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* {{Hypocrite}}: This story retroactively establishes that for all Chloe claims to take keeping promises so seriously, she broke her promise to never abandon Goh by boarding the Train.
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* ContinuityNod: Atticus told the story of the Friendship Asylum to the denizens of the Harvest Moon Car.
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* ContinuityNod: Atticus told the story of the Friendship Asylum to the denizens of the Harvest Moon Car. Also, he mentions that one of the cars he visited was the Backrooms Car.
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* HeroOfAnotherStory: Alec Cerise entered the Train 50 years prior to Chloe and went on numerous adventures, gained the name "Demon Researcher", and is responsible for the construction of the Horrorland Car.
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* HeroOfAnotherStory: Alec Cerise entered the Train about 50 years prior to Chloe and went on numerous adventures, gained the name "Demon Researcher", and is responsible for the construction of the Horrorland Car.
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* NoSympathy: Goh refused to give a flying feather about how his actions affected Chloe. She can't go home to eat dinner with her mom until he comes back to finish his homework, which he doesn't care for as Ash's Coronation battle is ''much more important'' and he doesn't ''care'' about how he worried her after the Lugia incident.
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* NoSympathy: Goh refused to give a flying feather about how his actions affected Chloe. She can't go home to eat dinner with her mom until he comes back to finish his homework, which he doesn't care for as Ash's Coronation battle is ''much more important'' and he doesn't ''care'' refuses to apologize about how he worried her after the Lugia incident.
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* TemptingFate: A flashback has Goh dismissing Professor Cerise's concerns that something was wrong with Chloe. Goh in the present regrets making that assumption.
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* TemptingFate: A flashback has Goh dismissing Professor Cerise's concerns that something was might be wrong with Chloe. Goh in the present regrets making that assumption.
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* InstantlyProvenWrong: When discussing the artifacts Olmec keeps in the Hidden Temple Car, Atticus notes that they are named after a famous person (Mary Shelley, Dr. Livingstone) or a location (Alhambra) instead of a deity...only for Lexi to reveal that Olmec has something called a "Broken Trident of Poseidon".
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* SeriesContinuityError: A flashback shows Professor Cerise bringing up to Ash and Goh that something might be up with Chloe and they need to take a different approach. This awareness contradicts the main story, where the Professor being too oblivious to Chloe's pain until it was too late to do anything about it formed one of the core plot points in Act 1..
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* SeriesContinuityError: A flashback shows Professor Cerise bringing up to Ash and Goh that something might be up with Chloe and they need to take a different approach. This awareness contradicts the main story, where the Professor being too oblivious to Chloe's pain until it was too late to do anything about it formed one of the core plot points in Act 1..1.
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* RuleOfSymbolism: Chloe being a Junior Postknight, essentially a KnightInShiningArmor who delivers people's mail without troubles. What was one of the things she takes so seriously in her own world? Giving Goh his homework.
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The assignment Chloe mentions is an important part of the grade, with the mentioning of plagarism means that it's more of a serious matter.
** Chloe comments that she's not covering for Goh's ass again else Miss April will suspect plagiarism in Goh's homework.
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** A flashback shows Professor Cerise bringing up to Ash and Goh that something is up with Chloe and they need to take a different approach. This awareness contradicts the main story, where the Professor being too oblivious to Chloe's pain until it was too late to do anything about it formed one of the core plot points in Act 1.
** Another scene shows that Chloe couldn't go home to have dinner with her mother if Goh didn't finish his homework. The main story never implies that Chloe's obligated to stick to Goh's side when bringing his homework, only that she has to bring it to him.
** A flashback shows Professor Cerise bringing up to Ash and Goh that something is up with Chloe and they need to take a different approach. This awareness contradicts the main story, where the Professor being too oblivious to Chloe's pain until it was too late to do anything about it formed one of the core plot points in Act 1.
** Another scene shows that Chloe couldn't go home to have dinner with her mother if Goh didn't finish his homework. The main story never implies that Chloe's obligated to stick to Goh's side when bringing his homework, only that she has to bring it to him.
