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* AdaptationalJerkass: Unfortunately happened with Delia. In the original chapter notes, she was serving some food for the Pokémon when she came across Chloe's MomentOfWeakness by pure luck. In the chapter proper, it instead seems like she was ''actively looking'' for Chloe when she had the moment, ready to snipe and chastise her for not really changing.

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* AdaptationalJerkass: Unfortunately happened with Delia. In the original chapter notes, she was serving some food for the Pokémon when she came across Chloe's MomentOfWeakness by pure luck. In the chapter proper, it instead seems like she was ''actively looking'' for Chloe when she had the moment, ready to snipe and chastise her for not really changing. It was later written on her going to her son's defense in thinking that Chloe was about to go on a huge rant again.
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* RejectedApology: Delia makes clear that it will take far more than words for Chloe to make any progress with her, and is more than eager to [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech remind her of all her mistakes]]. That said, she'll be eating ''her'' apology now since what she did was even worse.

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* RejectedApology: Delia makes clear that it will take far more than words for Chloe to make any progress with her, and is more than eager to [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech remind her of all her mistakes]]. That said, she'll be eating ''her'' apology now since what she did was even worse.
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*** Both Cerises and Fujihachis have to move to different locations -- Cerises for Pallet and Fujihachis for Celadon -- so that means Chloe and Goh won't be able to see each other anymore.


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** Chloe and Goh both lived in Vermillion City yet their friendship was very distant. Now as they're closer, they have to separate to different cities.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Unfortunately happened with Delia. In the original chapter notes, she was serving some food for the Pokémon when she came across Chloe's MomentOfWeakness by pure luck. In the chapter proper, it instead seems like she was ''actively looking'' for Chloe when she had the moment, ready to snice and chastise her for not really changing.

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* AdaptationalJerkass: Unfortunately happened with Delia. In the original chapter notes, she was serving some food for the Pokémon when she came across Chloe's MomentOfWeakness by pure luck. In the chapter proper, it instead seems like she was ''actively looking'' for Chloe when she had the moment, ready to snice snipe and chastise her for not really changing.



* PoorCommunicationKills: Nobody, not even Trip, who knew somewhat how the Train worked, nor told Delia that Pokémon aren't ''enough'' to deter the Train, leaving her to assume that the presence of Pokémon will be enough to protect Goh, despite the fact that several trainers boarded ''with'' their teammates in tow. Including Trip, Mallow, Gladion, Paul, Alain, Hop...

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* PoorCommunicationKills: Nobody, not even Trip, who knew somewhat how the Train worked, nor told Delia that Pokémon aren't ''enough'' to deter the Train, leaving her to assume that the presence of Pokémon will be enough to protect Goh, despite the fact that several trainers boarded ''with'' their teammates in tow. Including Trip, Mallow, Gladion, Paul, Alain, Hop...



* SweetAndSourGrapes: Deconstructed. Chloe realizes that part of what finally drove Goh onto the train was guilt over the notion of 'everything getting handed to him' when compared to her, and when it looked like he was going to have everything he'd ever wanted, both Mew and Chloe, without 'earning it', he couldn't handle it.

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* SweetAndSourGrapes: Deconstructed.{{Deconstructed}}. Chloe realizes that part of what finally drove Goh onto the train was guilt over the notion of 'everything getting handed to him' when compared to her, and when it looked like he was going to have everything he'd ever wanted, both Mew and Chloe, without 'earning it', he couldn't handle it.

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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: When Delia sarcastically asks if Goh's apologies meant nothing, Chloe realizes that ''Goh himself'' may have believed that they weren't. Then things get worse when they realize that Delia just left Goh alone, trusting that Raboot and Sobble would be enough to ensure he wouldn't get on the Train...

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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: When Delia sarcastically angrily asks if Goh's apologies meant nothing, Chloe realizes that ''Goh himself'' may have believed that they weren't. Then things get worse when they realize that Delia just left Goh alone, trusting that Raboot and Sobble would be enough to ensure he wouldn't get on the Train...



** If Delia hadn't left Goh alone with Raboot and Sobble in order to focus on taunting Chloe over her inner conflicts, the three of them wouldn't have ended up on the Train. Moreover if she, and everyone else in the area, didn't ''assume'' that Raboot and Sobble were enough to stop Goh...

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** If Delia hadn't left Goh alone with Raboot and Sobble in order to focus on taunting confronting Chloe over her inner conflicts, the three of them wouldn't have ended up on the Train. Moreover if she, and everyone else in the area, didn't ''assume'' that Raboot and Sobble were enough to stop Goh...



