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* AdaptationExpansion: Edric and Emira are shown seeing how much pressure Amity's always under and how their pranks negatively affect her, which leads to them pulling back on embarrassing her and looking out for her more.
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* HowDoIShotWeb: Due to the fae messing with him, King believes he has gained magic while partying in the club. When the fae takes it back, King is left trying to figure out how he did what he did until the former confesses.
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* WhamEpisode: Edric and Emira discover that Amity was mugged and are sworn to secrecy via an everlasting oath which also causes them to start looking out for their sister more. Meanwhile, King encounters a creature called a fae, Fae, which are considered dangerous. And while Luz accepts her crush on Amity, she has to content with her inner doubts about it.
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* TheManInTheMirrorTalksBack: The chapter ends with Luz's reflection taking the form of her as a 5-year old asking her if she's really gonna risk getting hurt again over having a crush.
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* BreatherEpisode: There isn't any action, fighting or large antagonistic force; the majority of the chapter is two different families having some very imprtant conversations.
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* TraumaButton: Emira presses Amity's hard, which allow her and Edric to learn the truth.truth why she snuck out a few nights ago.
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* AttentionWhore: Lampshaded by Emira, who accuses Amity of being one.
* BerserkButton: Amity snaps when Emira says she's always acted like she's better than her and Edric ever since she abandoned Willow.
* BreatherEpisode: There isn't any action, fighting or large antagonistic force; the majority of the chapter is two different families having some very imprtant conversations.
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* FirstLove: Although she's felt attraction to other people in the past, Luz feels something more with Amity and comes to terms that Amity's her first true crush.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: The twins point out how much they don't know about Amity since she's been distancing herself from them.
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* WideEyesAndShrunkenIrises: Luz has these after Eda tells her they're having TheTalk.
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* PleaseIWillDoAnything: When Emira picks Amity up by her collar in anger, Amity [[TraumaButton flashes back]] to her mugging and starts yelling and begging to be let go or be hurt. This causes the twins to realize what happened.
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* WhamEpisode: Edric and Emira discover that Amity was mugged and are sworn to secrecy via an everlasting oath which also causes them to start looking out for their sister more. Meanwhile, King encounters a creature called a fae, which are considered dangerous. And while Luz accepts her crush on Amity, she has to content with her inner doubts about it.
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* PitchforksAndTorches: In response to King accidentally destroying the club's speaker, one of the patrons suggests raging as an angry mob in response, causing him to bail.
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* TorchesAndPitchforks: In response to King accidentally destroying the club's speaker, one of the patrons suggests raging as an angry mob in response, causing him to bail.
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* BrokenTears: Amity sheds these after panicking due to Emira accidentally triggering her trauma.
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* FirstLove: Although she's felt attraction to other people in the past, Luz feels something more with Amity and comes to terms that Amity's her first true crush.
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* PitchforksAndTorches: In response to King accidentally destroying the club's speaker, one of the patrons suggests raging as an angry mob in response, causing him to bail.
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* PlayingWithFire: King shoots fire out of his hands as a result of the fae lending him magic.
* PleaseIWillDoAnything: When Emira picks Amity up by her collar in anger, Amity [[TraumaButton flashes back]] to her mugging and starts yelling and begging to be let go or be hurt. This causes the twins to realize what happened.
* PleaseIWillDoAnything: When Emira picks Amity up by her collar in anger, Amity [[TraumaButton flashes back]] to her mugging and starts yelling and begging to be let go or be hurt. This causes the twins to realize what happened.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Seeing the angry mob that's forming to attack him for shorting out the speaker, King bolts out of the club through the fire escape.
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* ShockAndAwe: The fae has lightning powers that he allows King to temporarily use.
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* CallBack:
** Amity mentions to the twins why she snuck out during the moonlight conjuring.
** Eda mentions her ex-husband again, who she brought up in "Witch's Duel or Don't".
** Amity mentions to the twins why she snuck out during the moonlight conjuring.
** Eda mentions her ex-husband again, who she brought up in "Witch's Duel or Don't".
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** King encounters the fae and informs Luz and Eda about him.
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* YouCalledMeXItMustBeSerious: If Emira adresses Amity by her name instead of by "Mittens", you know how angry or worried she is towards/for her baby sister.
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** Eda was once married to someone in the human realm and they honeymooned in Las Vegas.
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* HeelRealization:The twins realize just how unfair they've been to Amity after pressing her TraumaButton.
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* ImmediateSequel: Things pick up right after Luz tells Eda she has a crush on Amity now. From Amity's POV, she's just arrived home and confronts the twins about what they did at the library.
