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** Victor mutters to Goh that an OC of Gloria looks like Professor Sycamore. Cut to Augustine meeting up with Shadow Sycamore.
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** When Victor asks what exactly Talia did for Chloe, Talia says she told her to "Find something she loves". Victor then asks if Talia actually got ''interested'' and involved in Chloe's life. Prior to that Parker asks his mom why she never even helps Chloe by asking "You do nothing because you hate her, don't you?"
** When Parker points out that Goh basically sees so little in Chloe cause she's not into Pokémon, Goh says that he doesn't. Parker then asks why he never talks to his sister and he can't answer that. Later, when Goh states that he dropped a birthday gift at the door of the Cerise residence then walked off under an assumption that Chloe was celebrating with friends, Parker snaps that Goh was too blind to not look at the window to see that ''no one'' from school was there.
** When Parker points out that Goh basically sees so little in Chloe cause she's not into Pokémon, Goh says that he doesn't. Parker then asks why he never talks to his sister and he can't answer that. Later, when Goh states that he dropped a birthday gift at the door of the Cerise residence then walked off under an assumption that Chloe was celebrating with friends, Parker snaps that Goh was too blind to not look at the window to see that ''no one'' from school was there.
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** When Victor Gloria asks what exactly Talia did for Chloe, Talia says she told her to "Find something she loves". Victor Gloria then asks if Talia actually got ''interested'' and involved in Chloe's life. Prior to that Parker asks his mom why she never even helps Chloe by asking "You do nothing because you hate her, don't you?"
**When Parker repeatedly does this to Goh throughout the first part. He points out that Goh basically sees so little in Chloe cause she's not into Pokémon, Goh says that he doesn't. Parker then asks why he never talks to his sister and he can't answer that. Later, when When Goh states stated that he dropped a birthday gift at the door of the Cerise residence then walked off under an assumption that Chloe was celebrating with friends, Parker snaps that Goh was too blind to not look at the window to see that ''no one'' from school was there.there. And finally, he asks if the actions of one boy is the excuse Goh is using for why he never cared about his sister.
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** When Parker points out that Goh basically sees so little in Chloe cause she's not into Pokémon, Goh says that he doesn't. Parker then asks why he never talks to his sister and he can't answer that. Later, when Goh states that he dropped a birthday gift at the door of the Cerise residence then walked off under an assumption that Chloe was celebrating with friends, Parker snaps that Goh was too blind to not look at the window to see that ''no one'' from school was there, before asking him, "What, did you think she was ''Sara'' or something?!"
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** When Parker points out that Goh basically sees so little in Chloe cause she's not into Pokémon, Goh says that he doesn't. Parker then asks why he never talks to his sister and he can't answer that. Later, when Goh states that he dropped a birthday gift at the door of the Cerise residence then walked off under an assumption that Chloe was celebrating with friends, Parker snaps that Goh was too blind to not look at the window to see that ''no one'' from school was there, before asking him, "What, there.
-->'''Parker:''' Did you even knock on our door or look at the window? There's only me, mom, dad and Chloe herself at the dinner table with a cake! Oh did you think she was ''Sara''or something?!"who gets everyone loving her?!
-->'''Parker:''' Did you even knock on our door or look at the window? There's only me, mom, dad and Chloe herself at the dinner table with a cake! Oh did you think she was ''Sara''
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** When Parker points out that Goh basically sees so little in Chloe cause she's not into Pokémon, Goh says that he doesn't. Parker then asks why he never talks to his sister and he can't answer that.
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** When Parker points out that Goh basically sees so little in Chloe cause she's not into Pokémon, Goh says that he doesn't. Parker then asks why he never talks to his sister and he can't answer that. Later, when Goh states that he dropped a birthday gift at the door of the Cerise residence then walked off under an assumption that Chloe was celebrating with friends, Parker snaps that Goh was too blind to not look at the window to see that ''no one'' from school was there, before asking him, "What, did you think she was ''Sara'' or something?!"
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* ExactWords: Goh can keep a promise to arrive at school for testing. Parker uses this to give him his sister's collection of short stories and poems to ensure Goh can keep his promise to take a test.
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* ExactWords: The only promises Goh can keep a promise are capable of keeping are when he goes to arrive at school for testing. Parker uses this to give him his sister's collection of short stories and poems to ensure Goh can keep his promise to take a test.and state that he'll test the boy.
