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* TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: The Doctor bluffs his way past the cyborg buffalo guards at the Defence Ministery by calling up Greel and [[VoiceChangeling pretending to be Findecker]]. As he's desperate to contact his colleague, Greel gets the Icelandic Commissioner to order the guards to let him pass.
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* TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: The Doctor bluffs his way past the cyborg buffalo guards at the Defence Ministery Ministry by calling up Greel and [[VoiceChangeling pretending to be Findecker]]. As he's desperate to contact his colleague, Greel gets the Icelandic Commissioner to order the guards to let him pass.
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* CompellingVoice: Findecker tries to hypnotise the Doctor to no effect, but has better luck with Chops. Greel hynotises Nyssa to force her to accompany him to Reykjavik.
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* CompellingVoice: Findecker tries to hypnotise the Doctor to know effect, but Greel has better luck with Nyssa to force her to accompany him to Reykjavik.
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* CompellingVoice: Findecker tries to hypnotise the Doctor to know no effect, but Greel has better luck with Chops. Greel hynotises Nyssa to force her to accompany him to Reykjavik.
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* AllAnimalsAreDogs: Played straight with Chops, a dingo-hybrid soldier that the Doctor befriends with food. Of course scientists still aren't sure if dingos are dogs or their own species, and some have been domesticated.
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* AllAnimalsAreDogs: Played straight with Chops, a dingo-hybrid soldier that the Doctor befriends with food. Of course scientists still aren't sure if dingos are dogs or their own species, and some have been domesticated. InUniverse Chops denies being anything like those 'domestics'.
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* ExactTimeToFailure: The RobotMaid self destruct timer.
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* YouCantFightFate: The Doctor mentions he knows what happens to Magnus Greel, but he can't change the order of events, just minimize the damage.
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* YouCantFightFate: WhyAmITicking: Findecker ensues a FieryCoverup by activating the SelfDestructMechanism inside the cyborg RobotMaid he built.
-->'''Kaori:''' [[LastWords I hope my performance has been satisfactory.]] ''(explosion)''
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** The Doctor mentions he knows what happens to Magnus Greel, but he can't change the order of events, just minimize the damage.
-->'''Kaori:''' [[LastWords I hope my performance has been satisfactory.]] ''(explosion)''
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** The Doctor mentions he knows what happens to Magnus Greel, but he can't change the order of events, just minimize the damage.
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* ComplainingAboutRescuesTheyDontLike: Ragnar is rescued by the Doctor and Tegan, but not before he's been aged. He later asks Findecker to finish what he started as he has nothing left to live for except for seeing Sasha in the past, one last time before he dies. Findecker obliges, but drains his life energy before sending him back so he doesn't even get this.
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* TheConstant: Tegan starts to freak out after recognizing the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Old_Windmill,_Brisbane old windmill]] and realizing from the surrounding terrain that she's standing in a devastated future Brisbane.
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* TheConstant: Tegan starts to freak out after recognizing the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Old_Windmill,_Brisbane old windmill]] and realizing from the surrounding terrain that she's standing in a devastated future Brisbane.
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* TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: The Doctor bluffs his way past the cyborg buffalo guards at the Defence Ministery by calling up Greel and [[VoiceChangling [[VoiceChangeling pretending to be Findecker]]. As he's desperate to contact his colleague, Greel gets the Icelandic Commissioner to order the guards to let him pass.
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* TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: The Doctor bluff bluffs his way past the cyborg buffalo guards at the Defence Ministery by calling up Greel and [[VoiceChangling pretending to be Findecker.Findecker]]. As he's desperate to contact his colleague, Greel gets the Icelandic Commissioner to order the guards to let him pass.
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* TheyHaveTheScent: Used when Sgt. Chops rouses the other dingo soldiers to hunt down the Doctor and Tegan. This later becomes a ChekhovsGun with Chops recognises Tegan's scent and is able to track her down and bring her to the Doctor.
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* BeastMan: Sergeant Chops, a cyborg dingo soldier.
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* BeastMan: Sergeant Chops, a cyborg dingo hybrid soldier.
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* DeliciousDistraction: The Doctor distracts Chops with a box of chocolate drops while he rewires Chops cyborg brain.
