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-->'''Pyrite:''' "What happened?"
-->'''(Pyrite's narrative):''' Amber was the last person I wanted to see hurt.
-->For as long as I could remember, I had loved Amber. Of course we started out as best friends—two kids of two of the leaders of Resistance, being babysat by my mom since her mom and Uncle Grey had to step it up setting up the Indigo League themselves when I was gone, and her dad had his own work with the Contest Society. Sometimes Aunt Fiori would take us, but it usually was Mom, Coral, Amber, Cory, and Copal. Eventually Navy's mom brought Dodge over to play so there'd be more boys, and the three of us kind of drifted off into our own group.
--> Still, Amber was my best friend before Dodge—back when she was sweet and nice. She used to be kind of shy, and blushed so easily. She was a bit of a pushover, and didn't quite know how to defend or stand up for herself, so that was either my job or Dodge's, to protect her. She was ''really'' girly too; pink was her favorite color and she always wore dresses. She tied her hair up in high pigtails in ribbons. She watched My Little Ponyta everyday on TV. She loved to pretty herself up. It didn't take me long to develop a crush on her, but by the time we were eight, my feelings had grown much more stronger.
--> The year 5013, everything changed. Coral, Arylide, and Copal left on their journeys a year prior. Amber's parents decided they needed a vacation alone away from the kids, so Amber, Cory, and Lazuli were shipped off to stay with Uncle Gold and Aunt Sapph. Then something happened with my grandparents on Mom's side, and she had to go down to Twinleaf, but she didn't want to bring me, so I was sent to stay with Uncle Gold and Aunt Sapph. I had no memory of what happened that night, just that I sneaked out after bed with Amber to look for something. But the next day, I got in trouble for something I couldn't remember doing, and Amber was terrified of me. Then the terror turned to anger and hate.
-->'''(Pyrite's narrative):''' Amber was the last person I wanted to see hurt.
-->For as long as I could remember, I had loved Amber. Of course we started out as best friends—two kids of two of the leaders of Resistance, being babysat by my mom since her mom and Uncle Grey had to step it up setting up the Indigo League themselves when I was gone, and her dad had his own work with the Contest Society. Sometimes Aunt Fiori would take us, but it usually was Mom, Coral, Amber, Cory, and Copal. Eventually Navy's mom brought Dodge over to play so there'd be more boys, and the three of us kind of drifted off into our own group.
--> Still, Amber was my best friend before Dodge—back when she was sweet and nice. She used to be kind of shy, and blushed so easily. She was a bit of a pushover, and didn't quite know how to defend or stand up for herself, so that was either my job or Dodge's, to protect her. She was ''really'' girly too; pink was her favorite color and she always wore dresses. She tied her hair up in high pigtails in ribbons. She watched My Little Ponyta everyday on TV. She loved to pretty herself up. It didn't take me long to develop a crush on her, but by the time we were eight, my feelings had grown much more stronger.
--> The year 5013, everything changed. Coral, Arylide, and Copal left on their journeys a year prior. Amber's parents decided they needed a vacation alone away from the kids, so Amber, Cory, and Lazuli were shipped off to stay with Uncle Gold and Aunt Sapph. Then something happened with my grandparents on Mom's side, and she had to go down to Twinleaf, but she didn't want to bring me, so I was sent to stay with Uncle Gold and Aunt Sapph. I had no memory of what happened that night, just that I sneaked out after bed with Amber to look for something. But the next day, I got in trouble for something I couldn't remember doing, and Amber was terrified of me. Then the terror turned to anger and hate.
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-->'''Pyrite:''' "What happened?"
"She passed out from exhaustion. She's sleeping right now."
-->'''Aryl:''' "Aw, you kids been playing too hard?"
-->'''(Pyrite's narrative):'''Amber was Wait, ''what''?
-->'''Copal:''' *smacks Aryl* "Aryl, that's not funny! You're embarrassing thelast person I wanted to see hurt.
-->For as long as I could remember, I had loved Amber. Of course we started out as best friends—two kids of two of the leaders of Resistance, being babysat by my mom since her mom and Uncle Grey had to step it up setting up the Indigo League themselves when I was gone, and her dad had his own workpoor boy! Dear Arceus, they're ''thirteen''!"