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* ImmediateSequel: Things pick up right after Luz tells Eda she has a crush on Amity now. From Amity's POV, she's just arrived home and confronts is confronting the twins about what they did at the library.
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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: Instead of punishing Luz for sneaking out, Eda decides to give her a long, detailed talk. Luz doesn't see any difference.
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* EmbarrassingBrowserHistory: Eda went through Luz's maginet history and printed out copies of R-rated sites she visited.
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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: Instead of punishing Luz for sneaking out, Eda decides to give her a long, detailed talk.talk about sex. Luz doesn't see any difference.
* EmbarrassingBrowserHistory: Eda went through Luz's maginet history and printed outcopies of R-rated pictures from the mature sites she visited.
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** The creature with the moving shadow is a fae, which are forbidden from setting foot in the Boiling Isles.
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* BitchSlap: Amity doesn't hesitate to give one to Emira after she accuses her of admitting she's better than the twins and ending her friendship with Willow.
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* TheAlternet: The Boiling Isles' version of the internet is called the "maginet".
* AnythingButThat: Luz is horrified when Eda decides to give her the extended take of "the talk", beyond where babies come from.
* BegoneBribe: Somewhat invoked. Eda asks King to leave, but he takes his cut of the Bat Queen's payment with him.
* BitchSlap: Amity doesn't hesitate to give one to Emira after she accuses her of admitting she's better than the twins and ending her friendship withWillow.
Willow. It's the second one she's taken in the timespan of a few hours.
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CoolAndUnusualPunishment: Instead of punishing Luz for sneaking out, Eda decides to give her a long, detailed talk. Luz doesn't see any difference.
* EmbarrassingBrowserHistory: Eda went through Luz's maginet history and printed out copies of R-rated sites she visited.
* HeelRealization:The twins realize just how unfair they've been to Amity after pressing her TraumaButton.
* ImmediateSequel: Things pick up right after Luz tells Eda she has a crush on Amity now. From Amity's POV, she's just arrived home and confronts the twins about what they did at the library.
* InternalReveal: Edric and Emira learn about Amity'smugging.mugging and that she tried to find the other night.
* AnythingButThat: Luz is horrified when Eda decides to give her the extended take of "the talk", beyond where babies come from.
* BegoneBribe: Somewhat invoked. Eda asks King to leave, but he takes his cut of the Bat Queen's payment with him.
* BitchSlap: Amity doesn't hesitate to give one to Emira after she accuses her of admitting she's better than the twins and ending her friendship with
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* EmbarrassingBrowserHistory: Eda went through Luz's maginet history and printed out copies of R-rated sites she visited.
* HeelRealization:The twins realize just how unfair they've been to Amity after pressing her TraumaButton.
* ImmediateSequel: Things pick up right after Luz tells Eda she has a crush on Amity now. From Amity's POV, she's just arrived home and confronts the twins about what they did at the library.
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* LackOfEmpathyLackOfEmpathy: Amity bluntly states that the twins have never cared hhow their pranks have affected her.
* LittleNo: Luz gives one as Eda begins explaining the "diet-fram".
* {{Lockdown}}: Hooty goes into one once Eda says the "S" word. Every exit is locked down, even the fireplace.
* NoodleIncident: Eda did it with a redhead at a Stevie Nicks concert.
* PlayingTheVictimCard: Ed and Em try to act like the victims beaten at Luz's hands, but Amity doesn't buy it.
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** Eda was once married to someone in the human realm and they honeymooned in Las Vegas.
** The creature with the moving shadow is a fae, which are forbidden from setting foot in the Boiling Isles.
* SecretKeeper: Amity swears Edric and Emira to secrecy with the Everlasting Oath before telling them of her attack.
* LittleNo: Luz gives one as Eda begins explaining the "diet-fram".
* {{Lockdown}}: Hooty goes into one once Eda says the "S" word. Every exit is locked down, even the fireplace.
* NoodleIncident: Eda did it with a redhead at a Stevie Nicks concert.
* PlayingTheVictimCard: Ed and Em try to act like the victims beaten at Luz's hands, but Amity doesn't buy it.
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** Eda was once married to someone in the human realm and they honeymooned in Las Vegas.
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* VomitDiscretionShot: Luz ends up puking her guts out in the bathroom because Eda over explained her first experience having sex.
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!Chapter 13: The Talk
As Eda gives Luz a "[[TitleDrop the talk]]", Amity gives the twins a talking to, and King has a magical encounter.
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As Eda gives Luz a "[[TitleDrop the talk]]", Amity gives the twins a talking to, and King has a magical encounter.
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