Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 33 (click to see context) from:
* LastEpisodeNewCharacter: This is the last chapter of ''Jaune Arc, Lord of Hunger'', and the one in which various characters from ''Star Wars Legacy'' make their debut such as Kol and Cade Skywalker, Wolf Sazen, Darth Krayt, and the One Sith.
to:
* LastEpisodeNewCharacter: This is the last chapter of ''Jaune Arc, Lord of Hunger'', and the one in which various characters from ''Star Wars Legacy'' make their debut such as Kol and Cade Skywalker, Wolf Sazen, Darth Krayt, and the One Sith. It also sees ''RWBY'' characters Salem, Watts, Hazel and Tyrian make their debuts in the fic.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** Although she's suffered [[EyeScream life-changing injuries]] and is now strictly under Winter's care, Weiss still gets sent back to Atlas City and separated from her team in the Fall's aftermath.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 13,14 (click to see context) :
** While bringing up her promotion to the head of the Atlas Military, Winter explains that she was picked from three candidates, the others being Colonel Doyle and Operative Cordovin. In the show, Cordovin was an antagonist who appeared in Volume 6 that obstructed the heroes when they tried to travel to Atlas.
** Robyn Hill, a major supporting character from Volume 7 and 8, is mentioned to have been elected by the Council as the new Headmistress of Atlas Academy.
** Robyn Hill, a major supporting character from Volume 7 and 8, is mentioned to have been elected by the Council as the new Headmistress of Atlas Academy.
Changed line(s) 19 (click to see context) from:
* ContinuityNod: Darth Ruyn and Talon are mentioned by Krayt to be among the Sith that are to accompany him into the Unknown Regions. Talon was a major character from ''Legacy'' who served Krayt as one of his Hands, while Ruyn was Talon's master who Krayt ordered her to kill as a final test of loyalty.
to:
* ContinuityNod: ContinuityNod:
** While bringing up her promotion to the head of the Atlas Military, Winter explains that she was picked from three candidates, the others being Colonel Doyle and Operative Cordovin. In the show, Cordovin was an antagonist who appeared in Volume 6 that obstructed the heroes when they tried to travel to Atlas.
** Robyn Hill, a major supporting character from Volume 7 and 8, is mentioned to have been elected by the Council as the new Headmistress of Atlas Academy.
** Darth Ruyn and Talon are mentioned by Krayt to be among the Sith that are to accompany him into the Unknown Regions. Talon was a major character from ''Legacy'' who served Krayt as one of his Hands, while Ruyn was Talon's master who Krayt ordered her to kill as a final test of loyalty.
** While bringing up her promotion to the head of the Atlas Military, Winter explains that she was picked from three candidates, the others being Colonel Doyle and Operative Cordovin. In the show, Cordovin was an antagonist who appeared in Volume 6 that obstructed the heroes when they tried to travel to Atlas.
** Robyn Hill, a major supporting character from Volume 7 and 8, is mentioned to have been elected by the Council as the new Headmistress of Atlas Academy.
** Darth Ruyn and Talon are mentioned by Krayt to be among the Sith that are to accompany him into the Unknown Regions. Talon was a major character from ''Legacy'' who served Krayt as one of his Hands, while Ruyn was Talon's master who Krayt ordered her to kill as a final test of loyalty.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 37 (click to see context) from:
** Cade Skywalker is shown to be worried due to rumors he heard that the Fel Empire is going to start another galactic war. Although both Kol and Wolf try to convince him that his fears are unfounded, Cade's fears are valid since that's ''exactly'' what Darth Krayt is planning to do and it's how he originally took over the galaxy in the ''Legacy'' comics.
