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'''Homura:''' Is that so? [[DemotedToDragon The curses that have spread across our world still have to be dealt with.]] And you Incubators have become necessary for that task. [[WhosLaughingNow You're going to stay and help]]... [[KickTheSonOfABitch In-cu-ba-tor.]]\\
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'''Homura:''' Is that so? [[DemotedToDragon The curses that have spread across our world still have to be dealt with.]] And you Incubators have become necessary for that task. [[WhosLaughingNow You're going to stay and help]]... [[KickTheSonOfABitch In-cu-ba-tor.]]\\\\
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->'''Homura:''' This farce is wasting the sacrifice Madoka made for us. [[ThisIsUnforgivable And I won't allow it.]]\\
'''[[spoiler:Clara Dolls]] throwing pomegranates:''' [[GodIsDead Gott ist tot!]] Gott ist tot [[{{Foreshadowing}} Gott ist tot!]]
->'''Homura:''' [[IHaveThisFriend I had a dream and it scared me.]]\\
'''[[spoiler:Clara Dolls]] throwing pomegranates:''' [[GodIsDead Gott ist tot!]] Gott ist tot [[{{Foreshadowing}} Gott ist tot!]]
->'''Homura:''' [[IHaveThisFriend I had a dream and it scared me.]]\\
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->'''Homura:''' This farce is wasting the sacrifice Madoka made for us. [[ThisIsUnforgivable And I won't allow it.]]\\
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'''[[spoiler:Clara Dolls]] throwing pomegranates:'''[[GodIsDead Gott ist tot!]] tot! Gott ist tot [[{{Foreshadowing}} Gott ist tot!]]
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->'''Homura:'''[[IHaveThisFriend I had a dream and it scared me.]]\\\\
'''[[spoiler:Clara Dolls]] throwing pomegranates:'''
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'''Sayaka:''' It'd be sad if it were... but it's not like that. Not really. But I thought I didn't have any regrets when I died. But the truth is, when I found out about this assignment, I jumped at the chance to come back... 'cause in the end, I did have one regret. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming You. I missed you.]]\\
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'''Sayaka:''' It'd be sad if it were... but it's not like that. Not really. But I thought I didn't have any regrets when I died. But the truth is, when I found out about this assignment, I jumped at the chance to come back... 'cause in the end, I did have one regret. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming You. I missed you.]]\\\\
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[[ActorAllusion I'm just a]] [[Anime/FreshPrettyCure little, old raspberry.]]\\
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[[ActorAllusion I'm I'm]] just a]] a [[Anime/FreshPrettyCure little, old raspberry.]]\\
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[[ContinuityNod I am]] [[DramaticIrony the]] [[TrademarkFavoriteFood cheese.]]\\
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[[GeniusBonus I-I'm the]] [[MeaningfulReleaseDate pumpkin, full of seeds!]]\\
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[[GeniusBonus I-I'm the]] [[MeaningfulReleaseDate the pumpkin, full of seeds!]]\\
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'''[[spoiler:Clara Dolls]] throwing pomegranates:''' [[GratuitousGerman Gott ist tot!]] [[Creator/FriedrichNietzsche Gott]] [[GodIsDead ist tot!]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} Gott ist tot!]]
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'''[[spoiler:Clara Dolls]] throwing pomegranates:''' [[GratuitousGerman [[GodIsDead Gott ist tot!]] [[Creator/FriedrichNietzsche Gott]] [[GodIsDead Gott ist tot!]] tot [[{{Foreshadowing}} Gott ist tot!]]
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'''Homura:''' In my dream, [[AbstractApotheosis you went someplace far away]] [[UnreliableExpositor and it was so far, I wasn't gonna be able to see you again.]] [[RetGone And everyone forgot about you.]] [[RippleEffectProofMemory No one remembered you except for me! I was the only one in the world who could!]] I was so lonely... and sad... but no one understood how I felt. I started to think all my memories of you were just things I made up. I thought I was going crazy.\\
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'''Homura:''' In my dream, [[AbstractApotheosis you went someplace far away]] away]] and it was so far, [[UnreliableExpositor and it was so far, I wasn't gonna be able to see you again.]] again]]. [[RetGone And everyone forgot about you.]] [[RippleEffectProofMemory No one remembered you except for me! [[RippleEffectProofMemory I was the only one in the world who could!]] I was so lonely... and sad... but no one understood how I felt. I started to think all my memories of you were just things I made up. I thought I was going crazy.\\
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'''Homura:''' [[EurekaMoment You're right... I know you wouldn't!]] ''(thinking)'' [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy I knew it would hurt you more than anything.]] But still... [[ILetGwenStacyDie How could I have been so stupid? I should have stopped you back then.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} I should have stopped you, no matter what I had to do. I shouldn't have let it happen.]] ''(out loud)'' ...Madoka. [[ChronicHeroSyndrome I want you to know that when the time comes and you have to make a hard decision, you will have the courage to make it.]] One day, you'll find out there are things only you can do, and then [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre you'll know just how strong and how kind you really are.]] Believe me, it's the truth.
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'''Homura:''' [[EurekaMoment You're right... I know you wouldn't!]] ''(thinking)'' [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy I knew it would hurt you more than anything.]] But still... [[ILetGwenStacyDie How could I have been so stupid? stupid?]] I should have stopped you back then.]] then. [[{{Foreshadowing}} I should have stopped you, no matter what I had to do. I shouldn't have let it happen.]] ''(out loud)'' ...Madoka. [[ChronicHeroSyndrome I want you to know that when the time comes and you have to make a hard decision, you will have the courage to make it.]] One day, you'll find out there are things only you can do, and then [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre you'll know just how strong and how kind you really are.]] Believe me, it's the truth.
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[[NotSoOmniscientAfterAll What is it that cleanses magical girls and makes them vanish? It's something you call the "Law of Cycles." Well, we wanted to know what happened to a Soul Gem when it's cut off from this phenomenon.]] Thanks to you, we witnessed some very interesting results. We observed a peculiar closed space, one that could shape its own reality as well as lure in trapped victims. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Now, correct me if I'm wrong but I believe this is the power of that "witch" concept you explained to us before.]]''
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->''[[EvilPlan If we could observe [the phenomenon], we could interfere with it. And if we can interfere with it, we can control it. The information we'd collect from that would allow us to conquer the "Law of Cycles" completely.]] [[MotiveRant Then, we could make magical girls turn into witches and collect vast amounts of energy all in one go. Your hope and despair are the keys; the phase change between those emotions creates huge amounts of energy, more then we ever imagined.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} You magical girls are the gateway to limitless possibilities.]]''
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->''[[EvilPlan If we could observe [the phenomenon], we could interfere with it. And if we can interfere with it, we can control it. ]] The information we'd collect from that would allow us to conquer the "Law of Cycles" completely.]] completely. [[MotiveRant Then, we could make magical girls turn into witches and collect vast amounts of energy all in one go. Your hope and despair are the keys; the phase change between those emotions creates huge amounts of energy, more then we ever imagined.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} You magical girls are the gateway to limitless possibilities.]]''''
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->''As you are now, you won't know this but you see, the reason I chose to become a magical girl was to save Madoka. I stand by that choice! You want me to betray her [[YouAreWorthHell but I'd rather turn into a witch before I do.]] [[DeclarationOfProtection And I will never let you Incubators touch her again!]]\\
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->''As you are now, you won't know this but you see, the reason I chose to become a magical girl was to save Madoka. I stand by that choice! You want me to betray her [[YouAreWorthHell but I'd rather turn into a witch before I do.]] do]]. [[DeclarationOfProtection And I will never let you Incubators touch her again!]]\\
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->''[[SpeakInUnison This]] [[ThisCannotBe is so]] [[AscendedMeme illogical!]]''
-->--'''The Incubators''', as their plans are destroyed in a RainOfArrows.
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'''Homura:''' [[CallBack I don't expect you to understand. No one in the world could possibly understand.]] [[LoveMakesYouEvil This emotion is mine and mine alone. And I've been saving it for her.]]\\
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'''Homura:''' [[CallBack I don't expect you to understand. No one in the world could possibly understand.]] [[LoveMakesYouEvil This emotion is mine and mine alone. [[LoveMakesYouEvil And I've been saving it for her.]]\\
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[[BishonenLine I'm not a magical girl or a witch. Madoka is as sacred as a god, and I pulled her from the heaven.]] [[HumanoidAbomination So if you want to know what I've become,]] [[SatanicArchetype I suppose, if anything, you could call me a demon now.]]''
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->'''Kyubey:''' There's no doubt now. [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone Trying to put human emotions to use is just too dangerous for us.]] [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere We could never hope to control something whose final form is so irrational.]]\\
'''Homura:''' Is that so? [[DemotedToDragon The curses that have spread across our world still have to be dealt with.]] [[LaserGuidedKarma And you Incubators have become necessary for that task.]] [[WhosLaughingNow You're going to stay and help...]] [[KickTheSonOfABitch In-cu-ba-tor.]]\\
'''Homura:''' Is that so? [[DemotedToDragon The curses that have spread across our world still have to be dealt with.]] [[LaserGuidedKarma And you Incubators have become necessary for that task.]] [[WhosLaughingNow You're going to stay and help...]] [[KickTheSonOfABitch In-cu-ba-tor.]]\\
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->'''Kyubey:''' There's no doubt now. [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere Trying to put human emotions to use is just too dangerous for us.]] [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere us. We could never hope to control something whose final form is so irrational.]]\\
'''Homura:''' Is that so? [[DemotedToDragon The curses that have spread across our world still have to be dealt with.]][[LaserGuidedKarma And you Incubators have become necessary for that task.]] task. [[WhosLaughingNow You're going to stay and help...]] help]]... [[KickTheSonOfABitch In-cu-ba-tor.]]\\
'''Homura:''' Is that so? [[DemotedToDragon The curses that have spread across our world still have to be dealt with.]]
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'''Homura:''' I'm an existence called "Evil" now. And if evil is supposed to disrupt the divine and be a force of chaos, it's only natural for me to upset the laws of a god.\\
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'''Homura:''' [[CardCarryingVillain I'm an existence called "Evil" now. now.]] And if evil is supposed to disrupt the divine [[ChaosIsEvil and be a force of chaos, chaos]], it's only natural for me to upset the laws of a god.\\
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->''[[WistfulAmnesia Yeah, I'm fine, it's just... I don't know, I guess when I saw you guys]] [[VillainHasAPoint and heard you both say good morning again, I guess I got super happy, that's all.]]''
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->''[[WistfulAmnesia Yeah, I'm fine, it's just... ]] I don't know, I guess when I saw you guys]] [[VillainHasAPoint guys and heard you both say good morning again, [[VillainHasAPoint I guess I got super happy, that's all.]]''all]].''
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-->'''Madoka Kaname''', [[BookEnds transfer]] [[HereWeGoAgain student.]]
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-->'''Madoka Kaname''', [[BookEnds transfer]] [[HereWeGoAgain transfer student.]]
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'''Homura:''' I see... [[HeelRealization Well, then, I suppose, one day, you will also be my enemy.]] [[IDidWhatIHadToDo It's fine. I don't care.]]\\
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'''Homura:''' I see... [[HeelRealization *sigh* I see...]] Well, then, I suppose, one day, you will also be my enemy.]] enemy. [[IDidWhatIHadToDo It's fine. I don't care.]]\\
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'''Homura:''' [[TragicVillain I knew it. They always]] [[CryForTheDevil did look better on you.]]
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'''Homura:''' [[TragicVillain I knew it. They always]] [[CryForTheDevil always did look better on you.]]
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->''The mind is its own place, and in itself\\
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'''Homura:''' [[EurekaMoment You're right... I know you wouldn't!]] (thinking) [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy I knew it would hurt you more than anything.]] But still... [[ILetGwenStacyDie How could I have been so stupid? I should have stopped you back then.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} I should have stopped you, no matter what I had to do. I shouldn't have let it happen.]] (out loud) ...Madoka. [[ChronicHeroSyndrome I want you to know that when the time comes and you have to make a hard decision, you will have the courage to make it.]] One day, you'll find out there are things only you can do, and then [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre you'll know just how strong and how kind you really are.]] Believe me, it's the truth.
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'''Homura:''' [[EurekaMoment You're right... I know you wouldn't!]] (thinking) ''(thinking)'' [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy I knew it would hurt you more than anything.]] But still... [[ILetGwenStacyDie How could I have been so stupid? I should have stopped you back then.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} I should have stopped you, no matter what I had to do. I shouldn't have let it happen.]] (out loud) ...''(out loud)'' ...Madoka. [[ChronicHeroSyndrome I want you to know that when the time comes and you have to make a hard decision, you will have the courage to make it.]] One day, you'll find out there are things only you can do, and then [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre you'll know just how strong and how kind you really are.]] Believe me, it's the truth.
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'''Homura:''' [[EurekaMoment You're right... I know you wouldn't!]] [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy I knew it would hurt you more than anything.]] But still... [[ILetGwenStacyDie How could I have been so stupid? I should have stopped you back then.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} I should have stopped you, no matter what I had to do. I shouldn't have let it happen.]] ...Madoka. [[ChronicHeroSyndrome I want you to know that when the time comes and you have to make a hard decision, you will have the courage to make it.]] One day, you'll find out there are things only you can do, and then [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre you'll know just how strong and how kind you really are.]] Believe me, it's the truth.
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'''Homura:''' [[EurekaMoment You're right... I know you wouldn't!]] (thinking) [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy I knew it would hurt you more than anything.]] But still... [[ILetGwenStacyDie How could I have been so stupid? I should have stopped you back then.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} I should have stopped you, no matter what I had to do. I shouldn't have let it happen.]] ...]] (out loud) ...Madoka. [[ChronicHeroSyndrome I want you to know that when the time comes and you have to make a hard decision, you will have the courage to make it.]] One day, you'll find out there are things only you can do, and then [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre you'll know just how strong and how kind you really are.]] Believe me, it's the truth.
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'''Homura:''' You're right. But how? How can you be so sure?\\
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'''Homura:''' You're right. You wouldn't? But how? How can you be so sure?\\
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->''"We pray for hope, embrace curses and protect you from the dark. We're magical girls. We traded our souls for our powers in a destiny of battle. A destiny that ends in oblivion. For the only way to escape our despair is to vanish from this world. The end will come for all of us. So we continue our fight and wait for the law of cycles to come and lead us away. In this broken world; doomed to repeat its tragedies and hatred, I dreamed of someone I knew and saw her familiar smile again."''