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* DeliciousDistraction: The Doctor distracts Chops with a box of chocolate drops while he rewires Chops Chops' cyborg brain.
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* SpaceStation: The Correspondants Club, where the [[VoiceOfTheResistance Earth Free Media]] operate from, is a space station in Earth's orbit.
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* SpaceStation: The Correspondants Club, where the [[VoiceOfTheResistance Earth Free Media]] operate from, is a cloaked space station in Earth's orbit.
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* {{Teleportation}}: Trans-mat bracelets.
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* {{Teleportation}}: Trans-mat bracelets.bands.
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* SpaceStation: The Correspondants Club, where the [[VoiceOfTheResistance Free Earth Media]] operate from, is a space station in Earth's orbit.
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* SpaceStation: The Correspondants Club, where the [[VoiceOfTheResistance Free Earth Free Media]] operate from, is a space station in Earth's orbit.
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* ForbiddenZone: The Brisbane Death Zone, which makes it a convenient hiding place for a MadScientistLaboratory conducting secret and illegal experiments.
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* ForbiddenZone: The Brisbane Death Dead Zone, which makes it a convenient hiding place for a MadScientistLaboratory conducting secret and illegal experiments.
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* BeastMan: Chops, a cyborg dingo soldier.
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* InternalizedCategorism: Mr. Sin, who has the cerebral cortex of a pig, is mentioned as being seen in a zoo mocking the other pigs there.
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* TheConstant: Tegan starts to freak out after recognizing the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Old_Windmill,_Brisbane old windmill]] and realizing from the surrounding terrain that she's standing in a devastated future Brisbane.
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* TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: The Doctor bluff his way past the buffalo guards at the Defence Ministery by calling up Greel and pretending to be Findecker. As he's desperate to contact his colleague, he gets the Icelandic Commissioner to order him to be let in.
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* TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: The Doctor bluff his way past the cyborg buffalo guards at the Defence Ministery by calling up Greel and pretending to be Findecker. As he's desperate to contact his colleague, he Greel gets the Icelandic Commissioner to order the guards to let him to be let in.pass.
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* BeastMan: Chops, a cyborg dingo soldier.
* DomedCity: Reykjavik, as a defense against missile bombardment and the encroaching ice.
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* EvilerThanThou: At the end Magnus flees in Findecker's Time Cabinet in the end with Mr. Sin, and the Doctor has to allow him.
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* FieryCoverUp: Findecker has his secret laboratories rigged with a SelfDestructMechanism. This backfires when Greel hears of an explosion in the Brisbane Dead Zone and thinks Findecker has been killed and all their work has been destroyed; he suffers a VillainousBreakdown in public.
* ForbiddenZone: The Brisbane Death Zone, which makes it a convenient hiding place for a MadScientistLaboratory.
* ForbiddenZone: The Brisbane Death Zone, which makes it a convenient hiding place for a MadScientistLaboratory.
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* FieryCoverUp: Findecker has all his secret laboratories rigged with a SelfDestructMechanism. This backfires when Greel hears of an explosion in the Brisbane Dead Zone and thinks Findecker has been killed and all their work has been destroyed; he suffers a VillainousBreakdown in public.
* FollowThatCar: It helps when you have robot cabs that won't be distracted by the fact that the city is undergoing bombardment!
* ForbiddenZone: The Brisbane Death Zone, which makes it a convenient hiding place for aMadScientistLaboratory.MadScientistLaboratory conducting secret and illegal experiments.
* FollowThatCar: It helps when you have robot cabs that won't be distracted by the fact that the city is undergoing bombardment!
* ForbiddenZone: The Brisbane Death Zone, which makes it a convenient hiding place for a
* TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: The Doctor bluff his way past the buffalo guards at the Defence Ministery by calling up Greel and pretending to be Findecker. As he's desperate to contact his colleague, he gets the Icelandic Commissioner to order him to be let in.
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* HeroicSacrifice: When the Doctor is attacked by dingo cyborgs, he comes up with a method to kill them but it would kill Chops as well. Chops gladly grabs the device off him and uses it to save his "Chiefie".
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* HeroicSacrifice: When the Doctor is attacked by dingo cyborgs, he comes up with a method to kill them scramble their circuits but it would kill Chops as well. Chops gladly grabs the device off him and uses it to save his "Chiefie".