* FuryFueledFoolishness: The confrontation with Delia was rewritten to emphasize Delia's anger as opposed to smugness, suggesting that it was more of a badly-timed MamaBear moment on overhearing the exposure of Mew.



** Delia warns Chloe that she'll be watching for any mistakes or backsliding she does. Her eagerness to rub that in her face the moment she thinks Chloe's misstepped leaves ''her'' the one apologizing after she unintentionally leaves Goh unsupervised -- with not even Raboot and Sobble not enough to stop him -- and vulnerable to pickup.

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** Delia warns Chloe that she'll be watching for any mistakes or backsliding she does. Her eagerness impulsive decision to rub that in her face the moment she thinks Chloe's misstepped leaves ''her'' the one apologizing after she unintentionally leaves Goh unsupervised -- with not even Raboot and Sobble not enough to stop him -- and vulnerable to pickup.



* MoodWhiplash: Chloe's chuckling at Pikachu and Yamper's antics one moment, then doing a double-take at Mew the next, followed by Delia closing in to sneer at her weakness and the horror of realizing Goh's been left unsupervised.

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* MoodWhiplash: Chloe's chuckling at Pikachu and Yamper's antics one moment, then doing a double-take at Mew the next, followed by Delia closing in to sneer snarl at her weakness and the horror of realizing Goh's been left unsupervised.



** Delia notices Chloe having a MomentOfWeakness after recognizing the shiny Espurr as Mew and decides sniping at her is ''far'' more important than keeping an eye on Goh...and realizes how she messed up ''spectacularly''.
* SmugSnake: Much like Mr. Bradbury, Delia's determination to ride her high horse leads to her taking things too far and suffering her own ego-bruising reality check. All her smugness ''melts away'' [[OhCrap upon realizing]] that no, his Pokémon partners ''won't'' keep him off the Train...

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** Delia notices Chloe having a MomentOfWeakness after recognizing the shiny Espurr as Mew and decides sniping at confronting her is ''far'' more important than keeping an eye on Goh...and realizes how she messed up ''spectacularly''.
* SmugSnake: Much like Mr. Bradbury, Delia's determination to ride her high horse leads to her taking things too far and suffering her own ego-bruising reality check. All her smugness ''melts away'' [[OhCrap upon realizing]] that no, his Pokémon partners ''won't'' keep him off the Train...
''spectacularly''.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Unfortunately happened with Delia. In the original chapter notes, she was serving some food for the Pokémon when she came across Chloe's MomentOfWeakness by pure luck. In the chapter proper, it instead seems like she was ''actively looking'' for Chloe when she had the moment, ready to snice and chastise her for not really changing.


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* BothSidesHaveAPoint: Delia and Chloe's shared MomentOfWeakness. While Chloe's right in that Delia ''shouldn't'' have left Goh alone with his Pokémon, and she's clearly apologetic once she realizes the ObliviousGuiltSlinging she did at him, Delia's ''also'' right because not only she [[PoorCommunicationKills not know Pokémon weren't enough to deter the Train]], but that after seeing and hearing everybody bend over backwards to ask for ''her'' forgiveness, it'd be ''very easy'' for Chloe to get back on her high horse, especially she made it look like she was ready to go on another giant rant when she saw the injured Mew.
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** Not counting the Intermission and Arc 2 Prelude, the story has 38 chapters. In the Journeys anime, Episode 38 was Chloe's last focus episode for Season 1, highlighting that this is Chloe's journey on the Train is finally over.
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* ForegoneConclusion: Somewhat; it was inevitable that Goh would get on the Train, but it was the ''circumstances'' that determined the "when".

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*** Finally, Goh's number is so obscenely big (813) that he's gonna be stuck on the Train for months at best, ''a year at worst'', and his nonexistent self-esteem is ''not'' going to help pass the time.

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*** Finally, Goh's number is so obscenely big (813) that he's gonna be stuck on the Train for months at best, ''a year at worst'', and his nonexistent self-esteem is ''not'' going to help pass the time. And the first Denizen he meets is an extremely sketchy individual who may have plans of his own.



* ExplainExplainOhCrap: When Delia sarcastically asks if Goh's apologizes meant nothing, Chloe realizes that ''Goh himself'' may have made certain that they weren't. Then things get worse when they realize that Delia just left Goh alone, trusting that Raboot and Sobble would be enough to ensure he wouldn't get on the Train...