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->''"We pray for hope, embrace curses and protect you from the dark. We're magical girls. We traded our souls for our powers in and a destiny of battle. A destiny that ends in oblivion. For the only way to escape our despair is to vanish from this world. The end will come for all of us. So we continue our fight and wait for the law Law of cycles Cycles to come and lead us away. In this broken world; world, doomed to repeat its tragedies and hatred, I dreamed of someone I knew and saw her familiar smile again."''
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-->'''The five magical girls''', about to be seen fighting together for the first time.
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->''"We pray for hope, embrace curses and protect you from the dark. We're magical girls. We traded our souls for our powers in a destiny of battle. A destiny that ends in oblivion. For the only way to escape our despair is to vanish from this world. The end will come for all of us. So we continue our fight and wait for the law of cycles to come and lead us away. In this broken world; doomed to repeat it's tragedies and hatred, I dreamed of someone I knew and saw her familiar smile again."''
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->''"We pray for hope, embrace curses and protect you from the dark. We're magical girls. We traded our souls for our powers in a destiny of battle. A destiny that ends in oblivion. For the only way to escape our despair is to vanish from this world. The end will come for all of us. So we continue our fight and wait for the law of cycles to come and lead us away. In this broken world; doomed to repeat it's its tragedies and hatred, I dreamed of someone I knew and saw her familiar smile again."''
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-->-- '''Homura Akemi''', OpeningMonologue.
->''"Puella Magi Holy
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'''Mami:''' No, It's not me!\\
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'''Mami:''' No, It's it's not me!\\
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'''Kyubey:''' So, the two are actually part of the Law of Cycles?\\
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'''Kyubey:''' So, the two of you are actually part of the Law of Cycles?\\
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[[NotSoOmniscientAfterAll What is it that cleanses Soul Gems and makes them vanish? It's something you call the "Law of Cycles."]] Thanks to you, we witnesses some very interesting results. The formation of a closed space by a peculiar principle, as well as derivation and capture of victims into that space. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero I believe this is the power of the "witch" that you had once explained to us in the past.]]''
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[[NotSoOmniscientAfterAll What is it that cleanses Soul Gems magical girls and makes them vanish? It's something you call the "Law of Cycles."]] " Well, we wanted to know what happened to a Soul Gem when it's cut off from this phenomenon.]] Thanks to you, we witnesses witnessed some very interesting results. The formation of a closed space by We observed a peculiar principle, closed space, one that could shape its own reality as well as derivation and capture of victims into that space. lure in trapped victims. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Now, correct me if I'm wrong but I believe this is the power of the that "witch" that concept you had once explained to us in the past.before.]]''
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->'''Homura:''' Incubator, tell me what your real goal is here.\\
'''Kyubey:''' To confirm the existence of the "Law of Cycles" of course, which has been a mere hypothesis until now.\\
'''Homura:''' For what purpose? Satisfying mere curiosity is illogical, as you keep saying. I won't believe that you went to such lengths just to confirm that Madoka exists.\\
'''Kyubey:''' To confirm the existence of the "Law of Cycles" of course, which has been a mere hypothesis until now.\\
'''Homura:''' For what purpose? Satisfying mere curiosity is illogical, as you keep saying. I won't believe that you went to such lengths just to confirm that Madoka exists.\\
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->'''Homura:''' Incubator, tell Tell me what your real goal is here.is, Incubator.\\
'''Kyubey:'''To confirm the existence of the Of course. The "Law of Cycles" of course, which has been a mere hypothesis until now.up to this point. Now we can observe it.\\
'''Homura:''' For what purpose? Satisfyingmere curiosity is illogical, as you keep saying. illogical. You said so yourself. So I won't can't believe that you went you'd go to such lengths just to confirm that Madoka exists.\\
'''Kyubey:'''
'''Homura:''' For what purpose? Satisfying
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'''Homura:''' You intend to control Madoka, don't you?!
->''[[EvilPlan If we could just observe [the phenomenon], we'd be able to interfere with it. And if we could interfere with it, we'd be able to control it. Our research would allow us to conquer the "Law of the Cycle" completely someday.]] [[MotiveRant And then, we could have magical girls turn into witches and collect vast amounts of energy all at once. The phase change between hope and despair, the volume of energy that is created in those emotions, is far beyond anything we had imagined.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} Truly, magical girls hold the key to limitless possibilities.]]''
->''[[EvilPlan If we could just observe [the phenomenon], we'd be able to interfere with it. And if we could interfere with it, we'd be able to control it. Our research would allow us to conquer the "Law of the Cycle" completely someday.]] [[MotiveRant And then, we could have magical girls turn into witches and collect vast amounts of energy all at once. The phase change between hope and despair, the volume of energy that is created in those emotions, is far beyond anything we had imagined.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} Truly, magical girls hold the key to limitless possibilities.]]''
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'''Homura:''' You intend want to control Madoka, don't you?!
->''[[EvilPlan If we couldjust observe [the phenomenon], we'd be able to we could interfere with it. And if we could can interfere with it, we'd be able to we can control it. Our research The information we'd collect from that would allow us to conquer the "Law of the Cycle" completely someday.Cycles" completely.]] [[MotiveRant And then, Then, we could have make magical girls turn into witches and collect vast amounts of energy all at once. The in one go. Your hope and despair are the keys; the phase change between hope and despair, the volume of energy that is created in those emotions, is far beyond anything emotions creates huge amounts of energy, more then we had ever imagined.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} Truly, You magical girls hold are the key gateway to limitless possibilities.]]''
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->''As you are now, you likely wouldn't know this, but you see, I became a magical girl solely to save Madoka. And that holds true even now! If the alternative is revealing Madoka's secret to you, [[YouAreWorthHell I would rather let myself turn into a witch.]] [[DeclarationOfProtection I'll never let you Incubators touch Madoka again!]]\\
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So this is a witch... [[AndIMustScream My emotions have all come back to haunt me. I can't remember anything but glimmers of light and regret.]] Ah, so this is my... despair. Madoka! Thank you for coming all the way to a place like this. I'm sorry I couldn't even say goodbye to you at the end.''
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So this is being a witch... [[AndIMustScream My emotions have all come back to haunt me. me again. I can't remember anything but anymore. Just glimmers of light and regret.]] Ah, so this Yes. This is my... it. My despair. Madoka! Thank I just want to say thank you for coming all the way here, to a place like this. I'm sorry this god-awful place. I couldn't can't even say goodbye to you at in the end.end. I'm sorry.''
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->'''Kyubey:''' W-What W-W-What are you?\\
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'''Sayaka:''' [[CameBackStrong Thanks to the Law of Cycles, me and her are working hard to free the world from that destiny once and for all.]]\\
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'''Sayaka:''' [[CameBackStrong Thanks to the Law of Cycles, me and her are working hard to free the world from that destiny once and for all.]]\\
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'''Kyubey:''' So...So, the two are actually part of the Law of Cycles?\\
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'''Kyoko:''' [[CallBack I had a horrible dream about you last night. You were...dead. But it wasn't a dream, it was real, wasn't it? This right here, us fighting side by side, this is the dream, ain't it?]]\\
'''Sayaka:''' It'd be sad if it were...but it's not like that. Not really. But I thought I didn't have any regrets when I died. But the truth is, when I found out about this assignment, I jumped at the chance to come back...'cause in the end, I did have one regret. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming You. I missed you.]]\\
'''Sayaka:''' It'd be sad if it were...but it's not like that. Not really. But I thought I didn't have any regrets when I died. But the truth is, when I found out about this assignment, I jumped at the chance to come back...'cause in the end, I did have one regret. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming You. I missed you.]]\\
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'''Kyoko:''' [[CallBack I had a horrible dream about you last night. You were...dead. But it wasn't a dream, it was real, wasn't it? This right here, us fighting side by side, side... this is the dream, ain't it?]]\\
'''Sayaka:''' It'd be sad if it were... but it's not like that. Not really. But I thought I didn't have any regrets when I died. But the truth is, when I found out about this assignment, I jumped at the chance to come back... 'cause in the end, I did have one regret. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming You. I missed you.]]\\
'''Sayaka:''' It'd be sad if it were... but it's not like that. Not really. But I thought I didn't have any regrets when I died. But the truth is, when I found out about this assignment, I jumped at the chance to come back... 'cause in the end, I did have one regret. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming You. I missed you.]]\\
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'''Homura:''' Uh-uh. I'm fine. I'm not afraid. I'm ready.
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'''Homura:''' Uh-uh. Uh-uh, I'm fine. I'm not afraid. I'm ready.
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'''Kyoko:''' Is that...Madoka Kaname?\\
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'''Kyoko:''' Is that... Madoka Kaname?\\
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'''Madoka:''' You waited for me all this time. I'm sorry it took so long...but I'm here now.\\
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'''Madoka:''' You waited for me all this time. I'm sorry it took so long...long but I'm here now.\\
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'''Homura:''' You don't know how long...[[SlasherSmile I've waited for this.]]\\
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'''Homura:''' You don't know how long... [[SlasherSmile I've waited for this.]]\\
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'''Homura:''' [[WhamLine Now...I've got you.]]\\
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'''Homura:''' [[WhamLine Now... I've got you.]]\\
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[[BishonenLine You're right. I'm not a magical girl or a witch. Madoka is as sacred as a god, and I pulled her from the heaven.]] [[HumanoidAbomination So if you want to know what I've become,]] [[SatanicArchetype I suppose, if anything, you could call me a demon now.]]''
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[[BishonenLine You're right. I'm not a magical girl or a witch. Madoka is as sacred as a god, and I pulled her from the heaven.]] [[HumanoidAbomination So if you want to know what I've become,]] [[SatanicArchetype I suppose, if anything, you could call me a demon now.]]''
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->'''Kyubey:''' This makes it very clear. [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone Trying to make use of human emotion is just too dangerous.]] [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere We could never hope to control something whose final form is so irrational.]]\\
'''Homura:''' Is that so? [[DemotedToDragon But to handle all the curses that have spread around our world,]] [[LaserGuidedKarma you Incubators are now necessary for us.]] [[WhosLaughingNow So you'll be staying to help...]] [[KickTheSonOfABitch In-cu-ba-tor.]]\\
'''Homura:''' Is that so? [[DemotedToDragon But to handle all the curses that have spread around our world,]] [[LaserGuidedKarma you Incubators are now necessary for us.]] [[WhosLaughingNow So you'll be staying to help...]] [[KickTheSonOfABitch In-cu-ba-tor.]]\\
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->'''Kyubey:''' This makes it very clear. There's no doubt now. [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone Trying to make use of put human emotion emotions to use is just too dangerous.dangerous for us.]] [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere We could never hope to control something whose final form is so irrational.]]\\
'''Homura:''' Is that so? [[DemotedToDragonBut to handle all the The curses that have spread around across our world,]] world still have to be dealt with.]] [[LaserGuidedKarma And you Incubators are now have become necessary for us.that task.]] [[WhosLaughingNow So you'll be staying You're going to stay and help...]] [[KickTheSonOfABitch In-cu-ba-tor.]]\\
'''Homura:''' Is that so? [[DemotedToDragon
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'''Sayaka:''' You've broken off a part of the Law of the Cycle! The power of salvation that was the hope of all the magical girls!\\
'''Homura:''' All I took was a tiny piece of it. Just the records of the person that Madoka was before she ceased to exist. [[BackFromTheDead Somehow, all of you wound up being pulled in as well, and it seems you can't return to wherever you were before.]]\\
'''Sayaka:''' What right do you have to do all of this?\\
'''Homura:''' I am now an existence known as "Evil". A being who disrupts providence and acts as an agitator of this world. It's quite natural that I upset the laws set down by a god, don't you think?\\
'''Sayaka:''' Do you intend to destroy this universe?\\
'''Homura:''' After all the wraiths have been destroyed, perhaps I will. When that time comes, I suppose I can be your enemy. But do you think you'll be able to stand against me, Sayaka Miki? [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Even now, your memories are gradually changing, are they not?]]\\
'''Homura:''' All I took was a tiny piece of it. Just the records of the person that Madoka was before she ceased to exist. [[BackFromTheDead Somehow, all of you wound up being pulled in as well, and it seems you can't return to wherever you were before.]]\\
'''Sayaka:''' What right do you have to do all of this?\\
'''Homura:''' I am now an existence known as "Evil". A being who disrupts providence and acts as an agitator of this world. It's quite natural that I upset the laws set down by a god, don't you think?\\
'''Sayaka:''' Do you intend to destroy this universe?\\
'''Homura:''' After all the wraiths have been destroyed, perhaps I will. When that time comes, I suppose I can be your enemy. But do you think you'll be able to stand against me, Sayaka Miki? [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Even now, your memories are gradually changing, are they not?]]\\
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'''Sayaka:''' You've broken You broke off a part piece of the Law of Cycles! It's the Cycle! The power of only salvation that was the hope of all the us magical girls!\\
girls had!\\
'''Homura:'''All I only took was a tiny sliver of it, that's all. The piece of it. Just the records of the person that used to be Madoka was before she ceased to exist. [[BackFromTheDead Somehow, For some reason, you were all of you wound up being pulled in as well, with her and it seems now, you can't return to wherever where you were before.came from either.]]\\
'''Sayaka:'''What You have no right do you have to do all of this?\\
screw everything up like this!\\
'''Homura:'''I am now I'm an existence known as "Evil". A being who disrupts providence called "Evil" now. And if evil is supposed to disrupt the divine and acts as an agitator be a force of this world. It's quite chaos, it's only natural that I for me to upset the laws set down by of a god, don't you think?\\
god.\\
'''Sayaka:'''Do Oh yeah? What'll you intend to destroy this universe?\\
do next? Destroy everything?\\
'''Homura:''' After all the wraiths have beendestroyed, wiped out, perhaps I will. When that time day comes, I suppose I can be your enemy. But do enemy then. The question is, will you think you'll be able to stand up against me, Sayaka Miki? me? [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Even now, your memories are gradually changing, are they not?]]\\You're having a hard time remembering things, aren't you?]]\\
'''Homura:'''
'''Sayaka:'''
'''Homura:'''
'''Sayaka:'''
'''Homura:''' After all the wraiths have been
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'''Sayaka:''' [[DefiantToTheEnd Even it that happens, the one thing I'll never forget is that you, Homura Akemi, are a demon!]]\\
'''Homura:''' We should pretend to be friendly in daily life. If you're confrontational all the time, even she may dislike you.
->''[[WistfulAmnesia I didn't realize how happy it would make me]] [[VillainHasAPoint to be able to say good morning to [Hitomi and Kyousuke] again.]]''
'''Homura:''' We should pretend to be friendly in daily life. If you're confrontational all the time, even she may dislike you.
->''[[WistfulAmnesia I didn't realize how happy it would make me]] [[VillainHasAPoint to be able to say good morning to [Hitomi and Kyousuke] again.]]''