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* HopeSpot: Brought up by Parker. Even if Chloe goes to a new school, what if the same situation at her old school happens again?
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* NoodleIncident: Something happened in Victor and Gllria's Crown Tundra hike in regards to Victor unable to say No to his friend.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Gloria gently tells Parker that if he knew so much about Chloe's problems, he should've told his parents sooner and they could've been more alert about what was going on. Parker glumly admits that he should have, but he was too afraid of bringing it up after hearing his parents argue over the paint can incident and is afraid that this cycle is just going to repeat over and over again in that Chloe would be bullied over being who she is. Talia had to reassure Parker that it was never anger at Chloe but frustrations over the inciden at school itself and both of them should have reassured him that they still loved Chloe as she is.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot:
** Gloria gently tells Parker that if he knew so much about Chloe's problems, he should've told his parents sooner and they could've been more alert about what was going on. Parker glumly admits that he should have, but he was too afraid of bringing it up after hearing his parents argue over the paint can incident and is afraid that this cycle is just going to repeat over and over again in that Chloe would be bullied over being who she is. Talia had to reassure Parker that it was never anger at Chloe but frustrations over the inciden at school itself and both of them should have reassured him that they still loved Chloe as sheis.is.
** Continuing that, Gloria also tells Parker that if someone helped Goh with his social issues, a lot of the stuff that got Chloe on the Train wouldn't have happened. Goh was only an immature, melodramatic child so ''of course'' he'd take something as an accidental betrayal like it was the end of the world.
** Gloria gently tells Parker that if he knew so much about Chloe's problems, he should've told his parents sooner and they could've been more alert about what was going on. Parker glumly admits that he should have, but he was too afraid of bringing it up after hearing his parents argue over the paint can incident and is afraid that this cycle is just going to repeat over and over again in that Chloe would be bullied over being who she is. Talia had to reassure Parker that it was never anger at Chloe but frustrations over the inciden at school itself and both of them should have reassured him that they still loved Chloe as she
** Continuing that, Gloria also tells Parker that if someone helped Goh with his social issues, a lot of the stuff that got Chloe on the Train wouldn't have happened. Goh was only an immature, melodramatic child so ''of course'' he'd take something as an accidental betrayal like it was the end of the world.
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The trope is explained well enough in the previous paragraph. This Is just needless bashing.
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** When Parker points out that Goh basically sees so little in Chloe cause she's not into Pokémon, Goh says that he doesn't. Parker then asks why he never talks to his sister and he can't answer that. After he reads the text messages Goh had, particularly the ones where he kept ''constantly'' breaking his promises to see Chloe again, all he can say is, "You care about the promise you made with a ''boy you met for one day'' more than the ones you broke with my sister?!"
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** When Parker points out that Goh basically sees so little in Chloe cause she's not into Pokémon, Goh says that he doesn't. Parker then asks why he never talks to his sister and he can't answer that. After he reads the text messages Goh had, particularly the ones where he kept ''constantly'' breaking his promises to see Chloe again, all he can say is, "You care about the promise you made with a ''boy you met for one day'' more than the ones you broke with my sister?!"
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** When Parker points out that Goh basically sees so little in Chloe cause she's not into Pokémon, Goh says that he doesn't. Parker then asks why he never talks to his sister and he can't answer that.
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** When Parker points out that Goh basically sees so little in Chloe cause she's not into Pokémon, Goh says that he doesn't. Parker then asks why he never talks to his sister and he can't answer that. After he reads the text messages Goh had, particularly the ones where he kept ''constantly'' breaking his promises to see Chloe again, all he can say is, "You care about the promise you made with a ''boy you met for one day'' more than the ones you broke with my sister?!"
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* WhamShot: The person who is talking to the Windchasers in the Noodle Car? It's ''Paul London'' aka one of the members of Gladion's group, White Gestalt.
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* FailedASpotCheck: On Chloe's birthday, Goh got her a present and left it at the front door under the assumption that she was busy with her friends. Parker bluntly stated that Chloe didn't ''have'' any friends over, something he would've known ''if he either knocked on her door or looked through the window'' to see Chloe alone with her family.