to:
** Cade Skywalker is shown to be worried due to rumors he heard that the Fel Empire is going to start another galactic war. Although both Kol and Wolf try to convince him assures Cade that his fears what he's heard are unfounded, just unfounded rumors, he internally acknowledges that there is a possibility that Cade could be right since Force Wounds have historically been created during times of galactic conflict. Of course, Cade's fears are completely valid since that's ''exactly'' what Darth Krayt is planning to do and it's how he originally took over the galaxy in the ''Legacy'' comics.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 27 (click to see context) from:
* ImHavingSoulPains: Darth Nihilus' actions during the Fall of Beacon causes another Wound in the Force to form, resulting in a psychic backlash that radiates from Remnant to every corner of the galaxy, causing sudden extreme pain to anyone Force-sensitive.
to:
* ImHavingSoulPains: Darth Nihilus' actions during the Fall of Beacon causes created another Wound in the Force to form, Force, resulting in a psychic backlash that radiates from Remnant to every corner of spreads across the galaxy, causing sudden entire galaxy and causes extreme pain to anyone Force-sensitive.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ImHavingSoulPains: Darth Nihilus' actions during the Fall of Beacon causes another Wound in the Force to form, resulting in a psychic backlash that radiates from Remnant to every corner of the galaxy, causing sudden extreme pain to anyone Force-sensitive.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 40 (click to see context) from:
* SequelHook: Not only is Salem now aware of Darth Nihilus' mask, but the Legacy Era Jedi Order and One Sith were able to sense his presence as a Wound in the Force, with Darth Krayt leaving to find the source.
to:
* SequelHook: Not only is SequelHook:
** Salemnow aware of has Watts find all the information he can on Darth Nihilus' mask, but mask while also sending out Tyrian to capture Ruby (the only person able to open the Legacy vault where said mask is being stored).
** In need of a replacement for Cinder, Salem orders Hazel to recruit someone who has a grudge against Ozpin and the Huntsmen Academies.
** Both the ''Legacy'' Era Jedi Order and One Sith were able to sensehis Nihilus' presence as a Wound in the Force, with Darth Krayt leaving to find the source.
** Salem
** In need of a replacement for Cinder, Salem orders Hazel to recruit someone who has a grudge against Ozpin and the Huntsmen Academies.
** Both the ''Legacy'' Era Jedi Order and One Sith were able to sense
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ContinuityNod: Darth Ruyn and Talon are mentioned by Krayt to be among the Sith that are to accompany him into the Unknown Regions. Talon was a major character from ''Legacy'' who served Krayt as one of his Hands, while Ruyn was Talon's master who Krayt ordered her to kill as a final test of loyalty.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 35 (click to see context) from:
** Cade Skywalker is shown to be worried due to rumors he heard that the Fel Empire is going to start another galactic war. Although both Kol and Wolf try to convince him that his fears are unfounded, Cade's fears are valid since that's ''exactly'' what Darth Krayt is planning to do and succeeded at in the ''Legacy'' comics.
to:
** Cade Skywalker is shown to be worried due to rumors he heard that the Fel Empire is going to start another galactic war. Although both Kol and Wolf try to convince him that his fears are unfounded, Cade's fears are valid since that's ''exactly'' what Darth Krayt is planning to do and succeeded at it's how he originally took over the galaxy in the ''Legacy'' comics.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 34 (click to see context) from:
** Ozpin tries to cover-up any evidence of Nihilus' existence due to the possibility that Nihilus might be inadvertently freed from Beacon's vault by evil people looking to take his mask's power for themselves. He's proven right in the very next scene as Salem immediately makes plans to steal the mask from Ozpin after watching Cinder's broadcast.
to:
** Ozpin tries to cover-up any evidence of Nihilus' existence due to the possibility that Nihilus might be inadvertently be freed from Beacon's vault by evil people looking to take his mask's power for themselves. He's proven right in the very next scene as Salem immediately makes plans to steal the mask from Ozpin after watching Cinder's broadcast.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 34,35 (click to see context) from:
** Ozpin has the media censor any footage of Nihilus and does his best to cover up the Mask of Nihilus' existence due to the risk of Nihilus being freed from Beacon's vault by evil people who want the mask's power for themselves. He's proven right in the very next scene as Salem immediately makes plans to steal the mask from Ozpin after watching Cinder's broadcast.
