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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Ikuo has had it up to ''here'' with everything that happened with Chloe, the Train and his son stuck on the Train that he slaps Chloe in anger. Chloe, having already been through worse scrapes, silently glares at Ikuo despite her cheek being swollen.
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Ikuo has had it up to ''here'' with everything that happened with Chloe, the Train and his son stuck on the Train that he slaps Chloe in anger. Chloe, having already been through worse scrapes, silently glares at Ikuo despite her cheek being swollen.
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* BadDreams: Alain is suffering from them but tries to deny it for Hop and Paul's sake.
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** When Chloe is about to text Amelia, she sees her farwell text back from her time in the Canals of Fondue Car.
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** When Chloe is about to text Amelia, she sees her farwell farewell text back from her time in the Canals of Fondue Car.
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** One of the stories being told in the Cyan Desert Car is Chloe facing down Destrution/Simon.
** Talia and Professor Cerise's reactions to learning that Chloe died on the Train is the same as Trip and Serena's.
* CommonalityConnection: Why Chloe reaches out to Mallow, since they both shared interactions with Tuba on the train. Chloe also confesses that she wants to connect with a fellow passenger with as little 'baggage' as possible.
** Talia and Professor Cerise's reactions to learning that Chloe died on the Train is the same as Trip and Serena's.
* CommonalityConnection: Why Chloe reaches out to Mallow, since they both shared interactions with Tuba on the train. Chloe also confesses that she wants to connect with a fellow passenger with as little 'baggage' as possible.
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** One of the stories being told in the Cyan Desert Car is Chloe facing down Destrution/Simon.
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** Talia and Professor Cerise's reactions to learning that Chloe died on the Trainis are the same as Trip and Serena's.
* CommonalityConnection: Why Chloe reaches out toMallow, Mallow since they both shared interactions with Tuba on the train.Train. Chloe also confesses that she wants to connect with a fellow passenger with as little 'baggage' as possible.
** Talia and Professor Cerise's reactions to learning that Chloe died on the Train
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* IronicEcho: In a very roundabout way, Chloe unintentionally does this to ''herself''. When Ikuo passes her Goh's phone she finds the text she sent him when during her KickTheDog moment when she broke off their friendship while she was on the Train. The shock of actually seeing it again after her character development and how much she hurt Goh in turn is so great she opts to just use the call function instead.
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* IronicEcho: In a very roundabout way, Chloe unintentionally does this to ''herself''. When Ikuo passes her Goh's phone she finds the text she sent him when during her KickTheDog moment when she broke off their friendship while she was on the Train. The shock of actually seeing it again after her character development and how much she hurt Goh Goh, in turn turn, is so great she opts to just use the call function instead.
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Upon learning that her daughter ''died'' on the Train and was resurrected, Talia states "Explain. Everything. LATER" to Chloe as they leave the Fujihachi resident.
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Upon learning that her daughter ''died'' on the Train and was resurrected, Talia states "Explain. Everything. LATER" LATER." to Chloe as they leave the Fujihachi resident.
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* WaterIsAir: The Kelp City Car, which confuses Hop.
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* WaterIsAir: The Kelp City Car, which confuses Hop.Hop.
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** Talia and Professor Cerise's reactions to learning that Chloe died on the Train is the same as Trip and Serena's.
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Upon learning that her daughter ''died'' on the Train and was resurrected, Talia states "Explain. Everything. LATER" to Chloe as they leave the Fujihachi resident.
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** One of the stories being told in the Cyan Desert Car is Chloe facing down Destrution/Simon.
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* BadDreams: Alain is suffering from them.
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* BadDreams: Alain is suffering from them.them but tries to deny it for Hop and Paul's sake.
* CallBack:
** When Chloe is about to text Amelia, she sees her farwell text back from her time in the Canals of Fondue Car.
** Chloe is seen happily glomping Dragonite as she promised that she would give the Dragon a hug of her own when she came back.
* CallBack:
** When Chloe is about to text Amelia, she sees her farwell text back from her time in the Canals of Fondue Car.
** Chloe is seen happily glomping Dragonite as she promised that she would give the Dragon a hug of her own when she came back.
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* DrowningMySorrows: Mallow attempts to do this at Oranguru's bar.