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'''Sayaka:''' [[DefiantToTheEnd Even it that happens, the if I do, there's one thing I'll never forget is that you, I won't forget: You, Homura Akemi, are a demon!]]\\
'''Homura:''' We should pretend to befriendly in daily life. on good terms. If you're confrontational all the time, even she may dislike always attacking me, Madoka might end up hating you.
->''[[WistfulAmnesia Yeah, I'm fine, it's just... Ididn't realize how happy it would make me]] don't know, I guess when I saw you guys]] [[VillainHasAPoint to be able to and heard you both say good morning to [Hitomi and Kyousuke] again.again, I guess I got super happy, that's all.]]''
'''Homura:''' We should pretend to be
->''[[WistfulAmnesia Yeah, I'm fine, it's just... I
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->''Um... It's nice to meet you. My name is Madoka Kaname. Mom's— My mother's company assigned her to work overseas, so my whole family lived in the U.S. [[RealitySubtext for three years.]] We finally came back to Mitakihara City last week, so I'll be in class with you starting today. I, um... it's a pleasure to meet you!''
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->''Um... My name is Madoka Kaname. It's nice to meet you. My name is Madoka Kaname. Mom's— My mother's company assigned her Ma, Mom, my... I'm sorry, I mean, my mother, she was transferred to work overseas, so my whole family lived in the U.S. so we had to move there. We lived there [[RealitySubtext for three years.]] We finally came years]] and just moved back to Mitakihara City last week, so and now that we're back, I'll be in class with you starting school here today. I, um... And, uh, it's... it's a pleasure nice to meet you!''
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->'''Homura:''' How does it feel to be back after so long?\\
'''Madoka:''' Um, well, everything's so familiar and nostalgic. But also kind of different somehow. It's a strange feeling.\\
'''Homura:''' That's no surprise. It has been three years, after all.\\
'''Madoka:''' No... [[WistfulAmnesia it actually seems like absolutely nothing has changed.]] In fact, if I had to pick the one thing that had changed, [[AmnesiacGod I'd say it was me.]] That's right... I should have a different form. A different role... So why...?\\
'''Madoka:''' Um, well, everything's so familiar and nostalgic. But also kind of different somehow. It's a strange feeling.\\
'''Homura:''' That's no surprise. It has been three years, after all.\\
'''Madoka:''' No... [[WistfulAmnesia it actually seems like absolutely nothing has changed.]] In fact, if I had to pick the one thing that had changed, [[AmnesiacGod I'd say it was me.]] That's right... I should have a different form. A different role... So why...?\\
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->'''Homura:''' How does it feel to be back after so long?\\
again?\\
'''Madoka:'''Um, Oh, well, everything's so familiar and nostalgic. But also kind of different somehow. It's a strange feeling.I guess everything feels familiar? And, at the same time, it's different. It feels strange.\\
'''Homura:'''That's no surprise. It has I'm not surprised. It's been three years, after all.years.\\
'''Madoka:''' No... [[WistfulAmnesia itactually seems feels like absolutely nothing has changed.nothing's changed at all.]] In fact, if I had to pick the one thing that had changed, anything's changed around here, [[AmnesiacGod I'd say it was it's me.]] That's right...Yeah. It ''is'' me... I should have a different form. A different role...purpose here... So why...?\\
'''Madoka:'''
'''Homura:'''
'''Madoka:''' No... [[WistfulAmnesia it
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'''Homura:''' Madoka Kaname. Do you treasure this world? [[OrderVersusChaos Do you consider stability and order more important than desire?]]\\
'''Madoka:''' Well, I... Um... I-I do treasure it. I guess I do think it's kind of bad to break rules because you feel like it.\\
'''Homura:''' I see... [[HeelRealization Then I suppose someday, you will become my enemy as well.]] [[IDidWhatIHadToDo But I don't care.]]\\
'''Madoka:''' Well, I... Um... I-I do treasure it. I guess I do think it's kind of bad to break rules because you feel like it.\\
'''Homura:''' I see... [[HeelRealization Then I suppose someday, you will become my enemy as well.]] [[IDidWhatIHadToDo But I don't care.]]\\
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'''Homura:''' Madoka Kaname. Do you treasure this world? the world you live in? [[OrderVersusChaos Do Or would you consider stability and order more important than desire?]]\\
break its laws to follow your heart?]]\\
'''Madoka:''' Well,I... Um... I-I I, I, uh... I don't... I, I mean yes. I do treasure it. this world. But I guess I do don't think it's kind of bad to a person should go and break the rules just because you they feel like it.\\
'''Homura:''' I see... [[HeelRealizationThen Well, then, I suppose someday, suppose, one day, you will become also be my enemy as well.enemy.]] [[IDidWhatIHadToDo But It's fine. I don't care.]]\\
'''Madoka:''' Well,
'''Homura:''' I see... [[HeelRealization
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'''Homura:''' [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy Because even then, I will continue to wish for a world in which you will be happy.]]\\
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'''Homura:''' [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy Because even then, I will continue to wish I'll keep wishing for a world in which where you will can be happy.]]\\
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'''Homura:''' [[TragicVillain They really do look better]] [[CryForTheDevil on you after all.]]
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'''Homura:''' [[TragicVillain I knew it. They really do look better]] always]] [[CryForTheDevil did look better on you after all.you.]]
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'''Homura:''' In my dream, [[AbstractApotheosis you went someplace far away]] [[UnreliableExpositor and it was so far that I wasn't gonna be able to see you again.]] [[RetGone And everyone forgot about you.]] [[RippleEffectProofMemory No one remembered you except for me! I was the only one in the world who could!]] I was so lonely... and sad... but no one understood how I felt. I started to think all my memories of you were just things I made up. I thought I was going crazy.\\
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'''Homura:''' In my dream, [[AbstractApotheosis you went someplace far away]] [[UnreliableExpositor and it was so far that far, I wasn't gonna be able to see you again.]] [[RetGone And everyone forgot about you.]] [[RippleEffectProofMemory No one remembered you except for me! I was the only one in the world who could!]] I was so lonely... and sad... but no one understood how I felt. I started to think all my memories of you were just things I made up. I thought I was going crazy.\\
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'''Madoka:''' You know how wimpy I am. If I did anything to make someone as strong as you cry like this, it'd break my heart.\\
'''Homura:''' It'd break your heart... Leaving us behind would hurt you that much?\\
'''Madoka:''' That's right. You, Sayaka... Mami, Kyoko... my dad and mom and Tatsuya... and even Hitomi and everyone in our class... I would never want to go somewhere I could never see anyone again. Even if there were no other choice, [[HeroicSelfDeprecation I know I'd never have the courage to do something like that.]]\\
'''Homura:''' [[EurekaMoment Right... You're right.]] [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy Those are your honest feelings.]] And yet, I... [[ILetGwenStacyDie How could I have made such a stupid mistake? I shouldn't have allowed that to happen.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} No matter what I would've had to do, I should have stopped you back then.]] Madoka. [[ChronicHeroSyndrome You should know that even when you know how much it would hurt you, you do have the courage to make that hard decision.]] When you learn there is something that only you can do, [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre you're far kinder and stronger than you yourself know.]] Trust me, I know this.
->''In other words, this means I'm not even a magical girl anymore? Why? Why? Why would I end up as...? When did it even happen? [[TomatoInTheMirror When did I become a witch?!]]''
'''Homura:''' It'd break your heart... Leaving us behind would hurt you that much?\\
'''Madoka:''' That's right. You, Sayaka... Mami, Kyoko... my dad and mom and Tatsuya... and even Hitomi and everyone in our class... I would never want to go somewhere I could never see anyone again. Even if there were no other choice, [[HeroicSelfDeprecation I know I'd never have the courage to do something like that.]]\\
'''Homura:''' [[EurekaMoment Right... You're right.]] [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy Those are your honest feelings.]] And yet, I... [[ILetGwenStacyDie How could I have made such a stupid mistake? I shouldn't have allowed that to happen.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} No matter what I would've had to do, I should have stopped you back then.]] Madoka. [[ChronicHeroSyndrome You should know that even when you know how much it would hurt you, you do have the courage to make that hard decision.]] When you learn there is something that only you can do, [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre you're far kinder and stronger than you yourself know.]] Trust me, I know this.
->''In other words, this means I'm not even a magical girl anymore? Why? Why? Why would I end up as...? When did it even happen? [[TomatoInTheMirror When did I become a witch?!]]''
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'''Madoka:''' You know how wimpy I am. If I did anything to that'd make someone as strong as you cry like this, it'd it would break my heart.\\
'''Homura:'''It'd It would break your heart... Leaving us behind would hurt you that much?\\
'''Madoka:'''That's right. You, Of course it would. I'd hate to leave you and Sayaka... Mami, or Mami and Kyoko... or my mom and dad and mom and Tatsuya... and even Hitomi and everyone in all our class... friends from class too... I would never want to wouldn't go somewhere if I could never couldn't see anyone you guys again. Even if there were no other choice, [[HeroicSelfDeprecation I know I'd never I don't have the courage to do something like that.that, even if I didn't have a choice.]]\\
'''Homura:''' [[EurekaMomentRight... You're right.]] right... I know you wouldn't!]] [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy Those are your honest feelings.I knew it would hurt you more than anything.]] And yet, I... But still... [[ILetGwenStacyDie How could I have made such a stupid mistake? I shouldn't have allowed that to happen.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} No matter what I would've had to do, been so stupid? I should have stopped you back then.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} I should have stopped you, no matter what I had to do. I shouldn't have let it happen.]] ...Madoka. [[ChronicHeroSyndrome You should I want you to know that even when the time comes and you know how much it would hurt you, have to make a hard decision, you do will have the courage to make that hard decision.it.]] When you learn One day, you'll find out there is something that are things only you can do, and then [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre you're far kinder and stronger than you yourself know.]] Trust me, I you'll know this.
->''In other words, this meansjust how strong and how kind you really are.]] Believe me, it's the truth.
->''It's true... I'm noteven a magical girl anymore? Why? anymore. How could this happen? How? Why? Why would I end up as...? as this? When did it even happen? [[TomatoInTheMirror When did I become a witch?!]]''
'''Homura:'''
'''Madoka:'''
'''Homura:''' [[EurekaMoment
->''In other words, this means
->''It's true... I'm not
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->''I'm sure you didn't really want to know the truth. And yet, you couldn't bear not to search for it. It just goes to show how illogical human curiosity is.\\
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->''I'm sure you didn't really want to know the truth. And yet, you couldn't bear not to search for it. It just goes to show how illogical human it if you didn't seek it out. Human curiosity is.is quite fascinating... and illogical.\\
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[[NotSoOmniscientAfterAll We wanted to know what would happen to a Soul Gem when it was cut off from the phenomenon that you magical girls call the "Law of the Cycle."]] You showed us some very interesting results. The formation of a closed space by a peculiar principle, as well as derivation and capture of victims into that space. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero I believe this is the power of the "witch" that you had once explained to us in the past.]]''
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[[NotSoOmniscientAfterAll We wanted to know what would happen to a What is it that cleanses Soul Gem when it was cut off from the phenomenon that Gems and makes them vanish? It's something you magical girls call the "Law of the Cycle.Cycles."]] You showed us Thanks to you, we witnesses some very interesting results. The formation of a closed space by a peculiar principle, as well as derivation and capture of victims into that space. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero I believe this is the power of the "witch" that you had once explained to us in the past.]]''
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'''Kyubey:''' To confirm the existence of the "Law of the Cycle" of course, which has been a mere hypothesis until now.\\
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'''Kyubey:''' To confirm the existence of the "Law of the Cycle" Cycles" of course, which has been a mere hypothesis until now.\\
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[[ActorAllusion I'm just a]] [[Anime/FreshPrettyCure little, old, raspberry.]]\\
That big, round, cake's too red, don't you know?\\
That big, round, cake's too red, don't you know?\\
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[[ActorAllusion I'm just a]] [[Anime/FreshPrettyCure little, old, old raspberry.]]\\
That big,round, round cake's too red, don't you know?\\
That big,
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That big round cake loves Bebe, can't you see?\\
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That big big, round cake loves Bebe, can't you see?\\
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'''Sayaka:''' You'll what, kill her? Why? 'Cause she's a witch?\\
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'''Sayaka:''' You'll what, kill her? her?\\
'''Homura:''' *start*\\
'''Sayaka:''' Why? 'Cause she's a witch?\\
'''Homura:''' *start*\\
'''Sayaka:''' Why? 'Cause she's a witch?\\
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'''Sayaka:''' Like you said, they're what we become. [[ContinuityNod Go figure, I sympathize with them.]]
->'''Homura:''' There are three people here who should not be able to exist. The first is the witch who created the labyrinth. The second is Bebe, who remains in the form of a witch. And the third, you, who remembers the existence of witches. Who are you? Are you Sayaka Miki?\\
'''Sayaka:''' You make me sad. I'm the same person you've always known, transfer student.\\
->'''Homura:''' There are three people here who should not be able to exist. The first is the witch who created the labyrinth. The second is Bebe, who remains in the form of a witch. And the third, you, who remembers the existence of witches. Who are you? Are you Sayaka Miki?\\
'''Sayaka:''' You make me sad. I'm the same person you've always known, transfer student.\\
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'''Sayaka:''' Like you said, they're what we become. [[ContinuityNod Go figure, I figure I'd sympathize with them.]]