* FemalesAreMoreInnocent: Subverted with Talia. She's actually ''just'' as guilty as her husband for not helping Chloe out -- outside of one piece of advice -- because she spends more time drawing smiley faces on Chloe then actively helping ''make'' Chloe smile more.
* FemalesAreMoreInnocent: Subverted with Talia. She's actually ''just'' as guilty as her husband for not helping Chloe out -- outside of one piece of advice -- because she spends more time drawing smiley faces on Chloe then actively helping ''make'' Chloe smile more.
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* FailedASpotCheck: On Chloe's birthday, Goh got her a present and left it at the front door under the assumption that she was busy celebrating with her friends. Parker bluntly stated that Chloe didn't ''have'' any friends over, or friends at all, and something he would've known ''if he either knocked on her door or looked through the window'' damn window like a normal person does'' to see Chloe alone with her family.
-->'''Parker:''' ''(enraged)'' What, did you think she was ''Sara'' or something?
* FemalesAreMoreInnocent: Subverted with Talia. She's actually ''just'' as guilty as her husband for not helping Chloe out -- outside of one piece of advice -- because she spends more time drawing smiley faces on Chloe then actively helping ''make'' Chloe smilemore.more or actually trying to be involved in her daughter's life.
-->'''Parker:''' ''(enraged)'' What, did you think she was ''Sara'' or something?
* FemalesAreMoreInnocent: Subverted with Talia. She's actually ''just'' as guilty as her husband for not helping Chloe out -- outside of one piece of advice -- because she spends more time drawing smiley faces on Chloe then actively helping ''make'' Chloe smile
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** London notes how he's the Laura of the White Gestalt when he brings up his adventures in the Fog Car. Those who played ''Silent Hill 2'' remember that Laura was the only one who was immune to the horrors of Silent Hill, especially that of Maria. This hints how Yuri and Vaillant can't see Lain, who is the Maria {{expy}}.
** Why is Teddie in something called the Twisted Lab Car? Because the Twisted Lab Car isn't its name; it's the Shadow World Car.
** Why is Teddie in something called the Twisted Lab Car? Because the Twisted Lab Car isn't its name; it's the Shadow World Car.
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** London notes how he's the Laura of the White Gestalt when he brings up his adventures in the Fog Car. Those who played ''Silent Hill 2'' remember that Laura was the only one who was immune to the horrors of Silent Hill, especially that of Maria.Maria, because of her innocence. This hints how Yuri and Vaillant can't see Lain, who is the Maria {{expy}}.
** Why is Teddie in something called the Twisted LabCar? Car in the first place? Because the Twisted Lab Car isn't its name; it's the Shadow World Car.
** Why is Teddie in something called the Twisted Lab
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* InexplicablyAwesome: How did Matt Hardy's scribe ''teleport onto the Infinity Train''?!
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* InexplicablyAwesome: How did Matt Hardy's scribe -- who usually appears whenever Matt calls for him or via a word like "Describe" or "Unsuscribe" -- ''teleport onto the Infinity Train''?!
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Gloria does this to Parker when Parker is accusing Goh for doing so little for Chloe and not seeing Goh's point of view.
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* TemptingFate: When Chloe shows uncertainty at Professor Sycamore searching for her, Lexi tries to cheer her up by stating "At least it's not your father chasing you". Come the end of the Cyan Desert Car and he's right; now it's ''Chloe'' having to chase after her father when he got on the train.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Gloria gently tells Parker that if he knew so much about Chloe's problems, he should've told his parents sooner and they could've been more alert about what was going on. Parker glumly admits that he should have, but he was too afraid of bringing it up after hearing his parents argue over the paint can incident and is afraid that this cycle is just going to repeat over and over again in that Chloe would be bullied over being who she is.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Gloria gently tells Parker that if he knew so much about Chloe's problems, he should've told his parents sooner and they could've been more alert about what was going on. Parker glumly admits that he should have, but he was too afraid of bringing it up after hearing his parents argue over the paint can incident and is afraid that this cycle is just going to repeat over and over again in that Chloe would be bullied over being who she is. Talia had to reassure Parker that it was never anger at Chloe but frustrations over the inciden at school itself and both of them should have reassured him that they still loved Chloe as she is.
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** Chloe: She's shown to be more nervous about talking with her family and isn't the spiteful child like in canon.
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** Chloe: She's shown to be more nervous about talking with her family and wanting to amend fences with her loved ones and isn't the spiteful child like in canon.
