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%%* CloningBlues: See TomatoInTheMirror.
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%%* HostageSituation: What the Mars Mission ends up as when one of the humans, Paul Webster, holds one of the Ice Warriors hostage with the intention of bringing him back to Earth so that his father's corporation can create human soldiers spliced with Ice Warrior DNA and armed with Martian technology.
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%%* LoopholeAbuse: The Doctor points out what's wrong with the trope below;
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%%* LoopholeAbuse: The Doctor points out what's wrong with their doors with the trope below;
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%%* HostageSituation: What the Mars Mission ends up as when one of the humans holds one of the Ice Warriors hostage.
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%%* HostageSituation: What the Mars Mission ends up as when one of the humans humans, Paul Webster, holds one of the Ice Warriors hostage. hostage with the intention of bringing him back to Earth so that his father's corporation can create human soldiers spliced with Ice Warrior DNA and armed with Martian technology.
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%%* ProudWarriorRaceGuy: Zzaal.
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%%* ProudWarriorRaceGuy: Zzaal.Commander Zzaal who was originally in charge of Izdaal's personal guard.
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%%* HumansAreTheRealMonsters: Despite the Ice Warriors killing Roberts when she attempted to bluff them, they're not the main villains. The story's true villain is the very human Paul Webster.
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* ItsAllMyFault: Commander Lee Forbes blames himself for the death of Susan Roberts.
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%%* HalfHumanHybrid: Tanya Webster is actually a cross between a human and an Ice Warrior.
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%%* HeroicSacrifice: Zzaal, like Izdaal before him. He lets himself die in the Red Dawn so that his Warriors can kill the story's true villain, Paul Webster.
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