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'''Theo Nelson:''' Fog, it's real bad. About a year ago, some of our suppliers stopped taking our orders. Just stopped. No reason I could understand. We couldn't change their minds for the love of money. After a few months, the shop was in a tight spot financially, right? And we didn't have the collateral to get a loan...\\
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'''Theo Nelson:''' Fog, it's real bad. About a year ago, some of our suppliers stopped taking our orders. Just stopped. No reason I could understand. We couldn't change their minds for the love of money. money! After a few months, the shop was in a tight spot financially, right? And we didn't have the collateral to get a loan...\\
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--->'''Ray Nadeem:''' I don't believe it. Fisk got something on all of you? ''[sits down next to Arinori]'' Arinori?!\\
'''Pryor Arinori:''' Better we don't talk about it. And in here, we don't even say his name.\\
'''Benjamin "Dex" Poindexter:''' That's one of the rules, Ray. We only refer to him by his codename.\\
'''Pryor Arinori:''' Better we don't talk about it. And in here, we don't even say his name.\\
'''Benjamin "Dex" Poindexter:''' That's one of the rules, Ray. We only refer to him by his codename.\\
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--->'''Ray Nadeem:''' [[YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe I don't believe it. it.]] Fisk got something on all of you? ''[sits down next to Arinori]'' Arinori?!\\
'''Pryor Arinori:''' [[NoodleIncident Better we don't talk aboutit. it.]] [[TheScottishTrope And in here, we don't even say his name.\\
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'''Benjamin "Dex" Poindexter:''' That's one of the rules, Ray. [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall We only refer to him by his codename.\\]]\\
'''Pryor Arinori:''' [[NoodleIncident Better we don't talk about
'''Benjamin "Dex" Poindexter:''' That's one of the rules, Ray. [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall We only refer to him by his codename.
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'''Benjamin "Dex" Poindexter:''' Kingpin.
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'''Benjamin "Dex" Poindexter:''' [[MythologyGag Kingpin.]]
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--->Ray Nadeem: I can't believe you want this. We made this happen. We can find a way to end it.\\
'''Tammy Hattley:''' There's no way out, Ray. Fisk's had you marked for more than a year.\\
'''Tammy Hattley:''' There's no way out, Ray. Fisk's had you marked for more than a year.\\
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'''Tammy Hattley:''' [[TrappedInVillainy There's no way out,
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* FiveSecondForeshadowing: There are several red flags about the trap being set for Nadeem before Hattley and Felix spring it on him, such as all the surfaces being covered in plastic (like the room where Julie was killed in the last episode) and Hattley sending her daughter out of the house (which in hindsight is so that she won't have to witness the murder).
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* FiveSecondForeshadowing: There are several red flags about the trap being set for Nadeem before Hattley and Felix spring it on him, such as all the surfaces being covered in plastic (like the room where Julie was killed in the last episode) and Hattley sending sends her daughter out of the house (which in hindsight is so (so that she won't have to witness the murder).
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Dex complains about how 'cold' it was for Nadeem to hire the lawyer for him, while secretly plotting his downfall. This is from someone who has presented an amiable façade to cover his own psychopathic acts all his life.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Dex complains about how 'cold' it was for Nadeem to hire the lawyer for him, while secretly plotting collaborating with Matt to plot his downfall. This is from someone who has presented an amiable façade to cover his own psychopathic acts all his life.
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** Nadeem's reaction to learning Hatley is in league with Fisk and has been all along, and he's been an UnwittingPawn to Fisk.
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** Nadeem's reaction to learning Hatley Hattley is in league with Fisk and has been all along, and he's been an UnwittingPawn to Fisk.
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** When Lantom tells her "Matthew knows.", she ''runs'' out of the room, down to where Matt has been sleeping, and breaks down sobbing on finding he's left and taken his things with him.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: As the crimelords are waiting at the roundtable, they wonder what they're doing here. Rosalie Carbone is savvy enough to point out to the others what exactly is off about the situation before Fisk even shows himself:
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: As the crimelords are waiting at the roundtable, they wonder what they're doing here. Rosalie Carbone is savvy enough to point out to the others what exactly is off about the situation before Fisk even shows himself:
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** When Father Lantom tells her "Matthew knows.", she ''runs'' out of the room, down to where Matt has been sleeping, and breaks down sobbing on finding he's left and taken his things with him.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: As the crimelords are waiting at theroundtable, round table, they wonder what they're doing here. Rosalie Carbone is savvy enough to point out to the others what exactly is off about the situation before Fisk even shows himself:
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: As the crimelords are waiting at the
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'''Rosalie Carbone:''' Well, they pick us up all quiet-like - no press, no perp walk - they take us here instead of downtown. The feds want something.