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* EverybodyLaughsEnding: The last scene with the Windchasers as everyone laughing at Teddie calling Sycamore by his "Professor of the Monster Car" nickname.
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* EverybodyLaughsEnding: The last scene with the Windchasers as ahass everyone laughing at Teddie calling Sycamore by his "Professor of the Monster Car" nickname.
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* FailedASpotCheck: On Chloe's birthday, Goh got her a present and left it at the front door under the assumption that she was busy with her friends. Parker bluntly stated that Chloe didn't ''have'' any friends over, something he would've known ''if he either knocked on her door or looked through the window''.
* FemalesAreMoreInnocent: Subverted with Talia. She's actually just as guilty as her husband for not helping Chloe out -- outside of one piece of advice -- because she spends more time drawing smiley faces on Chloe then actively helping ''make'' Chloe smile more.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: London notes how he's the Laura of the White Gestalt when he brings up his adventures in the Fog Car. Those who played ''Silent Hill 2'' remember that Laura was the only one who was immune to the horrors of Silent Hill, especially that of Maria. This hints how Yuri and Vaillant can't see Lain, who is the Maria {{expy}}.
* FemalesAreMoreInnocent: Subverted with Talia. She's actually just as guilty as her husband for not helping Chloe out -- outside of one piece of advice -- because she spends more time drawing smiley faces on Chloe then actively helping ''make'' Chloe smile more.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: London notes how he's the Laura of the White Gestalt when he brings up his adventures in the Fog Car. Those who played ''Silent Hill 2'' remember that Laura was the only one who was immune to the horrors of Silent Hill, especially that of Maria. This hints how Yuri and Vaillant can't see Lain, who is the Maria {{expy}}.
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* FailedASpotCheck: On Chloe's birthday, Goh got her a present and left it at the front door under the assumption that she was busy with her friends. Parker bluntly stated that Chloe didn't ''have'' any friends over, something he would've known ''if he either knocked on her door or looked through the window''.
window'' to see Chloe alone with her family.
* FemalesAreMoreInnocent: Subverted with Talia. She's actuallyjust ''just'' as guilty as her husband for not helping Chloe out -- outside of one piece of advice -- because she spends more time drawing smiley faces on Chloe then actively helping ''make'' Chloe smile more.
*{{Foreshadowing}}: {{Foreshadowing}}:
** London notes how he's the Laura of the White Gestalt when he brings up his adventures in the Fog Car. Those who played ''Silent Hill 2'' remember that Laura was the only one who was immune to the horrors of Silent Hill, especially that of Maria. This hints how Yuri and Vaillant can't see Lain, who is the Maria{{expy}}.{{expy}}.
** Why is Teddie in something called the Twisted Lab Car? Because the Twisted Lab Car isn't its name; it's the Shadow World Car.
* FemalesAreMoreInnocent: Subverted with Talia. She's actually
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** London notes how he's the Laura of the White Gestalt when he brings up his adventures in the Fog Car. Those who played ''Silent Hill 2'' remember that Laura was the only one who was immune to the horrors of Silent Hill, especially that of Maria. This hints how Yuri and Vaillant can't see Lain, who is the Maria
** Why is Teddie in something called the Twisted Lab Car? Because the Twisted Lab Car isn't its name; it's the Shadow World Car.
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* HanlonsRazor: This used in conjunction with Goh's problems. When Parker asks why he makes such a big deal over Tokio (who he knew for one day) not taking a promise seriously yet can ''never'' extend the same courtesy to Chloe (who he's known for years) and how unfair it is, Gloria tells Parker that Goh was really an immature kid who never knew better and was never taught stuff like this nor had he ever ''told'' his parents about his problems. Had Goh had known sooner, things could've been better off.
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* HanlonsRazor: This is used in conjunction with Goh's problems. When Parker asks why he makes Goh made such a big deal over Tokio (who he knew for one day) not taking a promise seriously yet can ''never'' extend the same courtesy to Chloe (who he's known for years) and how unfair it is, Gloria tells Parker that Goh was really an immature kid who never knew better and was never taught stuff like this nor had he ever ''told'' his parents about his problems. Had Goh had known sooner, things could've been better off.