->'''Homura:''' There are three peoplehere in this world who should not be able to exist. don't belong in it. The first one is the witch who created made the labyrinth. The second one is Bebe, who remains in the form of looks just like a witch. And the third, third one...is you, who remembers the existence of witches. Who are you? Are you really Sayaka Miki?\\
'''Sayaka:'''You make me sad. Oh come on. *chuckle* I'm the same person old Sayaka you've always known, transfer student.\\
->'''Homura:''' There are three people
'''Sayaka:'''
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->'''Homura:''' This ridiculous farce is just wasting the sacrifice that Madoka made for us. [[ThisIsUnforgivable I won't allow it.]]\\
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->'''Homura:''' This ridiculous farce is just wasting the sacrifice that Madoka made for us. [[ThisIsUnforgivable And I won't allow it.]]\\
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->'''Homura:''' [[IHaveThisFriend You see, I had a really scary dream.]]\\
'''Madoka:''' A dream?\\
'''Homura:''' In it, [[AbstractApotheosis you had gone to a place so far away]] [[UnreliableExpositor that I had no chance of seeing you again.]] [[RetGone And everyone else in the world forgot all about you.]] [[RippleEffectProofMemory I was the only one in the whole wide world who could remember you!]] I was so lonely and sad... but no one could understand how I felt. Surrounded by that, I started thinking my memories of you were things I'd just made up. And I began doubting myself.\\
'''Madoka:''' That's a terrible dream, all right. But it's okay now. [[DramaticIrony Because I'd never go alone to somewhere so far away that I couldn't say any of you again.]]\\
'''Homura:''' Why? How can you be so sure?\\
'''Madoka:''' You know how wimpy I am. And because I could never bear to do something that would make someone as strong as you cry like this.\\
'''Homura:''' Then that's something that would hurt you so much you couldn't bear it?\\
'''Madoka:''' A dream?\\
'''Homura:''' In it, [[AbstractApotheosis you had gone to a place so far away]] [[UnreliableExpositor that I had no chance of seeing you again.]] [[RetGone And everyone else in the world forgot all about you.]] [[RippleEffectProofMemory I was the only one in the whole wide world who could remember you!]] I was so lonely and sad... but no one could understand how I felt. Surrounded by that, I started thinking my memories of you were things I'd just made up. And I began doubting myself.\\
'''Madoka:''' That's a terrible dream, all right. But it's okay now. [[DramaticIrony Because I'd never go alone to somewhere so far away that I couldn't say any of you again.]]\\
'''Homura:''' Why? How can you be so sure?\\
'''Madoka:''' You know how wimpy I am. And because I could never bear to do something that would make someone as strong as you cry like this.\\
'''Homura:''' Then that's something that would hurt you so much you couldn't bear it?\\
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->'''Homura:''' [[IHaveThisFriend You see, I had a really scary dream.dream and it scared me.]]\\
'''Madoka:'''A dream?\\
Why?\\
'''Homura:''' Init, my dream, [[AbstractApotheosis you had gone to a place so went someplace far away]] [[UnreliableExpositor and it was so far that I had no chance of seeing wasn't gonna be able to see you again.]] [[RetGone And everyone else in the world forgot all about you.]] [[RippleEffectProofMemory No one remembered you except for me! I was the only one in the whole wide world who could remember you!]] could!]] I was so lonely lonely... and sad... but no one could understand understood how I felt. Surrounded by that, I started thinking to think all my memories of you were just things I'd just I made up. And I began doubting myself.thought I was going crazy.\\
'''Madoka:'''That's a terrible dream, all You're right. That dream does sound awful. But it's okay now. now, really. [[DramaticIrony Because I'd never go alone to somewhere I'm not going anywhere, especially if it's so far away that away, I couldn't say any of see you again.]]\\
again. I'd never do something like that!]]\\
'''Homura:'''Why? You're right. But how? How can you be so sure?\\
'''Madoka:''' You know how wimpy I am.And because If I could never bear did anything to do something that would make someone as strong as you cry like this.this, it'd break my heart.\\
'''Homura:'''Then that's something that It'd break your heart... Leaving us behind would hurt you so much you couldn't bear it?\\that much?\\
'''Madoka:'''
'''Homura:''' In
'''Madoka:'''
'''Homura:'''
'''Madoka:''' You know how wimpy I am.
'''Homura:'''
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'''Kyoko:''' No, it's not me!\\
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'''Kyoko:''' No, it's not me!\\
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'''All:''' So why is the dream so bitter all late?\\
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'''All:''' So why is the dream so bitter all of late?\\
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->'''Mami:''' If you don't mind your manners, you'll turn into cheese!\\
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->'''Mami:''' If you don't mind Mind your manners, you'll manners at the table or you're going to turn into cheese!\\
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->''[[TheGlassesComeOff Am I the only one who remembers?]] Yes... I've seen this kind of trap before. [[LotusEaterMachine A closed-off world of illusion. A maze without exit, into which the prey is lured and led astray.]] There's no doubt. [[WhamLine This is a witch's labyrinth.]]''
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->''[[TheGlassesComeOff Am I the only one who remembers?]] Yes... I've I ''have'' seen this kind of trap before. [[LotusEaterMachine A closed-off world of self-contained illusion. A maze without with no exit, into which the where prey is lured and led astray.]] There's no doubt. doubt about it. [[WhamLine This is a witch's labyrinth.]]''
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->'''Mami:''' What is this? What on earth...?!\\
'''Nagisa:''' Let me explain it from my own lips.\\
'''Mami:''' Who... Bebe?!\\
'''[[BreakoutCharacter Nagisa]]:''' [[ObfuscatingStupidity I'm sorry I didn't tell you until now.]] But I need you to calm down and listen to me.
->''Gonna run back into your own little time again? That's a bad habit of yours. You rely too much on that magic.''
'''Nagisa:''' Let me explain it from my own lips.\\
'''Mami:''' Who... Bebe?!\\
'''[[BreakoutCharacter Nagisa]]:''' [[ObfuscatingStupidity I'm sorry I didn't tell you until now.]] But I need you to calm down and listen to me.
->''Gonna run back into your own little time again? That's a bad habit of yours. You rely too much on that magic.''
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->'''Mami:''' What is this? What on earth...?!\\
What's going on?\\
'''Nagisa:'''Let me explain it from my own lips.Please don't be mad. I can explain.\\
'''Mami:'''Who... Wait, who are you? ...Bebe?!\\
'''[[BreakoutCharacter Nagisa]]:''' [[ObfuscatingStupidity I'm sorry I didn'ttell you until say anything 'til now.]] But I need Mami, promise you won't get mad about what I'm going to calm down and listen to me.
->''Gonna runtell you.
->''Running back into your own little timeagain? again, huh? That's a bad habit of yours. You rely too much count on that magic.trick too much.''
'''Nagisa:'''
'''Mami:'''
'''[[BreakoutCharacter Nagisa]]:''' [[ObfuscatingStupidity I'm sorry I didn't
->''Gonna run
->''Running back into your own little time
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->'''Sayaka:''' When you find the witch who created this barrier, what will you do with her?\\
'''Homura:''' Well, that... should be obvious.\\
'''Sayaka:''' You'll vanquish her? Just because she's a witch?\\
'''Homura:''' What are you trying to say?\\
'''Sayaka:''' Tell me, is this really so bad? We don't have to fight anymore. We can all live, working together. [[{{Foreshadowing}} Is the heart that wished for that so sinful that it needs to be destroyed?]]\\
'''Homura:''' Are you siding with a witch?\\
'''Sayaka:''' They are the final form of us magical girls, as you said. [[ContinuityNod I can't help but sympathize.]]
'''Homura:''' Well, that... should be obvious.\\
'''Sayaka:''' You'll vanquish her? Just because she's a witch?\\
'''Homura:''' What are you trying to say?\\
'''Sayaka:''' Tell me, is this really so bad? We don't have to fight anymore. We can all live, working together. [[{{Foreshadowing}} Is the heart that wished for that so sinful that it needs to be destroyed?]]\\
'''Homura:''' Are you siding with a witch?\\
'''Sayaka:''' They are the final form of us magical girls, as you said. [[ContinuityNod I can't help but sympathize.]]
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->'''Sayaka:''' When you find the witch who created made this barrier, what will you labyrinth, wotcha gonna do with her?\\
her, Homura?\\
'''Homura:''' Well,that... should be obvious.obviously... I'll...\\
'''Sayaka:''' You'llvanquish what, kill her? Just because Why? 'Cause she's a witch?\\
'''Homura:''' What are youtrying to say?\\
getting at?\\
'''Sayaka:'''Tell me, is *chuckle* Is this really so bad? I mean, really? We don't have to fight anymore. kill anyone. We can all live, just keep working together. together and having fun. *chuckle* [[{{Foreshadowing}} Is the heart that person who wished for a life like that so sinful evil that it needs she deserves to be destroyed?]]\\
die?]]\\
'''Homura:''' *gasp* Hold on. Are you siding with a witch?\\
'''Sayaka:'''They are the final form of us magical girls, as Like you said. said, they're what we become. [[ContinuityNod Go figure, I can't help but sympathize.sympathize with them.]]
'''Homura:''' Well,
'''Sayaka:''' You'll
'''Homura:''' What are you
'''Sayaka:'''
'''Homura:''' *gasp* Hold on. Are you siding with a witch?\\
'''Sayaka:'''
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'''Homura:''' [[FaceHeelTurn I has to be this way. I'm never going to let you go again, Madoka.]]
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'''Homura:''' [[FaceHeelTurn I It has to be this way. I'm never going to let you go again, Madoka.]]
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'''Nagisa:''' We were once bringers of hope, who despaired and spread our curses.\\
'''Sayaka:''' [[CameBackStrong Now we are those guided by the Law of the Cycle to break free from the chains of destiny binding this world.]]\\
'''Sayaka:''' [[CameBackStrong Now we are those guided by the Law of the Cycle to break free from the chains of destiny binding this world.]]\\
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'''Nagisa:''' We were Sayaka and I once bringers of hope, who despaired brought hope to the world but we succumbed to despair and spread our curses.\\
'''Sayaka:''' [[CameBackStrongNow we are those guided by Thanks to the Law of the Cycle Cycles, me and her are working hard to break free the world from the chains of that destiny binding this world.once and for all.]]\\
'''Sayaka:''' [[CameBackStrong
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'''Kyubey:''' So you two were also part of the Law of the Cycle?\\
'''Sayaka:''' [[OurAngelsAreDifferent Well, in other words, we're something like her private secretaries, you know?]]\\
'''Sayaka:''' [[OurAngelsAreDifferent Well, in other words, we're something like her private secretaries, you know?]]\\
to:
'''Kyubey:''' So you So...the two were also are actually part of the Law of the Cycle?\\
Cycles?\\
'''Sayaka:''' [[OurAngelsAreDifferentWell, in other words, we're something No, not exactly. We're more like her private secretaries, you know?]]\\secretaries.]]\\
'''Sayaka:''' [[OurAngelsAreDifferent
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'''Kyoko:''' [[CallBack I had a sickening dream. A dream where you were dead. But you're saying that that was real and this right here, where we're fighting side by side, this is the dream, Sayaka?]]\\
'''Sayaka:''' This isn't something quite as sad as just a dream. I thought I didn't have any regrets when I died. But the reason I ended up taking this assignment and coming back was because I actually do have one regret. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming The fact that I left you behind.]]\\
'''Nagisa:''' [[MomentKiller I just wanted to eat cheese one more time!]]\\
'''Sayaka:''' [[LampshadeHanging Hey, you! Don't ruin the mood!]]\\
'''Sayaka:''' This isn't something quite as sad as just a dream. I thought I didn't have any regrets when I died. But the reason I ended up taking this assignment and coming back was because I actually do have one regret. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming The fact that I left you behind.]]\\
'''Nagisa:''' [[MomentKiller I just wanted to eat cheese one more time!]]\\
'''Sayaka:''' [[LampshadeHanging Hey, you! Don't ruin the mood!]]\\
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'''Kyoko:''' [[CallBack I had a sickening dream. A horrible dream where about you were last night. You were...dead. But you're saying that that it wasn't a dream, it was real and this real, wasn't it? This right here, where we're us fighting side by side, this is the dream, Sayaka?]]\\
ain't it?]]\\
'''Sayaka:'''This isn't something quite as It'd be sad as just a dream. if it were...but it's not like that. Not really. But I thought I didn't have any regrets when I died. But the reason truth is, when I ended up taking found out about this assignment and coming back was because assignment, I actually do jumped at the chance to come back...'cause in the end, I did have one regret. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming The fact that You. I left you behind.missed you.]]\\
'''Nagisa:''' [[MomentKiller Seriously? Ijust came back 'cause I wanted to eat cheese one more time!]]\\
'''Sayaka:''' [[LampshadeHangingHey, you! Don't ruin *groan* Thanks a lot! Way to kill the mood!]]\\
'''Sayaka:'''
'''Nagisa:''' [[MomentKiller Seriously? I
'''Sayaka:''' [[LampshadeHanging
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'''Madoka:''' That's no good, Homura. I told you that you shouldn't go off by yourself.\\
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'''Madoka:''' That's no good, Please, Homura. Stop. I told you that you; you shouldn't go off by yourself.\\
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'''Madoka:''' No matter what happens, you will always be you, Homura. And I would never abandon you. So don't give up.\\
'''Homura:''' I'm sorry... I'm so spineless... I wanted to see you one more time. And if I had to go so far as to betray that wish... [[{{Foreshadowing}} Yes, I knew I could shoulder any sin. No matter what I became, I knew I'd be fine with it. As long as I could have you by my side.]]\\
'''Madoka:''' [[DramaticallyMissingThePoint Now, Homura. Together...]]\\
'''Homura:''' Yes...\\
'''Homura:''' I'm sorry... I'm so spineless... I wanted to see you one more time. And if I had to go so far as to betray that wish... [[{{Foreshadowing}} Yes, I knew I could shoulder any sin. No matter what I became, I knew I'd be fine with it. As long as I could have you by my side.]]\\
'''Madoka:''' [[DramaticallyMissingThePoint Now, Homura. Together...]]\\
'''Homura:''' Yes...\\
to:
'''Madoka:''' No matter what happens, you will always be Whatever happens to you, Homura.good or bad, you're still you. And I would never abandon you. So don't give up.\\
Have faith!\\
'''Homura:''' I'm sorry... I'm sospineless... weak... I just wanted to see you one more time. And if back with me. I didn't care what I had to go so far as to betray that wish... do... [[{{Foreshadowing}} Yes, I knew I could shoulder any sin. No matter what I became, I knew I'd be fine with it. commit the worst sins for one more chance. Even if it turned me into a monster, it wouldn't matter. As long as I could have you by my side.back.]]\\
'''Madoka:''' [[DramaticallyMissingThePointNow, Homura. Together...]]\\
Let's end this together. You ready?]]\\
'''Homura:'''Yes...Uh-huh...\\
'''Homura:''' I'm sorry... I'm so
'''Madoka:''' [[DramaticallyMissingThePoint
'''Homura:'''
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'''Madoka:''' Homura, you aren't afraid?\\
'''Homura:''' No. I'm fine. I won't hesitate any longer.
->''[[SpeakInUnison I just]] [[ThisCannotBe don't]] [[AscendedMeme understand at all!]]''
'''Homura:''' No. I'm fine. I won't hesitate any longer.
->''[[SpeakInUnison I just]] [[ThisCannotBe don't]] [[AscendedMeme understand at all!]]''
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'''Madoka:''' Homura, you aren't afraid?\\
You're not scared, are you?\\
'''Homura:'''No.Uh-uh. I'm fine. I won't hesitate any longer.
I'm not afraid. I'm ready.
->''[[SpeakInUnisonI just]] This]] [[ThisCannotBe don't]] is so]] [[AscendedMeme understand at all!]]''illogical!]]''