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'''Rosalie Carbone:''' Well, they pick us up all quiet-like - quiet. Like...no press, no perp walk - they walk. They take us here instead of downtown. The feds want something.
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-->'''Hattley:''' I used to have two children, Ray.
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** Fisk manipulated Foggy's family into committing fraud to secure a bank loan, and is now using the threat of sending them to prison to try and get Foggy to recant the things he's been saying about Fisk in public.
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* ThrownFromTheZeppelin: In season 3, Kingpin summons five other mob bosses and offers to use his newfound connections to protect them from the authorities in exchange for 20% of their profits. Three of the bosses mock Kingpin's offer and accuse him of being an FBI informant. When one man tries to leave, Kingpin immediately kills him and informs the others that now he wants 25% of their profits. They nervously comply.
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* ThrownFromTheZeppelin: In season 3, Kingpin Fisk summons five other mob bosses and offers to use his newfound connections to protect them from the authorities in exchange for 20% of their profits. Three of the bosses mock Kingpin's Fisk's offer and accuse him of being an FBI informant. When one man of them tries to leave, Kingpin back out, Dex immediately kills him with one of his batons, and informs Fisk immediately raises the others that now he wants 25% of their profits.tax on the remaining bosses to 25%. They nervously comply.
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* TurnInYourBadge: Subverted when, after Nadeem turns in his badge and gun, the latter is used by Hattley to murder the OPR agent he's just confessed to. Then she gives him back his badge and tells him he works for Fisk now.
* WhamEpisode: Hattley is revealed as Fisk's MoleInCharge, albeit one of the many FBI agents that have been coerced into serving Fisk, with Nadeem becoming the latest one. Foggy learns that Manning is blackmailing his brother with Nelson's Meats financials. Matt severs ties with Maggie and Lantom after getting confirmation that she is his mother and comes to the conclusion that he must kill Fisk.
* WhamLine: Besides the Hattley line, Foggy learning from Theo that Fisk manipulated the butcher shop's finances.
-->'''Hattley:''' I'm not your boss any more. Wilson Fisk is.
* WhamEpisode: Hattley is revealed as Fisk's MoleInCharge, albeit one of the many FBI agents that have been coerced into serving Fisk, with Nadeem becoming the latest one. Foggy learns that Manning is blackmailing his brother with Nelson's Meats financials. Matt severs ties with Maggie and Lantom after getting confirmation that she is his mother and comes to the conclusion that he must kill Fisk.
* WhamLine: Besides the Hattley line, Foggy learning from Theo that Fisk manipulated the butcher shop's finances.
-->'''Hattley:''' I'm not your boss any more. Wilson Fisk is.
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* TurnInYourBadge: Subverted when, after Nadeem turns in his badge and gun, the latter is used by Hattley immediately uses it to murder shoot the OPR agent he's just confessed to. Then she gives him back his Felix Manning comes in and collects the gun as blackmail, while Hattley returns Ray's badge to him and tells him he works for Fisk now.
*WhamEpisode: WhamEpisode:
** Hattley is revealed as Fisk's MoleInCharge, albeit one of the many FBI agents that have been coerced into serving Fisk, with Nadeem becoming the latestone. one.
** Foggy learns that Felix Manning is blackmailing his brother with Nelson's Meatsfinancials. financials.
** Matt severs ties with Maggie and Father Lantom after getting confirmation that she is his mother and comes to the conclusion that he must kill Fisk.
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** As Hattleyline, Foggy learning from Theo that Fisk manipulated the butcher shop's finances.
-->'''Hattley:''' I'mreturns Ray's badge to him after using his gun to kill Agent Winn, she says, "I'm not your boss any more. Wilson Fisk is."
