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* AbuseDiscretionShot: Logan and Greevey broke into the Lowensteins' apartment just in time to stop Carla from "teaching" her three-year-old son to stay away from fire by forcibly burning his hand on a hot stove.
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* AbuseDiscretionShot: Logan and Greevey broke into the Lowensteins' apartment just in time to stop Carla from "teaching" her three-year-old son to stay away from fire by forcibly burning ''sticking his hand on a hot stove.into boiling water''.
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* OhCrap: Both Greevey and Logan had this reaction after learning that Carla was released from the hospital and Jacob was at home. Both of them ran to the apartment JustInTime to stop further abuse from happening.
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* OhCrap: Both Greevey and Logan had this reaction after learning that Carla was released from the hospital and hospital, Jacob was at home.home, and their son Ezra was alone with them. Both of them ran to the apartment JustInTime to stop further abuse from happening.
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* ItIsDehumanizing: At least twice, Carla refers to her son Ezra as "it" or "that" instead of "him", showing just how deep her abuse toward her children goes.
-->'''Carla:''' Ezra's not well. I have to watch it.
-->'''Carla:''' Ezra's not well. I have to watch it.
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* PrecisionFStrike: After Miss Perez testifies in court about the signs of abuse Didi showed, she leaves the stand and spitefully calls Carla a bitch as she leaves.
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* PrecisionFStrike: After Miss Perez testifies in court about the signs of abuse Didi showed, she leaves the stand and spitefully calls Carla a bitch as she leaves.she's leaving the stand.
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* TranquilFury: During his questioning of Dr. Lowenstein while he’s on the stand, Stone is absolutely ''livid'' at this man for what he’s done, but manages to keep his composure.
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* TranquilFury: During his questioning of Dr. Lowenstein while he’s he's on the stand, Stone is absolutely ''livid'' at this man for what he’s he's done, but manages to keep his composure.
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Changed line(s) 10 (click to see context) from:
* AbuseDiscretionShot: Logan and Greevey broke into the Lowenthals' apartment just in time to stop Carla from "teaching" her three-year-old son to stay away from fire by forcibly burning his hand on a hot stove.
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* AbuseDiscretionShot: Logan and Greevey broke into the Lowenthals' Lowensteins' apartment just in time to stop Carla from "teaching" her three-year-old son to stay away from fire by forcibly burning his hand on a hot stove.
