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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: The girls vs the unicorns.
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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: The girls vs the unicorns. It was a beating so fierce the girls are covered in "tears", got a clump of hair, and the unicorns paid them to leave.
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One night, Ford is visited in his dreams by none other than Bill Cipher. Bill welcomes his "Old buddy" back to Earth, explaining that he's been preparing for 'The Big Day'. According to him, Ford won't be able to protect the Rift forever. Upon waking up, Ford realizes, "he's coming. I have to warn them!"
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One night, Ford is visited in his dreams by none other than Bill Cipher. Bill welcomes his "Old buddy" back to Earth, explaining that he's been preparing for 'The Big Day'. According to him, Ford won't be able to protect the Rift forever. Upon waking up, Ford realizes, "he's "He's coming. I have to warn them!"
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At the lab, Dipper decides to see into the napping Ford's mind with the mind-reader. The computer shows Ford and Bill making a deal, and upon further inspection, sees that the study is a tiny shrine to Cipher! Ford wakes up, and a terrified Dipper, thinking Ford is possessed, shoots him with the memory ray. The beam bounces off Ford's head, breaking the mind-encrypter. Ford calms Dipper down, showing his eyes are normal, thus, unpossessed. He's unhurt by the ray, his mind protected by his metal plate, and decides come clean about Bill.
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At the lab, Dipper decides to see into the napping Ford's mind with the mind-reader. The computer shows Ford and Bill making a deal, and upon further inspection, sees that the study is a tiny shrine to Cipher! Ford wakes up, and a terrified Dipper, thinking Ford is possessed, shoots him with the memory ray. The beam bounces off Ford's head, breaking the mind-encrypter. Ford calms Dipper down, showing his eyes are normal, thus, unpossessed. He's unhurt by the ray, his mind protected by his metal plate, and decides to come clean about Bill.
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Mabel and friends go on a binge of do-goodering, and when they get back to Celestabellebethabelle, she tells them…that doing good deeds to make yourself look good doesn't mean anything. Mabel is crushed, whereupon Wendy decides that it's time for the 'Wendy way'; take the hair by force. After getting some pixie dust from a gnome, the other girls knock out Celestabellebethabelle, but are stopped by Mabel, who doesn't like their methods. Celestabellebethabelle wakes up, denounces the girls…and two more unicorns show up, annoyed that C-beth is pulling the 'pure of heart scam'. "Kid, unicorns can't tell if your pure of heart. All our dumbs horns can do is glow, point the way towards the nearest rainbow, and pull rave music." Outraged at being jerked around, Mabel instigates a brawl between unicorns and humans.
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Mabel and friends go on a binge of do-goodering, and when they get back to Celestabellebethabelle, she tells them…that doing good deeds to make yourself look good doesn't mean anything. Mabel is crushed, whereupon Wendy decides that it's time for the 'Wendy way'; take the hair by force. After getting some pixie dust from a gnome, the other girls knock out Celestabellebethabelle, but are stopped by Mabel, who doesn't like their methods. Celestabellebethabelle wakes up, denounces the girls…and two more unicorns show up, annoyed that C-beth is pulling the 'pure of heart scam'. "Kid, unicorns can't tell if your pure of heart. All our dumbs horns can do is glow, point the way towards the nearest rainbow, and pull play rave music." Outraged at being jerked around, Mabel instigates a brawl between unicorns and humans.
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Meanwhile, Mabel, along with Wendy, Candy, and Grenda, find the sacred meadow where the Unicorn Celestabellebethabelle lives. Celestabellebethabelle refuses to give any hair, claiming that Mabel is pure of heart and unworthy. Recalling how she commonly makes fun of Dipper, Mabel takes this to heart, and decides that she needs to up her game in the good department.
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Meanwhile, Mabel, along with Wendy, Candy, and Grenda, find the sacred meadow where the Unicorn Celestabellebethabelle lives. Celestabellebethabelle refuses to give any hair, claiming that Mabel is pure impure of heart and unworthy. Recalling how she commonly makes fun of Dipper, Mabel takes this to heart, and decides that she needs to up her game in the good department.
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* StealthHiBye: Just as Mabel and crew and the unicorns are charging at each other, the scene changes to Dipper right before impact.
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''more to come''.
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Up in the main Shack, Dipper and Ford ponder how to defend themselves from Bill with the mind-scanner broken. At this point the girls return triumphant, having obtained more than enough unicorn hair. Ford congratulates Mabel, and he and Dipper complete the ritual. But Bill Cipher is not stymied so easily…
->'''Bill Cipher''': I guess I can't possess anyone ''inside'' the Shack, so I'll just have to find my next pawn on the '''[[VoiceOfTheLegion o u t s i d e]]'''.