-->'''Aryl:''' "Aw, you're no fun, Copal-chan! I'm just messing with little Ry! ''Did you see theContest Society. Sometimes Aunt Fiori would take us, but it usually was Mom, Coral, Amber, Cory, and Copal. Eventually Navy's mom brought Dodge over to play so there'd be more boys, and the three of us kind of drifted off into our own group.
--> Still, Amber was my best friend before Dodge—back when she was sweet and nice. She used to be kind of shy, and blushed so easily. She was a bit of a pushover, and didn't quite know how to defend or stand up for herself, so that was either my job or Dodge's, to protect her. She was ''really'' girly too; pink was her favorite color and she always wore dresses. She tied her hair up in high pigtails in ribbons. She watched My Little Ponyta everyday on TV. She loved to pretty herself up. It didn't take me long to develop a crush on her, but by the time we were eight, my feelings had grown much more stronger.
--> The year 5013, everything changed. Coral, Arylide, and Copal left on their journeys a year prior. Amber's parents decided they needed a vacation alone away from the kids, so Amber, Cory, and Lazuli were shipped off to stay with Uncle Gold and Aunt Sapph. Then something happened with my grandparents on Mom's side, and she had to go down to Twinleaf, but she didn't want to bring me, so I was sent to stay with Uncle Gold and Aunt Sapph. I had no memory of what happened that night, just that I sneaked out after bed with Amber tolook for something. But the next day, I got in trouble for something I couldn't remember doing, and Amber was terrified of me. Then the terror turned to anger and hate.on his face?''"
-->'''Aryl:''' "Aw, you kids been playing too hard?"
-->'''(Pyrite's narrative):'''
-->'''Copal:''' *smacks Aryl* "Aryl, that's not funny! You're embarrassing the
-->For as long as I could remember, I had loved Amber. Of course we started out as best friends—two kids of two of the leaders of Resistance, being babysat by my mom since her mom and Uncle Grey had to step it up setting up the Indigo League themselves when I was gone, and her dad had his own work
-->'''Aryl:''' "Aw, you're no fun, Copal-chan! I'm just messing with little Ry! ''Did you see the
--> Still, Amber was my best friend before Dodge—back when she was sweet and nice. She used to be kind of shy, and blushed so easily. She was a bit of a pushover, and didn't quite know how to defend or stand up for herself, so that was either my job or Dodge's, to protect her. She was ''really'' girly too; pink was her favorite color and she always wore dresses. She tied her hair up in high pigtails in ribbons. She watched My Little Ponyta everyday on TV. She loved to pretty herself up. It didn't take me long to develop a crush on her, but by the time we were eight, my feelings had grown much more stronger.
--> The year 5013, everything changed. Coral, Arylide, and Copal left on their journeys a year prior. Amber's parents decided they needed a vacation alone away from the kids, so Amber, Cory, and Lazuli were shipped off to stay with Uncle Gold and Aunt Sapph. Then something happened with my grandparents on Mom's side, and she had to go down to Twinleaf, but she didn't want to bring me, so I was sent to stay with Uncle Gold and Aunt Sapph. I had no memory of what happened that night, just that I sneaked out after bed with Amber to
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For as long as I could remember, I had loved Amber. Of course we started out as best friends—two kids of two of the leaders of Resistance, being babysat by my mom since her mom and Uncle Grey had to step it up setting up the Indigo League themselves when I was gone, and her dad had his own work with the Contest Society. Sometimes Aunt Fiori would take us, but it usually was Mom, Coral, Amber, Cory, and Copal. Eventually Navy's mom brought Dodge over to play so there'd be more boys, and the three of us kind of drifted off into our own group.
Still, Amber was my best friend before Dodge—back when she was sweet and nice. She used to be kind of shy, and blushed so easily. She was a bit of a pushover, and didn't quite know how to defend or stand up for herself, so that was either my job or Dodge's, to protect her. She was ''really'' girly too; pink was her favorite color and she always wore dresses. She tied her hair up in high pigtails in ribbons. She watched My Little Ponyta everyday on TV. She loved to pretty herself up. It didn't take me long to develop a crush on her, but by the time we were eight, my feelings had grown much more stronger.