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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: When Delia sarcastically asks if Goh's apologizes apologies meant nothing, Chloe realizes that ''Goh himself'' may have made certain believed that they weren't. Then things get worse when they realize that Delia just left Goh alone, trusting that Raboot and Sobble would be enough to ensure he wouldn't get on the Train...


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* SweetAndSourGrapes: Deconstructed. Chloe realizes that part of what finally drove Goh onto the train was guilt over the notion of 'everything getting handed to him' when compared to her, and when it looked like he was going to have everything he'd ever wanted, both Mew and Chloe, without 'earning it', he couldn't handle it.
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** Chloe hated cooking curry because of how her Home Ec. teacher said she wasn't original. She's seen calmly cooking her curry laksa.

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** Chloe hated cooking curry because of how her Home Ec. teacher said she wasn't original. She's Now, she's seen calmly cooking her curry laksa.



* PoorCommunicationKills: Nobody, not even Trip, who knew somewhat how the Train worked, told Delia that Pokémon aren't ''enough'' to deter the Train, leaving her to assume that the presence of Pokémon will be enough to protect Goh, despite the fact that several trainers boarded ''with'' their teammates in tow. Including Trip, Mallow, Gladion, Paul, Alain, Hop...

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* PoorCommunicationKills: Nobody, not even Trip, who knew somewhat how the Train worked, nor told Delia that Pokémon aren't ''enough'' to deter the Train, leaving her to assume that the presence of Pokémon will be enough to protect Goh, despite the fact that several trainers boarded ''with'' their teammates in tow. Including Trip, Mallow, Gladion, Paul, Alain, Hop...

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* BittersweetEnding: On the whole, Chloe has developed into a better person and is willing to start her friendship with Goh all over again. Unfortunately, Goh feels like he needs to do ''more'' to deserve said friendship and Delia's blunder has him stuck on the train with a high number and meeting up with a strange passenger. Chloe still also has to repair her reputation, meet up with Parker, and give the news on the three Trainers who will be on the Train for quite some time too.

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* BittersweetEnding: On the whole, this chapter ends the story on a rather bittersweet note.
** Bitter:
*** Goh's Train trip is inevitable at this point, and the only thing the Fujihachis can do is make what little time he has left on Vermillion worthwhile.
*** Delia makes it ''abundantly clear'' that she's not going to forgive
Chloe anytime soon, especially since so many people seem to backpedal just to ask forgiveness ''from her'', and that this is something she has developed into a better person to accept.
*** Chloe's reputation is still tarnished,
and is willing to start her friendship with Goh all over again. Unfortunately, Goh feels like he needs to do ''more'' to deserve said friendship and Delia's blunder has him brother is still stuck on in juvie, leaving her a long road of redemption ahead.
*** Mew's identity is revealed at
the train worst possible moment, with a high it leading to Goh getting picked up by the Train.
*** Finally, Goh's
number and meeting up with a strange passenger. Chloe still also has to repair her reputation, meet up with Parker, and give the news on the three Trainers who will is so obscenely big (813) that he's gonna be stuck on the Train for quite some time too.months at best, ''a year at worst'', and his nonexistent self-esteem is ''not'' going to help pass the time.
** Sweet:
*** While there's a sense of bitterness and tensity, Chloe and Goh finally make peace with each other, having the curry they promised to have so long ago.
*** Chloe's given the support she always needed despite all the adversities, from her family and friends when it becomes clear just how much she has to do to make up for it.
*** With the Apex gone, and the Cage of Flauros dismantled alongside the Fog Car being quarantined, the Train's a safer place than it's ever been, with the Denizens celebrating the fact.
*** Goh's final moments on Vermillion City aren't filled with spite, hate, and being blamed like he's grown used to, but is instead given encouragement, reassured that not everything was his fault, and finally, Raboot and Sobble accompany him to the Infinity Train, ensuring that he's not alone on the trip.



* {{Cliffhanger}}: The story ends with Goh on the Infinity Train, being approached by a Denizen who decides to accompany on his journey.



* GrandFinale: Of ''Blossoming Trail''.



** Delila was the best parental figure between her, the Cerises and the Fujihachis. Yet it was ''she'' who made the mistake to leave Goh alone so the Train can pick him up. In her defense, no one knew that Raboot and Sobble's presence wasn't enough to prevent Goh from leaving.