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**SeriesContinuityError: A flashback shows Professor Cerise bringing up to Ash and Goh that something is might be up with Chloe and they need to take a different approach. This awareness contradicts the main story, where the Professor being too oblivious to Chloe's pain until it was too late to do anything about it formed one of the core plot points in Act 1.
** Another scene shows that Chloe couldn't go home to have dinner with her mother if Goh didn't finish his homework. The main story never implies that Chloe's obligated to stick to Goh's side when bringing his homework, only that she has to bring it to him.1..
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** Another scene shows that Chloe couldn't go home to have dinner with her mother if Goh didn't finish his homework. The main story never implies that Chloe's obligated to stick to Goh's side when bringing his homework, only that she has to bring it to him.
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** A flashback shows Professor Cerise bringing up to Ash and Goh that something is up with Chloe and they need to take a different approach. This awareness contradicts the main story, where the Professor being too oblivious to Chloe's pain until it was too late to do anything about it formed one of the core plot points in Act 1.
** Another scene shows that Chloe couldn't go home to have dinner with her mother if Goh didn't finish his homework. The main story never implies that Chloe's obligated to stick to Goh's side when bringing his homework, only that she has to bring it to him.
** A flashback shows Professor Cerise bringing up to Ash and Goh that something is up with Chloe and they need to take a different approach. This awareness contradicts the main story, where the Professor being too oblivious to Chloe's pain until it was too late to do anything about it formed one of the core plot points in Act 1.
** Another scene shows that Chloe couldn't go home to have dinner with her mother if Goh didn't finish his homework. The main story never implies that Chloe's obligated to stick to Goh's side when bringing his homework, only that she has to bring it to him.
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** The first chapter shows off Chloe's attempts to text Goh, and both times Goh refuses to consider how unsympathetic he is, which goes a long way to explain why Chloe takes promises seriously.
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** The first chapter shows off Chloe's attempts to text Goh, and both times Goh refuses to consider how unsympathetic he is, which goes a long way to explain why Chloe takes promises seriously.is.
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* AdaptationalExplanation: The prequel explains why Goh never bothered to tell Chloe about Tokio; he snapped at her and demanded that she promise to never mention Ilex Forest again.
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** The story reveals a scene where Goh refused to tell Chloe about Ilex Forest and made her promise to not only never mention it but to stay friends with him, which goes a long way to explain why Chloe takes promises seriously.
* AdaptationalExplanation: The prequel explains why Goh never bothered to tell Chloe about Tokio; he snapped at her and demanded that she promise to never mention Ilex Forestagain.again and to never abandon him.
* AdaptationalExplanation: The prequel explains why Goh never bothered to tell Chloe about Tokio; he snapped at her and demanded that she promise to never mention Ilex Forest
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** The first chapter shows off Chloe's attempts to text Goh, and both times Goh refuses to consider how unsympathetic he is.
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** The first chapter shows off Chloe's attempts to text Goh, and both times Goh refuses to consider how unsympathetic he is.is, which goes a long way to explain why Chloe takes promises seriously.
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** Chloe found the Backrooms Car to be relaxing.
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** Chloe found the Backrooms Car to be relaxing.relaxing, albeit the trio also ended up in the MagicalLibrary level of the Backrooms.
* NoSympathy: Goh refused to give a flying feather about how his actions affected Chloe. She can't go home to eat dinner with her mom until he comes back to finish his homework, which he doesn't care for as Ash's Coronation battle is ''much more important'' and he doesn't ''care'' about how he worried her after the Lugia incident.
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** The goal of the Red Lotus Trio is to get Chloe to star in [[Series/TheHauntingHour The Uncle Howee Show]].
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** The goal of the Red Lotus Trio is to get Chloe to star in [[Series/TheHauntingHour ''[[Series/TheHauntingHour The Uncle Howee Show]].Show]]''.
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* DoomedByCanon: Goh will be unable to convince Chloe to come back home and he won't know more about Chloe's problems until after meeting Gloria and Victor.
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** Chapter 3 reveals a scene of Professor Cerise talking to Ash and Goh about his concerns for his daughter and that they need to try a different approach, which would lead to them making curries on the same day Chloe was dared to battle Ash.