** Both Kol Skywalker and Darth Krayt are extremely worried about whatever caused the Force Wound they sensed and believe it to potentially be the greatest threat to the galaxy. Their fears are justified considering that the Wound was created by Darth Nihilus, who straight up told Ozpin in the previous chapter that he was planning to consume the entire universe.
** Both Kol Skywalker and Darth Krayt are extremely worried about whatever caused the Force Wound they sensed and believe it to potentially be the greatest threat to the galaxy. Their fears are justified considering that the Wound was created by Darth Nihilus, who straight up told Ozpin in the previous chapter that he was planning to consume the entire universe.
to:
** Ozpin has the media censor tries to cover-up any footage of Nihilus and does his best to cover up the Mask evidence of Nihilus' existence due to the risk of possibility that Nihilus being might be inadvertently freed from Beacon's vault by evil people who want the looking to take his mask's power for themselves. He's proven right in the very next scene as Salem immediately makes plans to steal the mask from Ozpin after watching Cinder's broadcast.
** Cade Skywalker is shown to be worried due to rumors he heard that the Fel Empire is going to start another galactic war. Although both Kol and Wolf try to convince him that his fears are unfounded, Cade's fears are valid since that's ''exactly'' what Darth Krayt is planning to do and succeeded at in the ''Legacy'' comics.
** Both Kol Skywalker and Darth Krayt areextremely worried paranoid about whatever caused the Force Wound they sensed and believe it to potentially be the greatest threat to the galaxy. a major threat. Their fears are justified considering that the Wound was created by Darth Nihilus, who straight up told Ozpin in the previous chapter that he was planning to consume the entire universe.universe of all life.
** Cade Skywalker is shown to be worried due to rumors he heard that the Fel Empire is going to start another galactic war. Although both Kol and Wolf try to convince him that his fears are unfounded, Cade's fears are valid since that's ''exactly'' what Darth Krayt is planning to do and succeeded at in the ''Legacy'' comics.
** Both Kol Skywalker and Darth Krayt are
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 27 (click to see context) from:
** Blake still leaves her team and runs away in the aftermath of the Fall of Beacon.
to:
** Even though Yang never has her arm cut off and Adam is killed during the Battle of Beacon, Blake still leaves her team and runs ends up running away in the aftermath of the Fall of Beacon.
** Salem still sends Tyrian to capture Ruby following the Fall of Beacon.
** Salem still sends Tyrian to capture Ruby following the Fall of Beacon.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* InSpiteOfANail:
** Blake still leaves her team and runs away in the aftermath of the Fall of Beacon.
** Blake still leaves her team and runs away in the aftermath of the Fall of Beacon.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* WeirdnessCensor: Despite dozens of students and tourists having witnessed Darth Nihilus' powers with their own eyes and Cinder having broadcasted recorded footage of the heroes' initial battle with him all over the globe, Ozpin is able to cover-up the incident by lying to the media that Cinder's footage was faked by the White Fang in order to cause more chaos. Both the media and the public seem to have accepted Ozpin's claims without question.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 23 (click to see context) from:
** Darth Krayt and the One Sith sense the Force Wound created by Nihilus and depart for the Unknown Regions in order to find the source and recruit/destroy it.
to:
** Darth Krayt and the One Sith sense the Force Wound created by Nihilus and depart for the Unknown Regions in order to find the source and recruit/destroy destroy it.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* OddlySmallOrganization: According to Winter, the command structure of the Atlas Military consists primarily of General Ironwood at the top with just Winter, Colonel Doyle, and Caroline Cordovin below him. Especially odd given now Atlas is supposed to have the most powerful army in the world.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 13,14 (click to see context) from:
** While discussing the arrangements he made for Ruby's new team with Glynda and Winter, Ozpin plans to have Clovis Elbi assigned as Ruby's chaperone. In canon, Clovis was a character who debuted in Volume 7 as a member of the Ace-Ops.
** Darth Krayt mentions his plans to sabotage the Ossus Project and overthrow Emperor Roan Fel, both of which come to fruition in the ''Legacy'' comics.