The year 5013, everything changed. Coral, Arylide, and Copal left on their journeys a year prior. Amber's parents decided they needed a vacation alone away from the kids, so Amber, Cory, and Lazuli were shipped off to stay with Uncle Gold and Aunt Sapph. Then something happened with my grandparents on Mom's side, and she had to go down to Twinleaf, but she didn't want to bring me, so I was sent to stay with Uncle Gold and Aunt Sapph. I had no memory of what happened that night, just that I sneaked out after bed with Amber to look for something. But the next day, I got in trouble for something I couldn't remember doing, and Amber was terrified of me. Then the terror turned to anger and hate.
Still, Amber was my best friend before Dodge—back when she was sweet and nice. She used to be kind of shy, and blushed so easily. She was a bit of a pushover, and didn't quite know how to defend or stand up for herself, so that was either my job or Dodge's, to protect her. She was ''really'' girly too; pink was her favorite color and she always wore dresses. She tied her hair up in high pigtails in ribbons. She watched My Little Ponyta everyday on TV. She loved to pretty herself up. It didn't take me long to develop a crush on her, but by the time we were eight, my feelings had grown much more stronger.
The year 5013, everything changed. Coral, Arylide, and Copal left on their journeys a year prior. Amber's parents decided they needed a vacation alone away from the kids, so Amber, Cory, and Lazuli were shipped off to stay with Uncle Gold and Aunt Sapph. Then something happened with my grandparents on Mom's side, and she had to go down to Twinleaf, but she didn't want to bring me, so I was sent to stay with Uncle Gold and Aunt Sapph. I had no memory of what happened that night, just that I sneaked out after bed with Amber to look for something. But the next day, I got in trouble for something I couldn't remember doing, and Amber was terrified of me. Then the terror turned to anger and hate.
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--> Still, Amber was my best friend before Dodge—back when she was sweet and nice. She used to be kind of shy, and blushed so easily. She was a bit of a pushover, and didn't quite know how to defend or stand up for herself, so that was either my job or Dodge's, to protect her. She was ''really'' girly too; pink was her favorite color and she always wore dresses. She tied her hair up in high pigtails in ribbons. She watched My Little Ponyta everyday on TV. She loved to pretty herself up. It didn't take me long to develop a crush on her, but by the time we were eight, my feelings had grown much more stronger.
--> The year 5013, everything changed. Coral, Arylide, and Copal left on their journeys a year prior. Amber's parents decided they needed a vacation alone away from the kids, so Amber, Cory, and Lazuli were shipped off to stay with Uncle Gold and Aunt Sapph. Then something happened with my grandparents on Mom's side, and she had to go down to Twinleaf, but she didn't want to bring me, so I was sent to stay with Uncle Gold and Aunt Sapph. I had no memory of what happened that night, just that I sneaked out after bed with Amber to look for something. But the next day, I got in trouble for something I couldn't remember doing, and Amber was terrified of me. Then the terror turned to anger and hate.
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-->'''Amber:''' "What, Laz?" I ask.
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-->'''Amber:''' "What, Laz?" I ask.
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-->'''Chrys:''' "Yeah right! That's a major time gap, and even so, this is the year ''five thousand eighteen''. That's really far away, and unless for some reason our parents time traveled and ended up in the time at the same age, it would never happen. Just think about it. [[{{Irony}} ''Aunt Topaz'' and ''Rubin''. That's just insane]]!"
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-->'''Chrys:''' "Yeah right! That's a major time gap, and even so, this is the year ''five thousand eighteen''. That's really far away, and unless for some reason our parents time traveled and ended up in the time at the same age, it would never happen. Just think about it. [[{{Irony}} ''Aunt Topaz'' and ''Rubin''. That's just insane]]!"insane]]!"
-->'''Pyrite:''' "What happened?"
-->'''(Pyrite's narrative):''' Amber was the last person I wanted to see hurt.
For as long as I could remember, I had loved Amber. Of course we started out as best friends—two kids of two of the leaders of Resistance, being babysat by my mom since her mom and Uncle Grey had to step it up setting up the Indigo League themselves when I was gone, and her dad had his own work with the Contest Society. Sometimes Aunt Fiori would take us, but it usually was Mom, Coral, Amber, Cory, and Copal. Eventually Navy's mom brought Dodge over to play so there'd be more boys, and the three of us kind of drifted off into our own group.