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** Chapter 3 reveals a scene of Professor Cerise talking to Ash and Goh about his concerns for his daughter and that they need to try a different approach, which would lead to them making curries on the same day Chloe was dared to battle Ash. There's also a scene of Goh absorbing the reveal that he had misjudged Tokio this entire time, whereas the anime just has him and Tokio meeting up in Ilex Forest.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Chloe has a memory/nightmare of Goh never wanting to talk about Ilex Forest ever again. The second chapter has him texting her that he ''wants'' to tell her all about it.
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** Chapter 3 reveals a scene of Professor Cerise talking to Ash and Goh about his concerns for his daughter and that they need to try a different approach which would lead to them making curries on the same day Chloe asked to battle Ash.
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** Chapter 3 reveals a scene of Professor Cerise talking to Ash and Goh about his concerns for his daughter and that they need to try a different approach approach, which would lead to them making curries on the same day Chloe asked was dared to battle Ash.
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* SkewedPriorities: Chloe wants to go home to have dinner with her mom and she needs Goh to finish his homework? Not a chance. Catching a Sandshrew and a Coronation match? Goh's ''definitely'' got to see it!
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* SkewedPriorities: Chloe wants to go home to have dinner with her mom and she needs Goh to finish his homework? Not a chance. Catching a Sandshrew and a watching Ash's Coronation match? Goh's ''definitely'' got to see it!
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** The first chapter shows off Chloe's attempts to text Goh, and both times Goh refused to consider how unsympathetic he is.
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** The first chapter shows off Chloe's attempts to text Goh, and both times Goh refused refuses to consider how unsympathetic he is.
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* AdaptationalExplanation: The prequel explains why Goh never bothered to tell Chloe about Tokio; he snapped at her and demanded that she promised to never mention Ilex Forest again.
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* AdaptationalExplanation: The prequel explains why Goh never bothered to tell Chloe about Tokio; he snapped at her and demanded that she promised promise to never mention Ilex Forest again.
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* ForegoneConclusion: The Red Lotus Trio will make it out alive, but Chloe will also send a farewell message to Goh and blocked all communication with him until the Ninjala Car weeks later.
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* ForegoneConclusion: The Red Lotus Trio will make it out alive, but Chloe will also send a farewell message to Goh and blocked block all communication with him until the Ninjala Car weeks later.
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** Chapter 3 reveals a scene of Professor Cerise talking to Ash and Goh about his concerns for his daughter and that they ''need'' to try a different approach which would lead to them making curries on the same day Chloe asked to battle Ash.
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** The first chapter shows off Chloe's attempts to text Goh, and both times Goh refuses refused to consider how unsympathetic he is.
** Chapter 3 reveals a scene of Professor Cerise talking to Ash and Goh about his concerns for his daughter and that they''need'' need to try a different approach which would lead to them making curries on the same day Chloe asked to battle Ash.
** Chapter 3 reveals a scene of Professor Cerise talking to Ash and Goh about his concerns for his daughter and that they
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* PerformanceAnxiety: Chloe panics at the mere thought of appearing on live TV as she's afraid of people laughing at her. Given her previous incidents with performing -- Goh taping her EpicFail of a Pokemon battle against Ash and the paint can incident -- Chloe's fears are justified.
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* PerformanceAnxiety: Chloe panics at the mere thought of appearing on live TV as she's afraid of people laughing at her. Given her previous incidents with performing -- performing; Goh taping her EpicFail of a Pokemon battle against Ash and the paint can incident -- Chloe's incident, her fears are justified.
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* SkewedPriorities: Chloe wants to go home to have dinner with her mom and she needs Goh to finish his homework? Eh, who cares? Catching a Sandshrew and a Coronation match? Goh's ''definitely'' got to see it!
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* SkewedPriorities: Chloe wants to go home to have dinner with her mom and she needs Goh to finish his homework? Eh, who cares? Not a chance. Catching a Sandshrew and a Coronation match? Goh's ''definitely'' got to see it!