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** Delila Delia was the best parental figure between her, the Cerises and the Fujihachis. Yet it was ''she'' who made the mistake to leave Goh alone so the Train can pick him up. In her defense, no one knew that Raboot and Sobble's presence wasn't enough to prevent Goh from leaving.leaving.
** While Zeno was still around, neither Parker nor Goh were taken by the Train, despite being often left alone. With him gone, Goh's taken by the Train ''as soon'' as he's left alone. Yes, Zeno's very existence ''prevented the Train from snatching them''.



* NoSympathyForGrudgeholders: Ironically, this proves to be Delia's undoing. She's so eager to prove that Chloe hasn't changed and is still ruled by her grudges that she's blinded to how she's letting her ''own'' bias overrule her better judgement.

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* NoSympathyForGrudgeholders: Ironically, this proves to be Delia's undoing. She's so eager to prove that Chloe hasn't changed and is still ruled by her grudges that she's blinded to how she's letting her ''own'' bias overrule her better judgement. Then again, this also goes both ways, since Chloe's own grudge-filled mistakes are the ''reason'' Delia shows no sympathy in the first place.



* PoorCommunicationKills: Delia assumes that the presence of Pokémon will be enough to protect Goh, despite the fact that several trainers boarded ''with'' their teammates in tow. Including Trip, Mallow, Gladion, Paul, Alain, Hop...
** Chloe assumes that the group knew that Pokémon weren't enough to stop you from entering, only to realize that it isn't the case. In her defense, she's only been back for one to two days and with everything going on, she hadn't had time to fully explain this.

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* PoorCommunicationKills: Nobody, not even Trip, who knew somewhat how the Train worked, told Delia assumes that Pokémon aren't ''enough'' to deter the Train, leaving her to assume that the presence of Pokémon will be enough to protect Goh, despite the fact that several trainers boarded ''with'' their teammates in tow. Including Trip, Mallow, Gladion, Paul, Alain, Hop...
** Chloe assumes that the group knew that Pokémon weren't enough to stop you from entering, only to realize that it isn't the case. In her defense, she's only been back for one to two days and with everything going on, she hadn't had time to fully explain this.this, but it's still a pretty big blunder.



** Goh's initial number is 813, Scorbunny's National Dex number and reflecting on how he was initially insensitive to his starter Pokémon's desires.

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** Goh's initial number is 813, Scorbunny's National Dex number and reflecting on how he was initially insensitive to his starter Pokémon's desires. The fact it's so stupidly big is also a clear cut symbolism over how ''broken'' he is.
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** Chloe assumes that the group knew that Pokémon weren't enough to stop you from entering, only to realize that it isn't the case. In her defense, she's only been back for one to two days and with everything going on, she hadn't had time to fully explain this.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Delia attempts to smack Chloe with one by snidely asking whether Goh's apology meant nothing since he gained something in her absence. It backfires and gets countered by Chloe's frantic query as to who's watching over Goh at that moment.

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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Delia attempts to smack Chloe with one by snidely asking whether Goh's apology meant nothing since he gained something in her absence. It backfires and gets countered by Chloe's frantic query as to who's watching over Goh at that moment.moment since Delia, Ash, Trip and Serena are with her and Tomie is busy with moving boxes.



** If Delia hadn't left Goh alone with Raboot and Sobble in order to focus on taunting Chloe over her inner conflicts, the three of them wouldn't have ended up on the Train. Moreover if she didn't ''assume'' that Raboot and Sobble were enough to stop Goh...

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** If Delia hadn't left Goh alone with Raboot and Sobble in order to focus on taunting Chloe over her inner conflicts, the three of them wouldn't have ended up on the Train. Moreover if she she, and everyone else in the area, didn't ''assume'' that Raboot and Sobble were enough to stop Goh...



** Delia warns Chloe that she'll be watching for any mistakes or backsliding she does. Her eagerness to rub that in her face the moment she thinks Chloe's misstepped leaves ''her'' the one apologizing after she unintentionally leaves Goh unsupervised and vulnerable to pickup.

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** Delia warns Chloe that she'll be watching for any mistakes or backsliding she does. Her eagerness to rub that in her face the moment she thinks Chloe's misstepped leaves ''her'' the one apologizing after she unintentionally leaves Goh unsupervised -- with not even Raboot and Sobble not enough to stop him -- and vulnerable to pickup.



** Delila was the best parental figure between her, the Cerises and the Fujihachis. Yet it was ''she'' who made the dumb mistake to leave Goh alone so the Train can pick him up.