Still, Amber was my best friend before Dodge—back when she was sweet and nice. She used to be kind of shy, and blushed so easily. She was a bit of a pushover, and didn't quite know how to defend or stand up for herself, so that was either my job or Dodge's, to protect her. She was ''really'' girly too; pink was her favorite color and she always wore dresses. She tied her hair up in high pigtails in ribbons. She watched My Little Ponyta everyday on TV. She loved to pretty herself up. It didn't take me long to develop a crush on her, but by the time we were eight, my feelings had grown much more stronger.
The year 5013, everything changed. Coral, Arylide, and Copal left on their journeys a year prior. Amber's parents decided they needed a vacation alone away from the kids, so Amber, Cory, and Lazuli were shipped off to stay with Uncle Gold and Aunt Sapph. Then something happened with my grandparents on Mom's side, and she had to go down to Twinleaf, but she didn't want to bring me, so I was sent to stay with Uncle Gold and Aunt Sapph. I had no memory of what happened that night, just that I sneaked out after bed with Amber to look for something. But the next day, I got in trouble for something I couldn't remember doing, and Amber was terrified of me. Then the terror turned to anger and hate.
-->'''Pyrite:''' "What happened?"
-->'''(Pyrite's narrative):''' Amber was the last person I wanted to see hurt.
For as long as I could remember, I had loved Amber. Of course we started out as best friends—two kids of two of the leaders of Resistance, being babysat by my mom since her mom and Uncle Grey had to step it up setting up the Indigo League themselves when I was gone, and her dad had his own work with the Contest Society. Sometimes Aunt Fiori would take us, but it usually was Mom, Coral, Amber, Cory, and Copal. Eventually Navy's mom brought Dodge over to play so there'd be more boys, and the three of us kind of drifted off into our own group.
Still, Amber was my best friend before Dodge—back when she was sweet and nice. She used to be kind of shy, and blushed so easily. She was a bit of a pushover, and didn't quite know how to defend or stand up for herself, so that was either my job or Dodge's, to protect her. She was ''really'' girly too; pink was her favorite color and she always wore dresses. She tied her hair up in high pigtails in ribbons. She watched My Little Ponyta everyday on TV. She loved to pretty herself up. It didn't take me long to develop a crush on her, but by the time we were eight, my feelings had grown much more stronger.
The year 5013, everything changed. Coral, Arylide, and Copal left on their journeys a year prior. Amber's parents decided they needed a vacation alone away from the kids, so Amber, Cory, and Lazuli were shipped off to stay with Uncle Gold and Aunt Sapph. Then something happened with my grandparents on Mom's side, and she had to go down to Twinleaf, but she didn't want to bring me, so I was sent to stay with Uncle Gold and Aunt Sapph. I had no memory of what happened that night, just that I sneaked out after bed with Amber to look for something. But the next day, I got in trouble for something I couldn't remember doing, and Amber was terrified of me. Then the terror turned to anger and hate.
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-->'''Amber:''' "That's nice," I say, not really thinking that. "When you goin' out?"
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-->'''Amber:''' "That's nice," I say, not really thinking that. "When nice. When you goin' out?"
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-->'''Amber:''' "What, Laz?" I ask.
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-->'''Lazuli:''' "Aaaambeeeer!"
-->'''(Amber's narrative):''' My younger sister, Lazuli, comes bounding down the stairs. She's ten years old, though she's taller than both Corundum and me by several inches. She has messy brown hair that goes down to her shoulders, and blue eyes. She's a tomboy, like me, but very much has a soft side, unlike me. She's very impressionable, too, and I'm very protective of her because of that. Fluffy, her poochyena, runs up with her.
-->'''Lazuli:''' "Amber, you'll never guess what!"
"What, Laz?" I ask.
-->'''Lazuli:''' "Onyx agreed to train with me and Fluffy!"
-->'''Amber:''' "That's nice," I say, not really thinking that. "When you goin' out?"
