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* AdaptationExpansion: At the time of writing, it wasn't stated where Luz is from in the human world. Here she's from UsefulNotes/{{Texas}}.UsefulNotes/{{Texas}}, with a later chapter handwaving the discrepancy by implying she and her mother originally hail from Connecticut, as they do in the show.
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* SubvertedSitcom: The characters wake up in a pleasant ModernAUFic where everyone has normal roles, but the characters are trapped in their roles and [[AGlitchInTheMatrix odd happenings]] eventually give way to the revelation that it's the LotusEaterMachine Luz accidentally trapped everyone in. Amity [[LampshadeHanging openly compares the weird way that time moves in there to the way sitcoms skip over irrelevant moments]].
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* AdaptationExpansion: While it is never stated where Luz is from in the human world, here it's UsefulNotes/{{Texas}}.
* AndIMustScream: Luz can hear Hooty -- rendered an inanimate object in the LotusEaterMachine -- screaming, implying that he is still full-conscious while under the spell.
* FightingFromTheInside: Either being reminded of their real lives or physical pain is how one trapped in the LotusEaterMachine can resurface their real memories and personality.
* AGlitchInTheMatrix: While at first just confused, it isn't until Camila tries serving Luz eyeballs and tentacles before it turns into bacon and eggs does she realizes just how bad things might be.
* AndIMustScream: Luz can hear Hooty -- rendered an inanimate object in the LotusEaterMachine -- screaming, implying that he is still full-conscious while under the spell.
* FightingFromTheInside: Either being reminded of their real lives or physical pain is how one trapped in the LotusEaterMachine can resurface their real memories and personality.
* AGlitchInTheMatrix: While at first just confused, it isn't until Camila tries serving Luz eyeballs and tentacles before it turns into bacon and eggs does she realizes just how bad things might be.
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* AdaptationExpansion: While it is never stated where Luz is from in the human world, here it's she's from UsefulNotes/{{Texas}}.
* AndIMustScream: Luz can hear Hooty -- rendered as an inanimate object in the LotusEaterMachine --screaming, screaming in fear, implying that he is still full-conscious fully-conscious while under the spell.
* FightingFromTheInside: Either being reminded of their real lives or undergoing physical pain is how one trapped in the LotusEaterMachine can resurface their real memories and personality.
* AGlitchInTheMatrix: While at first she was just confused, it isn't until Camila tries serving Luz eyeballs and tentaclesbefore it turns into (which become bacon and eggs does after she points it out) that Luz realizes just how bad things might be.
* AndIMustScream: Luz can hear Hooty -- rendered as an inanimate object in the LotusEaterMachine --
* FightingFromTheInside: Either being reminded of their real lives or undergoing physical pain is how one trapped in the LotusEaterMachine can resurface their real memories and personality.
* AGlitchInTheMatrix: While at first she was just confused, it isn't until Camila tries serving Luz eyeballs and tentacles
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* AchievementInIgnorance: Lovelace teaches Luz how to use her own magic to enhance her strength, allowing her to free him from his cell. What he neglected to tell her was that her limbs would have exploded if she did it in any way wrong.
--> '''Luz''': WHAT!? WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME!?\\
'''Lovelace''': Cause the same way birds learn how to fly, you need to throw them out of the nest and let them figure it out on the way down!
--> '''Luz''': WHAT!? WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME!?\\
'''Lovelace''': Cause the same way birds learn how to fly, you need to throw them out of the nest and let them figure it out on the way down!
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* HopeSpot: Amity and Luz manage to get to Lovelace, who says that he can undo the LotusEaterMachine if he is given permission to her magic. She gives it, only for Lovelace to actually be Zul, having tricked her into giving them all of her power.
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* TheReveal: Zul's real name is Kopiere.
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** Lilith is a police officer.
** King was turned into a black fox.
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** King was turned into a black fox.
---> Cat software running on dog hardware.