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* DrowningMySorrows: Mallow attempts to do this at Oranguru's bar.bar after learning of Tuba's death.
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: How do we know Chloe is different than when she first entered the Train? She ''eagerly wants to hug Ash's Dragonite''.
* FramingDevice: The prologue is framed with an email Chloe sends to Mallow.
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: How do we know Chloe is different than when she first entered the Train? She ''eagerly wants to hug Ash's Dragonite''.
* FramingDevice: The prologue is framed with an email Chloe sends to Mallow.
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* GroupieBrigade: Lexi has shifted form yet again to minimize this compromising his travel.
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* GroupieBrigade: Lexi has shifted to his kyorinrin form yet again to minimize this compromising his travel.
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* OldShame: Chloe sees the text she sent to Goh when she broke off their friendship while she was still on the Train, and serves as a realization to her on just how hurtful those words must've been.
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* OldShame: In-universe. Chloe sees the text she sent to Goh when she broke off their friendship while she was still on the Train, and serves as a realization to her on just how hurtful those words must've been.
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* ShoutOut: The unofficial rules of the children's storytelling night in the Cyan Desert Car is "[[ComicBook/MouseGuard no stories wholly true, no stories wholly false, and no repeats.]]"
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** The unofficial rules of the children's storytelling night in the Cyan Desert Car is "[[ComicBook/MouseGuard no stories wholly true, no stories wholly false, and no repeats.]]"]]"
** When Chloe hugs Ash's Dragonite, she asks if [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} hugs from him always feel this warm]].
** The unofficial rules of the children's storytelling night in the Cyan Desert Car is "[[ComicBook/MouseGuard no stories wholly true, no stories wholly false, and no repeats.
** When Chloe hugs Ash's Dragonite, she asks if [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} hugs from him always feel this warm]].
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* OldShame: Chloe sees the text she sent to Goh when she broke off their friendship while she was still on the Train.
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* OldShame: Chloe sees the text she sent to Goh when she broke off their friendship while she was still on the Train.Train, and serves as a realization to her on just how hurtful those words must've been.
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* IronicEcho: In a very roundabout way, Chloe unintentionally does this to ''herself''. When Ikuo passes her Goh's phone she finds the text she sent him when during her KickTheDog moment when she broke off their friendship after intentionally leaving him worried sick]] while she was on the Train. The shock of actually seeing it again after her character development and how much she hurt Goh in turn is so great she opts to just use the call function instead.
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* IronicEcho: In a very roundabout way, Chloe unintentionally does this to ''herself''. When Ikuo passes her Goh's phone she finds the text she sent him when during her KickTheDog moment when she broke off their friendship after intentionally leaving him worried sick]] while she was on the Train. The shock of actually seeing it again after her character development and how much she hurt Goh in turn is so great she opts to just use the call function instead.
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I'm keeping this here for now, but can anyone who knows how to link words to tropes fix that up for me? It's not working when I try it.
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* IronicEcho: In a very roundabout way, Chloe unintentionally does this to ''herself''. When Ikuo passes her Goh's phone she finds the text she sent him when she [[KickTheDog: broke off their friendship]] after intentionally leaving him worried sick]] while she was on the Train. The shock of actually seeing it again after her character development and how much she hurt Goh in turn is so great she opts to just use the call function instead.
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* IronicEcho: In a very roundabout way, Chloe unintentionally does this to ''herself''. When Ikuo passes her Goh's phone she finds the text she sent him when during her KickTheDog moment when she [[KickTheDog: broke off their friendship]] friendship after intentionally leaving him worried sick]] while she was on the Train. The shock of actually seeing it again after her character development and how much she hurt Goh in turn is so great she opts to just use the call function instead.
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* IronicEcho: In a very roundabout way, Chloe unintentionally does this to ''herself''. When Ikuo passes her Goh's phone she finds the text she sent him when she [[KicktheDog: broke off their friendship after intentionally leaving him worried sick]] while she was on the Train. The shock of actually seeing it again after her character development and how much she hurt Goh in turn is so great she opts to just use the call function instead.
