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* SmugSnake: The prison officer who messed with Darryl’s mail. He smirks that Darryl can’t hit him…only for Tracey to hit him instead.
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* SmugSnake: The prison officer who messed with Darryl’s Darryl's mail. He smirks that Darryl can’t can't hit him…only him... only for Tracey to hit him instead.
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* GroinAttack: Tracey gives one to one of the police officers once it turns out that he was the one to have mixed up the letters.
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* GroinAttack: Tracey gives one to one of the police prison officers once it turns out that he was the one to have mixed up the letters.
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* SmugSnake: The prison officer who messed with Darryl’s mail. He smirks that Darryl can’t hit him…only for Tracey to hit him instead.
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The names of football clubs do not go in italics.
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** Tracey mentions Darryl's a big fan of ''[[UsefulNotes/BritishFootyTeams West Ham United]]''.
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** Tracey mentions Darryl's a big fan of ''[[UsefulNotes/BritishFootyTeams [[UsefulNotes/BritishFootyTeams West Ham United]]''.United]].
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* TheGhost: Juliet, who Tracey thinks Darryl is having an affair with.
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* LIsForDyslexia: Darryl wrote a letter for a prisoner who was so dyslexic that he thought he was in for "HBG" (Presumably meant to be "GBH" there).
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* LIsForDyslexia: Darryl wrote a letter for a prisoner who was so dyslexic that he thought he was in for "HBG" (Presumably (presumably meant to be "GBH" there)."GBH").
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* OneShotCharacter: Patsy Edwards, Gary, John and Phil the Plumber.
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* OneShotCharacter: Patsy Edwards, Gary, John and Phil the Plumber.plumber.
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* {{Pun}}: After seeing Phil the Plumber at a restaurant, Sharon mentions how she's always wanted to ''feel'' the plumber.
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* {{Pun}}: After seeing Phil the Plumber plumber at a restaurant, Sharon mentions how she's always wanted to ''feel'' the plumber.
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Product placement has to be the company paying to have the product featured in the show.
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** Dorien's copy of ''The Guide to Modern World Literature'' is stored in a ''[=WHSmith=]'' bag.
** Sharon recalls seeing Patsy Edwards in the ''News of the World''.
** Dorien's copy of ''The Guide to Modern World Literature'' is stored in a ''[=WHSmith=]'' bag.
** Sharon recalls seeing Patsy Edwards in the ''News of the World''.
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Sharon is considering divorcing Chris and Dorien has football hero Patsy Edwards temporarily living in her house, who becomes very fond of Tracey. She doesn't want to be unfaithful to Darryl, however, she suspects him of having an affair with a mysterious woman called Juliet.
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Whilst Sharon is considering divorcing Chris and Tracey are walking through the streets, they see that Dorien has football hero picked up another man - an Irish footballer called Patsy Edwards temporarily living in who's lodging with Dorien whilst he's looking for a house.
As Tracey is composing a letter to Darryl, Sharon accuses herhouse, who becomes very fond of Tracey. She having a crush on Patsy. Just then, Patsy shows up, having (deliberately, in an attempt to get away from Dorien) launched a golf ball into the sisters' garden. They go out for a drink, where Patsy is heckled by fans of his. Tracey and he go out and talk about their lives, although Tracey hides the fact that Darryl is in prison. The next morning the postman arrives. It comes with an apparent letter from Darryl, asking for a woman named Juliet and asking how she and the baby is. Naturally, Tracey thinks that Darryl has moved on from her. Saddened, Tracey uses Sharon's visiting order to get some information out of Chris. However, Chris reveals that not only does he not know about this woman, but that he and Darryl are in separate wings, although Tracey doesn't believe him.
Darryl sends another letter, hoping to explain everything at the next visiting order, although Tracey doesn't want tobe unfaithful listen to Darryl, however, she suspects him of and plans to turn her dinner with Patsy into a romantic one. However, Patsy's learned the truth from Dorien and convinces her not to pursue the relationship, although he doesn't leave without giving her a kiss.
Back at the prison, Darryl reveals the truth - the letter's not actually his, havingan affair with been intended for another prisoner. The reason it was his writing was that he wrote it for a mysterious woman called Juliet.
dyslexic prisoner. Afterward, both Sharon and Tracey are arrested, Sharon was graffiting over the prison and Tracey for given the prison officer responsible for the letter mix-up a GroinAttack. They'll be fine by the next episode, however.
As Tracey is composing a letter to Darryl, Sharon accuses her
Darryl sends another letter, hoping to explain everything at the next visiting order, although Tracey doesn't want to
Back at the prison, Darryl reveals the truth - the letter's not actually his, having
* LIsForDyslexia: Darryl wrote a letter for a prisoner who was so dyslexic that he thought he was in for "HBG" (Presumably meant to be "GBH" there).
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** Dorien's copy of ''The Guide to Modern World Literature'' is stored in a ''WHSmith'' bag.
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** Dorien's copy of ''The Guide to Modern World Literature'' is stored in a ''WHSmith'' ''[=WHSmith=]'' bag.