** Ray is on the receiving end of another bombshell as he calls out Hattley for deciding to do Fisk's dirty work.
--->Ray Nadeem: I can't believe you want this. We made this happen. We can find a way to end it.\\
'''Tammy Hattley:''' There's no way out, Ray. Fisk's had you marked for more than a year.\\
'''Ray Nadeem:''' [[OhCrap What do you mean, "had me marked"?]]\\
'''Tammy Hattley:''' Why do you think your sister-in-law lost health coverage? He made you desperate for this job, you did everything you could to get him this penthouse, get him everything he asked for. Like I said, there's no way out. We're out of our league here.\\
'''Ray Nadeem:''' You could've gone to Homeland Security or the NYPD. Not take me down with you. Not murder an agent. You make a report. You get your family somewhere safe.\\
'''Tammy Hattley:''' That's not an option with Fisk. I used to have two children, Ray. They made it look like a hit-and-run. I got a divorce. Maybe that keeps him a little safer. But there's still Allie, so think about Seema and Sami. And do what Fisk tells you.
** As Foggy is basking in publicly calling out Tower's inaction against Fisk, Theo takes him aside and tells him he needs to recant everything he said.
--->'''Theo Nelson:''' All that stuff you said about Fisk on the video, you gotta take it back.\\
'''Foggy Nelson:''' What are you talking about?\\
'''Theo Nelson:''' You have to make a different video, man. Issue a statement or whatever. Say you were drunk.\\
'''Foggy Nelson:''' [[GratuitousFrench Au contraire, mon frère.]] That's the last thing I gotta do. I gotta exploit this opportunity to expose everything Fisk is doing!\\
'''Theo Nelson:''' No, no, no. Foggy, listen to me. ''You need to apologize.''\\
'''Foggy Nelson:''' ''[quietly]'' [[OhCrap What happened? Did someone come after you, Theo?]]\\
'''Theo Nelson:''' Fog, it's real bad. About a year ago, some of our suppliers stopped taking our orders. Just stopped. No reason I could understand. We couldn't change their minds for the love of money. After a few months, the shop was in a tight spot financially, right? And we didn't have the collateral to get a loan...\\
'''Foggy Nelson:''' Why didn't you come to me? I could have helped.\\
'''Theo Nelson:''' I didn't have to, because of what happened next. Out of the blue, I get this call from a bank I never heard of offering to help us out. [[LoanShark Red Lion Bank]].\\
'''Foggy Nelson:''' Shit...\\
'''Theo Nelson:''' You know these guys?\\
'''Foggy Nelson:''' Just keep going.\\
'''Theo Nelson:''' So, the loan officer there, he coaches me on how to move the numbers around. Make our assets look healthier, y'know? And bam! The loan comes through without a hitch. I don't give it another thought. Life goes on. I mean, we've been through a lot around here.\\
'''Foggy Nelson:''' [[SpottingTheThread And the old suppliers came back.]]\\
'''Theo Nelson:''' Yeah. Yeah, they did, now you mention it.\\
'''Foggy Nelson:''' And then someone came to talk to you?\\
'''Theo Nelson:''' This afternoon, yeah. This old English dude comes to see me. He knew all about the creative accounting on the loan app. He said unless I could convince you to walk back everything you said about Fisk, he'd have Red Lion call the loan.\\
'''Foggy Nelson:''' Of course.\\
'''Theo Nelson:''' Foggy, that application... if anyone looks too carefully at it...\\
'''Foggy Nelson:''' You're going to jail.\\
'''Theo Nelson:''' Not just me. Mom and Dad signed it, too.
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** Hattley is revealed as Fisk's MoleInCharge, albeit one of the many FBI agents that have been coerced into serving Fisk, with Nadeem becoming the latest
** Foggy learns that Felix Manning is blackmailing his brother with Nelson's Meats
** Matt severs ties with Maggie and Father Lantom after getting confirmation that she is his mother and comes to the conclusion that he must kill Fisk.
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** As Hattley
-->'''Hattley:''' I'm
** Ray is on the receiving end of another bombshell as he calls out Hattley for deciding to do Fisk's dirty work.
--->Ray Nadeem: I can't believe you want this. We made this happen. We can find a way to end it.\\
'''Tammy Hattley:''' There's no way out, Ray. Fisk's had you marked for more than a year.\\
'''Ray Nadeem:''' [[OhCrap What do you mean, "had me marked"?]]\\
'''Tammy Hattley:''' Why do you think your sister-in-law lost health coverage? He made you desperate for this job, you did everything you could to get him this penthouse, get him everything he asked for. Like I said, there's no way out. We're out of our league here.\\
'''Ray Nadeem:''' You could've gone to Homeland Security or the NYPD. Not take me down with you. Not murder an agent. You make a report. You get your family somewhere safe.\\
'''Tammy Hattley:''' That's not an option with Fisk. I used to have two children, Ray. They made it look like a hit-and-run. I got a divorce. Maybe that keeps him a little safer. But there's still Allie, so think about Seema and Sami. And do what Fisk tells you.