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Realizing Bill Cipher is becoming more powerful, Stanford decides to shield the shack from his tricks, while Mabel goes on a quest to find a unicorn.
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The next day, Ford calls for a family meeting and shows the Twins a picture of Bill. To his surprise, the kids are more
Meanwhile, Mabel, along with Wendy, Candy, and Grenda, find the sacred meadow where the Unicorn Celestabellebethabelle lives. Celestabellebethabelle refuses to give any hair, claiming that Mabel is pure of heart and unworthy. Recalling how she commonly makes fun of Dipper, Mabel takes this to heart, and decides that she needs to up her game in the good department.
Back at the Shack, Ford explains more about what Bill is. He comes from another dimension, and can only access Earth through the mindscape. Through that pathway, he can possess a body like he did Dipper's. There are two ways to protect their minds from Bill's control; either get a metal plate installed (Like Ford did. *Clang*) or use a machine he built, that can scan and encrypt anyone wearing the helmet. Dipper asks again about Ford's encounter with Bill, but the Author ducks the question again, and hooks Dipper up.
Mabel and friends go on a binge of do-goodering, and when they get back to Celestabellebethabelle, she tells them…that doing good deeds to make yourself look good doesn't mean anything. Mabel is crushed, whereupon Wendy decides that it's time for the 'Wendy way'; take the hair by force. After getting some pixie dust from a gnome, the other girls knock out Celestabellebethabelle, but are stopped by Mabel, who doesn't like their methods. Celestabellebethabelle wakes up, denounces the girls…and two more unicorns show up, annoyed that C-beth is pulling the 'pure of heart scam'. "Kid, unicorns can't tell if your pure of heart. All our dumbs horns can do is glow, point the way towards the nearest rainbow, and pull rave music." Outraged at being jerked around, Mabel instigates a brawl between unicorns and humans.
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"Bill wasn't always my enemy, Dipper. In fact, I used to
''more to come''.
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* DemotedToExtra: Grunkle Stan only appears for a few seconds near the beginning and at the end.
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** Fords plan in keeping Bill out is creating a magical barrier around the Mystery Shack. Much like the protective barrier from ''Film/TheSpiderwickChronicles''.
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** Fords Ford's plan in keeping Bill out is creating a magical barrier around the Mystery Shack. Much like the protective barrier from ''Film/TheSpiderwickChronicles''.
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** Celestabellebethabelle appears to have Rarity's triple diamond [[Franchise/MyLittlePony cutie mark]]. She also says "What the hay?".
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** Celestabellebethabelle appears to have Rarity's triple diamond [[Franchise/MyLittlePony cutie mark]]. She also says "What the hay?".hay?", has Rainbow Dash's color scheme, and her name begins with "Celest" as in "Celest'''ia'''".
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* DemotedToExtra: Grunkle Stan only appears for a few seconds near the beginning and at the end.
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* UnicornsAreSacred: Played with; while the unicorn hair is a key ingredient to help protect the Shack from Bill, the unicorns themselves are actually jerks who only pretend to be pure and noble.
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* DebateAndSwitch: Rather than addressing the legitimate parts of Celestabellebethebelle's criticisms or showing why Mabel is a good person despite her flaws, the episode concludes with Celestabellebethebelle being revealed as a fraud with no ability to rightfully judge Mabel at all, thus dodging the issue entirely.
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* OnceMoreWithClarity: In "A Tale of Two Stans", Ford made it seem like he had thought up the idea for the portal himself and refused to relent his studies on it until mysterious voices from beyond the portal spooked him into stopping the project. Here, it's revealed Bill gave him idea, and after Fiddleford's brief glimpse into the portal, Ford realized he had been tricked with Bill confirming it when they meet up again in the dream realm.
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* OnceMoreWithClarity: In "A Tale of Two Stans", Ford made it seem like he had thought up the idea for the portal himself and refused to relent his studies on it until mysterious voices from beyond the portal spooked him into stopping the project. Here, it's revealed Bill gave him the idea, and after Fiddleford's brief glimpse into the portal, Ford realized he had been tricked with Bill confirming it when they meet up again in the dream realm.
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* TheMuse: Bill told Ford he was this to get Ford to build the portal.
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* TheReveal: Ford tells Dipper Bill's ultimate plan; it's to create a portal that will let him and his kind access Earth.