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* ThisIsUnforgivable: Discussed. Atticus and Lexi are unable to forgive Amelia and the Apex leaders because what they did was completely unforgivable. They also tell Chloe to forgive Goh because what he did was just the actions of an immature brat who truly doesn't know beter.
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* ThisIsUnforgivable: Discussed. Atticus and Lexi are unable to forgive Amelia and the Apex leaders because what they did was completely unforgivable. They also tell Chloe to forgive Goh because what he did was just the actions of an immature brat someone who truly doesn't know beter.better.
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The classmates did NOT mock Chloe for her weight, just her interests and losing to Ash. Unless this is just another one of Chloe's self serving memories, please stop making things up.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Chloe outright fantasizes about murdering her own best friend until she's talked down from it. What is the reason for this violent impulse? Goh not liking the same things she does, not thanking her for bringing him homework assignments he technically doesn't have to do, and having a person in his life (Ash) who likes what he likes and is doing those things with him that Chloe herself doesn't like.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Chloe outright fantasizes about murdering her own best friend until she's talked down from it. What is the reason for this violent impulse? Goh not liking the same things she does, not thanking her for bringing him homework assignments he technically doesn't have to do, and having a person in his life (Ash) who actually likes what he likes and is doing those things with him that Chloe herself doesn't like.
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* KidsAreCruel: As a reminder of how Class 5-E were a bunch of a-holes, they insulted Chloe's hair, her weight, her skills in softball, and even pulled her hair scrunchie and threatened to ''lick it''.
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** Chapter 3 reveals a scene of Professor Cerise talking to Ash and Goh about his concerns for his daughter and that they ''need'' to try a different approach.
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** Chapter 3 reveals a scene of Professor Cerise talking to Ash and Goh about his concerns for his daughter and that they ''need'' to try a different approach.approach which would lead to them making curries on the same day Chloe asked to battle Ash.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: What are the chances that the restaurant the Red Lotus Trio entered conveniently had a portrait of a man who looked like Chloe's father who ''also'' has a thing for demons and nightmarish things?
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* ContrivedCoincidence: ContrivedCoincidence:
** What are the chances that the restaurant the Red Lotus Trio entered conveniently had a portrait of a man who looked like Chloe's father who ''also'' has a thing for demons and nightmarishthings?things?
** Goh notes how the day he and Ash wanted to cheer Chloe up with curry was the same day Chloe was pressured to battle Ash and how everything went downhill.
** What are the chances that the restaurant the Red Lotus Trio entered conveniently had a portrait of a man who looked like Chloe's father who ''also'' has a thing for demons and nightmarish
** Goh notes how the day he and Ash wanted to cheer Chloe up with curry was the same day Chloe was pressured to battle Ash and how everything went downhill.
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* MeaningfulRename: The Horrorland Car was originally just The Horrors Car before Alec Cerise helped them be a frightful amusement park.
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** Alec Cerise apparently is the reason why the Horrorland Car exists.
** Chloe found the Backrooms Car to be relaxing.
** Alec Cerise apparently is the reason why the Horrorland Car exists.
** Chloe found the Backrooms Car to be relaxing.
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* CallForward: Chloe questions the chances of her summoning a demon. She'll be doing that in the Harvest Moon Car.
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* CallForward: CallForward:
** Chloe questions the chances of her summoning a demon. She'll be doing that in the Harvest MoonCar.Car.
** When being told the Cerise Cheesy Surprise is suited for four, Chloe hopes to add a fourth member to the Red Lotus Trio. Said member is Amelia with Hewie also joining as well.
** Chloe questions the chances of her summoning a demon. She'll be doing that in the Harvest Moon
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* NoodleIncident: Chapter 3 has the Red Lotus Trio discussing previous adventures like a Cabinet of Wonders Car, the Youkai Bathhouse Car, a Monster Mash Car, the Backrooms Car, and Chloe becoming a Junior Postknight.
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* NoodleIncident: MythologyGag: The Disco Reapers Car with their giant Choc-Nut bars was visited in ''Court of Cyclamen''.