** As Foggy is basking in publicly calling out Tower's inaction against Fisk, Theo takes him aside and tells him he needs to recant everything he said.
--->'''Theo Nelson:''' All that stuff you said about Fisk on the video, you gotta take it back.\\
'''Foggy Nelson:''' What are you talking about?\\
'''Theo Nelson:''' You have to make a different video, man. Issue a statement or whatever. Say you were drunk.\\
'''Foggy Nelson:''' [[GratuitousFrench Au contraire, mon frère.]] That's the last thing I gotta do. I gotta exploit this opportunity to expose everything Fisk is doing!\\
'''Theo Nelson:''' No, no, no. Foggy, listen to me. ''You need to apologize.''\\
'''Foggy Nelson:''' ''[quietly]'' [[OhCrap What happened? Did someone come after you, Theo?]]\\
'''Theo Nelson:''' Fog, it's real bad. About a year ago, some of our suppliers stopped taking our orders. Just stopped. No reason I could understand. We couldn't change their minds for the love of money. After a few months, the shop was in a tight spot financially, right? And we didn't have the collateral to get a loan...\\
'''Foggy Nelson:''' Why didn't you come to me? I could have helped.\\
'''Theo Nelson:''' I didn't have to, because of what happened next. Out of the blue, I get this call from a bank I never heard of offering to help us out. [[LoanShark Red Lion Bank]].\\
'''Foggy Nelson:''' Shit...\\
'''Theo Nelson:''' You know these guys?\\
'''Foggy Nelson:''' Just keep going.\\
'''Theo Nelson:''' So, the loan officer there, he coaches me on how to move the numbers around. Make our assets look healthier, y'know? And bam! The loan comes through without a hitch. I don't give it another thought. Life goes on. I mean, we've been through a lot around here.\\
'''Foggy Nelson:''' [[SpottingTheThread And the old suppliers came back.]]\\
'''Theo Nelson:''' Yeah. Yeah, they did, now you mention it.\\
'''Foggy Nelson:''' And then someone came to talk to you?\\
'''Theo Nelson:''' This afternoon, yeah. This old English dude comes to see me. He knew all about the creative accounting on the loan app. He said unless I could convince you to walk back everything you said about Fisk, he'd have Red Lion call the loan.\\
'''Foggy Nelson:''' Of course.\\
'''Theo Nelson:''' Foggy, that application... if anyone looks too carefully at it...\\
'''Foggy Nelson:''' You're going to jail.\\
'''Theo Nelson:''' Not just me. Mom and Dad signed it, too.
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--->'''Ray Nadeem:''' I don't believe it. Fisk got something on all of you? ''[sits down next to Arinori]'' Arinori?!\\
'''Pryor Arinori:''' Better we don't talk about it. And in here, we don't even say his name.\\
'''Benjamin "Dex" Poindexter:''' That's one of the rules, Ray. We only refer to him by his codename.\\
'''Ray Nadeem:''' What codename?\\
'''Benjamin "Dex" Poindexter:''' Kingpin.
'''Pryor Arinori:''' Better we don't talk about it. And in here, we don't even say his name.\\
'''Benjamin "Dex" Poindexter:''' That's one of the rules, Ray. We only refer to him by his codename.\\
'''Ray Nadeem:''' What codename?\\
'''Benjamin "Dex" Poindexter:''' Kingpin.
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* WhamEpisode: Hattley is revealed as Fisk's MoleInCharge, albeit one of the many FBI agents that have been coerced into serving Fisk, with Nadeem becoming the latest one. Foggy learns that Manning is blackmailing his brother with Nelson's Meats financials. Matt severs ties with Maggie and Lantom after getting confirmation that she is his mother and comes to the conclussion that he must kill Fisk.
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* WhamEpisode: Hattley is revealed as Fisk's MoleInCharge, albeit one of the many FBI agents that have been coerced into serving Fisk, with Nadeem becoming the latest one. Foggy learns that Manning is blackmailing his brother with Nelson's Meats financials. Matt severs ties with Maggie and Lantom after getting confirmation that she is his mother and comes to the conclussion conclusion that he must kill Fisk.