'''Homura:'''
->''[[SpeakInUnison
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->'''Kyoko:''' Are they gone now? Sayaka, and your Bebe too?\\
'''Mami:''' No. They're finally taking her away with them.\\
'''Kyoko:''' Is that Madoka Kaname?\\
'''Mami:''' Yes. [[DiedHappilyEverAfter The Law of the Cycle, which will one day lead us away too.]]\\
'''Mami:''' No. They're finally taking her away with them.\\
'''Kyoko:''' Is that Madoka Kaname?\\
'''Mami:''' Yes. [[DiedHappilyEverAfter The Law of the Cycle, which will one day lead us away too.]]\\
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->'''Kyoko:''' Are they gone now? Sayaka, Sayaka and your Bebe too?\\
Bebe... They're gone, just like that?\\
'''Mami:'''No. They're finally taking her away with them.Not yet.\\
'''Kyoko:''' Huh?\\
'''Mami:''' They're helping Madoka take Homura away.\\
'''Kyoko:''' Isthat that...Madoka Kaname?\\
'''Mami:''' Yes. [[DiedHappilyEverAfterThe She's the Law of the Cycle, which will Cycles and one day lead day, she'll take us away too.]]\\
'''Mami:'''
'''Kyoko:''' Huh?\\
'''Mami:''' They're helping Madoka take Homura away.\\
'''Kyoko:''' Is
'''Mami:''' Yes. [[DiedHappilyEverAfter
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'''Madoka:''' I'm sorry for making you wait so long. You've worked so hard all this time.\\
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'''Madoka:''' You waited for me all this time. I'm sorry for making you wait it took so long. You've worked so hard all this time.long...but I'm here now.\\
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'''Madoka:''' Now, let's go. We'll always be together from now on.\\
'''Homura:''' Yes, we will. [[SlasherSmile I've waited so long for this.]]\\
'''Homura:''' Yes, we will. [[SlasherSmile I've waited so long for this.]]\\
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'''Madoka:''' Now, Come on, let's go. We'll always be together from From now on.on, we'll be together.\\
'''Homura:'''Yes, we will. You don't know how long...[[SlasherSmile I've waited so long for this.]]\\
'''Homura:'''
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'''Homura:''' [[WhamLine I've finally... caught you.]]\\
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'''Homura:''' [[WhamLine Now...I've finally... caught got you.]]\\
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'''Homura:''' [[CallBack It's only natural that you don't understand. Yes... No one in the world could possibly understand.]] [[LoveMakesYouEvil This emotion is mine alone. It is for Madoka alone.]]\\
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'''Homura:''' [[CallBack It's only natural that you I don't understand. Yes...expect you to understand. No one in the world could possibly understand.]] [[LoveMakesYouEvil This emotion is mine and mine alone. It is And I've been saving it for Madoka alone.her.]]\\
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'''Homura:''' [[FaceHeelTurn I told you, Madoka. I'll never let you go again.]]
->''It is the pinnacle of all human emotion. More passionate than hope, far deeper than despair. [[ThePowerOfLove Love.]]\\
->''It is the pinnacle of all human emotion. More passionate than hope, far deeper than despair. [[ThePowerOfLove Love.]]\\
to:
'''Homura:''' [[FaceHeelTurn I told you, Madoka. I'll has to be this way. I'm never going to let you go again.again, Madoka.]]
->''It is the pinnacle of all human emotion. More passionate than hope,far much deeper than despair. [[ThePowerOfLove Love.]]\\
->''It is the pinnacle of all human emotion. More passionate than hope,
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[[BishonenLine As I am now, I'm not even a witch any longer. She was as sacred as a god, and I couldn't help but pull her from heaven and undermine her.]] [[HumanoidAbomination A being that could perform such feats]] [[SatanicArchetype could only be called a demon, I suppose?]]''
to:
[[BishonenLine As I am now, You're right. I'm not even a witch any longer. She was magical girl or a witch. Madoka is as sacred as a god, and I couldn't help but pull pulled her from heaven and undermine her.the heaven.]] [[HumanoidAbomination A being that could perform such feats]] So if you want to know what I've become,]] [[SatanicArchetype I suppose, if anything, you could only be called call me a demon, I suppose?]]''demon now.]]''
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->'''All:''' Cake! Cake! A round, round cake!\\
This round, round cake... Who could it be?\\
'''[[TeamPet Bebe]]:''' Is the cake Sayaka?\\
'''Sayaka:''' No, - not - me!\\
[[ActorAllusion I am the]] [[Anime/FreshPrettyCure raspberry.]]\\
The round cake is red.\\
Is the cake Kyoko?\\
'''Kyoko:''' No, - not - me!\\
[[TrademarkFavoriteFood I am the apple.]]\\
The round cake loves Bebe.\\
This round, round cake... Who could it be?\\
'''[[TeamPet Bebe]]:''' Is the cake Sayaka?\\
'''Sayaka:''' No, - not - me!\\
[[ActorAllusion I am the]] [[Anime/FreshPrettyCure raspberry.]]\\
The round cake is red.\\
Is the cake Kyoko?\\
'''Kyoko:''' No, - not - me!\\
[[TrademarkFavoriteFood I am the apple.]]\\
The round cake loves Bebe.\\
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->'''All:''' Cake! Cake! A round, Big cake, round cake!\\
This round, round cake...cake, right in front of me\\
Who do you think this cake couldit be?\\
'''[[TeamPet Bebe]]:''' [[SpeakingSimlish Is the cakeSayaka?\\
Sayaka?]]\\
'''Sayaka:''' No,- it's not - me!\\
me.\\
[[ActorAllusionI am the]] I'm just a]] [[Anime/FreshPrettyCure little, old, raspberry.]]\\
The round cake is red.\\
IsThat big, round, cake's too red, don't you know?\\
Could the cake be Kyoko?\\
'''Kyoko:''' No,- it's not - me!\\
[[TrademarkFavoriteFoodI am I'm the apple.juicy apple in this story.]]\\
The That big round cake loves Bebe.\\Bebe, can't you see?\\
This round, round cake...
Who do you think this cake could
'''[[TeamPet Bebe]]:''' [[SpeakingSimlish Is the cake
'''Sayaka:''' No,
[[ActorAllusion
Is
Could the cake be Kyoko?\\
'''Kyoko:''' No,
[[TrademarkFavoriteFood
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'''Mami:''' No, - not - me!\\
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'''Mami:''' No, - It's not - me!\\
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The round cake [[GroundhogDayLoop goes 'round in circles.]]\\
Is the cake Akemi-san?\\
'''Homura:''' N-No, not... me!\\
[[GeniusBonus I-I... am the]] [[MeaningfulReleaseDate pumpkin!]]\\
T-The round cake is sweet.\\
Is the cake Madoka?\\
'''Madoka:''' No, - not - me!\\
I am the melon.\\
[[{{Foreshadowing}} When a melon breaks, it creates a sweet dream.]]\\
'''All:''' But tonight's dream is a bitter one.\\
Atop the plate is the dream of the cat.\\
Round and plump. Everyone eat up!
Is the cake Akemi-san?\\
'''Homura:''' N-No, not... me!\\
[[GeniusBonus I-I... am the]] [[MeaningfulReleaseDate pumpkin!]]\\
T-The round cake is sweet.\\
Is the cake Madoka?\\
'''Madoka:''' No, - not - me!\\
I am the melon.\\
[[{{Foreshadowing}} When a melon breaks, it creates a sweet dream.]]\\
'''All:''' But tonight's dream is a bitter one.\\
Atop the plate is the dream of the cat.\\
Round and plump. Everyone eat up!
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'''Homura:''' N-No,
[[GeniusBonus
T-The round
This big, round, cake
'''Madoka:''' No,
[[{{Foreshadowing}} When
'''All:'''
'Cause the kitty's dream is
Round and plump. Everyone eat up!
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'''Homura:''' All I took was a tiny piece of it. Just the records aof the person that Madoka was before she ceased to exist. [[BackFromTheDead Somehow, all of you wound up being pulled in as well, and it seems you can't return to wherever you were before.]]\\
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'''Homura:''' All I took was a tiny piece of it. Just the records aof of the person that Madoka was before she ceased to exist. [[BackFromTheDead Somehow, all of you wound up being pulled in as well, and it seems you can't return to wherever you were before.]]\\
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'''Homura:''' We should pretend to be friendly in daily life. If you're confrontational all the time, even she may dislike you.\\
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'''Homura:''' We should pretend to be friendly in daily life. If you're confrontational all the time, even she may dislike you.\\
you.
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->''[[WistfulAmnesia I didn't realize how happy it would make me]] [[VillainHasAPoint to be able to say good morning to you again.]]''
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->''[[WistfulAmnesia I didn't realize how happy it would make me]] [[VillainHasAPoint to be able to say good morning to you [Hitomi and Kyousuke] again.]]''
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->''It's nice to meet you. I'm Kaname Madoka. M-Mama...my mother's business sent us overseas. For [[RealitySubtext the past three years]] I've been living in America with my family. I finally came back to Mitakihara last week, and from now on I'll be studying with all of you. And...uh...Please treat me well!''
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->'''Homura:''' How does it feel coming back to your hometown after so long?\\
'''Madoka:''' Uh...Well...Somehow, this all feels really familiar. But something feels different, y'know? It's a little weird.\\
'''Homura:''' That's understandable. It has been three years, after all.\\
'''Madoka:''' No...[[WistfulAmnesia Actually, It doesn't feel like anything has changed at all.]] Rather...If I were to say that something has changed...[[AmnesiacGod I would say it's me.]] That's right. I was sure I had a different form...A different purpose.\\
'''Madoka:''' Uh...Well...Somehow, this all feels really familiar. But something feels different, y'know? It's a little weird.\\
'''Homura:''' That's understandable. It has been three years, after all.\\
'''Madoka:''' No...[[WistfulAmnesia Actually, It doesn't feel like anything has changed at all.]] Rather...If I were to say that something has changed...[[AmnesiacGod I would say it's me.]] That's right. I was sure I had a different form...A different purpose.\\
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->'''Homura:''' How does it feel coming to be back to your hometown after so long?\\
'''Madoka:'''Uh...Well...Somehow, this all feels really familiar. Um, well, everything's so familiar and nostalgic. But something feels different, y'know? also kind of different somehow. It's a little weird.strange feeling.\\
'''Homura:''' That'sunderstandable.no surprise. It has been three years, after all.\\
'''Madoka:''' No... [[WistfulAmnesiaActually, It doesn't feel it actually seems like anything absolutely nothing has changed at all.changed.]] Rather...If In fact, if I were had to say pick the one thing that something has changed...had changed, [[AmnesiacGod I would I'd say it's it was me.]] That's right. right... I was sure I had should have a different form...form. A different purpose.\\role... So why...?\\
'''Madoka:'''
'''Homura:''' That's
'''Madoka:''' No... [[WistfulAmnesia
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'''Homura:''' Madoka Kaname, do you think this world is precious? [[OrderVersusChaos Do you think that laws or desires are more important]]?\\
'''Madoka:''' Uh...well, I think laws are more important. Wouldn't it be bad to just selfishly break the law?\\
'''Homura:''' Is that so? In that case...[[HeelRealization Someday, you might become my enemy.]] [[IDidWhatIHadToDo But I don't care]].\\
'''Madoka:''' Uh...well, I think laws are more important. Wouldn't it be bad to just selfishly break the law?\\
'''Homura:''' Is that so? In that case...[[HeelRealization Someday, you might become my enemy.]] [[IDidWhatIHadToDo But I don't care]].\\
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'''Homura:''' Madoka Kaname, do Kaname. Do you think treasure this world is precious? world? [[OrderVersusChaos Do you think that laws or desires are consider stability and order more important]]?\\
important than desire?]]\\
'''Madoka:'''Uh...well, Well, I... Um... I-I do treasure it. I guess I do think laws are more important. Wouldn't it be it's kind of bad to just selfishly break the law?\\
rules because you feel like it.\\
'''Homura:'''Is that so? In that case...I see... [[HeelRealization Someday, Then I suppose someday, you might will become my enemy.enemy as well.]] [[IDidWhatIHadToDo But I don't care]].\\care.]]\\
'''Madoka:'''
'''Homura:'''
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'''Homura:''' [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy I only want a world where you can be happy.]]\\
'''Madoka:''' Homura-chan...\\
'''Homura:''' [[TragicVillain Just like I thought]]...[[CryForTheDevil it suits you better.]]
'''Madoka:''' Homura-chan...\\
'''Homura:''' [[TragicVillain Just like I thought]]...[[CryForTheDevil it suits you better.]]
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'''Homura:''' [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy Because even then, I only want will continue to wish for a world where in which you can will be happy.]]\\
'''Madoka:'''Homura-chan...Homura? Um...\\
'''Homura:''' [[TragicVillainJust like I thought]]...They really do look better]] [[CryForTheDevil it suits on you better.after all.]]
'''Madoka:'''
'''Homura:''' [[TragicVillain
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[[BishonenLine As I am now, I'm not a witch anymore.]] [[HumanoidAbomination Something that could bring down a god and imprison her]]...[[SatanicArchetype I suppose you could only call such a being a demon.]]''
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[[BishonenLine As I am now, I'm not even a witch anymore.any longer. She was as sacred as a god, and I couldn't help but pull her from heaven and undermine her.]] [[HumanoidAbomination Something A being that could bring down a god and imprison her]]...perform such feats]] [[SatanicArchetype I suppose you could only call such be called a being a demon.]]''demon, I suppose?]]''