* NoodleIncident:
** Chapter 3 has the Red Lotus Trio discussing previous adventures like a Cabinet of Wonders Car, the Youkai Bathhouse Car, a Monster Mash Car, the Backrooms Car, and Chloe becoming a JuniorPostknight.Postknight.
** Alec Cerise once spent so long in the Sudoku Car that his partner had to camp out in the Disco Reapers Car.
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** Chapter 3 has the Red Lotus Trio discussing previous adventures like a Cabinet of Wonders Car, the Youkai Bathhouse Car, a Monster Mash Car, the Backrooms Car, and Chloe becoming a Junior
** Alec Cerise once spent so long in the Sudoku Car that his partner had to camp out in the Disco Reapers Car.
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* TheReveal: Alec Cerise is the ancestor of Chloe Cerise...just not the Chloe Cerise currently on the Train.
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* TheReveal: Alec Cerise is the ancestor of Chloe Cerise...just not the Chloe Cerise currently on the Train.[[note]]He's the great-great-grandfather of Colette Cadieux[[/note]]
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* YourInsane: Chloe texts this to Goh when she learns how he jumped onto Lugia even though he promised not to do something reckless.
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* YourInsane: YoureInsane: Chloe texts this to Goh when she learns how he jumped onto Lugia even though he promised not to do something reckless.
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* TheDreaded: Uncle Howdy is this to many denizens in the Canals of Fondue Car who look horrified when Lexi notes that the Firefly Funhouse Car is on the way to Uncle Howee.
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* AdaptationExpansion: The first chapter shows off Chloe's attempts to text Goh, and both times Goh refuses to consider how unsympathetic he is.
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* AdaptationExpansion: AdaptationExpansion:
** The first chapter shows off Chloe's attempts to text Goh, and both times Goh refuses to consider how unsympathetic heis.is.
** Chapter 3 reveals a scene of Professor Cerise talking to Ash and Goh about his concerns for his daughter and that they ''need'' to try a different approach.
** The first chapter shows off Chloe's attempts to text Goh, and both times Goh refuses to consider how unsympathetic he
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* YourInsane: Chloe texts this to Goh when she learns how he jumped onto Lugia even though he promised not to do something reckless.
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* DramaticIrony: Alec Cerise is the ancestor of Chloe Cerise...just not the Chloe Cerise currently on the Train.
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* DramaticIrony: Alec Cerise DisproportionateRetribution: Chloe outright fantasizes about murdering her own best friend until she's talked down from it. What is the ancestor of reason for this violent impulse? Goh not liking the same things she does, not thanking her for bringing him homework assignments he technically doesn't have to do, and having a person in his life (Ash) who likes what he likes and is doing those things with him that Chloe Cerise...just not the Chloe Cerise currently on the Train.herself doesn't like.
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** As a reminder of how Class 5-E were a bunch of a-holes, they insulted Chloe's hair, her weight, her skills in softball, and even pulled her hair scrunchie and threatened to ''lick it''.
** Chloe herself outright fantasizes about murdering her own best friend until she's talked down from it.
** As a reminder of how Class 5-E were a bunch of a-holes, they insulted Chloe's hair, her weight, her skills in softball, and even pulled her hair scrunchie and threatened to ''lick it''.
** Chloe herself outright fantasizes about murdering her own best friend until she's talked down from it.
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* KidsAreCruel:
**KidsAreCruel: As a reminder of how Class 5-E were a bunch of a-holes, they insulted Chloe's hair, her weight, her skills in softball, and even pulled her hair scrunchie and threatened to ''lick it''.
** Chloe herself outright fantasizes about murdering her own best friend until she's talked down from it.it''.
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* TheDreaded: Uncle Howdy is this to many denizens in the Canals of Fondue Car who look horrified when Lexi notes that the Firefly Funhouse Car is on the way to Uncle Howdy.
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** The goal of the Red Lotus Trio is to get Chloe to star in [[Series/TheHauntingHour The Uncle Howee Show]].