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** Gloria asks Parker if he'd do something crazy that involves sending Goh into a nightmare or Chloe's classmates into deathtraps, which is what he did in the original ''Blossoming Trail''.
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** Gloria asks Parker if he'd do something crazy that involves sending Goh into a nightmare or Chloe's classmates into deathtraps, which is what he did in the original ''Blossoming Trail''.
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* FailedASpotCheck: On Chloe's birthday, Goh got her a present and left it at the front door under the assumption that she was busy with her friends. Parker bluntly stated that Chloe didn't ''have'' any friends over, something he would've known ''if he either knocked on her door or looked through the window''.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Gloria gently tells Parker that if he knew so much about Chloe's problems, he should've told his parents sooner and they could've been more alert about what was going on. Parker glumly admits that he should have, but he was too afraid of bringing it up after hearing his parents argue over the paint can incident and is afraid that this cycle is just going to repeat over and over again in that Chloe would be bullied over being who she is.
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** When Victor asks what exactly Talia did for Chloe, Talia says she told her to "Find something she loves". Victor then asks if Talia actually got ''interested'' and involved in Chloe's life.
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** When Victor asks what exactly Talia did for Chloe, Talia says she told her to "Find something she loves". Victor then asks if Talia actually got ''interested'' and involved in Chloe's life. Prior to that Parker asks his mom why she never even helps Chloe by asking "You do nothing because you hate her, don't you?"
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: When Parker points out that Goh basically sees so little in Chloe cause she's not into Pokémon, Goh says that he doesn't. Parker then asks why he never talks to his sister and he can't answer that.
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** When Victor asks what exactly Talia did for Chloe, Talia says she told her to "Find something she loves". Victor then asks if Talia actually got ''interested'' and involved in Chloe's life.
** When Parker points out that Goh basically sees so little in Chloe cause she's not into Pokémon, Goh says that he doesn't. Parker then asks why he never talks to his sister and he can't answer that.
** When Victor asks what exactly Talia did for Chloe, Talia says she told her to "Find something she loves". Victor then asks if Talia actually got ''interested'' and involved in Chloe's life.
** When Parker points out that Goh basically sees so little in Chloe cause she's not into Pokémon, Goh says that he doesn't. Parker then asks why he never talks to his sister and he can't answer that.
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Gloria does this to Parker when Parker is accusing Goh for doing so little for Chloe and not seeing Goh's point of view.
* ArmorPiercingQuestion: When Parker points out that Goh basically sees so little in Chloe cause she's not into Pokémon, Goh says that he doesn't. Parker then asks why he never talks to his sister and he can't answer that.
* ArmorPiercingQuestion: When Parker points out that Goh basically sees so little in Chloe cause she's not into Pokémon, Goh says that he doesn't. Parker then asks why he never talks to his sister and he can't answer that.
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* CerebusSyndrome: The first three cars were adventurous but still ended hopeful. This car is a taste of the horrors that await the Windchasers and plays up the psychological horror aspects that found in other ''Blossomverse'' stories.
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* CerebusSyndrome: The first three cars were adventurous but still ended hopeful. This ''This'' car is a taste of the horrors that await the Windchasers and plays up the psychological horror aspects that are found in other ''Blossomverse'' stories.
* ExactWords: Goh can keep a promise to arrive at school for testing. Parker uses this to give him his sister's collection of short stories and poems to ensure Goh can keep his promise to take a test.
* FemalesAreMoreInnocent: Subverted with Talia. She's actually just as guilty as her husband for not helping Chloe out -- outside of one piece of advice -- because she spends more time drawing smiley faces on Chloe then actively helping ''make'' Chloe smile more.
* FemalesAreMoreInnocent: Subverted with Talia. She's actually just as guilty as her husband for not helping Chloe out -- outside of one piece of advice -- because she spends more time drawing smiley faces on Chloe then actively helping ''make'' Chloe smile more.
* HanlonsRazor: This used in conjunction with Goh's problems. When Parker asks why he makes such a big deal over Tokio (who he knew for one day) not taking a promise seriously yet can ''never'' extend the same courtesy to Chloe (who he's known for years) and how unfair it is, Gloria tells Parker that Goh was really an immature kid who never knew better and was never taught stuff like this nor had he ever ''told'' his parents about his problems. Had Goh had known sooner, things could've been better off.