-->'''Lazuli:''' "I-It's not a date! H-He's just helping me work with Fluffy's weaknesses!"
-->'''Amber:''' "Sure. And I'm a hippopotas."
-->'''Forest:''' "Capture a legendary pokemon? That's impossible without a Master Ball!"
-->'''Marine:''' "Not necessarily. My grandma did it, why can't we?"
-->'''Forest:''' "We're not all Crystal Kimu, Marine."
-->'''Marine:''' "Ugh, stop being such a pessimist! I have no idea what Maizy sees in you."
-->'''Forest:''' "Excuse me? What was that?"
-->'''Marine:''' "Oh, nothing!"
-->'''Cad:''' "Rosso-Senri?"
-->'''Chrys:''' "KIMU?"
-->'''Brick:''' "Those are a lot of Kimus."
-->'''Cad:''' "ROSSO-SENRI? What the hell? That is definitely not a common name!"
-->'''Forest:''' "None of our names are common. Especially the combinations."
-->'''Duke:''' "Guys, did you not notice the date? Check it out!"
-->'''Ametrine:''' "August sixteenth, five thousand eighteen?"
-->'''Forest:''' "Something's not right here."
-->'''Marine:''' "Thanks, Captain Obvious."
-->'''Forest:''' "You're welcome, Lieutenant Sarcasm."
-->'''Cad:''' "Rosso-Senri's like Rosso-Kimu. So, what? It sounds like Mom married Rubin or something."
-->'''Chrys:''' "Yeah right! That's a major time gap, and even so, this is the year ''five thousand eighteen''. That's really far away, and unless for some reason our parents time traveled and ended up in the time at the same age, it would never happen. Just think about it. [[{{Irony}} ''Aunt Topaz'' and ''Rubin''. That's just insane]]!"
-->'''(Amber's narrative):''' My younger sister, Lazuli, comes bounding down the stairs. She's ten years old, though she's taller than both Corundum and me by several inches. She has messy brown hair that goes down to her shoulders, and blue eyes. She's a tomboy, like me, but very much has a soft side, unlike me. She's very impressionable, too, and I'm very protective of her because of that. Fluffy, her poochyena, runs up with her.
-->'''Lazuli:''' "Amber, you'll never guess what!"
"What, Laz?" I ask.
-->'''Lazuli:''' "Onyx agreed to train with me and Fluffy!"
-->'''Amber:''' "That's nice," I say, not really thinking that. "When you goin' out?"
-->'''Lazuli:''' "I-It's not a date! H-He's just helping me work with Fluffy's weaknesses!"
-->'''Amber:''' "Sure. And I'm a hippopotas."
-->'''Forest:''' "Capture a legendary pokemon? That's impossible without a Master Ball!"
-->'''Marine:''' "Not necessarily. My grandma did it, why can't we?"
-->'''Forest:''' "We're not all Crystal Kimu, Marine."
-->'''Marine:''' "Ugh, stop being such a pessimist! I have no idea what Maizy sees in you."
-->'''Forest:''' "Excuse me? What was that?"
-->'''Marine:''' "Oh, nothing!"
-->'''Cad:''' "Rosso-Senri?"
-->'''Chrys:''' "KIMU?"
-->'''Brick:''' "Those are a lot of Kimus."
-->'''Cad:''' "ROSSO-SENRI? What the hell? That is definitely not a common name!"
-->'''Forest:''' "None of our names are common. Especially the combinations."
-->'''Duke:''' "Guys, did you not notice the date? Check it out!"
-->'''Ametrine:''' "August sixteenth, five thousand eighteen?"
-->'''Forest:''' "Something's not right here."
-->'''Marine:''' "Thanks, Captain Obvious."
-->'''Forest:''' "You're welcome, Lieutenant Sarcasm."
-->'''Cad:''' "Rosso-Senri's like Rosso-Kimu. So, what? It sounds like Mom married Rubin or something."
-->'''Chrys:''' "Yeah right! That's a major time gap, and even so, this is the year ''five thousand eighteen''. That's really far away, and unless for some reason our parents time traveled and ended up in the time at the same age, it would never happen. Just think about it. [[{{Irony}} ''Aunt Topaz'' and ''Rubin''. That's just insane]]!"