** Chloe once liked a Pokemon version of ''WesternAnimation/DoraTheExplorer''.
** Chloe once liked a Pokemon version of ''WesternAnimation/DoraTheExplorer''.
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* ContinuityNod: Atticus told the story of the Friendship Asylum to the denizens of the Harvest Moon Car.
* TheDreaded: Uncle Howdy is this to many denizens in the Canals of Fondue Car who look horrified when Lexi notes that the Firefly Funhouse Car is on the way to Uncle Howdy.
* NoodleIncident: Chapter 3 has the Red Lotus Trio discussing previous adventures like a Cabinet of Wonders Car, the Youkai Bathhouse Car, a Monster Mash Car, the Backrooms Car, and Chloe becoming a Junior Postknight.
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* ShoutOut: The five mice who run the restaurant in Chapter 3 are named after [[Literature/GeronimoStilton the Thea Sisters]].
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** The five mice who run the restaurant in Chapter 3 are named after [[Literature/GeronimoStilton the TheaSisters]].Sisters]].
** Chloe spent a week learning how to be a [[VideoGame/{{Postknight}} Junior Postknight]].
** The five mice who run the restaurant in Chapter 3 are named after [[Literature/GeronimoStilton the Thea
** Chloe spent a week learning how to be a [[VideoGame/{{Postknight}} Junior Postknight]].
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* KidsAreCruel: As a reminder of how Class 5-E were a bunch of a-holes, they insulted Chloe's hair, her weight, her skills in softball, and even pulled her hair scrunchie and threatened to ''lick it''.
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* KidsAreCruel: KidsAreCruel:
** As a reminder of how Class 5-E were a bunch of a-holes, they insulted Chloe's hair, her weight, her skills in softball, and even pulled her hair scrunchie and threatened to ''lickit''.it''.
** Chloe herself outright fantasizes about murdering her own best friend until she's talked down from it.
** As a reminder of how Class 5-E were a bunch of a-holes, they insulted Chloe's hair, her weight, her skills in softball, and even pulled her hair scrunchie and threatened to ''lick
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The Red Lotus Trio -- Chloe Cerise, Atticus, and Lexi -- are currently staying in the Canals of Fondue Car, where Chloe is struggling to type a message about how she feels about Goh and her worrying anxieties about how people back in Vermillion City think of her. Lexi suggests that she should focus on herself and that she needs a confidence boost by performing in The Uncle Howee show. Unfortunately, the road to that car isn't easy, as she'll have to brave the horrors of the Friendship Asylum and of Uncle Howdy before she can become the legendary Chloe of the Vermillion.
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The Red Lotus Trio -- Chloe Cerise, Atticus, and Lexi -- are currently staying in the Canals of Fondue Car, where Chloe is struggling to type a message about how she feels about Goh and her worrying anxieties about how people back in Vermillion City think of her. Lexi suggests that she should focus on herself and that she needs a confidence boost by performing in The ''The Uncle Howee show.Show''. Unfortunately, the road to that car isn't easy, as she'll have to brave the horrors of the Friendship Asylum and of Uncle Howdy before she can become the legendary Chloe of the Vermillion.
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* AdaptationExplanation: The prequel explains why Goh never bothered to tell Chloe about Tokio; he snapped at her and demanded that she promised to never mention Ilex Forest again.
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* AdaptationExplanation: AdaptationalExplanation: The prequel explains why Goh never bothered to tell Chloe about Tokio; he snapped at her and demanded that she promised to never mention Ilex Forest again.
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The prequel to ''Fanfic/InfinityTrainSeekerOfCrocus''.
The Red Lotus Trio -- Chloe Cerise, Atticus, and Lexi -- are currently staying in the Canals of Fondue Car, where Chloe is struggling to type a message about how she feels about Goh and her worrying anxieties about how people back in Vermillion City think of her. Lexi suggests that she should focus on herself and that she needs a confidence boost by performing in The Uncle Howee show. Unfortunately, the road to that car isn't easy, as she'll have to brave the horrors of the Friendship Asylum and of Uncle Howdy before she can become the legendary Chloe of the Vermillion.
!!Tropes found in the prequel
* AdaptationExplanation: The prequel explains why Goh never bothered to tell Chloe about Tokio; he snapped at her and demanded that she promised to never mention Ilex Forest again.