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** Delila was the best parental figure between her, the Cerises and the Fujihachis. Yet it was ''she'' who made the dumb mistake to leave Goh alone so the Train can pick him up.up. In her defense, no one knew that Raboot and Sobble's presence wasn't enough to prevent Goh from leaving.



** The Silent Hill song, "End of Small Sanctuary" was about the end of Heather's innocent teenage life before she got plunged into the horrors of Silent Hill. Likewise, the story is about the end of the reprieve of Chloe returning and she and Goh forgiving one another before Goh gets sucked onto the Train.
** Goh arrives in the Canals of Fondue Car where Chloe's victory over the Apex is being celebrated in various ways, including a statue being erected in her honor. He mentally notes how she's being built up here after all he did to try tearing her down during his descent into jerkassery.

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** The Silent Hill song, "End of Small Sanctuary" was about the end of Heather's innocent teenage life before she got plunged into the horrors of Silent Hill.Hill and played as she gave a call to her father and stating she loved him. Likewise, the story is about the end of the reprieve of Chloe returning and she and Goh forgiving one another before Goh gets sucked onto the Train.
** Goh arrives in the Canals of Fondue Car where Chloe's victory over the Apex is being celebrated in various ways, including a statue being erected in her honor. He mentally notes how she's being built up here after all he did to try tearing her down during his descent into jerkassery. Bonus points as this car was the one that started acknowledging Chloe being a hero.



* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Delia's decision to leave Raboot and Sobble as Goh's only company, expecting their presence to be enough to deter the Train, so that she can harass Chloe, provides all the opportunity the Train needs to pick up a new passenger.

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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Delia's decision to leave Raboot and Sobble as Goh's only company, expecting their presence to be enough to deter the Train, so that she can harass Chloe, provides all the opportunity the Train needs to pick up a new passenger.
passenger. Guess who ends up apologizing to whom?

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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Delia attempts to smack Chloe with one by snidely asking whether Goh's apology meant nothing since he gained something in her absence. It backfires and gets countered by Chloe's frantic query as to who's watching over Goh at that moment.



** Once again, a neglectful adult with SkewedPriorities serves as the tipping point to send somebody to the Train when they step in to scold Chloe. Professor Cerise barely paid his daughter any mind until Pokémon were involved, then chided her for lashing out; Delia paid her far too much mind, eager to punish any trespass and berate her for having even the ''briefest'' negative reaction.



* NoSympathyForGrudgeholders: Ironically, this proves to be Delia's undoing. She's so eager to prove that Chloe hasn't changed and is still ruled by her grudges that she's blinded to how she's letting her ''own'' bias overrule her better judgement.



* PoorCommunicationKills: Delia assumes that the presence of Pokémon will be enough to protect Goh, despite the fact that several trainers boarded ''with'' their teammates in tow. Including Trip, Mallow, Gladion, Paul, Alain, Hop...



** Goh's initial number is 813, Scorbunny's national dex number and reflecting on how he was initially insensitive to his starter Pokémon's desires.

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** Goh's initial number is 813, Scorbunny's national dex National Dex number and reflecting on how he was initially insensitive to his starter Pokémon's desires.



* SmugSnake: Much like Mr. Bradbury, Delia's determination to ride her high horse leads to her taking things too far and suffering her own ego-bruising reality check.
* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Delia's smart decision to insult Chloe over ''making sure Goh doesn't enter the Infinity Train'' means no one, not even his Pokémon, are keeping an eye on him. Sure enough, the minute Chloe realizes this, it's too late and he's already gone.

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* SmugSnake: Much like Mr. Bradbury, Delia's determination to ride her high horse leads to her taking things too far and suffering her own ego-bruising reality check.
check. All her smugness ''melts away'' [[OhCrap upon realizing]] that no, his Pokémon partners ''won't'' keep him off the Train...
* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Delia's smart decision to insult Chloe over ''making sure Goh doesn't enter leave Raboot and Sobble as Goh's only company, expecting their presence to be enough to deter the Infinity Train'' means no one, not even his Pokémon, are keeping an eye on him. Sure enough, Train, so that she can harass Chloe, provides all the minute Chloe realizes this, it's too late and he's already gone.opportunity the Train needs to pick up a new passenger.

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* BittersweetEnding: On the whole, Chloe has developed into a better person and is willing to start her friendship with Goh all over again. Unfortunately, Goh feels like he needs to do ''more'' to deserve said friendship and Delia's blunder has him stuck on the train with a high number and meeting up with a strange passenger. Chloe still also has to repair her reputation, meet up with Parker, and give the news on the three Trainers who will be on the Train for quite some time too.