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* AllAnimalsAreDogs: Played straight with Chops, a dingo-hybrid soldier that the Doctor befriends with food. Of course scientists still aren't sure if dingos are dogs or their own species, and some have been domesticated.
* DeliciousDistraction: The Doctor distracts Chops with a box of chocolate drops while he rewires Chops cyborg brain.
* ForbiddenZone: The Brisbane Death Zone, which makes it a convenient hiding place for a MadScientistLaboratory.
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* HeroicSacrifice: Chops bonds with the Doctor rather quickly after he feeds him some chocolates, and afterwards gladly gives his life for his "Chiefie".
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* HeroicSacrifice: Chops bonds with When the Doctor rather quickly after is attacked by dingo cyborgs, he feeds him some chocolates, and afterwards comes up with a method to kill them but it would kill Chops as well. Chops gladly gives grabs the device off him and uses it to save his life for his "Chiefie"."Chiefie".
* HowWeGotHere: Justified given that TimeTravel is involved; the episode opens on Ragnar Crezzen's trial before he's thrown back in time.
* HowWeGotHere: Justified given that TimeTravel is involved; the episode opens on Ragnar Crezzen's trial before he's thrown back in time.
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* ObligatoryJoke: Findecker makes the "hanging around somewhere" joke after the Doctor is subject to UnwillingSuspension.
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* ObligatoryJoke: Findecker makes the "hanging around somewhere" joke after the Doctor is subject to UnwillingSuspension. He finds it quite hilarious.
* POVCam: Ragnar finds footage that Sasha took via her eye cam when she found his dying self three years ago. The footage blurs because she started crying on realising who he was.
* POVCam: Ragnar finds footage that Sasha took via her eye cam when she found his dying self three years ago. The footage blurs because she started crying on realising who he was.
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* RapidAging: What happens to everyone sent through the Time Chambers, with their bodies (dead or dying) dumped onto a frozen mountain three years in the past.
* ReleasedToElsewhere: Justice Minister Greel magnanimously commutes Ragnar Crezzen's death sentence to hard labour for life in the outer colonies. In truth, he and other such prisoners are used as raw material for Findecker's time travel experiments.
* ReleasedToElsewhere: Justice Minister Greel magnanimously commutes Ragnar Crezzen's death sentence to hard labour for life in the outer colonies. In truth, he and other such prisoners are used as raw material for Findecker's time travel experiments.
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* RapidAging: What happens to everyone sent through the Time Chambers, with their bodies (dead or dying) dumped onto a frozen mountain three years in the past.
past. Ragnar Crezzen, whom Turlough describes as "Not looking very young" and whose voice is withered and raspy, says he's only ''23''.
* ReleasedToElsewhere: Justice Minister Greel magnanimously commutes Ragnar Crezzen's death sentence to hard labour for life in theouter colonies.Outer Colonies. In truth, he and other such prisoners are used as raw material for Findecker's time travel experiments.
* ReleasedToElsewhere: Justice Minister Greel magnanimously commutes Ragnar Crezzen's death sentence to hard labour for life in the
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* TheStarscream: Greel has been secretly recruiting his own cyborg PraetorianGuard to dispose of Commissioner Duplessis. Unfortunately he survives the attack and Greel is forced to defect to the Icelandic Alliance.
* StartOfDarkness: Magnus wasn't always a complete villain, but due to the story's events he turns mad and escapes to the past.
* StartOfDarkness: Magnus wasn't always a complete villain, but due to the story's events he turns mad and escapes to the past.
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* TheStarscream: Greel has been secretly recruiting his own cyborg PraetorianGuard to dispose of Commissioner Duplessis. Unfortunately he the Commissioner survives the attack and Greel is forced to defect to the Icelandic Alliance.
* StartOfDarkness: Magnus wasn't always a complete villain, but due to the story's events he turns mad and escapes to the past.Alliance.
* StartOfDarkness: Magnus wasn't always a complete villain, but due to the story's events he turns mad and escapes to the past.
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* {{Unperson}}: Nyssa and Turlough are recruited as spies because they don't exist on Earth, and have no identity tags.