* CallForward: Chloe questions the chances of her summoning a demon. She'll be doing that in the Harvest Moon Car.
* FoodPorn: Chapter 3 takes place in an Italian restaurant, so there's a lot of descriptions of food.
* ForegoneConclusion: The Red Lotus Trio will make it out alive, but Chloe will also send a farewell message to Goh and blocked all communication with him until the Ninjala Car weeks later.
* KidsAreCruel: As a reminder of how Class 5-E were a bunch of a-holes, they insulted Chloe's hair, her weight, her skills in softball, and even pulled her hair scrunchie and threatened to ''lick it''.
* PerformanceAnxiety: Chloe panics at the mere thought of appearing on live TV as she's afraid of people laughing at her. Given her previous incidents with performing -- Goh taping her EpicFail of a Pokemon battle against Ash and the paint can incident -- Chloe's fears are justified.
* {{Prequel}}: The story takes place a few weeks prior to Augustine entering the Infinity Train.
* ShoutOut: The five mice who run the restaurant in Chapter 3 are named after [[Literature/GeronimoStilton the Thea Sisters]].
* TemptingFate: A flashback has Goh dismissing Professor Cerise's concerns that something was wrong with Chloe. Goh in the present regrets making that assumption.
* ThisIsUnforgivable: Discussed. Atticus and Lexi are unable to forgive Amelia and the Apex leaders because what they did was completely unforgivable. They also tell Chloe to forgive Goh because what he did was just the actions of an immature brat who truly doesn't know beter.
* ThrowTheDogABone: Goh is given a message from Chloe that she's doing fine, which is more than what he got in ''Blossoming Trail''.
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The Red Lotus Trio -- Chloe Cerise, Atticus, and Lexi -- are currently staying in the Canals of Fondue Car, where Chloe is struggling to type a message about how she feels about Goh and her worrying anxieties about how people back in Vermillion City think of her. Lexi suggests that she should focus on herself and that she needs a confidence boost by performing in The Uncle Howee show. Unfortunately, the road to that car isn't easy, as she'll have to brave the horrors of the Friendship Asylum and of Uncle Howdy before she can become the legendary Chloe of the Vermillion.
!!Tropes found in the prequel
* AdaptationExplanation: The prequel explains why Goh never bothered to tell Chloe about Tokio; he snapped at her and demanded that she promised to never mention Ilex Forest again.
* CallForward: Chloe questions the chances of her summoning a demon. She'll be doing that in the Harvest Moon Car.
* FoodPorn: Chapter 3 takes place in an Italian restaurant, so there's a lot of descriptions of food.
* ForegoneConclusion: The Red Lotus Trio will make it out alive, but Chloe will also send a farewell message to Goh and blocked all communication with him until the Ninjala Car weeks later.
* KidsAreCruel: As a reminder of how Class 5-E were a bunch of a-holes, they insulted Chloe's hair, her weight, her skills in softball, and even pulled her hair scrunchie and threatened to ''lick it''.
* PerformanceAnxiety: Chloe panics at the mere thought of appearing on live TV as she's afraid of people laughing at her. Given her previous incidents with performing -- Goh taping her EpicFail of a Pokemon battle against Ash and the paint can incident -- Chloe's fears are justified.
* {{Prequel}}: The story takes place a few weeks prior to Augustine entering the Infinity Train.
* ShoutOut: The five mice who run the restaurant in Chapter 3 are named after [[Literature/GeronimoStilton the Thea Sisters]].
* TemptingFate: A flashback has Goh dismissing Professor Cerise's concerns that something was wrong with Chloe. Goh in the present regrets making that assumption.
* ThisIsUnforgivable: Discussed. Atticus and Lexi are unable to forgive Amelia and the Apex leaders because what they did was completely unforgivable. They also tell Chloe to forgive Goh because what he did was just the actions of an immature brat who truly doesn't know beter.
* ThrowTheDogABone: Goh is given a message from Chloe that she's doing fine, which is more than what he got in ''Blossoming Trail''.
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