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* TheConvenientStoreNextDoor: The investigation reveals that the perps had drilled a hole beneath the crash bar on the back door of the adjacent, empty storefront, used an umbrella to pry it open, camped out until closing time and broke through the wall. Danny comments on the flimsiness of the metal the vault is constructed of, saying he has the same stuff on the front of his dishwasher.
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* TitleDrop: [[JustifiedTrope Kinda hard to write a script in which rain plays an important part without using the actual word.]]
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* TitleDrop: [[JustifiedTrope Kinda hard to write a script in which rain plays an important part without using the actual word.]]
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Their plan starts to go awry because of the rain; it's an inside job but another employee doesn't leave at closing because he's waiting for the rain to slack off.
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Their The robbers' plan starts to go awry because of the rain; it's an inside job but another employee doesn't leave at closing because he's waiting for the rain to slack off.
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* BuffySpeak: Stella finds "something gooey" on the first victim's face. Mac snarks, "Gooey. That's a nice forensics word; we should use it more often."
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* BankRobbery: The robbers used explosives to open several safe-deposit boxes and steal valuables from them.
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* BankRobbery: The robbers used use explosives to open several safe-deposit boxes and steal valuables from them.
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* MalevolentMaskedMen: The bank robbers wore full-faced masks to conceal their identities.
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* MalevolentMaskedMen: The bank robbers wore wear full-faced masks to conceal their identities.
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* BankRobbery: The robbers used explosives to open several safe-deposit boxes and steal valuables from them.
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Their plan starts to go awry because of the rain.rain; it's an inside job but another employee doesn't leave at closing because he's waiting for the rain to slack off.
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! Trivia for the episode:
* According to the CSIFiles website, "Scenes from this episode were filmed on location in New York. While filming in the city, the producers of the show and star Melina Kanakaredes were caught in a rain storm near Central Park. An unannounced police terrorist response drill allowed the producers to create new scenes and incorporate New York's finest into the filming of the show."
* According to the CSIFiles website, "Scenes from this episode were filmed on location in New York. While filming in the city, the producers of the show and star Melina Kanakaredes were caught in a rain storm near Central Park. An unannounced police terrorist response drill allowed the producers to create new scenes and incorporate New York's finest into the filming of the show."
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* According to the CSIFiles website, "Scenes from this episode were filmed on location in New York. While filming in the city, the producers of the show and star Melina Kanakaredes were caught in a rain storm near Central Park. An unannounced police terrorist response drill allowed the producers to create new scenes and incorporate New York's finest into the filming of the show."
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* TitleDrop: [[JustifiedTrope Kinda hard to write a script in which rain plays an important part without using the actual word.]]]]
! Trivia for the episode:
* According to the CSIFiles website, "Scenes from this episode were filmed on location in New York. While filming in the city, the producers of the show and star Melina Kanakaredes were caught in a rain storm near Central Park. An unannounced police terrorist response drill allowed the producers to create new scenes and incorporate New York's finest into the filming of the show."
! Trivia for the episode:
* According to the CSIFiles website, "Scenes from this episode were filmed on location in New York. While filming in the city, the producers of the show and star Melina Kanakaredes were caught in a rain storm near Central Park. An unannounced police terrorist response drill allowed the producers to create new scenes and incorporate New York's finest into the filming of the show."
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"'''Rain'''" is the seventh episode of Season 1.
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"'''Rain'''" is the seventh episode of Season 1. It originally aired November 17, 2004.
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"'''Rain'''" is the seventh episode of Season 1.
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"'''Rain'''" is the seventh episode of Season 1.
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Their plan starts to go awry because of the rain.
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* TitleDrop: [[JustifiedTrope Kinda hard to write a script in which rain plays an important part without using the actual word.]]
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Directed by Creator/DavidGrossman
Written by Creator/AnthonyEZuiker, Creator/AnnDonahue, Creator/CarolMendelsohn, & Creator/PamVeasey
A bank vault is broken into, but two of the robbers die before escaping. Unfortunately, rain washes away much of the evidence.
!Tropes for the episode:
* BloodyHandprint: One of the robbers is found in a pool of blood with baby-size prints leading away from his body.
* ImprovisedUmbrella: While the team are waiting for ransom money to be picked up from a newspaper box, a woman buys a paper from it to shield herself from the rain.
* MalevolentMaskedMen: The bank robbers wore full-faced masks to conceal their identities.
* TitleDrop: Kinda hard to write a script in which rain plays an important part without using the actual word.
Written by Creator/AnthonyEZuiker, Creator/AnnDonahue, Creator/CarolMendelsohn, & Creator/PamVeasey
A bank vault is broken into, but two of the robbers die before escaping. Unfortunately, rain washes away much of the evidence.
!Tropes for the episode:
* BloodyHandprint: One of the robbers is found in a pool of blood with baby-size prints leading away from his body.
* ImprovisedUmbrella: While the team are waiting for ransom money to be picked up from a newspaper box, a woman buys a paper from it to shield herself from the rain.
* MalevolentMaskedMen: The bank robbers wore full-faced masks to conceal their identities.
* TitleDrop: Kinda hard to write a script in which rain plays an important part without using the actual word.
