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* IronicDeath: Koda, judging by his introductory {{Leitmotif}} and [[Music/GunsNRoses tee shirt]], seems fond of hard rock. In the Carrs' basement,a broadcast of such music sets on him the Basement Boogeyman.
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* IronicDeath: Koda, judging by his introductory {{Leitmotif}} and [[Music/GunsNRoses tee shirt]], seems fond of hard rock. In the Carrs' basement,a basement, a broadcast of such music sets on him the Basement Boogeyman.
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* IronicDeath: Koda, judging by his introductory {{Leitmotif}} and [[Music/GunsNRoses tee shirt]], seems fond of hard rock. In the Carrs' basement,a broadcast of such music sets on him the Basement Boogeyman.
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** Beyond its inscrutable ethereality; power to recreate matter and appetite for humans, little is revealed of the Basement Boogeyman's true nature.
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** Beyond its inscrutable ethereality; ethereal inscrutability; power to recreate matter and appetite for humans, little is revealed of the Basement Boogeyman's true nature.
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* ProtagonistJourneyToVillain: Andy's final smirk indicates that he has no problem feeding people to the cellar monster for personal gain.
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* AccidentalMurder: Andy locks Koda in the cellar only intending to teach him a lesson, instead the monster in the cellar kills him.
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* CreepyBasement: The Carrs' basement is dark, silent, and is host to some kind of incorporeal entity.
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* CreepyBasement: The Carrs' basement is dark, silent, and is host to hosts some kind of incorporeal entity.
