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* NotDrawnToScale: The yardage of fabric needed for an adult's dress would not be sufficient to repurpose into two smaller dresses for children even in whole condition; it would be even more obviously hopeless, especially to an experienced seamstress like Caroline, with the fabric already cut for the original pattern and mostly assembled.
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* NotDrawnToScale: The yardage of fabric needed for an adult's dress would not be sufficient to repurpose into two smaller dresses for children even in whole condition; it would be even more obviously hopeless, especially to an experienced seamstress like Caroline, with the fabric already cut for the original pattern and mostly assembled.assembled, the hopelessness would be even more obvious, especially to an experienced seamstress like Caroline.
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* NeverLearnedToRead: It is strongly implied that Laura has, at age 10, yet to learn how to read, or at least with a high level of proficiency.
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* NeverLearnedToRead: It is strongly implied Laura, about age eight, confides to Miss Beadle on her first day of school that Laura has, at age 10, she has not yet learned to learn how to read, or at least with a high level of proficiency.read. She is later seen making progress.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Willie's first appearance involves him joining the boys in making fun of the newcoming Ingalls girls as the arriv eofr school for the first time, and Nellie's is staring coldly at them and calling them "country girls" in a clipped voice.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Willie's first appearance involves him joining the boys in making fun of the newcoming Ingalls girls as the arriv eofr arrive for school for the first time, and Nellie's is staring coldly at them and calling them "country girls" in a clipped voice.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Willie's first appearance involves him joining the boys in making fun of the newcoming Ingalls girls as the arriv eofr school for the first time, and Nellie's is staring coldly at them and calling them "country girls" in a clipped voice.
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* NotDrawnToScale: The yardage of fabric needed for an adult's dress would not be sufficient to repurpose into two smaller dresses for children even in whole condition; it would be even more obviously hopeless, especially to an experienced seamstress like Caroline, with the fabric already cut for the original pattern and mostly assembled.
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* NewTransferStudent: Mary and Laura attend Walnut Grove School for the first time. Even though they are regulars, they are the newcomers to the school.
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* NewTransferStudent: Mary and Laura attend Walnut Grove School for the first time. Even though they are regulars, they are the newcomers to the school.school.
* TemptingFate: Laura explains to Mr. Oleson that Pa has a strict "cash on the barrel" policy for the family's spending. Mr. Oleson praises the wisdom of that strategy but remarks that many people have a hard time sticking to it; indeed, the Ingalls family will find itself tight on funds and incurring significant debt (including seeking credit at Oleson's Mercantile itself) many a time.
* TemptingFate: Laura explains to Mr. Oleson that Pa has a strict "cash on the barrel" policy for the family's spending. Mr. Oleson praises the wisdom of that strategy but remarks that many people have a hard time sticking to it; indeed, the Ingalls family will find itself tight on funds and incurring significant debt (including seeking credit at Oleson's Mercantile itself) many a time.
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* FirstAppearance: Of Eva Beadle, the {{Schoolmarm}} … but far more notably, of Nellie Oleson. Oh yeah, she's got a bratty, mischievous little brother named Willie, too.
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* NeverLearnedToRead: It is strongly implied that Laura has, at age 10, yet to learn how to read, or at least with high proficiency.
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* NeverLearnedToRead: It is strongly implied that Laura has, at age 10, yet to learn how to read.read, or at least with high proficiency.
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* FirstAppearance: Of Emma Beadle, the {{Schoolmarm}} … but far more notably, of Nellie Oleson. Oh yeah, she's got a bratty, mischievous little brother named Willie, too.
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* FirstAppearance: Of Emma Eva Beadle, the {{Schoolmarm}} … but far more notably, of Nellie Oleson. Oh yeah, she's got a bratty, mischievous little brother named Willie, too.
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* NewTransferStudent: Mary and Laura attend Walnut Grove School for the first time. Even though they are regulars, they are the newcomers.
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* AlphaBitch: Although this would be far more expanded in later episodes, this is just the template for Nellie Oleson's character for the first six years of the series.
* FirstAppearance: Of Emma Beadle, the {{Schoolmarm}} … but far more notably, of Nellie Oleson. Oh yeah, she's got a bratty, mischievous little brother named Willie, too.
* NeverLearnedToRead: It is strongly implied that Laura has, at age 10, yet to learn how to read.
* NewTransferStudent: Mary and Laura attend Walnut Grove School for the first time. Even though they are regulars, they are thenewcomers.newcomers to the school.
* FirstAppearance: Of Emma Beadle, the {{Schoolmarm}} … but far more notably, of Nellie Oleson. Oh yeah, she's got a bratty, mischievous little brother named Willie, too.
* NeverLearnedToRead: It is strongly implied that Laura has, at age 10, yet to learn how to read.
* NewTransferStudent: Mary and Laura attend Walnut Grove School for the first time. Even though they are regulars, they are the
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!! Tropes associated with this episode:
* NewTransferStudent: Mary and Laura attend Walnut Grove School for the first time. Even though they are regulars, they are the newcomers.
* NewTransferStudent: Mary and Laura attend Walnut Grove School for the first time. Even though they are regulars, they are the newcomers.