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->'''Kyubey:''' This settles it! [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone Mankind's emotions are too dangerous]]! [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere We never could have handled such an unfathomable conclusion!]]\\
'''Homura:''' Oh, is that so? [[DemotedToDragon But in order to deal with the world's curses]] [[LaserGuidedKarma your existence will be needed]]. [[WhosLaughingNow I'll have you cooperate]], [[KickTheSonOfABitch In-cu-ba-tor.]]\\
'''Homura:''' Oh, is that so? [[DemotedToDragon But in order to deal with the world's curses]] [[LaserGuidedKarma your existence will be needed]]. [[WhosLaughingNow I'll have you cooperate]], [[KickTheSonOfABitch In-cu-ba-tor.]]\\
to:
->'''Kyubey:''' This settles it! makes it very clear. [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone Mankind's emotions are Trying to make use of human emotion is just too dangerous]]! dangerous.]] [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere We could never could have handled such an unfathomable conclusion!]]\\
hope to control something whose final form is so irrational.]]\\
'''Homura:'''Oh, is Is that so? [[DemotedToDragon But in order to deal with handle all the world's curses]] curses that have spread around our world,]] [[LaserGuidedKarma your existence will be needed]]. you Incubators are now necessary for us.]] [[WhosLaughingNow I'll have you cooperate]], So you'll be staying to help...]] [[KickTheSonOfABitch In-cu-ba-tor.]]\\
'''Homura:'''
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'''Sayaka:''' You have taken away a part of the Law of Cycles! The power of salvation that was the hope of all magical girls!\\
'''Homura:''' What I snatched away was just a small fragment. The part from before Madoka came to no longer be Madoka. Just the record and memories of her as a human. [[BackFromTheDead Somehow, even you two are involved. It seems you've become unable to return to where you belong]].\\
'''Sayaka:''' What right do you think you have acting like this?\\
'''Homura:''' As I am now, I've become a demon. An existence which tramples on this world, disturbing providence. Going against God's law...is only natural, right?\\
'''Sayaka:''' Do you plan on destroying the universe?\\
'''Homura:''' I suppose that's a fine idea, after all the Wraiths have been destroyed first. When that time comes I'll gladly be your enemy. But, Sayaka Miki, how will you oppose me? [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Even now, your memories are slowly being altered, aren't they?]]\\
'''Homura:''' What I snatched away was just a small fragment. The part from before Madoka came to no longer be Madoka. Just the record and memories of her as a human. [[BackFromTheDead Somehow, even you two are involved. It seems you've become unable to return to where you belong]].\\
'''Sayaka:''' What right do you think you have acting like this?\\
'''Homura:''' As I am now, I've become a demon. An existence which tramples on this world, disturbing providence. Going against God's law...is only natural, right?\\
'''Sayaka:''' Do you plan on destroying the universe?\\
'''Homura:''' I suppose that's a fine idea, after all the Wraiths have been destroyed first. When that time comes I'll gladly be your enemy. But, Sayaka Miki, how will you oppose me? [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Even now, your memories are slowly being altered, aren't they?]]\\
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'''Sayaka:''' You have taken away You've broken off a part of the Law of Cycles! the Cycle! The power of salvation that was the hope of all the magical girls!\\
'''Homura:'''What All I snatched away took was just a small fragment. The part from before Madoka came to no longer be Madoka. tiny piece of it. Just the record and memories of her as a human. records aof the person that Madoka was before she ceased to exist. [[BackFromTheDead Somehow, even all of you two are involved. It wound up being pulled in as well, and it seems you've become unable to you can't return to where wherever you belong]].\\
were before.]]\\
'''Sayaka:''' What right do youthink you have acting like to do all of this?\\
'''Homura:'''As I am now, I've become a demon. An now an existence which tramples on known as "Evil". A being who disrupts providence and acts as an agitator of this world, disturbing providence. Going against God's law...is only natural, right?\\
world. It's quite natural that I upset the laws set down by a god, don't you think?\\
'''Sayaka:''' Do youplan on destroying the intend to destroy this universe?\\
'''Homura:'''I suppose that's a fine idea, after After all the Wraiths wraiths have been destroyed first. destroyed, perhaps I will. When that time comes I'll gladly comes, I suppose I can be your enemy. But, But do you think you'll be able to stand against me, Sayaka Miki, how will you oppose me? Miki? [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Even now, your memories are slowly being altered, aren't they?]]\\gradually changing, are they not?]]\\
'''Homura:'''
'''Sayaka:''' What right do you
'''Homura:'''
'''Sayaka:''' Do you
'''Homura:'''
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'''Sayaka:''' [[DefiantToTheEnd Even so, I won't forget this. Homura Akemi, you are a demon!]]\\
'''Homura:''' Let's at least be on good terms during the day. If we fight too much, even that girl might come to hate you.\\
->''[[WistfulAmnesia Being able to say good morning to Kyousuke or Hitomi again]]...[[VillainHasAPoint I never even imagined how happy that would make me.]]''
'''Homura:''' Let's at least be on good terms during the day. If we fight too much, even that girl might come to hate you.\\
->''[[WistfulAmnesia Being able to say good morning to Kyousuke or Hitomi again]]...[[VillainHasAPoint I never even imagined how happy that would make me.]]''
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'''Sayaka:''' [[DefiantToTheEnd Even so, I won't it that happens, the one thing I'll never forget this. is that you, Homura Akemi, you are a demon!]]\\
'''Homura:'''Let's at least We should pretend to be on good terms during friendly in daily life. If you're confrontational all the day. If we fight too much, time, even that girl might come to hate she may dislike you.\\
->''[[WistfulAmnesiaBeing I didn't realize how happy it would make me]] [[VillainHasAPoint to be able to say good morning to Kyousuke or Hitomi again]]...[[VillainHasAPoint I never even imagined how happy that would make me.you again.]]''
'''Homura:'''
->''[[WistfulAmnesia
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'''Madoka:''' I told you not to be alone, didn't I?\\
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'''Madoka:''' That's no good, Homura. I told you not to be alone, didn't I?\\that you shouldn't go off by yourself.\\
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'''Madoka:''' No matter what happens, you are you, Homura-chan. I will never abandon you. So please, don't give up!\\
'''Homura:''' I'm sorry! I was such a coward. I just wanted to meet with you once again...I even betrayed that feeling. That's right. [[{{Foreshadowing}} No matter what sin, I can take it on. No matter what I might become...I'm certain it'll be fine, as long as you're by my side.]]\\
'''Madoka:''' [[DramaticallyMissingThePoint Now, Homura-chan...Together.]]\\
'''Homura:''' Yes.\\
'''Homura:''' I'm sorry! I was such a coward. I just wanted to meet with you once again...I even betrayed that feeling. That's right. [[{{Foreshadowing}} No matter what sin, I can take it on. No matter what I might become...I'm certain it'll be fine, as long as you're by my side.]]\\
'''Madoka:''' [[DramaticallyMissingThePoint Now, Homura-chan...Together.]]\\
'''Homura:''' Yes.\\
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'''Madoka:''' No matter what happens, you are will always be you, Homura-chan. Homura. And I will would never abandon you. So please, don't give up!\\
up.\\
'''Homura:''' I'msorry! sorry... I'm so spineless... I was such a coward. I just wanted to meet with see you once again...one more time. And if I even betrayed had to go so far as to betray that feeling. That's right. wish... [[{{Foreshadowing}} No matter what sin, Yes, I can take it on. knew I could shoulder any sin. No matter what I might become...I'm certain it'll became, I knew I'd be fine, as fine with it. As long as you're I could have you by my side.]]\\
'''Madoka:''' [[DramaticallyMissingThePoint Now,Homura-chan...Together.Homura. Together...]]\\
'''Homura:'''Yes.Yes...\\
'''Homura:''' I'm
'''Madoka:''' [[DramaticallyMissingThePoint Now,
'''Homura:'''
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'''Madoka:''' Homura-chan...Aren't you scared?\\
'''Homura:''' No...I'm fine. I won't hesitate anymore.
->''[[SpeakInUnison I just]] [[ThisCannotBe don't]] [[AscendedMeme get it!]]''
'''Homura:''' No...I'm fine. I won't hesitate anymore.
->''[[SpeakInUnison I just]] [[ThisCannotBe don't]] [[AscendedMeme get it!]]''
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'''Madoka:''' Homura-chan...Aren't Homura, you scared?\\
aren't afraid?\\
'''Homura:'''No...No. I'm fine. I won't hesitate anymore.
any longer.
->''[[SpeakInUnison I just]] [[ThisCannotBe don't]] [[AscendedMemeget it!]]''understand at all!]]''
'''Homura:'''
->''[[SpeakInUnison I just]] [[ThisCannotBe don't]] [[AscendedMeme
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->'''Kyoko:''' Are they gone? Sayaka...And your Bebe, too?\\
'''Mami:''' No. Now, at last, they're going to be taking her with them.\\
'''Kyoko:''' Is that...Madoka Kaname?\\
'''Mami:''' Yes. [[DiedHappilyEverAfter The one who'll some day guide us.]] The Law of Cycles.\\
'''Mami:''' No. Now, at last, they're going to be taking her with them.\\
'''Kyoko:''' Is that...Madoka Kaname?\\
'''Mami:''' Yes. [[DiedHappilyEverAfter The one who'll some day guide us.]] The Law of Cycles.\\
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->'''Kyoko:''' Are they gone? Sayaka...And gone now? Sayaka, and your Bebe, Bebe too?\\
'''Mami:''' No.Now, at last, they're going to be They're finally taking her away with them.\\
'''Kyoko:''' Isthat...that Madoka Kaname?\\
'''Mami:''' Yes. [[DiedHappilyEverAfter Theone who'll some day guide us.]] The Law of Cycles.\\the Cycle, which will one day lead us away too.]]\\
'''Mami:''' No.
'''Kyoko:''' Is
'''Mami:''' Yes. [[DiedHappilyEverAfter The
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'''Madoka:''' Sorry I kept you waiting. You've been hanging on all this time, haven't you?\\
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'''Madoka:''' Sorry I kept I'm sorry for making you waiting. wait so long. You've been hanging on worked so hard all this time, haven't you?\\time.\\
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'''Madoka:''' Come on, let's go. From now on we'll always be together!\\
'''Homura:''' Yes...that's right. I've been waiting...[[SlasherSmile for this moment!]]\\
'''Homura:''' Yes...that's right. I've been waiting...[[SlasherSmile for this moment!]]\\
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'''Madoka:''' Come on, Now, let's go. From now on we'll We'll always be together!\\
together from now on.\\
'''Homura:'''Yes...that's right. I've been waiting...Yes, we will. [[SlasherSmile I've waited so long for this moment!]]\\this.]]\\
'''Homura:'''
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'''Madoka:''' Homura-chan?\\
'''Homura:''' [[WhamLine Finally...I caught you.]]\\
'''Homura:''' [[WhamLine Finally...I caught you.]]\\
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'''Madoka:''' Homura-chan?\\
Homura?\\
'''Homura:''' [[WhamLineFinally...I I've finally... caught you.]]\\
'''Homura:''' [[WhamLine
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'''Homura:''' [[CallBack I don't expect anyone to understand.]] [[LoveMakesYouEvil These feelings belong to me alone.]] [[{{Yandere}} They're meant for Madoka only!]]\\
'''Madoka:''' Homura-chan, stop! I'll be torn apart-!\\
'''Madoka:''' Homura-chan, stop! I'll be torn apart-!\\
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'''Homura:''' [[CallBack I It's only natural that you don't expect anyone to understand. Yes... No one in the world could possibly understand.]] [[LoveMakesYouEvil These feelings belong to me alone.]] [[{{Yandere}} They're meant This emotion is mine alone. It is for Madoka only!]]\\
alone.]]\\
'''Madoka:'''Homura-chan, stop! I'll be torn apart-!\\Homura, don't! You'll rip me apart!\\
'''Madoka:'''
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'''Homura:''' [[FaceHeelTurn Didn't I tell you Madoka? I won't ever let go of you again.]]
->''I don't expect you to understand, Incubator. This is the pinnacle of human emotions. More passionate than hope. Deeper than despair. [[ThePowerOfLove It's love!]]\\
->''I don't expect you to understand, Incubator. This is the pinnacle of human emotions. More passionate than hope. Deeper than despair. [[ThePowerOfLove It's love!]]\\
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'''Homura:''' [[FaceHeelTurn Didn't I tell told you, Madoka. I'll never let you Madoka? I won't ever let go of you again.]]
->''I don't expect you to understand, Incubator. This ->''It is the pinnacle of all human emotions. emotion. More passionate than hope. Deeper hope, far deeper than despair. [[ThePowerOfLove It's love!]]\\Love.]]\\
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[[ContinuityNod I am]] [[DramaticIrony the]] [[TrademarkFavoriteFood cheese]].\\
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[[ContinuityNod I am]] [[DramaticIrony the]] [[TrademarkFavoriteFood cheese]].\\cheese.]]\\
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->''[[TheseAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow "I'm sure you didn't really want to know the truth.]] [[CuriosityIsACrapshoot Yet you still insisted in searching it.]] [[HumanityIsInsane Truly, human curiosity is something completely... irrational."]]''
-->--'''Kyubey''', in the trailer
-->--'''Kyubey''', in the trailer
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->''[[TheGlassesComeOff Am I the only one who remembers?]] Yes... I've seen this kind of trap before. [[LotusEaterMachine A closed-off world of illusion. A maze without exit, into which the prey is lured and led astray]]. There's no doubt. [[WhamLine This is a witch's labyrinth.]]''
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->''[[TheGlassesComeOff Am I the only one who remembers?]] Yes... I've seen this kind of trap before. [[LotusEaterMachine A closed-off world of illusion. A maze without exit, into which the prey is lured and led astray]]. astray.]] There's no doubt. [[WhamLine This is a witch's labyrinth.]]''
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'''Homura:''' [[EurekaMoment Right... You're right.]] [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy Those are your honest feelings.]] And yet, I... [[ILetGwenStacyDie How could I have made such a stupid mistake? I shouldn't have allowed that to happen.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} No matter what I would've had to do, I should have stopped you back then.]] Madoka. [[ChronicHeroSyndrome You should know that even when you know how much it would hurt you, you do have the courage to make that hard decision]]. When you learn there is something that only you can do, [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre you're far kinder and stronger than you yourself know.]] Trust me, I know this.
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'''Homura:''' [[EurekaMoment Right... You're right.]] [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy Those are your honest feelings.]] And yet, I... [[ILetGwenStacyDie How could I have made such a stupid mistake? I shouldn't have allowed that to happen.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} No matter what I would've had to do, I should have stopped you back then.]] Madoka. [[ChronicHeroSyndrome You should know that even when you know how much it would hurt you, you do have the courage to make that hard decision]]. decision.]] When you learn there is something that only you can do, [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre you're far kinder and stronger than you yourself know.]] Trust me, I know this.
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[[NotSoOmniscientAfterAll We wanted to know what would happen to a Soul Gem whin it was cut off from the phenomenon that you magical girls call the "Law of the Cycle."]] You showed us some very interesting results. The formation of a closed space by a peculiar principle, as well as derivation and capture of victims into that space. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero I believe this is the power of the "witch" that you had once explained to us in the past.]]''
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[[NotSoOmniscientAfterAll We wanted to know what would happen to a Soul Gem whin when it was cut off from the phenomenon that you magical girls call the "Law of the Cycle."]] You showed us some very interesting results. The formation of a closed space by a peculiar principle, as well as derivation and capture of victims into that space. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero I believe this is the power of the "witch" that you had once explained to us in the past.]]''