** Darth Krayt mentions his plans to sabotage the Ossus Project and overthrow Emperor Roan Fel, both of which come to fruition in the ''Legacy'' comics.
to:
** While bringing up her promotion to the head of the Atlas Military, Winter explains that she was picked from three candidates, the others being Colonel Doyle and Operative Cordovin. In the show, Cordovin was an antagonist who appeared in Volume 6 that obstructed the heroes when they tried to travel to Atlas.
** Robyn Hill, a major supporting character from Volume 7 and 8, is mentioned to have been elected by the Council as the new Headmistress of Atlas Academy.
** Penny's father/creator Dr. Polendina is mentioned to be working on creating new prosthetic eyes for Weiss and Winter remarks on how he's apparently done the procedure several times in the past (referencing Maria Calavera).
** While discussing the arrangements he made for Ruby's new team with Glynda and Winter, Ozpin plans to have Clovis Elbiassigned as Ruby's chaperone. In canon, Clovis was a (a character who debuted in Volume 7 7) assigned as a member Ruby's chaperone.
** Cade asks his father if the rumors that that the Galactic Alliance is going to war with the Fel Empire are true, something which happens in the backstory of theAce-Ops.
''Legacy'' comics.
** Darth Krayt mentions his plans to sabotage the Ossus Project and overthrow Emperor Roan Fel, both of which come to fruition in the''Legacy'' comics.''Legacy''.
** Robyn Hill, a major supporting character from Volume 7 and 8, is mentioned to have been elected by the Council as the new Headmistress of Atlas Academy.
** Penny's father/creator Dr. Polendina is mentioned to be working on creating new prosthetic eyes for Weiss and Winter remarks on how he's apparently done the procedure several times in the past (referencing Maria Calavera).
** While discussing the arrangements he made for Ruby's new team with Glynda and Winter, Ozpin plans to have Clovis Elbi
** Cade asks his father if the rumors that that the Galactic Alliance is going to war with the Fel Empire are true, something which happens in the backstory of the
** Darth Krayt mentions his plans to sabotage the Ossus Project and overthrow Emperor Roan Fel, both of which come to fruition in the
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 12 (click to see context) from:
* CallForward: Darth Krayt mentions his plans to sabotage the Ossus Project and overthrow Emperor Roan Fel, both of which come to fruition in the ''Legacy'' comics.
to:
* CallForward: CallForward:
** While discussing the arrangements he made for Ruby's new team with Glynda and Winter, Ozpin plans to have Clovis Elbi assigned as Ruby's chaperone. In canon, Clovis was a character who debuted in Volume 7 as a member of the Ace-Ops.
** Darth Krayt mentions his plans to sabotage the Ossus Project and overthrow Emperor Roan Fel, both of which come to fruition in the ''Legacy'' comics.
** While discussing the arrangements he made for Ruby's new team with Glynda and Winter, Ozpin plans to have Clovis Elbi assigned as Ruby's chaperone. In canon, Clovis was a character who debuted in Volume 7 as a member of the Ace-Ops.
** Darth Krayt mentions his plans to sabotage the Ossus Project and overthrow Emperor Roan Fel, both of which come to fruition in the ''Legacy'' comics.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 26 (click to see context) from:
* TheScapegoat: After restoring the CCT network, Ozpin erases the media's records of Nihilus and places sole blame for the Fall of Beacon on Adam Taurus and the White Fang. While the White Fang are partially responsible, Cinder was the true mastermind behind the attack and the White Fang were acting as her pawns. Ozpin likely chose the White Fang as the villains for his narrative because the public was more familiar with them.
to:
* TheScapegoat: After restoring the CCT network, Ozpin erases the media's records of Nihilus and places sole blame for the Fall of Beacon on Adam Taurus and the White Fang. While the White Fang are partially responsible, Cinder they were merely pawns to Cinder, who was the true mastermind behind the attack and the White Fang were acting as her pawns.attack. Ozpin likely chose the White Fang as the villains for his narrative because the public was more familiar with them.