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* MistreatmentInducedBetrayal: The lesser Shadows end up helping the Windchasers by swarming Shadow Sycamore down enough for them to fight back. Downplayed since they're worried about their kind's misbehavior and growing rage and they are willing to turn against their master so he can calm down, which they forgive him after the fight.
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* MistreatmentInducedBetrayal: The lesser Shadows end up helping the Windchasers by swarming Shadow Sycamore down enough for them to fight back. Downplayed since they're worried about their kind's ruler's misbehavior and growing rage and they are willing to turn against their master so he can calm down, which and they forgive him after the fight.
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!!This arc contains examples of:
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: The final part reveals the personalities for this iteration of the Red Lotus Trio:
** Chloe: She's shown to be more nervous about talking with her family and isn't the spiteful child like in canon.
** Atticus: Is more concerned about Chloe closing off from her family and gently nudges her to talk to them.
** Lexi: Instead of seeing Chloe as a perfect goddess who can do no harm, he's more firm about making sure she actually grows as a person.
** Chloe: She's shown to be more nervous about talking with her family and isn't the spiteful child like in canon.
** Atticus: Is more concerned about Chloe closing off from her family and gently nudges her to talk to them.
** Lexi: Instead of seeing Chloe as a perfect goddess who can do no harm, he's more firm about making sure she actually grows as a person.
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* OminousFog: The Twisted Lab Car is filled with fog to the extent London calls it "Technological horror Silent Hill".
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* OminousFog: The Twisted Lab -- later known as "Shadow World" Car is filled with fog to the extent London calls it "Technological horror Silent Hill".
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** Chloe's hoverboard is from someone named [=McFly=].
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* MistreatmentInducedBetrayal: The lesser Shadows end up helping the Windchasers by swarming Shadow Sycamore down enough for them to fight back. Downplayed since they're worried about their kind's misbehavior and growing rage and they are willing to turn against their master so he can calm down.
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* MistreatmentInducedBetrayal: The lesser Shadows end up helping the Windchasers by swarming Shadow Sycamore down enough for them to fight back. Downplayed since they're worried about their kind's misbehavior and growing rage and they are willing to turn against their master so he can calm down.down, which they forgive him after the fight.
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* AndThisIsFor: Sycamore utter these words before defeating his Shadow's [[OneWingedAngel monster form]].
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* MistreatmentInducedBetrayal: The lesser Shadows end up helping the Windchasers by swarming Shadow Sycamore down enough for them to fight back. Downplayed since they're worried about their kind's misbehavior and growing rage and they are willing to turn against their master so he can calm down.
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* AndYourRewardIsClothes: Teddie gifts the Windchasers glasses for completing the Twisted Lab (actually Shadow World) Car that help them peer through any cars with fog.
* CerebusSyndrome: The first three cars were adventurous but still ended hopeful. This car is a taste of the horrors that await the Windchasers and plays up the psychological horror aspects that found in other ''Blossomverse'' stories.
* EverybodyLaughsEnding: The last scene with the Windchasers as everyone laughing at Teddie calling Sycamore by his "Professor of the Monster Car" nickname.
* EverybodyLaughsEnding: The last scene with the Windchasers as everyone laughing at Teddie calling Sycamore by his "Professor of the Monster Car" nickname.
* GenderFlip: Sycamore's Persona is called St. Joan but is based off of his male shadow, something Yuri notes.
* LaughingMad: Sycamore does this while repeatedly stabbing Lain in the stomach.
* OffWithHisHead: Vaillant accidentally does this with Teddie. Thankfully Yuri puts the head back on and Teddie is no worse for the wear.
* PassThePopcorn: Shadow Sycamore is eating cup ramen as he watched Augustine follow his commands.
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* ShoutOut: The themes of the car was inspired by the "Literature/ThereWillComeSoftRains" short story, especially with a voice narrating the titular poem.
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** The themes of the car was inspired by the "Literature/ThereWillComeSoftRains" short story, especially with a voice narrating the titular poem.
** The themes of the car was inspired by the "Literature/ThereWillComeSoftRains" short story, especially with a voice narrating the titular poem.
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* AuthorAppeal: More like ''co-'' AuthorAppeal as Green Phantom Queen's two loves -- food and horror -- are prominently displayed in this arc.