** Goh ends up on the Canals of Fondue Car, where the denizens are celebrating the end of the Apex.

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** Goh ends up on the Canals of Fondue Car, where the denizens are celebrating the end of the Apex. Moreover, the denizen he encounters was the same one whom Chloe met at the end of The Curry Car.

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* AndThereWasMuchRejoicing: The denizens in the Canals of Fondue Car are happily celebrating that there is no more Apex to ruin their lives.



** The story began with Goh and Chloe discussing their friendship over curry, followed by her leaving on the Train. It ends in much the same way, though their chat is much calmer.

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** The story began with Goh and Chloe discussing their friendship over curry, followed by her leaving on the Train. It ends in much the same way, albeit with Goh on the Train, though their chat is much calmer.



** Chloe hated cooking curry because of how her Home Ec. teacher said she wasn't original. She's seen calmly cooking her curry laksa.



* CallBack:
** The curry Chloe cooked is the green curry laksa from "The Curry Car".
** Goh ends up on the Canals of Fondue Car, where the denizens are celebrating the end of the Apex.




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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Delia's smart decision to insult Chloe over ''making sure Goh doesn't enter the Infinity Train'' means no one, not even his Pokémon, are keeping an eye on him. Sure enough, the minute Chloe realizes this, it's too late and he's already gone.

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** One-One's intro message was playing when both Chloe and Goh enter the Train.



** If Delia hadn't left Goh alone with Rabbot and Sobble in order to focus on taunting Chloe over her inner conflicts, the three of them wouldn't have ended up on the Train.

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** If Delia hadn't left Goh alone with Rabbot Raboot and Sobble in order to focus on taunting Chloe over her inner conflicts, the three of them wouldn't have ended up on the Train.Train. Moreover if she didn't ''assume'' that Raboot and Sobble were enough to stop Goh...



* HighOnCatnip: The cheapest florist in Vermillion City likes to use Pokénip as a filler grass, causing Pikachu and Yamper to trip balls.

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* HighOnCatnip: The cheapest florist in Vermillion City likes to use Pokénip as a filler grass, causing Pikachu and Yamper to trip balls.balls...and then reveal that "Shiny Espurr" that Tomie's been babysitting was really '''Mew'''.



** Delila was the best parental figure between her, the Cerises and the Fujihachis. Yet it was ''she'' who made the dumb mistake to leave Goh alone so the Train can pick him up.



* MomentOfWeakness: Chloe has a ''very'' brief flash of anger upon recognizing Mew and realizing that Goh achieved his GoalInLife, which quickly fades to conflicted grief. Delia is quick to pounce upon that, leading to far worse consequences.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Once it hits Delia that she screwed up, she frantically begs for Chloe's forgiveness.
* ObliviousGuiltSlinging: Chloe reassures Goh that they can search for Mew together, unaware that he's already found them. He doesn't correct her, leaving her to realize this was happening when she discovers the injured Mew sleeping.

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* MomentOfWeakness: Chloe has a ''very'' brief flash of anger upon recognizing Mew and realizing that Goh achieved his GoalInLife, which quickly fades to conflicted grief. Delia is quick to pounce upon that, leading to far ''far'' worse consequences.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Once it hits Delia that she screwed up, up in leaving Goh alone for him to enter the Infinity Train, she frantically ''frantically'' begs for Chloe's forgiveness.
forgiveness. Chloe would find it hilarious about how Delia screwed up if it wasn't so serious.
* ObliviousGuiltSlinging: Chloe reassures Goh that they can search for Mew together, unaware that he's already found them. He doesn't correct her, leaving her to realize this was happening when she discovers the injured Mew sleeping.sleeping and delirious from the Pokénip bouquet.



* RejectedApology: Delia makes clear that it will take far more than words for Chloe to make any progress with her, and is more than eager to [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech remind her of all her mistakes]].

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* RejectedApology: Delia makes clear that it will take far more than words for Chloe to make any progress with her, and is more than eager to [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech remind her of all her mistakes]]. That said, she'll be eating ''her'' apology now since what she did was even worse.



** Goh arrives in a Car where Chloe's victory over the Apex is being celebrated in various ways, including a statue being erected in her honor. He mentally notes how she's being built up here after all he did to try tearing her down during his descent into jerkassery.
** Goh's initial number is 813, Scorbunny's national dex number.

