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* AnAesop: It's not whatever strategy you do to win that's important. What's more important than that is your friendship.
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* AnAesop: Hiding a problem only makes it worse. It's important to tell the truth.
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* WhamLine: "I flip-flappin' knew it."
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* WhamLine: "I flip-flappin' knew it.""
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* TranquilFury: When Bill finds out Cricket wrecked Alice's scooter and destroyed the crops with it, he doesn't yell at Cricket. Instead, he calmly tells him he's going to get it tomorrow. Cricket is understandably terrified.
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* TranquilFury: When Bill finds out Cricket wrecked Alice's scooter and destroyed the crops with it, he is furious but doesn't yell at Cricket. Instead, he calmly tells him he's going to get it tomorrow. Cricket is understandably terrified.
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* HiddenDepths: Vasquez pulled off his government agent disguise because he's taking acting classes at the community theater.
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* LoudGulp: Cricket in response to Bill promising to find out how he ruined the crops.
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* TaughtByExperience: The moment Cricket rushes to the scene and asks what happened to the crops, Bill immediately accuses him of being responsible. When Cricket acts offended over always being blamed for such incidents, Bill points out that because he's always responsible.
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* MenInBlack: Cricket has Vasquez disguise himself as one to make Bill believe aliens ruined his crops. He even uses a neutralizer device like the one in [[Film/MenInBlack the movies]].
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* MenInBlack: TheMenInBlack: Cricket has Vasquez disguise himself as one to make Bill believe aliens ruined his crops. He even uses a neutralizer device like the one in [[Film/MenInBlack the movies]].
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[[caption-width-right:350:Do you [[Pun Bill-ieve]] in aliens?]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:Do you [[Pun [[{{Pun}} Bill-ieve]] in aliens?]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:Do you Bill-ieve in aliens?]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:Do you Bill-ieve [[Pun Bill-ieve]] in aliens?]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: When Keys comes upon Cricket and Remy having almost died from a heatstroke, he quickly puts them in his car and takes them home.
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* BigDamnHeroes: When Keys comes upon Cricket and Remy having almost died from a heatstroke, he quickly puts them in his car and takes them home. He likewise saves the rest of the Green from the impromptu freezer they got themselves in.
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* BittersweetEnding: Bill reveals he knew Cricket destroyed the garden all along and he learns his lesson, but Cricket is undeniably disappointed and defeated at this, and it's implied he'll get grounded for it indeed.
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* BittersweetEnding: For both parties. Bill reveals he knew Cricket destroyed the garden all along and he learns his lesson, but Cricket is undeniably disappointed and defeated at this, and it's implied he'll get grounded for it indeed.indeed. Meanwhile Bill had to utterly humiliate himself in order to get Cricket to learn his lesson, hurriedly getting everyone inside before anyone else sees him in his underwear.
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* ILetYouWin: Cricket ultimately decides his and Remy's friendship is much more important than competing, and forfeits the HORSE match so Remy can win by default.
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* ILetYouWin: Cricket ultimately decides his and Remy's friendship is much more important than competing, and forfeits the HORSE match so Remy can win by default.
* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: Wizard Williams and Ricky Stork is a reference to the famous rivalry between Magic Johnson and Larry Bird.
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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: Wizard Williams and Ricky Stork is a reference to the famous rivalry between Magic Johnson and Larry Bird.