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* AuthorAppeal: More like ''co-'' AuthorAppeal as Green Phantom Queen's two loves -- food and horror -- are prominently displayed in this arc. Even better, [=SpinnerNite=] reveals that she loved MindControl tropes onto her favorite character.
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: Sycamore, unfortunately, ends up being brainwashed by his Shadow, turning him into a mad follower who will do nothing but kill his friends under his master's orders. Thankfully, he managed to snap out of it thanks to Lain's sacrifice.
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: Sycamore, unfortunately, ends up being brainwashed by his Shadow, turning him into a mad follower who will do nothing but kill his friends under his master's orders. Thankfully, he managed to snap out of it thanks to Lain's sacrifice.
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* RamenSlurp: London and Vaillant are known to do this with their ramen.
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* RamenSlurp: London and Vaillant are known to do this with their ramen. Shadow Sycamore also does this when hearing a brainwashed Sycamore reciting ''The Hollow Men''.
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** Talia gets her own calling out scene earlier than in canon in which Victor points out that she is ''also'' at fault for Chloe's problems because she could've convinced her husband to not cage her at the Institute or at least tried to talk to her more rather than draw smiley faces.
* ArcWords: "Salvation" by Shadow Sycamore, which mirrors Lysandre purifying the world with his vision.
* ArcWords: "Salvation" by Shadow Sycamore, which mirrors Lysandre purifying the world with his vision.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: London notes how he's the Laura of the White Gestalt when he brings up his adventures in the Fog Car. Those who played ''Silent Hill 2'' remember that Laura was the only one who was immune to the horrors of Silent Hill, especially that of Maria. This hints how Yuri and Vaillant can't see Lain, who is the Maria {{expy}}.
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** London reveals the fate of poor White Rabbit Utahoshi without any shock.
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** London reveals the fate of poor White Rabbit Utahoshi without any shock.shock and the truth about what happened to Easter.
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* MythologyGag: Gloria asks Parker if he'd do something crazy that involves sending Goh into a nightmare or Chloe's classmates into deathtraps, which is what he did in the original ''Blossoming Trail''.
* OminousFog: The Twisted Lab Car is filled with fog.
* OminousFog: The Twisted Lab Car is filled with fog.
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* MythologyGag: MythologyGag:
** Gloria asks Parker if he'd do something crazy that involves sending Goh into a nightmare or Chloe's classmates into deathtraps, which is what he did in the original ''Blossoming Trail''.
** Yuri goes through his own nightmare therapy through the use of his shadow. The main difference is that, unlike Goh, he has people to help lift him up.
* OhCrap: Yuri has this look when he realizes the Twisted Lab Car is based off of ''VideoGame/Persona4'' and the TV World.
* OminousFog: The Twisted Lab Car is filled withfog.fog to the extent London calls it "Technological horror Silent Hill".
* PsychologicalHorror: After three cars that are focused more on adventures and gathering the party, we get back to the ''Blossomverse'' trait of psychological terrors.
** Gloria asks Parker if he'd do something crazy that involves sending Goh into a nightmare or Chloe's classmates into deathtraps, which is what he did in the original ''Blossoming Trail''.
** Yuri goes through his own nightmare therapy through the use of his shadow. The main difference is that, unlike Goh, he has people to help lift him up.
* OhCrap: Yuri has this look when he realizes the Twisted Lab Car is based off of ''VideoGame/Persona4'' and the TV World.
* OminousFog: The Twisted Lab Car is filled with
* PsychologicalHorror: After three cars that are focused more on adventures and gathering the party, we get back to the ''Blossomverse'' trait of psychological terrors.
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* ShoutOut: The themes of the car was inspired by the "Literature/ThereWillComeSoftRains" short story, especially with a voice narrating the titular poem.
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* ShoutOut: The themes of the car was inspired by the "Literature/ThereWillComeSoftRains" short story, especially with a voice narrating the titular poem.poem.
** Yuri questions if Lain's name came from [[Anime/SerialExperimentsLain the anime where a narrator shouts "Present Day, Present Time!"]]
* WholePlotReference: Sycamore's storyline is based off of ''VideoGame/SilentHill2'' with Lain acting as the Maria stand-in and numerous scenes recreating the most famous cutscenes of the game. This was invoked to reflect how Sycamore is ill-prepared for the horrors of the Fog Car.
