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Tim stands in front of the skyscraper "Mist Wall" with Adele, reminiscing about the day he found his pet mouse with a large pair of scissors sticking out of its back. He blamed his brother Tick, who did not deny killing the mouse. Tim recalls that it was soon after that he abandoned his past and began to work for Huey. He is shaken out of his daze when one of his men bring him a tasteless JackTheRipper wannabe note from Christopher. Chris and Chi excuse themselves from official duty until the next day, which is when the operation is scheduled to occur. Tim comments that he's uneasy about having to storm a building that's half the size of the Empire State Building. Adele tells him that she will be going to kill Eve Genoard because Dallas disappeared in the confusion at the manor, but Tim tells her to wait until they can confirm his whereabouts.
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Tim stands in front of the skyscraper "Mist Wall" with Adele, reminiscing about the day he found his pet mouse with a large pair of scissors sticking out of its back. He blamed his brother Tick, who did not deny killing the mouse. Tim recalls that it was soon after that he abandoned his past and began to work for Huey. He is shaken out of his daze when one of his men bring him a tasteless JackTheRipper UsefulNotes/JackTheRipper wannabe note from Christopher. Chris and Chi excuse themselves from official duty until the next day, which is when the operation is scheduled to occur. Tim comments that he's uneasy about having to storm a building that's half the size of the Empire State Building. Adele tells him that she will be going to kill Eve Genoard because Dallas disappeared in the confusion at the manor, but Tim tells her to wait until they can confirm his whereabouts.
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Meanwhile, Tick and Maria are still taking shelter from the rain. Maria keeps recalling Adele's HannibalLecture. The thought of having been defeated by someone is driving her to despair. Tick tries to cheer her up by pointing out that since Ronnie took away both their weapons before the fight ended properly, Maria technically didn't lose. Maria tells him that the reason she lost wasn't because of physical strength, but because she didn't trust in her katana enough. Tick tries to interrupt, but Maria snaps at him. She feels bad about it almost instantly. Tick apologizes for being unable to understand how she feels, but adds that he wants her to win next time, as he might be able to understand her feelings of victory.
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Meanwhile, Tick and Maria are still taking shelter from the rain. Maria keeps recalling Adele's HannibalLecture.BreakingSpeech. The thought of having been defeated by someone is driving her to despair. Tick tries to cheer her up by pointing out that since Ronnie took away both their weapons before the fight ended properly, Maria technically didn't lose. Maria tells him that the reason she lost wasn't because of physical strength, but because she didn't trust in her katana enough. Tick tries to interrupt, but Maria snaps at him. She feels bad about it almost instantly. Tick apologizes for being unable to understand how she feels, but adds that he wants her to win next time, as he might be able to understand her feelings of victory.
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Several days later, Christopher and Chi arrive at a [[{{Understatement}} somewhat rainy]] Pennsylvania Station.
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Several days later, Christopher and Chi arrive at a [[{{Understatement}} somewhat rainy]] rainy Pennsylvania Station.
