingly.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero:
** While praising Blitz for letting go and allowing Loona to live her life without doing something creepy like following her and her friends during her girls' night out, Moxcie indirectly inspires his boss to do just that.
** Barbie broke out of rehab so she could spend time with Loona and Verosika. As a result, the robot guards that come after her come close to nearly killing her brother and niece forcing her to go back willingly.
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!Chapter 4: 5: Demon Girls Night Out
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* TheCameoAdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Loona has yet to even meet Barbie Wire in ''WebAnimation/HelluvaBoss'', but here she's known her aunt for years after [[ContrivedCoincidence meeting her by accident]].
* TheBusCameBack: Husk returns since his cameo in "Friends in Lower Places", being one of DJ's friends.
* TheCameo:
* TheBusCameBack: Husk returns since his cameo in "Friends in Lower Places", being one of DJ's friends.
* TheCameo:
* ContinuityCameo: The flashback of Loona first meeting Barbie includes Lars and Harvey helping Loona sneak in.
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** Mick's mom died a year before he did, and he was seventeen. It's been nine years since then, making him twenty-six.
** Casey's soul has ended up in Hell, and now he goes by the name ofWhiskers.
Whiskers, initially being unable to remember his past before his death.
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** Mick's mom died a year before he did, and he was seventeen. It's been nine years since then, making him twenty-six.
** Casey's soul has ended up in Hell, and now he goes by the name of
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-->[-Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn: [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/47956195/chapters/133183990 HERE]]-]
-->[-Website/FanfictionDotNet: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14245601/5/LC-Presents-Helluva-Dad HERE]]-]
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!Chapter 4: Demon Girls Night Out
Loona goes out on a girl's night out, Moxxie hangs out with his new friend, and Octavia's family goes on a little family outing
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!! Tropes that appear in this Chapter:
* TheCameo
** [=McScream=] is shown getting thrown out of a club.
** Among the golfers is Scar.
* PointOfDivergence: Blitz bumps into Barbie Wire before she officially gets out of rehab.
* TheReveal: Casey's soul has ended up in Hell, and now goes by the name of Whiskers.
* ShoutOut
** Ms. Deagle tells Moxxie that [[WesternAnimation/MonstersInc she's watching him... always watching]].
** DJ and his friends sing "[[WesternAnimation/TheAristocats Everybody Wants to be a Cat]]".
* TwoLinesNoWaiting: While Loona is having a night out with Bella, Clara, and Verosika (with Blitz accompanying them), Moxxie hangs out with Mick, and Via's family goes on a family outing.
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Loona goes out on a girl's night out, Moxxie hangs out with his new friend, and Octavia's family goes on a little family outing
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!! Tropes that appear in this Chapter:
* TheCameo
** [=McScream=] is shown getting thrown out of a club.
** Among the golfers is Scar.
* PointOfDivergence: Blitz bumps into Barbie Wire before she officially gets out of rehab.
* TheReveal: Casey's soul has ended up in Hell, and now goes by the name of Whiskers.
* ShoutOut
** Ms. Deagle tells Moxxie that [[WesternAnimation/MonstersInc she's watching him... always watching]].
** DJ and his friends sing "[[WesternAnimation/TheAristocats Everybody Wants to be a Cat]]".
* TwoLinesNoWaiting: While Loona is having a night out with Bella, Clara, and Verosika (with Blitz accompanying them), Moxxie hangs out with Mick, and Via's family goes on a family outing.
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