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* {{Unperson}}: Nyssa and Turlough are recruited as spies because they don't exist on Earth, and therefore have no identity tags.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: Someone that Turlough describes as "Not looking very young" and whose voice is withered and raspy, says he's only ''23''.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: Someone that Turlough describes as "Not looking very young" YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: When Findecker refuses to let Greel into his Time Cabinet, Greel orders Mr. Sin to butcher him and whose voice is withered and raspy, says he's only ''23''.takes it for himself.
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* FieryCoverUp: Findecker has his secret laboratories rigged with a SelfDestructMechanism. This backfires when Greel hears of an explosion in the Brisbane Dead Zone and thinks Findecker has been killed and all their work has been destroyed; he suffers a VillainousBreakdown in public.
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* SecretWeapon: Greel has promised the Supreme Alliance of Eastern States the secret of time travel, which he hopes to gain from Findecker's primitive experiments.
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* ReleasedToElsewhere: Justice Minister Greel magnanimously commutes Ragnar Crezzen's death sentence to hard labour for life in the outer colonies. In truth, he and other such prisoners are used as raw material for Findecker's time travel experiments.
* SecretWeapon: Greel has promised the Supreme Alliance of Eastern States the secret of time travel, which he hopes to gain from Findecker'sprimitive experiments.
* SecretWeapon: Greel has promised the Supreme Alliance of Eastern States the secret of time travel, which he hopes to gain from Findecker's
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A future time, a court in trial, Ragnar Crezzen is accused and tried under 5 [[KangarooCourt minutes]] for the murder of Dr. Sa Yy Findecker. He's sentenced to forced labour whilst in reality he's sent to the [[AFateWorseThanDeath Time Chambers]] of the very man he's supposedly killed.
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A future time, a court in trial, Ragnar Crezzen is accused and tried in under 5 [[KangarooCourt minutes]] for the attempted murder of Dr. Sa Yy Findecker. He's sentenced to forced labour whilst in reality he's sent to the [[AFateWorseThanDeath Time Chambers]] of the very man he's supposedly killed.he tried to kill.
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* AdmiringTheAbomination: The Doctor knows Findecker and his horrible atrocities he's committed, but can't help but appreciate his genius.
* AfterTheEnd: There's only bits of Earth left that are habitable, in Oceania, because of a new Ice Age.
* AfterTheEnd: There's only bits of Earth left that are habitable, in Oceania, because of a new Ice Age.
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* AdmiringTheAbomination: AdmiringTheAbomination:
** The Doctor knows Findecker andhis the horrible atrocities he's committed, but can't help but appreciate his genius.
** Although she knows he's monstrous, Nyssa finds Greel has admirable qualities as well and [[IgnoredEpiphany tries in vain to appeal to them]].
*AfterTheEnd: EarthThatWas: There's only bits of Earth left that are habitable, in Oceania, because of a new Ice Age.Age, and the planet is just an IndustrialWorld now.
** The Doctor knows Findecker and
** Although she knows he's monstrous, Nyssa finds Greel has admirable qualities as well and [[IgnoredEpiphany tries in vain to appeal to them]].
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** Both a CallBack and a CallForward. The Doctor mentions Time Agents, the same ones first talked about in Recap/DoctorWhoS14E6TheTalonsOfWengChiang, but we won't meet any until ''much'' [[Recap/DoctorWhoS27E9TheEmptyChild later]].
** The title itself is a call back to "Talons", as the Fourth Doctor calls Greel the "Butcher of Brisbane" in proving he knows who he truly is. The reference in that episode to the Doctor being at the final battle of Reykjavik is expanded on here as that battle takes place, though we don't get to actually see the past Doctor doing his bit.
* ChronicHeroSyndrome: When stuck in a blizzard, Nyssa and Turlough find a body. Turlough wishes to leave it, Nyssa tries and save the person.
%%* CompellingVoice: Findecker has one.
* DeadlyEuphemism:
--> '''Findecker''': The Doctor's ... ''HANGING AROUND SOMEWHERE''
* EarlyBirdCameo: Mr. Sin appears in the last bits of the story in a minor capacity, going on to have a larger role in "Talons".
