Follow TV Tropes

Following

History Recap / CSINYS01E05

Go To

OR

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
fixed a partial context example


* UselessSecurityCameras: ZigZagged. The nightclub in the teenage girl's case doesn't have any - the owner says they're bad for business, so Stella and Aiden look at footage from the surrounding industrial companies, and see the girl going in as well as meeting a man in the area behind the club.

to:

* UselessSecurityCameras: ZigZagged. The nightclub in the teenage girl's case doesn't have any security cameras - the owner says they're bad for business, so Stella and Aiden look at footage from those of the surrounding industrial companies, and see the girl going in as well as meeting a man in the area behind the club.

Added: 113

Changed: 87

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Crosswicking, edited another example for redundancy of detail


* EarAche: In the course of the investigation, detectives learn that one miner bit off part of another one's ear.



* ManBitesMan: In the course of the investigation, detectives learn that one miner bit off part of another's ear.

to:

* ManBitesMan: In the course of the investigation, detectives learn Upon learning that one miner man bit off part of another's ear.ear, Danny says the guy got "Tysoned."
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* HandWave: Danny asks Mac why they're investigating the death on the job site instead of OSHA. Mac explains that, ordinarily, it would be OSHA but since the deceased actually worked above ground but was found in the tunnel without protective gear, it falls under their purview due to possible foul play as opposed to a work-related accident.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* SnobbyHobbies: The perp in the B-case turns out to be a prep-school student who had befriended the victim, a poorer classmate. She kills her out of jealousy because her father had not only invited the girl to join them on a fox hunt trip to Europe, but had also afforded her the privilege of being "blooded" [[note]]having fox blood smeared on one's face at one's first hunt[[/note]] instead of his own daughter.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
correcting details


* UselessSecurityCameras: ZigZagged. The cameras at the nightclub in the teenage girl's case don't work, so Stella and Aiden look at footage from the surrounding businesses and see the girl going in as well as meeting a man in the area behind the club.

to:

* UselessSecurityCameras: ZigZagged. The cameras at the nightclub in the teenage girl's case don't work, doesn't have any - the owner says they're bad for business, so Stella and Aiden look at footage from the surrounding businesses industrial companies, and see the girl going in as well as meeting a man in the area behind the club.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* UselessSecurityCameras: ZigZagged. The cameras at the nightclub in the teenage girl's case don't work, so Stella and Aiden look at footage from the surrounding businesses and see the girl going in as well as meeting a man in the area behind the club.

Changed: 29

Removed: 238

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
moved to episode's Trivia page


!Trivia for the episode:
* The title actually dates back to the construction of the Transcontinental Railroad. "There is one dead Chinese man for every mile of that railroad," refers to the many lives lost laying the tracks and clearing the tunnels with dynamite.

to:

!Trivia for the episode:
* The title actually dates back to the construction of the Transcontinental Railroad. "There is one dead Chinese man for every mile of that railroad," refers to the many lives lost laying the tracks and clearing the tunnels with dynamite.
-----

Added: 197

Changed: 195

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* TitleDrop: As one miner says, "You know how a Sandhog measures progress? ''A man a mile.'' 'Cause that's the death rate down there. Electrocutions, cave-ins, decapitations. Every mile of rock we move, we lose one of our own."

to:

* TitleDrop: As one miner says, "You says,
--> You
know how a Sandhog measures progress? ''A man a mile.'' 'Cause that's the death rate down there. Electrocutions, cave-ins, decapitations. Every mile of rock we move, we lose one of our own."
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


"'''A Man a Mile'''" is the fifth episode of Season 1.

to:

"'''A Man a Mile'''" is the fifth episode of Season 1. It originally aired November 3, 2004.

Added: 68

Changed: 4

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None



to:

----
"'''A Man a Mile'''" is the fifth episode of Season 1.
----
!Synopsis:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* TitleDrop: As one miner says, "You know how a Sandhog measures progress? ''A man a mile.'' 'Cause that's the death rate down there. Electrocutions, cave-ins, decapitations. Every mile of rock we move, we lose one of our own."

to:

* TitleDrop: As one miner says, "You know how a Sandhog measures progress? ''A man a mile.'' 'Cause that's the death rate down there. Electrocutions, cave-ins, decapitations. Every mile of rock we move, we lose one of our own.""
!Trivia for the episode:
* The title actually dates back to the construction of the Transcontinental Railroad. "There is one dead Chinese man for every mile of that railroad," refers to the many lives lost laying the tracks and clearing the tunnels with dynamite.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

Directed by Creator/DavidGrossman

Written by Creator/AnthonyEZuiker, Creator/AnnDonahue, Creator/CarolMendelsohn, & Creator/AndrewLipsitz

A miner is found dead in a water tunnel 700 feet below the city, while above ground the death of a 16 yr old prep school girl is investigated.

!Tropes for the episode:
* ManBitesMan: In the course of the investigation, detectives learn that one miner bit off part of another's ear.
* TitleDrop: As one miner says, "You know how a Sandhog measures progress? ''A man a mile.'' 'Cause that's the death rate down there. Electrocutions, cave-ins, decapitations. Every mile of rock we move, we lose one of our own."

Top