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* PoliceBrutality: In the first plan to get Clayface's arm out, they try to sneak King Shark in. The plan falls apart as the cops immediately tranquilise King Shark, before excessively beating him, and then sending him to prison. All in a matter of seconds.
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* PoliceBrutality: In the first plan to get Clayface's arm out, they try to sneak King Shark in. The plan falls apart as the cops immediately tranquilise tranquilize King Shark, before excessively beating him, and then sending him to prison. All in a matter of seconds.
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'''Prisoner 1:''' (sheepishly) Oh, yeah. Sorry, King.\\
'''Prisoner 2:''' (likewise, simultaneously) Ooh. Sorry about that.\\
'''King Shark:''' (calmly and happily) Oh. They're learning. (as he walks up to Harley) Baby steps, right, Harley? (to the prisoners, as the vine Harley rides on drags him out the hole) I WILL KILL EACH AND EVERY ONE OF YOU WITH MY BARE HANDS IF I HAVE TO!!!!
'''Prisoner 2:''' (likewise, simultaneously) Ooh. Sorry about that.\\
'''King Shark:''' (calmly and happily) Oh. They're learning. (as he walks up to Harley) Baby steps, right, Harley? (to the prisoners, as the vine Harley rides on drags him out the hole) I WILL KILL EACH AND EVERY ONE OF YOU WITH MY BARE HANDS IF I HAVE TO!!!!
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'''Prisoner 1:''' (sheepishly) ''[sheepishly]'' Oh, yeah. Sorry, King.\\
'''Prisoner 2:'''(likewise, simultaneously) ''[likewise, simultaneously]'' Ooh. Sorry about that.\\
'''King Shark:'''(calmly ''[calmly and happily) happily]'' Oh. They're learning. (as ''[as he walks up to Harley) Harley]'' Baby steps, right, Harley? (to ''[to the prisoners, as the vine Harley rides on drags him out the hole) hole]'' I WILL KILL EACH AND EVERY ONE OF YOU WITH MY BARE HANDS IF I HAVE TO!!!!
'''Prisoner 2:'''
'''King Shark:'''
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* ThatCameOutWrong: Gordon proclaims of Batman "All I ask is that occasionally when my wife is emotionally distant during sex, he listens!" before immediately clarifying that he meant he wants Batman to listen to him talk about the sex, not listen in on the sex itself.
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* ThatCameOutWrong: Gordon proclaims of Batman Batman, "All I ask is that occasionally when my wife is emotionally distant during sex, he listens!" before immediately clarifying that he meant he wants Batman to listen to him talk about the sex, not listen in on the sex itself.
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'''King Shark:''' Now fellas, look, I know it's just in fun but WHAT THE FUCK DID I TELL YOU ABOUT THAT WORD?!
'''Prisoner 1:''' (sheepishly) Oh, yeah. Sorry, King.
'''Prisoner 2:''' (likewise, simultaneously) Ooh. Sorry about that.
'''Prisoner 1:''' (sheepishly) Oh, yeah. Sorry, King.
'''Prisoner 2:''' (likewise, simultaneously) Ooh. Sorry about that.
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'''King Shark:''' Now fellas, look, I know it's just in fun but WHAT THE FUCK DID I TELL YOU ABOUT THAT WORD?!
WORD?!\\
'''Prisoner 1:''' (sheepishly) Oh, yeah. Sorry,King.
King.\\
'''Prisoner 2:''' (likewise, simultaneously) Ooh. Sorry about that.\\
'''Prisoner 1:''' (sheepishly) Oh, yeah. Sorry,
'''Prisoner 2:''' (likewise, simultaneously) Ooh. Sorry about that.\\
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'''Prisoner 1:''' (sheepishly) Oh, yeah. Sorry, King.
'''Prisoner 2:''' (likewise, simultaneously) Ooh. Sorry about that.
'''King Shark:''' (calmly and happily) Oh. They're learning. (as he walks up to Harley) Baby steps, right, Harley? (to the prisoners, as the vine Harley rides on drags him out the hole) I WILL KILL EACH AND EVERY ONE OF YOU WITH MY BARE HANDS IF I HAVE TO!!!!
'''Prisoner 2:''' (likewise, simultaneously) Ooh. Sorry about that.
'''King Shark:''' (calmly and happily) Oh. They're learning. (as he walks up to Harley) Baby steps, right, Harley? (to the prisoners, as the vine Harley rides on drags him out the hole) I WILL KILL EACH AND EVERY ONE OF YOU WITH MY BARE HANDS IF I HAVE TO!!!!
