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** Optimus is positively ''livid'' at Marianne for how she treated "his" children, but he at least gives her a chance to explain herself, and offers her a chance for redemption.
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** Optimus is positively ''livid'' at Marianne for how she treated "his" her children, but he at least gives her a chance to explain herself, and offers her a chance for redemption.
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* AwfulTruth: Marianne’s involvement in the Ragnarök Connection is revealed here, by Megatron to Nunnally, and Marianne herself to the Autobots and the Black Knights.
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* AwfulTruth: Marianne’s involvement in the Ragnarök Connection is revealed here, by Megatron to Nunnally, and Marianne herself to the Autobots and the Black Knights.heroes.
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** Optimus is positively ''livid'' at Marianne for how she treated her children, but he at least gives her a chance to explain herself, and offers her a chance for redemption.
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** Optimus is positively ''livid'' at Marianne for how she treated her "his" children, but he at least gives her a chance to explain herself, and offers her a chance for redemption.
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* OhCrap: When Megatron, Soundwave, and Shockwave realize that the fusion cannons were sabotaged to overload rather than it being an accident, and that it couldn't have been an Autobot so it had to be one of their own, Thundercracker, Slipstream, and Sky-Byte all exchange silent nervous glances with each other. Though luckily for them Megatron turns his attention back to Nunnally and Cera, realizing that Steeljaw is still alive and busted them out while they were distracted.
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* WeNeedADistraction: Sky-Byte and Slipstream overload the fusion cannons to distract Megatron, Soundwave, and Shockwave, while Steeljaw busts Nunally and Cera out of their cell.
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* WeNeedADistraction: Sky-Byte and Slipstream overload the fusion cannons to distract Megatron, Soundwave, and Shockwave, while Steeljaw busts Nunally Nunnally and Cera out of their cell.
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As Megatron's Neo-Ragnarök plan moves closer with Nunnally and Cera in his clutches, Marianne reveals to the Autobot-Black Knight Alliance the horrific truth about her role in the original Ragnarök Connection.
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As Megatron's Neo-Ragnarök plan moves closer to completion with Nunnally and Cera in his clutches, Marianne reveals to the Autobot-Black Knight Alliance the horrific truth about her role in the original Ragnarök Connection.
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* ShoutOut: The chapter's ending, depicting all of the Alliance's forces emerging from portals to confront Megatron, who summons his own soldiers with a wave of his weapon, calls to mind the kickoff to the climatic FinalBattle of ''Film/AvengersEndgame''.
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* WouldNotHurtAChild: The only thing that was stopping Tohdoh and Sayako from cutting down and throwing a kunai in between her eyes respectfully, was because Marianne is still in Anya’s body.
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* WouldNotHurtAChild: WouldntHurtAChild: The only thing that was stopping Tohdoh and Sayako from cutting down and throwing a kunai in between her eyes respectfully, was because Marianne is still in Anya’s body.
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* WeNeedADistraction: Sky Byte and Slipstream overload the fusion cannons to distract Megatron, Soundwave, and Shockwave, while Steeljaw busts Nunally and Cera out of their cell.
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* WeNeedADistraction: Sky Byte Sky-Byte and Slipstream overload the fusion cannons to distract Megatron, Soundwave, and Shockwave, while Steeljaw busts Nunally and Cera out of their cell.
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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: When Megatron finds out that the overloading fusion cannons were the result of sabotage, he immediately orders Soundwave to show him if Nunnally and Cera are still in their cell, and Soundwave shows him a video of Steeljaw busting them
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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: When Megatron finds out that the overloading fusion cannons were the result of sabotage, he immediately orders Soundwave to show him if Nunnally and Cera are still in their cell, and Soundwave shows him a video of Steeljaw busting them
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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: When Megatron finds out that the overloading fusion cannons were the result of sabotage, he immediately orders Soundwave to show him if Nunnally and Cera are still in their cell, and Soundwave shows him a video of Steeljaw busting them
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* NightOfTheLivingMooks: In order to replace the army that they’ve lost over the story, Megatron has a large deposit of Dark Energon hidden underneath Darkmount, and a large field of dead Cybertronians around the area to turn into an army of Terrorcons.
* WeNeedADistraction: Sky Byte and Slipstream overload the fusion cannons to distract Megatron, Soundwave, and Shockwave, while Steeljaw busts Nunally and Cera out of their cell.
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* WouldNotHurtAChild: The only thing that was stopping Tohdoh from cutting down Marianne was the fact that she was still in Anya’s body.
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* WouldNotHurtAChild: The only thing that was stopping Tohdoh and Sayako from cutting down and throwing a kunai in between her eyes respectfully, was because Marianne was the fact that she was is still in Anya’s body.