* EvilerThanThou: Magnus overtakes Findecker's Time Cabinet in the end with Mr. Sin, and the Doctor has to allow him.
** The title itself is a call back to "Talons", as the Fourth Doctor calls Greel the "Butcher of Brisbane" in proving he knows who he truly is. The reference in that episode to the Doctor being at the final battle of Reykjavik is expanded on here as that battle takes place, though we don't get to actually see the past Doctor doing his bit.
* ChronicHeroSyndrome: When stuck in a blizzard, Nyssa and Turlough find a body. Turlough wishes to leave it, Nyssa tries and save the person.
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* DeadlyEuphemism:
--> '''Findecker''': The Doctor's ... ''HANGING AROUND SOMEWHERE''
* EarlyBirdCameo: Mr. Sin appears in the last bits of the story in a minor capacity, going on to have a larger role in "Talons".
* EvilerThanThou: Magnus overtakes Findecker's Time Cabinet in the end with Mr. Sin, and the Doctor has to allow him.
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** Both a CallBack and a CallForward. The Doctor mentions Time Agents, the same ones first talked about in Recap/DoctorWhoS14E6TheTalonsOfWengChiang, but we won't meet any until ''much'' [[Recap/DoctorWhoS27E9TheEmptyChild later]].
later]]. Ironically the Time Agents Greel mentioned was the Doctor and his companions, as the Doctor used that as a cover story to avoid changing the timeline.
** The title itself is a call back to "Talons", as the Fourth Doctor calls Greel the "Butcher of Brisbane" in proving he knows who he truly is. The reference in that episode to the Doctor being at the final battle of Reykjavik is expanded on here as that battle takes place, though [[HeroOfAnotherStory we don't get to actually see the past Doctor doing hisbit.
bit]].
* ChronicHeroSyndrome: When stuck in a blizzard, Nyssa and Turlough find abody. body that's still alive. Turlough wishes to leave it, but Nyssa tries and insists they save the person.
%%* * CompellingVoice: Findecker tries to hypnotise the Doctor to know effect, but Greel has one.
better luck with Nyssa to force her to accompany him to Reykjavik.
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--> '''Findecker''': The Doctor's ... ''HANGING AROUND SOMEWHERE''
CorpseLand: Nyssa and Turlough find themselves in a snow-swept mountain in Bhutan, where portals keep opening and dumping the [[TestedOnHumans results of Findecker's experiments.]]
* EarlyBirdCameo: Mr. Sin appearsin the last bits of the story in a minor capacity, going on to have a larger role in "Talons".
* EvilerThanThou: At the end Magnusovertakes flees in Findecker's Time Cabinet in the end with Mr. Sin, and the Doctor has to allow him.
** The title itself is a call back to "Talons", as the Fourth Doctor calls Greel the "Butcher of Brisbane" in proving he knows who he truly is. The reference in that episode to the Doctor being at the final battle of Reykjavik is expanded on here as that battle takes place, though [[HeroOfAnotherStory we don't get to actually see the past Doctor doing his
* ChronicHeroSyndrome: When stuck in a blizzard, Nyssa and Turlough find a
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--> '''Findecker''': The Doctor's ... ''HANGING AROUND SOMEWHERE''
* EarlyBirdCameo: Mr. Sin appears
* EvilerThanThou: At the end Magnus
* KickTheDog: Ragan implores Findecker to send him back to the past to see Sasha, one last time. Findecker instead feeds on him, ''then'' sends him into the past.
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* LoveInterestTraitor: From Magnus' perspective, this is what Nyssa ends up being.
* [[GirlFriday Man Friday]]: Turlough poses as this for Nyssa.
* TheMole: Stranded in time for three years, Nyssa and Turlough spend a year training with the Alliance to infiltrate Greel's operations as spies. Nyssa ends up being his betrothed.
* NeverTheSelvesShallMeet: Towards the end of the story the Doctor mentions he's ''out there'' fighting with freedom fighters, but doesn't mention which incarnation or why.
* NoNameGiven: The "old man" Nyssa and Turlough meet.
* PragmaticHero: Turlough takes clothes off of a dead body in order to keep warm in a blizzard. He defends himself as "being practical".
* LoveInterestTraitor: From Magnus' perspective, this is what Nyssa ends up being.