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* HolodeckMalfunction: Zul manages to hijack and gain some level of control over the LotusEaterMachine Luz accidentally created, their main goal being to get Luz's permission to possess her body and gain full control.
--> '''Zul''': ...in here, you're the one who's my copy...
* TheImmune: Being the Illusion Coven's leader, Lord Lovelace is the only one immune to the brainwashing effects of Luz's spell.
* LesbianJock: In this fake reality, Amity is a football player and Luz's girlfriend.
* LotusEaterMachine: Luz's attempt at using Illusion Magic traps everyone in a ModernAUFic version of the BoilingIsles where she Isles.
** Luz is just a regular human high schooler and cheerleader.
** Belos is thedaughter of Mayor, having won the mayor election in a landslide.
** Camila retired from being a nurse before Luz was born, worked as Belos' assistant before going back to being a nurse.
** Lady Hele is a doctor at a local hospital.
** Owlbert is a normal owl and Eda's pet.
** Amity is a football player at Hexside and Luz's girlfriend.
** Eda runs a coffee shop, hergirlfriend.curse instead a debilitating cancer that effects her bones.
** Hooty is just a piece of decoration Luz made for Eda.
* OminousVisualGlitch: This tends to happen when any of the characters remember their original selves.
* SmallSecludedWorld: While the transformed town is supposedly on Earth, there is nothing beyond the town since that is as far as the spell goes.
--> '''Zul''': ...in here, you're the one who's my copy...
* TheImmune: Being the Illusion Coven's leader, Lord Lovelace is the only one immune to the brainwashing effects of Luz's spell.
* LesbianJock: In this fake reality, Amity is a football player and Luz's girlfriend.
* LotusEaterMachine: Luz's attempt at using Illusion Magic traps everyone in a ModernAUFic version of the Boiling
** Luz is just a regular human high schooler and cheerleader.
** Belos is the
** Camila retired from being a nurse before Luz was born, worked as Belos' assistant before going back to being a nurse.
** Lady Hele is a doctor at a local hospital.
** Owlbert is a normal owl and Eda's pet.
** Amity is a football player at Hexside and Luz's girlfriend.
** Eda runs a coffee shop, her
** Hooty is just a piece of decoration Luz made for Eda.
* OminousVisualGlitch: This tends to happen when any of the characters remember their original selves.
* SmallSecludedWorld: While the transformed town is supposedly on Earth, there is nothing beyond the town since that is as far as the spell goes.
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!'''Chapter 12 -- "Zul's Illusion"'''
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!!Tropes That Appear In This Chapter:
* FightingFromTheInside: Either being reminded of their real lives or physical pain is how one trapped in the LotusEaterMachine can resurface their real memories and personality.
* GoneHorriblyRight: Luz tried casting a simple illusion spell. The result? She accidentally traps everyone in a LotusEaterMachine where everyone lives in a simple human town.
* LotusEaterMachine: Luz's attempt at using Illusion Magic traps everyone in a ModernAUFic version of the Boiling Isles where she is the daughter of the mayor and Amity is her girlfriend.
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-->[-Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn: [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/31391228/chapters/78308444 HERE]]-]
-->[-Website/FanFictionDotNet: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13721320/12/Learning-How-To-Be-a-Princess HERE]]-]
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!!Tropes That Appear In This Chapter:
* FightingFromTheInside: Either being reminded of their real lives or physical pain is how one trapped in the LotusEaterMachine can resurface their real memories and personality.
* GoneHorriblyRight: Luz tried casting a simple illusion spell. The result? She accidentally traps everyone in a LotusEaterMachine where everyone lives in a simple human town.
* LotusEaterMachine: Luz's attempt at using Illusion Magic traps everyone in a ModernAUFic version of the Boiling Isles where she is the daughter of the mayor and Amity is her girlfriend.
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-->[-Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn: [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/31391228/chapters/78308444 HERE]]-]
-->[-Website/FanFictionDotNet: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13721320/12/Learning-How-To-Be-a-Princess HERE]]-]
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