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* RealityEnsues: For Grunkle Ford and Dipper, when the latter freaks out in the secret room. Ford has been half-confiding in Dipper, who has been dying to know the answers, treating him like a ReplacementGoldfish for Fiddleford [=McGucket=], who was an educated grown man. Dipper is still a kid, however, and one traumatized by the time Bill possessed him; Ford seems to realize this by the end and comforts him with sodas as well as the whole truth of the portal.
* TheReveal: Ford tells Dipper Bill's ultimateplan; plan: it's to create a portal that will let him and his kind access Earth.
* TheReveal: Ford tells Dipper Bill's ultimate
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** Ford mentioned to Dipper that unicorns are difficult to work with, he doesn't said that they are lying jerks.
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** The mind-eraser gun makes [[ChekhovsBoomerang another appearance]] here. Dipper fires it by the episode's end. From what Ford says that it would've been a good maneuver if he had been possessed by Bill, it can provide a defense against him.
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** The mind-eraser gun makes [[ChekhovsBoomerang another appearance]] here. Dipper fires it by the episode's end. From what Ford says that it would've been a good maneuver if he had been possessed by Bill, as it can provide a defense against him.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Mabel rarely gets angry with anyone, but she she finds out the unicorns tricked her, she is ''furious.'' It's clearly a little terrifying to Wendy, Candy, and Grenda. Then she punches Celestabellebethabelle in the nose for mocking her, tears the unicorn off her sweater while ''seething'', and proceeds to go after the unicorns with her bare hands.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Mabel rarely gets angry with anyone, but she when she finds out the unicorns tricked her, she is ''furious.'' It's clearly a little terrifying to Wendy, Candy, and Grenda. Then she punches Celestabellebethabelle in the nose for mocking her, tears the unicorn off her sweater while ''seething'', and proceeds to go after the unicorns with her bare hands.
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** Mabel loses her love of unicorns when she realizes that they're jerks.
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** Mabel loses her love of unicorns when she realizes that they're jerks. It's not like Ford didn't warn Mabel to ready herself for disappointment.
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* FiveFingerFillet: The gnome dealer does this with a acorn.
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** After Mabel punches Celestebellebethabelle, Grenda shouts [[Franchise/StarWars "Join the Dark Side!"]]
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* TroubledFetalPosition: Mabel does this after Celestabellebethabelle tells her she's a bad person.
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* GeniusBonus: When Candy, Grenda, and Wendy drug Celestabellebethabelle, the satyr tries to sound the alarm by panpiping Morse Code for "S-O-S" (three short, three long, three short).
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** Ford mentioned to Dipper that unicorns are difficult to work with, he doesn't said that they are lying jerks.
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* ExactEavesdropping: It turns out Ford heard Stan call him "a dangerous know-it-all" and it was on his mind when Dipper read Ford's thoughts. While Ford and Stan aren't on speaking terms, it shows that Ford did care what his brother said.
* ExactWords: Ford's magical protections prevent Bill from entering the mind of anyone inside the Mystery Shack. As Bill himself notes in TheStinger, the key word here is ''inside.''
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* ExactWords: Ford's magical protections prevent Bill from entering the mind of anyone inside the Mystery Shack. As Bill himself notes in TheStinger, the key word here is ''inside.''
* ExactWords: Ford's magical protections prevent Bill from entering the mind of anyone inside the Mystery Shack. As Bill himself notes in TheStinger, the key word here is ''inside.''
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* KickTheDog: Celesabellebethabelle does this to Mabel so regularly that Wendy, Grenda and Candy cheer when Mabel beats up the unicorn.
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* NonSequiturThud: Celestabethabelle says "What the hay?!" when the fairy dust hits her.
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* TimeForPlanB: This is Ford's current plan: to keep the rift from Bill. His initial plan was to make sure the portal was never turned on, though Stan interfered.
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** Ford doesn't believe that Mabel can get unicorn hair. As a backup, he starts to shield his and Dipper's minds.
** This is Ford's current plan: to keep the rift from Bill. His initial plan was to make sure the portal was never turned on, though Stan interfered.
** Ford doesn't believe that Mabel can get unicorn hair. As a backup, he starts to shield his and Dipper's minds.
** This is Ford's current plan: to keep the rift from Bill. His initial plan was to make sure the portal was never turned on, though Stan interfered.
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* GeniusBonus: When Candy, Grenda, and Wendy drug Celestabellebethabelle, the satyr tries to sound the alarm by panpiping Morse Code for "S-O-S" (three short, three long, three short).
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** It nearly happens to Dipper when he finds out Ford was involved with Bill. [[RebuiltPetestal Things get better]] after Ford finally discloses the whole story.
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