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** Jeremiah tells Marianne that he always saw his failure to protect her as his [[MyGreatestFailure greatest]], and how he had at one point fallen in love with her. But after she reveals her involvement in the Ragnarök Connect, he realizes that his real failure was serving the wrong lord.
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** Jeremiah tells Marianne that he always saw his failure to protect her as his [[MyGreatestFailure greatest]], and how he had at one point fallen in love with her. But after she reveals her involvement in the Ragnarök Connect, Connection, he realizes that his real failure was serving the wrong lord.
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* TranquilFury: Of all of the people who were furious at Marianne, Optimus and Jeremiah were the most calm of them all:
** Jeremiah tells Marianne that he always saw his failure to protect her as his [[MyGreatestFailure greatest]], and how he had at one point fallen in love with her. But after she reveals her involvement in the Ragnarök Connect, he realizes that his real failure was serving the wrong lord.
** Optimus is positively ''livid'' at Marianne for how she treated her children, but he at least gives her a chance to explain herself, and offers her a chance for redemption.
** Jeremiah tells Marianne that he always saw his failure to protect her as his [[MyGreatestFailure greatest]], and how he had at one point fallen in love with her. But after she reveals her involvement in the Ragnarök Connect, he realizes that his real failure was serving the wrong lord.
** Optimus is positively ''livid'' at Marianne for how she treated her children, but he at least gives her a chance to explain herself, and offers her a chance for redemption.
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* AwfulTruth: The reveal of Marianne’s involvement in the Ragnarök Connection are revealed here, by Megatron to Nunnally, and Marianne herself to the Autobots and the Black Knights.
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* AwfulTruth: The reveal of Marianne’s involvement in the Ragnarök Connection are is revealed here, by Megatron to Nunnally, and Marianne herself to the Autobots and the Black Knights.
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* WouldNotHurtAChild: The only thing that was stopping Todhoh from cutting down Marianne was the fact that she was still in Anya’s body.
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* WouldNotHurtAChild: The only thing that was stopping Todhoh Tohdoh from cutting down Marianne was the fact that she was still in Anya’s body.
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* AwfulTruth: The reveal of Marianne’s involvement in the Ragnorök Connection are revealed here, by Megatron to Nunnally, and Marianne herself to the Autobots and the Black Knights.
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* AwfulTruth: The reveal of Marianne’s involvement in the Ragnorök Ragnarök Connection are revealed here, by Megatron to Nunnally, and Marianne herself to the Autobots and the Black Knights.
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* LetMeAtHim: Shirley, Milly, and Rivalz have to hold back Rai from attacking Marianne after she reveals the truth about her involvement in the Ragnorök Connection.
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* LetMeAtHim: Shirley, Milly, and Rivalz have to hold back Rai from attacking Marianne after she reveals the truth about her involvement in the Ragnorök Ragnarök Connection.
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* AwfulTruth: The reveal of Marianne’s involvement in the Ragnorök Connection are revealed here, by Megatron to Nunnally, and Marianne herself to the Autobots and the Black Knights.
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* BrokenPedestal: Not surprisingly, the majority who once looked up to Marianne were nonetheless shocked and disgusted over her past actions.
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* BrokenPedestal: Not surprisingly, the majority of people who once looked up to Marianne were nonetheless shocked and disgusted over her past actions. actions.
* LetMeAtHim: Shirley, Milly, and Rivalz have to hold back Rai from attacking Marianne after she reveals the truth about her involvement in the Ragnorök Connection.
* WhatTheHellHero: ''Everyone'', including Optimus, calls out Marianne for her involvement in the Ragnarök connection.
* WouldNotHurtAChild: The only thing that was stopping Todhoh from cutting down Marianne was the fact that she was still in Anya’s body.
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Despite the fact that he’s positively and justifiably angry at her, Optimus assures Marianne that she still has a chance to atone for her actions.
* LetMeAtHim: Shirley, Milly, and Rivalz have to hold back Rai from attacking Marianne after she reveals the truth about her involvement in the Ragnorök Connection.
* WhatTheHellHero: ''Everyone'', including Optimus, calls out Marianne for her involvement in the Ragnarök connection.
* WouldNotHurtAChild: The only thing that was stopping Todhoh from cutting down Marianne was the fact that she was still in Anya’s body.
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Despite the fact that he’s positively and justifiably angry at her, Optimus assures Marianne that she still has a chance to atone for her actions.
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* BreakTheCutie: Hoo boy. Poor Nunnally was left sobbing after Megatron reveals her mother's atrocities.
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* BrokenPedestal: Not surprisingly, the majority who once looked up to Marianne were nonetheless shocked and disgusted over her past actions.
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* BrokenPedestal: Not surprisingly, the majority who once looked up to Marianne were nonetheless shocked and disgusted over her past actions.
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