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** Goh arrives in a the Canals of Fondue Car where Chloe's victory over the Apex is being celebrated in various ways, including a statue being erected in her honor. He mentally notes how she's being built up here after all he did to try tearing her down during his descent into jerkassery.
** Goh's initial number is 813, Scorbunny's national dex number.number and reflecting on how he was initially insensitive to his starter Pokémon's desires.



** Delia notices Chloe having a MomentOfWeakness after recognizing the shiny Espurr as Mew and decides sniping at her is ''far'' more important than keeping an eye on Goh.

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** Delia notices Chloe having a MomentOfWeakness after recognizing the shiny Espurr as Mew and decides sniping at her is ''far'' more important than keeping an eye on Goh.Goh...and realizes how she messed up ''spectacularly''.

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* BookEnds: The story begins and ends over Goh and Chloe talking about their friendship involving curry before one of them ends up on the Train.
** Chloe's farewell message to Goh ended with "Goodbye". Goh's message before he goes on the Train also ends with "Goodbye".
* ExplainExplainOhCrap: When Delia asks if Goh's apologies meant nothing, Chloe realizes that, upon seeing the Shiny Espurr really being '''Mew''', notes that ''Goh'' would've made sure they weren't. Then things get worse when Delia means that ''she just left Goh alone to be taken on the Train''...

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* BookEnds: BookEnds:
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The story begins and ends over began with Goh and Chloe talking about discussing their friendship involving curry before one of them ends up over curry, followed by her leaving on the Train.
Train. It ends in much the same way, though their chat is much calmer.
** Chloe's farewell message to Goh ended with "Goodbye". Goh's Before boarding the Train, Goh jots down a quick message before he goes on the Train that also ends with "Goodbye".
* ExplainExplainOhCrap: When Delia sarcastically asks if Goh's apologies apologizes meant nothing, Chloe realizes that, upon seeing the Shiny Espurr really being '''Mew''', notes that ''Goh'' would've ''Goh himself'' may have made sure certain that they weren't. weren't. Then things get worse when they realize that Delia means that ''she just left Goh alone alone, trusting that Raboot and Sobble would be enough to be taken ensure he wouldn't get on the Train''...Train...



** Had Delia not left Goh alone to rub it into Chloe's face over how she still is struggling with her issues, then Goh wouldn't have been left alone for the Train to pick him up.
** If Goh mentioned that the Shiny Espurr was really Mew before Delia left him alone, things wouldn't have been dire that the Train came to pick him up.

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** Had If Delia not hadn't left Goh alone with Rabbot and Sobble in order to rub it into Chloe's face focus on taunting Chloe over how she still is struggling with her issues, then Goh inner conflicts, the three of them wouldn't have been left alone for ended up on the Train to pick him up.
Train.
** If Goh mentioned that the Shiny Espurr was really Mew before Delia left him alone, things wouldn't have been dire that the Train came to pick him up. up.
* HighOnCatnip: The cheapest florist in Vermillion City likes to use Pokénip as a filler grass, causing Pikachu and Yamper to trip balls.



** Goh's search for Mew is what got Chloe and Goh's friendship to fall apart and Chloe to get on Train. Mew's presence here is what got ''Goh'' on the Train.

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** Goh's search for Mew is what got caused Chloe and Goh's friendship to fall apart and Chloe led to get on her boarding the Train. Mew's presence here is what got leads to ''Goh'' on boarding the Train.Train.
* MoodWhiplash: Chloe's chuckling at Pikachu and Yamper's antics one moment, then doing a double-take at Mew the next, followed by Delia closing in to sneer at her weakness and the horror of realizing Goh's been left unsupervised.



* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Once it hits Delia that she screwed up, she frantically begs for Chloe's forgiveness.
* ObliviousGuiltSlinging: Chloe reassures Goh that they can search for Mew together, unaware that he's already found them. He doesn't correct her, leaving her to realize this was happening when she discovers the injured Mew sleeping.



** Goh arrives in a Car where Chloe's victory over the Apex is being celebrated in various ways, including a statue being erected in her honor. He mentally notes how she's being built up here after all he did to try tearing her down during his descent into jerkassery.




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* SmugSnake: Much like Mr. Bradbury, Delia's determination to ride her high horse leads to her taking things too far and suffering her own ego-bruising reality check.

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* {{Bookends}}: The story begins and ends over Goh and Chloe talking about their friendship involving curry before one of them ends up on the Train.

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* {{Bookends}}: BookEnds: The story begins and ends over Goh and Chloe talking about their friendship involving curry before one of them ends up on the Train.