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->''As you are now, you likely wouldn't know this, but you see, I became a magical girl solely to save Madoka. And that holds true even now! If the alternative is revealing Madoka's secret to you, [[YouAreWorthHell I would rather let myself turn into a witch]]. [[DeclarationOfProtection I'll never let you Incubators touch Madoka again!]]\\
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->''As you are now, you likely wouldn't know this, but you see, I became a magical girl solely to save Madoka. And that holds true even now! If the alternative is revealing Madoka's secret to you, [[YouAreWorthHell I would rather let myself turn into a witch]]. witch.]] [[DeclarationOfProtection I'll never let you Incubators touch Madoka again!]]\\
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->'''Kyubey:''' What in the world are you girls?\\
'''Nagisa:''' We're the ones who once held hope, and in time scattered curses!\\
'''Sayaka:''' [[CameBackStrong And now, guided by the Cycles, we exist outside of this world's karma.]]\\
'''Nagisa:''' We're the ones who once held hope, and in time scattered curses!\\
'''Sayaka:''' [[CameBackStrong And now, guided by the Cycles, we exist outside of this world's karma.]]\\
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->'''Kyubey:''' What in the world W-What are you girls?\\
you?\\
'''Nagisa:'''We're the ones who We were once held bringers of hope, who despaired and in time scattered curses!\\
spread our curses.\\
'''Sayaka:''' [[CameBackStrongAnd now, Now we are those guided by the Cycles, we exist outside Law of the Cycle to break free from the chains of destiny binding this world's karma.world.]]\\
'''Nagisa:'''
'''Sayaka:''' [[CameBackStrong
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'''Kyubey:''' Are you also part of the Law of Cycles?\\
'''Sayaka:''' [[OurAngelsAreDifferent Well, we're kind of like secretaries.]]\\
'''Sayaka:''' [[OurAngelsAreDifferent Well, we're kind of like secretaries.]]\\
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'''Kyubey:''' Are So you two were also part of the Law of Cycles?\\
the Cycle?\\
'''Sayaka:''' [[OurAngelsAreDifferent Well, in other words, we'rekind of something like secretaries.]]\\her private secretaries, you know?]]\\
'''Sayaka:''' [[OurAngelsAreDifferent Well, in other words, we're
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'''Kyoko:''' [[CallBack I had a really disgusting dream. It was a dream in which you died. But...that's actually the reality. And the two of us fighting here like this is the dream.]] That's it, isn't it, Sayaka?\\
'''Sayaka:''' Saying this is a dream doesn't mean it should be sad. I thought I had no regrets...but in the end I took on this responsibility and came back...[[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming because I regretted leaving you behind.]]\\
'''Nagisa:''' [[MomentKiller I just wanted to eat cheese again!]]\\
'''Sayaka:''' [[LampshadeHanging Oi, come on! Read the mood, will ya?]]\\
'''Sayaka:''' Saying this is a dream doesn't mean it should be sad. I thought I had no regrets...but in the end I took on this responsibility and came back...[[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming because I regretted leaving you behind.]]\\
'''Nagisa:''' [[MomentKiller I just wanted to eat cheese again!]]\\
'''Sayaka:''' [[LampshadeHanging Oi, come on! Read the mood, will ya?]]\\
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'''Kyoko:''' [[CallBack I had a really disgusting sickening dream. It was a A dream in which where you died. But...that's actually the reality. And the two of us were dead. But you're saying that that was real and this right here, where we're fighting here like side by side, this is the dream.]] That's it, isn't it, Sayaka?\\
dream, Sayaka?]]\\
'''Sayaka:'''Saying this is This isn't something quite as sad as just a dream doesn't mean it should be sad. dream. I thought I had no regrets...but in didn't have any regrets when I died. But the end reason I took on ended up taking this responsibility assignment and came back...coming back was because I actually do have one regret. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming because The fact that I regretted leaving left you behind.]]\\
'''Nagisa:''' [[MomentKiller I just wanted to eat cheeseagain!]]\\
one more time!]]\\
'''Sayaka:''' [[LampshadeHangingOi, come on! Read Hey, you! Don't ruin the mood, will ya?]]\\mood!]]\\
'''Sayaka:'''
'''Nagisa:''' [[MomentKiller I just wanted to eat cheese
'''Sayaka:''' [[LampshadeHanging
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'''Homura:'''No...I'm fine. I won't hesitate anymore.
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->'''Homura:''' Incubator...What is your goal in all of this?\\
'''Kyubey:''' Of course...It's to be able to observe the Law of Cycles, which up until now wasn't more than a hypothesis.\\
'''Homura:''' For what purpose? You're the one who says our curiosity is irrational. There's no way you would go through such trouble to merely confirm Madoka's existence...\\
'''Kyubey:''' Of course...It's to be able to observe the Law of Cycles, which up until now wasn't more than a hypothesis.\\
'''Homura:''' For what purpose? You're the one who says our curiosity is irrational. There's no way you would go through such trouble to merely confirm Madoka's existence...\\
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->'''Homura:''' Incubator...What is Incubator, tell me what your real goal in all of this?\\
'''Kyubey:''' Of course...It's to be able to observe the Law of Cycles, which up until now wasn't more than a hypothesis.is here.\\
'''Kyubey:''' To confirm the existence of the "Law of the Cycle" of course, which has been a mere hypothesis until now.\\
'''Homura:''' For what purpose?You're the one who says our Satisfying mere curiosity is irrational. There's no way illogical, as you would go through keep saying. I won't believe that you went to such trouble lengths just to merely confirm Madoka's existence...that Madoka exists.\\
'''Kyubey:''' Of course...It's to be able to observe the Law of Cycles, which up until now wasn't more than a hypothesis.
'''Kyubey:''' To confirm the existence of the "Law of the Cycle" of course, which has been a mere hypothesis until now.\\
'''Homura:''' For what purpose?
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'''Homura:''' You...are trying to control Madoka!
->''[[EvilPlan If we could just observe the phenomenon, we could interfere with it. If we could interfere with it, we could also control it. Eventually our research would completely bring the Law of Cycles under our control.]] [[MotiveRant If we could do that, magical girls would transform into witches and we would be able to expect to collect even more energy. The transition of hope and despair, the total amount of converted energy from these emotions, far exceeded our expectations.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} Truly, magical girls are hiding infinite possibilities.]]''
->''[[EvilPlan If we could just observe the phenomenon, we could interfere with it. If we could interfere with it, we could also control it. Eventually our research would completely bring the Law of Cycles under our control.]] [[MotiveRant If we could do that, magical girls would transform into witches and we would be able to expect to collect even more energy. The transition of hope and despair, the total amount of converted energy from these emotions, far exceeded our expectations.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} Truly, magical girls are hiding infinite possibilities.]]''
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'''Homura:''' You...are trying You intend to control Madoka!
Madoka, don't you?!
->''[[EvilPlan If we could just observethe phenomenon, we could [the phenomenon], we'd be able to interfere with it. If And if we could interfere with it, we could also we'd be able to control it. Eventually our Our research would allow us to conquer the "Law of the Cycle" completely bring the Law of Cycles under our control.someday.]] [[MotiveRant If And then, we could do that, have magical girls would transform turn into witches and we would be able to expect to collect even more energy. vast amounts of energy all at once. The transition of phase change between hope and despair, the total amount volume of converted energy from these that is created in those emotions, is far exceeded our expectations.beyond anything we had imagined.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} Truly, magical girls are hiding infinite hold the key to limitless possibilities.]]''
->''[[EvilPlan If we could just observe
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->''"To save Madoka" With just that simple wish, I became a magical girl. That's why I'll do the same thing this time. If it means revealing any more secrets about Madoka, [[YouAreWorthHell I would rather become a witch]]. [[DeclarationOfProtection I'll never let you Incubators come into contact with her again.]]\\
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This is...a witch. [[AndIMustScream My feelings are haunting me. Radiance and regret are the only things I can remember anymore.]] So...this is my despair. Madoka...thank you for coming all the way here for me! I'm sorry I won't be able to say goodbye to you at the end!''
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'''Homura:''' In it,[[AbstractApotheosis you had gone to a place so far away]] [[UnreliableExpositor that I had no chance of seeing you again.]] [[RetGone And everyone else in the world forgot all about you.]] [[RippleEffectProofMemory I was the only one in the whole wide world who could remember you!]] I was so lonely and sad... but no one could understand how I felt. Surrounded by that, I started thinking my memories of you were things I'd just made up. And I began doubting myself.\\
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'''Homura:''' In it,[[AbstractApotheosis it, [[AbstractApotheosis you had gone to a place so far away]] [[UnreliableExpositor that I had no chance of seeing you again.]] [[RetGone And everyone else in the world forgot all about you.]] [[RippleEffectProofMemory I was the only one in the whole wide world who could remember you!]] I was so lonely and sad... but no one could understand how I felt. Surrounded by that, I started thinking my memories of you were things I'd just made up. And I began doubting myself.\\
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'''Madoka:''' That's right. You, Sayaka... Mami, Kyoko... my dad and mom and Tatsuya... and even Hitomi and everyone in our class... I would never want to go somewhere I could never see anyone again. Even if there were no other choice,[[HeroicSelfDeprecation I know I'd never have the courage to do something like that.]]\\
'''Homura:''' [[EurekaMoment Right... You're right.]] [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy Those are your honest feelings.]] And yet, I... [[ILetGwenStacyDie How could I have made such a stupid mistake? I shouldn't have allowed that to happen.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} No matter what I would've had to do, I should have stopped you back then.]] Madoka.[[ChronicHeroSyndrome You should know that even when you know how much it would hurt you, you do have the courage to make that hard decision]]. When you learn there is something that only you can do, [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre you're far kinder and stronger than you yourself know.]] Trust me, I know this.
->''I'm no longer even a magical girl. Why? Tell me. Why on earth did I do something like this? [[TomatoInTheMirror When did I become a witch?!]]''
'''Homura:''' [[EurekaMoment Right... You're right.]] [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy Those are your honest feelings.]] And yet, I... [[ILetGwenStacyDie How could I have made such a stupid mistake? I shouldn't have allowed that to happen.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} No matter what I would've had to do, I should have stopped you back then.]] Madoka.[[ChronicHeroSyndrome You should know that even when you know how much it would hurt you, you do have the courage to make that hard decision]]. When you learn there is something that only you can do, [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre you're far kinder and stronger than you yourself know.]] Trust me, I know this.
->''I'm no longer even a magical girl. Why? Tell me. Why on earth did I do something like this? [[TomatoInTheMirror When did I become a witch?!]]''
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'''Madoka:''' That's right. You, Sayaka... Mami, Kyoko... my dad and mom and Tatsuya... and even Hitomi and everyone in our class... I would never want to go somewhere I could never see anyone again. Even if there were no other choice,[[HeroicSelfDeprecation choice, [[HeroicSelfDeprecation I know I'd never have the courage to do something like that.]]\\
'''Homura:''' [[EurekaMoment Right... You're right.]] [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy Those are your honest feelings.]] And yet, I... [[ILetGwenStacyDie How could I have made such a stupid mistake? I shouldn't have allowed that to happen.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} No matter what I would've had to do, I should have stopped you back then.]] Madoka. [[ChronicHeroSyndrome You should know that even when you know how much it would hurt you, you do have the courage to make that hard decision]]. When you learn there is something that only you can do, [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre you're far kinder and stronger than you yourself know.]] Trust me, I know this.
->''I'm no longer ->''In other words, this means I'm not even a magical girl. girl anymore? Why? Tell me. Why? Why on earth would I end up as...? When did I do something like this? it even happen? [[TomatoInTheMirror When did I become a witch?!]]''
'''Homura:''' [[EurekaMoment Right... You're right.]] [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy Those are your honest feelings.]] And yet, I... [[ILetGwenStacyDie How could I have made such a stupid mistake? I shouldn't have allowed that to happen.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} No matter what I would've had to do, I should have stopped you back then.]] Madoka. [[ChronicHeroSyndrome You should know that even when you know how much it would hurt you, you do have the courage to make that hard decision]]. When you learn there is something that only you can do, [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre you're far kinder and stronger than you yourself know.]] Trust me, I know this.
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->''Even though you do not actually want to know the truth, you still persisted in pursuing it. Truly, human curiosity is completely irrational.\\
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[[NotSoOmniscientAfterAll When being separated from the phenomenon that you all call the Law of Cycles]], what will happen to a Soul Gem? The results we got to observe were certainly interesting! The formation of a closed space governed by peculiar rules and calling in victims from outside for capture. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero This is undoubtedly the ability of the 'witches' you told me about, right?]]''
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[[NotSoOmniscientAfterAll When being separated We wanted to know what would happen to a Soul Gem whin it was cut off from the phenomenon that you all magical girls call the Law "Law of Cycles]], what will happen to a Soul Gem? The results we got to observe were certainly interesting! the Cycle."]] You showed us some very interesting results. The formation of a closed space governed by a peculiar rules principle, as well as derivation and calling in capture of victims from outside for capture. into that space. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero This I believe this is undoubtedly the ability power of the 'witches' "witch" that you told me about, right?]]''had once explained to us in the past.]]''
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'''Girls throwing tomatoes:''' [[GratuitousGerman Gott ist tot!]] [[Creator/FriedrichNietzsche Gott]] [[GodIsDead ist tot!]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} Gott ist tot!]]
->'''Homura:''' [[IHaveThisFriend I had a very scary dream.]]\\
'''Madoka:''' Dream?\\
'''Homura:''' You...[[AbstractApotheosis went to a place so far away]], [[UnreliableExpositor that we could never meet each other again.]] Yet, [[RetGone everyone in the world forgot about you.]] I was the only one...[[RippleEffectProofMemory I was left behind as the only person that remembered you.]] Even though I'm lonely...Even though I'm sad...No one else can understand how I feel. Eventually...I thought that maybe...I might have made up my memories of you. I even started to doubt myself.\\
'''Madoka:''' Yeah. That sounds like a truly horrible dream. But it's alright. Going someplace far away by myself and not being able to see anyone anymore...[[DramaticIrony I could never do something like that]].\\
'''Homura:''' Why? How can you say that for sure?\\
'''Madoka:''' Because I'm me. I could never handle something that would make you cry.\\
'''Homura:''' For you...It was also too painful to bear?\\
'''Madoka:''' Of course. Homura, Sayaka, Mami or Kyoko, Papa, Mama, and Tatsuya, as well as Hitomi and everyone else in class...I wouldn't want to be separated from any of you. Even if a time came where I had no choice but to leave...[[HeroicSelfDeprecation I would never be brave enough to do it.]]\\
'''Homura:''' [[EurekaMoment Yes...that's right, isn't it?]] [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy If that is how you truly feel]]...Then I...[[ILetGwenStacyDie I've made such a huge mistake! In the end, I shouldn't have accepted it.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} At that time, no matter what it took, I should have stopped you!]] Madoka...[[ChronicHeroSyndrome even if you know how hard it will be, you have the courage to make that decision]]. You...When you know there's something only you can do, [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre you're much kinder and stronger than you realize.]] I know this for a fact.