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* IronicEcho: In a very roundabout way, Chloe unintentionally does this to ''herself''. When Ikuo passes her Goh's phone she finds the text she sent him when she [[KicktheDog: [[KickTheDog: broke off their friendship friendship]] after intentionally leaving him worried sick]] while she was on the Train. The shock of actually seeing it again after her character development and how much she hurt Goh in turn is so great she opts to just use the call function instead.
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* IronicEcho: In a very roundabout way, Chloe unintentionally does this to ''herself''. When Ikuo passes her Goh's phone she finds the text she sent him when she [[KicktheDog: broke off their friendship after intentionally leaving him worried sick]] while she was on the Train. The shock of actually seeing it again after her character development and how much she hurt Goh in turn is so great she opts to just use the call function instead.
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* MamaBear: This side of Delia comes out for *Chloe* this time, defending her in the middle of the argument with the Fujihachis to tell them she didn't (at least intentionally) do Goh any wrong this time.
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* MamaBear: This side of Delia comes out for *Chloe* ''Chloe'' this time, defending her in the middle of the argument with the Fujihachis to tell them she didn't (at least intentionally) do Goh any wrong this time.
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* MamaBear: This side of Delia comes out for *Chloe* this time, defending her in the middle of the argument with the Fujihachis to tell them she didn't (at least intentionally) do Goh any wrong this time.
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* BadDreams: Alain is suffering from them.
* CommonalityConnection: Why Chloe reaches out to Mallow, since they both shared interactions with Tuba on the train. Chloe also confesses that she wants to connect with a fellow passenger with as little 'baggage' as possible.
* CoolOldLady: Tomie is in fine form in both the flashback and taking care of Mew.
* CommonalityConnection: Why Chloe reaches out to Mallow, since they both shared interactions with Tuba on the train. Chloe also confesses that she wants to connect with a fellow passenger with as little 'baggage' as possible.
* CoolOldLady: Tomie is in fine form in both the flashback and taking care of Mew.
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* CommonalityConnection: Why GetItOverWith: Tomie points out that ''the entire Fujihachi family'' had expressed this regarding Goh's train trip.
* GroupieBrigade: Lexi has shifted form yet again to minimize this compromising his travel.
* PassiveAggressiveKombat: One way to read Ikuo making Chloereaches out use Goh's phone to Mallow, contact Amelia. When Chloe opens a text message, the first thing she sees is her last goodbye message to Goh.
* ShoutOut: The unofficial rules of the children's storytelling night in the Cyan Desert Car is "[[ComicBook/MouseGuard no stories wholly true, no stories wholly false, and no repeats.]]"
* StepfordSmiler: Chloe almost slips into this due to stress and not getting any updates on Goh's situation.
* StoppingTheBlameGame: Delia tries to do this once more, but it comes off as insincere to Kurune at the moment sincethey both shared interactions with Tuba on the train. Chloe also confesses that she wants Delia has actual skin in this particular game. Tomie has to connect with a fellow passenger with as little 'baggage' as possible.step in.
* WaterIsAir: The Kelp City Car, which confuses Hop.
* GroupieBrigade: Lexi has shifted form yet again to minimize this compromising his travel.
* PassiveAggressiveKombat: One way to read Ikuo making Chloe
* ShoutOut: The unofficial rules of the children's storytelling night in the Cyan Desert Car is "[[ComicBook/MouseGuard no stories wholly true, no stories wholly false, and no repeats.]]"
* StepfordSmiler: Chloe almost slips into this due to stress and not getting any updates on Goh's situation.
* StoppingTheBlameGame: Delia tries to do this once more, but it comes off as insincere to Kurune at the moment since
* WaterIsAir: The Kelp City Car, which confuses Hop.
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* DrowningMySorrows: Mallow attempts to do this at Oranguru's bar.
* CommonalityConnection: Why Chloe reaches out to Mallow, since they both shared interactions with Tuba on the train. Chloe also confesses that she wants to connect with a fellow passenger with as little 'baggage' as possible.
* DrowningMySorrows: Mallow attempts to do this at Oranguru's bar.
* CommonalityConnection: Why Chloe reaches out to Mallow, since they both shared interactions with Tuba on the train. Chloe also confesses that she wants to connect with a fellow passenger with as little 'baggage' as possible.
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