* InternalReveal: Everyone learns that the Shiny Espurre is actually ''Mew''.
* {{Irony}}: The one woman who wouldn't accept Chloe's apologies for the mistakes she gave is apologizing to Chloe when ''her'' mistakes got Goh onto the Infinity Train.

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* InternalReveal: InternalReveal:
** Chloe informs Ash, Serena and Trip about Tuba's fate; Ash later passes on the sad news to Mallow.
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Everyone learns that the Shiny Espurre Espurr is actually ''Mew''.
* {{Irony}}: The one woman {{Irony}}:
** With her blue-dyed hair and newfound confidence and drive, Chloe hardly resembles the girl
who wouldn't accept ran away from Vermillion two months prior. She mentally notes that this is likely for the best, given how her reputation has been trashed.
** Delia warns Chloe that she'll be watching for any mistakes or backsliding she does. Her eagerness to rub that in her face the moment she thinks
Chloe's apologies for the mistakes she gave is apologizing to Chloe when misstepped leaves ''her'' mistakes got the one apologizing after she unintentionally leaves Goh onto the Infinity Train.unsupervised and vulnerable to pickup.



* MomentOfWeakness: Chloe has a ''very'' brief flash of anger upon recognizing Mew and realizing that Goh achieved his GoalInLife, which quickly fades to conflicted grief. Delia is quick to pounce upon that, leading to far worse consequences.
* OlderThanTheyLook: Chloe is struck by how youthful Delia looks, and silently acknowledges that asking how old she was when she had Ash would ''not'' go over well, even if Delia didn't already dislike her.
* RejectedApology: Delia makes clear that it will take far more than words for Chloe to make any progress with her, and is more than eager to [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech remind her of all her mistakes]].



* SayMyName: Mallow screams Tuba's name when she learns from Ash that the gorilla is dead.

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* SayMyName: Mallow screams Tuba's name when she learns from Ash that the gorilla is dead.dead.
* SkewedPriorities:
** {{Discussed}} when Talia finds her daughter, still recovering from her gunshot wound, busily packing up her horror paraphernalia.
** Delia notices Chloe having a MomentOfWeakness after recognizing the shiny Espurr as Mew and decides sniping at her is ''far'' more important than keeping an eye on Goh.

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** Chloe's farewell message to Goh ended with "Goodbye". Goh's message before he goes on the Train also ends with "Goodbye".
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** Goh's search for Mew is what got Chloe and Goh's friendship to fall apart and Chloe to get on Train. Mew's presence here is what got ''Goh'' on the Train.

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* ForWantOfANail: Had Delia not left Goh alone to rub it into Chloe's face over how she still is struggling with her issues, then Goh wouldn't have been left alone for the Train to pick him up.

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* ForWantOfANail: ForWantOfANail:
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Had Delia not left Goh alone to rub it into Chloe's face over how she still is struggling with her issues, then Goh wouldn't have been left alone for the Train to pick him up.up.
** If Goh mentioned that the Shiny Espurr was really Mew before Delia left him alone, things wouldn't have been dire that the Train came to pick him up.
* InternalReveal: Everyone learns that the Shiny Espurre is actually ''Mew''.
* {{Irony}}: The one woman who wouldn't accept Chloe's apologies for the mistakes she gave is apologizing to Chloe when ''her'' mistakes got Goh onto the Infinity Train.
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* RuleOfSymbolism:
** The Silent Hill song, "End of Small Sanctuary" was about the end of Heather's innocent teenage life before she got plunged into the horrors of Silent Hill. Likewise, the story is about the end of the reprieve of Chloe returning and she and Goh forgiving one another before Goh gets sucked onto the Train.
** Goh's initial number is 813, Scorbunny's national dex number.
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Before the move and Goh's inevitable journey on a Train, he and Chloe reconcile.
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* {{Bookends}}: The story begins and ends over Goh and Chloe talking about their friendship involving curry before one of them ends up on the Train.
* ExplainExplainOhCrap: When Delia asks if Goh's apologies meant nothing, Chloe realizes that, upon seeing the Shiny Espurr really being '''Mew''', notes that ''Goh'' would've made sure they weren't. Then things get worse when Delia means that ''she just left Goh alone to be taken on the Train''...
* ForWantOfANail: Had Delia not left Goh alone to rub it into Chloe's face over how she still is struggling with her issues, then Goh wouldn't have been left alone for the Train to pick him up.
* SayMyName: Mallow screams Tuba's name when she learns from Ash that the gorilla is dead.

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