* [[GirlFriday Man Friday]]: Turlough poses as this for Nyssa.
* TheMole: Stranded in time for three years, Nyssa and Turlough spend a year training with the Alliance to infiltrate Greel's operations as spies. Nyssa ends up being his betrothed.
* NeverTheSelvesShallMeet: Towards the end of the story the Doctor mentions he's ''out there'' fighting with freedom fighters, but doesn't mention which incarnation or why.
* NoNameGiven: The "old man" Nyssa and Turlough meet.
* PragmaticHero: Turlough takes clothes off of a dead body in order to keep warm in a blizzard. He defends himself as "being practical".
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* [[GirlFriday Man Friday]]: Turlough
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** Stranded in time for three years, Nyssa and Turlough spend a year training with the Alliance to infiltrate Greel's operations as spies. Nyssa ends up being his betrothed.
** Nyssa thinks her cyborg servant Kaori, a gift from Greel, was programmed to spy on her, but she's fixed that. Unfortunately Kaori is actually working for Findecker.
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** The Doctor balks at sacrificing Chops, but has no issue [[BrainwashingForTheGreaterGood reprogramming Chops to see him as his Chief]] instead of Findecker.
* RapidAging: What happens to everyone sent through the Time Chambers, with their bodies (dead or dying) dumped onto a frozen mountain three years in the past.
* SecretWeapon: Greel has promised the Supreme Alliance of Eastern States the secret of time travel, which he hopes to gain from Findecker's primitive experiments.
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* StableTimeLoop: Poor Ragan, going back in time to die just to fill his role in history.
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** Poor Ragan, going back in time to die just to fill his role in
** The Doctor has to [[KarmaHoudini let Greel go instead of standing trial for his crimes]], so the events of ''The Talons of Weng Chiang'' can take place.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: Someone that Turlough describes as "Not looking very young" and who's whose voice is withered and raspy, says he's only ''23''.''23''.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Very subtly. Tegan's frustration with the Doctor seemingly picking and choosing to allow villains to escape and innocent people to die to preserve time without an explanation that goes beyond "this is how it has to be" is an early sign of the feelings that will cause her to eventually leave the TARDIS in "Ressurection of the Daleks".
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Very subtly. Tegan's frustration with the Doctor seemingly picking and choosing to allow villains to escape and innocent people to die to preserve time without an explanation that goes beyond "this is how it has to be" is an early sign of the feelings that will cause her to eventually leave the TARDIS in "Ressurection "Resurrection of the Daleks".
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* GoLookAtTheDistraction: The Doctor literally jingles a bunch of keys in front of a mutant.
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** The title itself is a call back to "Talons", as the Fourth Doctor calls Greel the "Butcher of Brisbane" in proving he knows who he truly is. The reference in that episode to The Doctor being at the final battle of Reykjavik is expanded on here as that battle takes place, though we don't get to actually see the past Doctor doing his bit.
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** The title itself is a call back to "Talons", as the Fourth Doctor calls Greel the "Butcher of Brisbane" in proving he knows who he truly is. The reference in that episode to The the Doctor being at the final battle of Reykjavik is expanded on here as that battle takes place, though we don't get to actually see the past Doctor doing his bit.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Very subtly. Tegan's frustration with The Doctor seemingly picking and choosing to allow villains to escape and innocent people to die to preserve time without an explanation that goes beyond "this is how it has to be" is an early sign of the feelings that will cause her to eventually leave the TARDIS in "Ressurection of the Daleks".
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Very subtly. Tegan's frustration with The the Doctor seemingly picking and choosing to allow villains to escape and innocent people to die to preserve time without an explanation that goes beyond "this is how it has to be" is an early sign of the feelings that will cause her to eventually leave the TARDIS in "Ressurection of the Daleks".
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* WhatTheHellHero: Tegan calls out The Doctor for both constantly interfering in events as well as deliberately ''not'' interfering, ostensibly to preserve the Web of Time, but since he refuses to explain himself, Tegan has no way of knowing the difference.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Tegan calls out The the Doctor for both constantly interfering in events as well as deliberately ''not'' interfering, ostensibly to preserve the Web of Time, but since he refuses to explain himself, Tegan has no way of knowing the difference.