** Yuri questions if Lain's name came from [[Anime/SerialExperimentsLain the anime where a narrator shouts "Present Day, Present Time!"]]
* WholePlotReference: Sycamore's storyline is based off of ''VideoGame/SilentHill2'' with Lain acting as the Maria stand-in and numerous scenes recreating the most famous cutscenes of the game. This was invoked to reflect how Sycamore is ill-prepared for the horrors of the Fog Car.
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* InexplicableAwesome: How did Matt Hardy's scribe ''teleport onto the Infinity Train''?!
* LateArrivalSpoiler: London reveals the fate of poor White Rabbit Utahoshi without any shock.
* LateArrivalSpoiler: London reveals the fate of poor White Rabbit Utahoshi without any shock.
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* InexplicableAwesome: InexplicablyAwesome: How did Matt Hardy's scribe ''teleport onto the Infinity Train''?!
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** London reveals the fate of poor White Rabbit Utahoshi without anyshock.shock.
** Alex casually drops Hop's name, revealing that Hop is also on the Infinity Train.
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** London reveals the fate of poor White Rabbit Utahoshi without any
** Alex casually drops Hop's name, revealing that Hop is also on the Infinity Train.
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The Windchasers head into a car that is only a taste to the horrors yet to come in Silent Hill.
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The Windchasers head into a car that is only a taste to the horrors terrors yet to come in Silent Hill.
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* AdaptationExpansion:
** A flashback reveals BROKEN Matt Hardy declared the "premo-NEE-tion" that would make Chloe be chosen as Lady Destiny.
** The scene with London expands on what happened (or what will happen) in ''Knight of the Orange Lily'' and why London is unable to help the Red Lotus Trio on their quest to stop the Apex.
* AuthorAppeal: More like ''co-'' AuthorAppeal as Green Phantom Queen's two loves -- food and horror -- are prominently displayed in this arc.
** A flashback reveals BROKEN Matt Hardy declared the "premo-NEE-tion" that would make Chloe be chosen as Lady Destiny.
** The scene with London expands on what happened (or what will happen) in ''Knight of the Orange Lily'' and why London is unable to help the Red Lotus Trio on their quest to stop the Apex.
* AuthorAppeal: More like ''co-'' AuthorAppeal as Green Phantom Queen's two loves -- food and horror -- are prominently displayed in this arc.
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* InexplicableAwesome: How did Matt Hardy's scribe ''teleport onto the Infinity Train''?!
* LateArrivalSpoiler: London reveals the fate of poor White Rabbit Utahoshi without any shock.
* LateArrivalSpoiler: London reveals the fate of poor White Rabbit Utahoshi without any shock.
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* OminousFog: The Twisted Lab Car is filled with fog.
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* OminousFog: The Twisted Lab Car is filled with fog.fog.
* RamenSlurp: London and Vaillant are known to do this with their ramen.
* ShoutOut: The themes of the car was inspired by the "Literature/ThereWillComeSoftRains" short story, especially with a voice narrating the titular poem.
* RamenSlurp: London and Vaillant are known to do this with their ramen.
* ShoutOut: The themes of the car was inspired by the "Literature/ThereWillComeSoftRains" short story, especially with a voice narrating the titular poem.
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The Windchasers head into a car that is only a taste to the horrors yet to come in Silent Hill.
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* TheCameo: Nancy from ''Infinity Train Book 1'' is selling pasta in the Noodle Car.
* FoodPorn: The Noodle Car is essentially an excuse for Green Phantom Queen (who helped co-write the chapter) to list numerous noodle dishes.
* MythologyGag: Gloria asks Parker if he'd do something crazy that involves sending Goh into a nightmare or Chloe's classmates into deathtraps, which is what he did in the original ''Blossoming Trail''.
* OminousFog: The Twisted Lab Car is filled with fog.
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* TheCameo: Nancy from ''Infinity Train Book 1'' is selling pasta in the Noodle Car.
* FoodPorn: The Noodle Car is essentially an excuse for Green Phantom Queen (who helped co-write the chapter) to list numerous noodle dishes.
* MythologyGag: Gloria asks Parker if he'd do something crazy that involves sending Goh into a nightmare or Chloe's classmates into deathtraps, which is what he did in the original ''Blossoming Trail''.
* OminousFog: The Twisted Lab Car is filled with fog.