->'''Homura:''' [[IHaveThisFriend I had a very scary dream.]]\\
'''Madoka:''' Dream?\\
'''Homura:''' You...[[AbstractApotheosis went to a place so far away]], [[UnreliableExpositor that we could never meet each other again.]] Yet, [[RetGone everyone in the world forgot about you.]] I was the only one...[[RippleEffectProofMemory I was left behind as the only person that remembered you.]] Even though I'm lonely...Even though I'm sad...No one else can understand how I feel. Eventually...I thought that maybe...I might have made up my memories of you. I even started to doubt myself.\\
'''Madoka:''' Yeah. That sounds like a truly horrible dream. But it's alright. Going someplace far away by myself and not being able to see anyone anymore...[[DramaticIrony I could never do something like that]].\\
'''Homura:''' Why? How can you say that for sure?\\
'''Madoka:''' Because I'm me. I could never handle something that would make you cry.\\
'''Homura:''' For you...It was also too painful to bear?\\
'''Madoka:''' Of course. Homura, Sayaka, Mami or Kyoko, Papa, Mama, and Tatsuya, as well as Hitomi and everyone else in class...I wouldn't want to be separated from any of you. Even if a time came where I had no choice but to leave...[[HeroicSelfDeprecation I would never be brave enough to do it.]]\\
'''Homura:''' [[EurekaMoment Yes...that's right, isn't it?]] [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy If that is how you truly feel]]...Then I...[[ILetGwenStacyDie I've made such a huge mistake! In the end, I shouldn't have accepted it.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} At that time, no matter what it took, I should have stopped you!]] Madoka...[[ChronicHeroSyndrome even if you know how hard it will be, you have the courage to make that decision]]. You...When you know there's something only you can do, [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre you're much kinder and stronger than you realize.]] I know this for a fact.
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->'''Homura:''' [[IHaveThisFriend You see, I had a
'''Madoka:'''
'''Homura:'''
'''Madoka:'''
'''Homura:''' Why? How can you say that for sure?\\
'''Madoka:'''
'''Homura:''' For you...It was also too painful to bear?\\
'''Madoka:''' Of course. Homura, Sayaka, Mami or Kyoko, Papa, Mama, and Tatsuya, as well as Hitomi and everyone else in class...
'''Homura:''' Why? How can you be so sure?\\
'''Madoka:''' You know how wimpy I am. And because I could never bear to do something that would make someone as strong as you cry like this.\\
'''Homura:''' Then that's something that would hurt you so much you couldn't bear it?\\
'''Madoka:''' That's right. You, Sayaka... Mami, Kyoko... my dad and mom and Tatsuya... and even Hitomi and everyone in our class... I would never want to go somewhere I could never see anyone again. Even if there were no other choice,[[HeroicSelfDeprecation I know I'd never have the courage to do something like that.]]\\
'''Homura:''' [[EurekaMoment
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->''[[TheGlassesComeOff Am I the only one who remembers?]] That's right. I've seen this trick before. [[LotusEaterMachine An illusionary space that lures in prey and traps them in a labyrinth without any exits]]. Without a doubt, this place is...[[WhamLine a witch's barrier.]]''
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->''[[TheGlassesComeOff Am I the only one who remembers?]] That's right. Yes... I've seen this trick kind of trap before. [[LotusEaterMachine An illusionary space that lures in prey and traps them in a labyrinth A closed-off world of illusion. A maze without any exits]]. Without a doubt, this place is...exit, into which the prey is lured and led astray]]. There's no doubt. [[WhamLine This is a witch's barrier.labyrinth.]]''
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->'''Mami:''' What's going on?\\
'''Nagisa:''' I think I can tell you.\\
'''Mami:''' Eh? You're...Bebe!?\\
'''[[BreakoutCharacter Nagisa]]:''' [[ObfuscatingStupidity Sorry for having kept quiet all this time]]. But calm down and please listen to what I have to say.
->''Are you running away to your own time again? You’re relying on your magic too much. That's such a bad habit of yours.''
'''Nagisa:''' I think I can tell you.\\
'''Mami:''' Eh? You're...Bebe!?\\
'''[[BreakoutCharacter Nagisa]]:''' [[ObfuscatingStupidity Sorry for having kept quiet all this time]]. But calm down and please listen to what I have to say.
->''Are you running away to your own time again? You’re relying on your magic too much. That's such a bad habit of yours.''
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->'''Mami:''' What's going on?\\
What is this? What on earth...?!\\
'''Nagisa:'''I think I can tell you.Let me explain it from my own lips.\\
'''Mami:'''Eh? You're...Bebe!?\\
Who... Bebe?!\\
'''[[BreakoutCharacter Nagisa]]:''' [[ObfuscatingStupiditySorry for having kept quiet all this time]]. I'm sorry I didn't tell you until now.]] But I need you to calm down and please listen to what I have to say.
->''Are you running away tome.
->''Gonna run back into your own little time again?You’re relying on your magic too much. That's such a bad habit of yours.yours. You rely too much on that magic.''
'''Nagisa:'''
'''Mami:'''
'''[[BreakoutCharacter Nagisa]]:''' [[ObfuscatingStupidity
->''Are you running away to
->''Gonna run back into your own little time again?
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->'''Sayaka:''' If you find the witch that made this barrier, what do you intend to do?\\
'''Homura:''' That's...obvious.\\
'''Sayaka:''' You'll destroy her? Just because they're a witch?\\
'''Homura:''' That's...obvious.\\
'''Sayaka:''' You'll destroy her? Just because they're a witch?\\
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->'''Sayaka:''' If When you find the witch that made who created this barrier, what do will you intend to do?\\
do with her?\\
'''Homura:'''That's...Well, that... should be obvious.\\
'''Sayaka:''' You'lldestroy vanquish her? Just because they're she's a witch?\\
'''Homura:'''
'''Sayaka:''' You'll
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'''Sayaka:''' Hey...Is this really so bad? Not having to fight each other, joining forces and living together. [[{{Foreshadowing}} Is the heart that wished for such a thing really sinful enough that it needs to be destroyed?]]\\
'''Homura:''' Are you defending the witch?\\
'''Sayaka:''' Well we do become them eventually. [[ContinuityNod It's only natural to want to sympathize.]]
->'''Homura:''' There are three things that shouldn't exist. First, the witch that created this barrier. The next is Bebe being in the form of a witch. And lastly, that you know of the exsistence of witches. Who are you really? Are you Sayaka Miki?\\
'''Sayaka:''' A late introduction huh? I'm exactly who you think I am...transfer student.\\
'''Homura:''' Are you defending the witch?\\
'''Sayaka:''' Well we do become them eventually. [[ContinuityNod It's only natural to want to sympathize.]]
->'''Homura:''' There are three things that shouldn't exist. First, the witch that created this barrier. The next is Bebe being in the form of a witch. And lastly, that you know of the exsistence of witches. Who are you really? Are you Sayaka Miki?\\
'''Sayaka:''' A late introduction huh? I'm exactly who you think I am...transfer student.\\
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'''Sayaka:''' Hey...Is Tell me, is this really so bad? Not having We don't have to fight each other, joining forces and living anymore. We can all live, working together. [[{{Foreshadowing}} Is the heart that wished for such a thing really that so sinful enough that it needs to be destroyed?]]\\
'''Homura:''' Are youdefending the siding with a witch?\\
'''Sayaka:'''Well we do become them eventually. They are the final form of us magical girls, as you said. [[ContinuityNod It's only natural to want to I can't help but sympathize.]]
->'''Homura:''' There are threethings that shouldn't people here who should not be able to exist. First, The first is the witch that who created this barrier. the labyrinth. The next second is Bebe being Bebe, who remains in the form of a witch. And lastly, that you know of the exsistence third, you, who remembers the existence of witches. Who are you really? you? Are you Sayaka Miki?\\
'''Sayaka:'''A late introduction huh? You make me sad. I'm exactly who you think I am...the same person you've always known, transfer student.\\
'''Homura:''' Are you
'''Sayaka:'''
->'''Homura:''' There are three
'''Sayaka:'''
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->'''Homura:''' This farce is making light of Madoka's sacrifice! [[ThisIsUnforgivable I won't forgive this!]]\\
'''Girls throwing tomatoes:''' [[GratuitousGerman Gott ist tot!]] [[Creator/FriedrichNietzsche Gott i]][[GodIsDead st tot!]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} Gott ist tot!]]
'''Girls throwing tomatoes:''' [[GratuitousGerman Gott ist tot!]] [[Creator/FriedrichNietzsche Gott i]][[GodIsDead st tot!]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} Gott ist tot!]]
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->'''Homura:''' This ridiculous farce is making light of Madoka's sacrifice! just wasting the sacrifice that Madoka made for us. [[ThisIsUnforgivable I won't forgive this!]]\\
allow it.]]\\
'''Girls throwing tomatoes:''' [[GratuitousGerman Gott ist tot!]] [[Creator/FriedrichNietzscheGott i]][[GodIsDead st Gott]] [[GodIsDead ist tot!]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} Gott ist tot!]]
'''Girls throwing tomatoes:''' [[GratuitousGerman Gott ist tot!]] [[Creator/FriedrichNietzsche
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->'''Madoka, Sayaka, and Kyoko:''' Cake, Cake, a round cake.\\
Who is the round cake?\\
Who is the round cake?\\
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Who is the
This round, round
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'''Sayaka:''' No - you're - wrong.\\
[[ActorAllusion I'm the]] [[Anime/FreshPrettyCure raspberry.]]\\
[[ActorAllusion I'm the]] [[Anime/FreshPrettyCure raspberry.]]\\
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'''Sayaka:''' No No, - you're not - wrong.\\
me!\\
[[ActorAllusionI'm I am the]] [[Anime/FreshPrettyCure raspberry.]]\\
[[ActorAllusion
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'''Kyoko:''' No - you're - wrong.\\
[[TrademarkFavoriteFood I'm the apple.]]\\
Bebe likes the round cake.\\
[[TrademarkFavoriteFood I'm the apple.]]\\
Bebe likes the round cake.\\
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'''Kyoko:''' No No, - you're not - wrong.\\
me!\\
[[TrademarkFavoriteFoodI'm I am the apple.]]\\
Bebe likes the The round cake.cake loves Bebe.\\
[[TrademarkFavoriteFood
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'''Mami:''' No - you're - wrong.\\
[[ContinuityNod I'm]] [[DramaticIrony the]] [[TrademarkFavoriteFood cheese]].\\
The round cake [[GroundhogDayLoop goes tumbling around.]]\\
[[ContinuityNod I'm]] [[DramaticIrony the]] [[TrademarkFavoriteFood cheese]].\\
The round cake [[GroundhogDayLoop goes tumbling around.]]\\
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'''Mami:''' No No, - you're not - wrong.me!\\
[[ContinuityNod I am]] [[DramaticIrony the]] [[TrademarkFavoriteFood cheese]].\\
[[ContinuityNod I'm]] [[DramaticIrony the]] [[TrademarkFavoriteFood cheese]].\\
The round cake [[GroundhogDayLoop goes tumbling around.'round in circles.]]\\
[[ContinuityNod I am]] [[DramaticIrony the]] [[TrademarkFavoriteFood cheese]].\\
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'''Homura:''' T-That's... wrong.\\
[[GeniusBonus I'm the]] [[MeaningfulReleaseDate pumpkin]].\\
The round cake is sweet.\\
[[GeniusBonus I'm the]] [[MeaningfulReleaseDate pumpkin]].\\
The round cake is sweet.\\
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'''Homura:''' T-That's... wrong.\\
N-No, not... me!\\
[[GeniusBonusI'm I-I... am the]] [[MeaningfulReleaseDate pumpkin]].\\
Thepumpkin!]]\\
T-The round cake is sweet.\\
[[GeniusBonus
The
T-The round cake is sweet.\\
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'''Madoka:''' No - you're - wrong.\\
I'm the melon.\\
[[{{Foreshadowing}} Dividing the melon brings sweet dreams.]]\\
'''Madoka, Sayaka, and Kyoko:''' And the dream tonight is a bitter one.\\
On top of the plate is the dream of a cat.\\
It's round and thick so let's dig in!
I'm the melon.\\
[[{{Foreshadowing}} Dividing the melon brings sweet dreams.]]\\
'''Madoka, Sayaka, and Kyoko:''' And the dream tonight is a bitter one.\\
On top of the plate is the dream of a cat.\\
It's round and thick so let's dig in!
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'''Madoka:''' No No, - you're not - wrong.me!\\
I am the melon.\\
I'm the melon.\\
[[{{Foreshadowing}} Dividing the When a melon brings breaks, it creates a sweet dreams.dream.]]\\
'''Madoka, Sayaka, and Kyoko:''' And the '''All:''' But tonight's dream tonight is a bitter one.\\
On top of Atop the plate is the dream of a the cat.\\
It's round Round and thick so let's dig in!plump. Everyone eat up!
I am the melon.\\
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->'''Mami:''' If you don't mind your manners, you'll turn into cheese.\\
'''Bebe:''' I'll turn into cheese! I'll turn into cheese!
'''Bebe:''' I'll turn into cheese! I'll turn into cheese!
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->'''Mami:''' If you don't mind your manners, you'll turn into cheese.\\
cheese!\\
'''Bebe:'''I'll turn Turn into cheese! I'll turn Turn into cheese!
'''Bebe:'''
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'''Homura:''' [[EurekaMoment Yes...that's right, isn't it?]] [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy If that is how you truly feel]]...Then I...[[ILetGwenStacyDie I've made such a huge mistake! In the end, I shouldn't have accepted it.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} At that time, no matter what it took, I should have stopped you!]] Madoka...[[ChronicHeroSyndrome even if you know how hard it will be, you have the courage to make that decision]]. You...When you know there's something only you can do, you're much kinder and stronger than you realize. I know this for a fact.
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'''Homura:''' [[EurekaMoment Yes...that's right, isn't it?]] [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy If that is how you truly feel]]...Then I...[[ILetGwenStacyDie I've made such a huge mistake! In the end, I shouldn't have accepted it.]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} At that time, no matter what it took, I should have stopped you!]] Madoka...[[ChronicHeroSyndrome even if you know how hard it will be, you have the courage to make that decision]]. You...When you know there's something only you can do, [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre you're much kinder and stronger than you realize. realize.]] I know this for a fact.